Anything for love (AK), p30 pg49 NOTE

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arwa

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Hey you all, thankyou for the lovely comments. I will continue pretty soon now that so many people have actually liked it.

Sawaal raha female lead ka to that will be introduced in the near future so dont worry.

well continue reading and enjoying guys.

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tekhum

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Posted: 17 years ago

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👏 nice intro..... continue soon... 👏

😉 😉 😉 hopping for somthing more nicer and more spicier than ur other ff..... tht dosent mean tht other one is not nice and spicy... 😉 😉 😉

continue soon

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arwa

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Hi Everyone! How are you? You must be wondering who i am. Okay let me introduce myself. Hi, I'm Zaib and I'm 10 yrs old. Yes i'm 10 yrs old. Now u must be wondering what i'm doing here, well I'm here to tell you guys a sweet love story.

Wait, wait! Not sweet, i mean it is sweet in the beginning but which love stories aern't? anyways let me get on with it. Love is a strange thing which makes people do weird things. It is a wonderful experince and sometimes it is a horrific experience too.

Okay, okay i know you guys are getting bored with me so let me just begin the story. So are you guys ready for the ride of love? Lets go and meet the guy who simply gave love to gain love...

It was 8:00 in the morning and the whole house was awake except for our hero Mr. Zaib. He was fast asleep with his head buried in the pillow, only his brown locks could be seen. He had a lot of windows in his room which always stayed open. it signified his heart which was open waiting for that someone special to settle in.

Suddenly the huge brown doors of his room opened and there in the doorway stood a beuatiful young woman, whose face was so fair that it was nearly as white as milk. Her red cheeks showed up and her sweet smile brighted it up. she stood there in a bright yellow sari with white heeled shoes.

She moved in towards the bed and stood there to stare down at the sleepy Zaib. Then she lowered near his ear and was going to whisper something when Zaib woke up and grabbed her into his arms. They both laughed and eventually rolled off the bed.

When they got on the floor, unfortunately Zaib found himself alone again as it was nothing more than his dream. He leaned against the side of the bed and just sighed. He had never been able to see her face but he was sure that one day she would pop up in front of him. He thought "When will it be?" As he sat there thinking his eyes fell on the clock which showed 8:15. He was late again and he couldnt belive it. He quickly rushed to the bathroom then he got changed into black jeans and black shirt and before leaving gave his brown locks a quick brush. He admired himself so much in the mirror that he could almost fall in love with himself. "Perfect, as usual."

He made his way down the grand stone stairs leading to the ground floor. His family was having breakfast, actually was about to finish so he decided to just slip in.

Dilip Khanna sat at the head of the table busily finishing off his tea and beside him sat Angad who sat dressed smartly in a black suit ready for work. His black hair was gelled and combed in place. Basicly he was a perfectionist. Everyone were busy when Zaib graced them with his presence. "Hey everyone, sorry i'm late." He sat down next to Angad.

"Oh don't worry about that as it is becoming regular now isn't it." Dilip spoke after he finished his tea.

Naina came in for defence again. "Dilip, please don't start again."

"I had always told you that if we had put both of the boys on responsibility then today Raj would have stopped fooling around."

"Hey dad please call me Zaib and please relax. By the way this is not my age to work, I have to enjoy life yet." He grabbed an apple from the basket and munched on it loudly.

"So what're you saying, Angad is old? He is also working."

"Come on dad, bhai just loves to work. its not like he has anything else to do. I just have a different field." The clock striked nine so Zaib got up quickly whilst grabbing a toast from Angad's plate. "I gotta run."

"Atleast finish your breakfast."

"Hey ma, don't have time for that." Zaib grabbed his black leather jacket from the stand and slipped outside to his red beauty. Then dorve off.

"Look you see what i mean. Whole day except for doing something decent he is always messing around and wasting time. I say Angad at least you make him understand."

"Come on dad. i think you should ease up on Zaib, because I technically agree with him. Let him enjoy his life and anyways why does he need to work when i'm around?" Angad and his father got up to get ready for work. Angad had always supported his brother because he loved him a lot. He knew that Zaib was wasting his time but he just didnt want to force him into anything. He had a lot of confidence in himself that he will be there for Zaib in any circumstances.

"Fine, spoil him as much as you want. Angad you're just as stubborn as him so it doesn't make much difference."

Zaib was heading to Bournesmouth beach where his concert was held. When he reached the particular place was desserted as expected so he just got out lazily and stretched out. then as he turned around he was surprised to see many cars parked. "What the hell? Where have these people come from?"

Some distance away was the stage where his friends and band were setting up and waiting for him. Prithvi was Zaib's best friend and as he was putting the mike in position something struck him. "Oh my God! i completely forgot to tell Zaib that the concert time has changed."

The rest of the gang began flipping his head for being such a forgetful. Now all the audience had nearly arrived and Zaib didnt know about it. "You know what will happen now." Kanan blurted out who was another one pretty close to Zaib. Actaully she was secretly in love with him.

Zaib paced the stone wall whilst looking out far and then he saw some movement behind him. Then he heard some shreiks and screams. He turned around and saw a group of girls going crazy over seeing him. He had no choice so he jumped off the wall down on the sand. The girls rushed over the wall seeing him escape. They also jumped without thinking twice and began running after him. Zaib had to escape as quickly as he can from those girls or he knew what would happen.

The gang saw the herd and became surprised. Then they began laughing. "Don't just laugh do something." Kanan was really pissed off with Prithvi as most of the time he was just useless.

"Why don't we change the route so then he will be going the other way."

"Wow Prithvi! you're such a genious. Dumbo, can't you see those girls being glued on Zaib. Wherever he will go, they will go."

Zaib was getting angry at his friends for not informing him about the change. Until now he was under the impression that he would be arriving hours before the show so there wont be any public around, especially obssessive girls. Now he was stuck. Then he thought that the only way to get out of the situation would be to face it, so he turned around and began running backwards, inviting all the girls towards him.

Kanan saw that and became infuriated. "What the hell is he doing? Started his game again"

"Relax Kanan. I'm sure Zaib has something up his sleeve. Hey look he is approaching. Be ready to take him in."

Fortunately Zaib was faster than the girls and he reached the stage beforehand. Then he quickly climbed it and went behind the scenes to catch his forgetful friends. "So guys, forget to tell me something?"

"This is all this stupid Prithvi's fault. Shouldnt have given him anything to tell you."

"don't call me stupid okay. I just forgot that doesnt mean i'm stupid."

"Just stop it okay guys." Zaib walked off near the instruments and fixed a mike in his ear and then took hold of the guitar.

"What are you doing. There's still time for the show to start." Kanan stopped him from going past the curtain.

"Do you see the crowd out there? I can't stop them now, so why not just give them what they want." He slipped outside to be greeted by hoots and screams. All the girls had hovered at the edge of the stage waiting to catch him. As he came out he played a tune on his guitar and just greeted everyone. I love you all! Dosto na koi manzil hai, na koi saathi. Phir bhi nikal para hu ghar se, shayad jiskee talaash hai, wahi manzil hai or wahi sathi. Hit it!"

The gang came over and began playing the instruments. Zaib threw the guitar away and began dancing whilst the crowd roared.

"Oo, jaane jaana, dhonde tujhe deewaana, sapno me roze aaye, a zindagee me aana. Oo, jaane jaana, dhonde tujhe deewaana. Sapno me roze aaye, a zindagee me aana sanam" He turned around and started doing a few more steps and all the girls just kept on going mad. Then he jumped and turned around and then he sat down on a chair. "Mera khwaab, mere khayalo ki rani, kisi din banegi hamari kahani. Mera khwaab mere khayalo kee rani, kisi din banegi hamari kahani. Ay meri bekhudi, yeh kasam mene lee, pyaar mey ek din meri jaan tujhe hai paana" Then he played the same tune again on his guitar before starting again. "Sapno me roze aaye, a zindagi me aana. Oo, jaane jaana, dhonde tujhe deewaana, sapno me roze aaye, a zinagi me aana sanam" He flipped around again towards the sea. This song had made him mutual with his thoughts as now his inner feelings were coming out. His friends came to enquire on what is wrong with him but he just shook it up and went back to the audience. He lied down so now he was face to face with most of the girls. "Kisi khoobsurat pari jaisi hogi, mujhe kya pata dilruba kesee hogee. Kisi khoobsurat pari jaisi hogi, mujhe kya pata dilruba kesee hogee" then he jumped up and folded his arms. "Sochta hu tujhe, chahta hu tujhe. Dil mera, kehraha saare faasle mitaana. Oo, jane jaana, dhonde tujhe deewaana. Sapno me roze aaye, a zindagee me aana." He switched into his amazing dance sequence. "Oo, jaane jaana dhonde tujhe deewaaana. Sapno me roze aaye, a zindagee me aaana sanam"

Now the girls were climbing up the stage and they all began running after Zaib. He was saved by his friends who instantly grabbed him and ran inside. Then they all rushed from the back towards their cars and sped off. Usually he would stay for sometime after each performance but today the crowd had gotten out of control.

At 3:00 in the morning Zaib arrived home silently and crept inside through the back door, which lead to the side stairs which directly took him to his room. He had come really late than usual and he knew that if someone would find out then there would be trouble.

His room felt different when he entered it. First of all it was too dark and second it was too warm. There was no cold breeze touching his cheek which made him angry that someone had dared to come in his room and shut all the windows. Something which was forbidden in his territory. At that moment he was just so tired that so he headed for the bed but it was so dark that he couldnt even see himself. He guessed most of it but unfortunately he tripped over something which automatically landed him on the bed. "Ow, what a landing. Hey what happened to the mattress today?" He kept on feeling here and there to find it very hard. Suddenly someone let out a scream which seemed to coming straight from under him.

Okay guys here was the first part. Tell me if you found it too long so in the future i would shorten it up.

well i know it wasnt that interesting but i juts wanted to make it more like an intro.

well waiting for ur comments guys.

Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago

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Shagufta

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

awesome storyline, i luv the way u started it cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏

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arwa

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever
awesome storyline, i luv the way u started it cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏

thankyou. I'm glad u liked the beginning i was just experimenting with it and wasnt sure if it would be interesting or not. But u appreciated it was good.

well continue reading and appreciating.

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arwa

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: angullgrl91
haha..nice part. cont soon.

thankyou for reading 😃

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arwa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: simply_thebest
fantastic part!!!

do cont sooon

thankyou

glad u appreciated it. i will continue soon.

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arwa

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: tekhum
👏 nice intro..... continue soon... 👏

😉 😉 😉 hopping for somthing more nicer and more spicier than ur other ff..... tht dosent mean tht other one is not nice and spicy... 😉 😉 😉

continue soon

u have very high hopes don't you mister? well i will try and please u as much as i can but after all i m human

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Puja

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

Awwww that was a great part! I lovee Zaib's character..bless dreaming about that special girl 😳 so cutee...&& Lovee Angad so far even if he is a workaholic lovedd how he stuck up for his bro 😊 Loll all those crazy girls chasing Zaib! that was so funnyy 😆 😆 No dont make the parts shorter 😛 Longs fine with me 😊 Lol.. cont soon x

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arwa

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: P u j a- -*
Awwww that was a great part! I lovee Zaib's character..bless dreaming about that special girl 😳 so cutee...&& Lovee Angad so far even if he is a workaholic lovedd how he stuck up for his bro 😊 Loll all those crazy girls chasing Zaib! that was so funnyy 😆 😆 No dont make the parts shorter 😛 Longs fine with me 😊 Lol.. cont soon x

hey thanx for appreciating.

yeh everyone is supposed to fall in love with Zaib 😆

well continue reading and enjoying.