Anything for love (AK), p30 pg49 NOTE - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey there,,,,,,,good part,,,,,i found interesting,,,,,hey where is our heroine KRIPA?????
newayzz,,,,,hope that u continue soon,,,,,,,
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

hey there,,,,,,,good part,,,,,i found interesting,,,,,hey where is our heroine KRIPA?????
newayzz,,,,,hope that u continue soon,,,,,,,



hey glad to see u catching this one too.

have patience she will soon be introduced.

well carry on reading.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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fab part
Zaib is surely sexy... & also brainy...
wonder who is in his room...
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thankyou all of you who commented. im really sorry i couldn't reply before because my server was down for two days, but im finally back. So here is the next part guys.

Part two.

Zaib was too shocked so he reacted too quickly. He attempted to get up but his leg was tangled into something due to which he kept on slipping back on the person. He struggled again but it went in vain. He heard the scream again and this time he managed to put his hand over the person's mouth to prevent it from screaming further as that would just wake everyone up. Before he could do anything further, suddenly the room lights were switched on leaving both of them stunned.

He stared down and was surprised to see a pair of eyes which just left him mesmerized. Both of them were stunned. He moved in further and slowly removed his hand from the person's mouth and saw it belonged to a rather beautiful woman. He was surprised to find a beautiful woman in his bed. He thought "Is it my lucky day or what?"

Before he knew it he was thrown on the floor after receiving a hard kick in his shin. He moaned with pain as he held onto his leg

Hey guys sorry to interrupt but this is the time where i have to narrate some of the stuff to you. I know I know you would rather return back to Zaib but hey don't forget, i'm also Zaib. Anyways right now what Zaib is feeling is pain. No, no not emotional pain but physical pain. Now he just wanted to find out who was the woman and what she was doing in his bed? Not that he didnt appreciate the gesture but being kicked by her was not in his plan. Anyways the next thing he wanted to find out was how did the lights come up. So lets go and see who came to rescue him, shall we...

When Zaib raised his head to look near the door he was very much surprised to find Angad standing there with his parents. All of them were just staring at each other like statues as if no one understood what was going on. Soon the silence was broken by Zaib's moan as he attempted to get up but couldn't so just leaned against the bed as he sat on his two legs.

"What the hell is going on here?" Dilip came inside and eyed both Zaib and the woman. "Well is anyone going to tell me or are we going to be just standing here like idiots!" His sleep was disturbed which always made him cranky. Then he looked at the woman with a sharp eye as if he was really mad with her. "What are you doing here?"

"Finally someone asked that question. You know dad that is the exact thing i want to find out."
Zaib ignored his pain and stood up.

She raised her eyes which had tears in them now. I'm sorry, but i thought you told me to sleep in this room...

"What! I don't believe this, you, you, you gave my room to..."
All of a sudden Zaib was angry due to which he couldnt even speak properly. The pain was throbbing in his shin. The woman was surely strong.

"This is not your room. When you found Raj here then why didn't you leave?"

This was the point where Zaib panicked because now everyone would find out he came at three in the morning and he would get another grilling by his dad. He just hoped that somehow he doesn't have to answer that question so he decided to sit down again, away from the attention.

"Look i was here long before anyone and as I was asleep, suddenly I felt somebody jump onto the bed and was, oh I can't even say it." She began crying which made Zaib frown becasue she was making the whole situation to go into another direction.

Oh my God, I don't belive this. I told you that if we don't keep Zaib in control then he would turn up to do something really terrible. Aaj to isne hadd hee kardee. I'm ashamed to call him my son"

Zaib just exclaimed at that. No one was ready to listen to his side of the story which was the truth and were clearly beliving a simply made up version. He could see how his father was so angry that he had turned away from him and was talking to him as a third person. It had gone so far that he was nearly going to throw Zaib out of the house. Just then Angad came to calm his dad down. "Look dad, I know Zaib and he would never ever do anything that would bring disloyalty to this family. there must be something else to it. Atleast give him a chance to speak."

"There's nothing left to hear! He has passed all his limits and some what i'm responsble for it. If I wouldn't have had to see this day. Oh..."

"Alright that's it. Everybody here is just accusing me and making decisions without even knowing the truth."
It was about time Zaib spoke above everyone else'd voices. It was becoming much ado about nothing.

"How dare you speak to me like that. This is my house and I know what happens here..."

"I'm sorry sir but I think you don't know. Whatever this woman has said is nowhere near the truth. You want to know what happened. Okay here it is. I just arrived at three o' clock and as usual crept up to my room without the knowlegde that it is already occupied. Then when i came the damn lights were closed so there was zero visibilty. Now i would usually know my own room but somehow i tripped over something which automatically made me land on the bed and unfortunately in such a situation that the wrong meaning was built. Then you guys arrived and now we are here."

"God when will you learn? Pura din to awaaragardi me beeta dete ho or ab puree raat bhi? You're the limit Raj. This time it has gone too far and it is convincing me more to stay affrimative with my decision."


Angad couldnt tolerate it anymore. Why was his dad being so stubborn? "Dad, come on. He is your son and any son of your's can't slip. You're being too prejudice over the thing and it's not right. It's not entirely Zaib's fault. I agree that he came at the wee hours of the night but Kripa here also is in the fault. She should never had been in this room in the first place. So dad if you're planning on throwing Zaib out of the house then I guess you'll have to throw me out too because i'm not going to let injustice happen with my brother.


I guess there is something I need to fill you guys in with again. Well we have all witnessed the current situation and how Angad seems to be the only one with Zaib. Well that's how it has been since the beginning where in any argument only Angad has always supported Zaib. This time also he was there right next to Zaib to make sure no harm came to him. Zaib and Angad had a very special bond between them as they shared everything with each other and there was nothing hidden from each other. Okays lets get back to the story and see how our Zaib is handling it all...

Zaib was really happy and relived to find his brother right next to him. He grabbed onto his forearm to get up and then held on for support.

Dilip was left aghast thinking over what Angd just said. How could he even think that he would be that cruel to throw his own sons out. This was just a way for Zaib to realize his mistake. "Don't keep on supporting him Angad. You'll just spoil him even more. Fine this time i'm forgiving him but only on one condition."

Zaib's face dropped because he could feel being chained down.

From now on he will report to me everytime he leaves the house and when he comes back. I think i'll have to draw a corfue on him."

"Dad, you're treating me like a kid."

"You're acting like a kid, so I've to set the rules. You're not ready to listen to me then it'll just have to be this way."

He was left with no choice. In order to remain in the house peacefully he had to obey his father and agree. Dilip made Angad in charge of the whole thing because he knew he would be trustworthy enough. Then he just left with Naina.

"Hey thanx bhai for being there for me today. I really appreciate it."

"Since when did this thankyou and appreciation come in our relationship? You're my brother and it's my duty to look out for you. And one more thing, remember that no matter what happens I'll always be there for you."

"ehem, ehem."
Kripa coughed in order to get their attention as she was still left just like that. Apparently they forgot to solve her problem.

"You're still here?" Angad was confused.

"I don't have a room to go to now do I?"

Angad slapped his forehead. "Actually your room is on the opposite side. I guess that's where the confusion happened. Now you know where to go so i suggest you make a move." Then he turned to Zaib again. "Well goodnight, or shall I say good early morning." he pointed towards the window which showed the aproaching dawn. Then he left the two alone.

Now began the awkward moment. Zaib didn't know what to do. Should he apologise or should he just lie on the bed and wait for her to leave? Even though she had created a havoc for him, he still couldnt forget those mesmerising eyes and her luscious lips. He sat on the bed and waited to see what she would do when he heard a ruffling sound. He turned around and to his surprise she had already packed her stuff and was pulling her luggage towards the door then she paused. Zaib felt offended by that. Then he thought that he shouldn't be the one apologising but instead it should be her, and now she was just leaving as if nothing happened. when she had paused Zaib thought that maybe she realised she was missing that part out but when he saw her picking up her shoes, he became disappointed again.

"So much arrogance" He thought as he saw her leaving the room. He was going to lie back on the bed but there was something about her which didn't let him leave his eyes off her. He stared at her until she reached her room on the opposite side. A sly smile appeared on his face as if his head had filled up with evil ideas. When she disappeared in her room, he fell back on his pillow and shut his eyes. It had been a long day and he was comepletely exhausted


okay guys it ends here. Hope you guys liked it. As usual, waiting for the comments.
Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part i hope that kripa and angad are a pair and zaib has someone else
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

great part i hope that kripa and angad are a pair and zaib has someone else

thankyou. Well you'll just have to wait and see what happens.

continue reading and enjoying 😃 😃

Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 waiting for more thx great part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
awww loved it! i liked the Writing in black where you sort of explained stuff that was really good! 👏 I love Anagd-Zaib relationship its really sweet! Although i hope its Angad & Kripa together lol 😛 cont soon x
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
i think zeb and kripa both will fall in luv but she will end getin married to angad.well thats only a guess.
nice part.

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