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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awww that was a lovelyy part! I loved the part where when Zaib was Hallucinating about Kripa being behind her in the mirror, it was so cute! 😳 && Their little eye-locking session in the Puja 😆 Angad's seems abit mean but when they were in india did he reject Kripa because he liked her? Lol just a theory i hope Kripa can change him ...Awww Zaib seems really attracted too her but i'm not sure about Kripa i have a feeling she likes Angad lol ...Anyway great part & Cont soon! x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Read your whole story!! Great!! Keep it up!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: P u j a- -*

Awww that was a lovelyy part! I loved the part where when Zaib was Hallucinating about Kripa being behind her in the mirror, it was so cute! 😳 && Their little eye-locking session in the Puja 😆 Angad's seems abit mean but when they were in india did he reject Kripa because he liked her? Lol just a theory i hope Kripa can change him ...Awww Zaib seems really attracted too her but i'm not sure about Kripa i have a feeling she likes Angad lol ...Anyway great part & Cont soon! x

thanx Puja

that part was something i reaally wanted to do for sometime so i finalyl got a chance. It did make him cute. Well i just simply wanted to make Zaib adorable.

The reason why Angad rejected Kripa was because he was arrogant and not interested in girls at all. He found Kripa too annoying and just too how shall i say 'chipkoo'. yeh thats thw word.

Of course he will chnage over time. Well she does like Angad becayuse she never knew Zaib but now that she does she seems to change her mind

well continue reading and appreciating.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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angad is too rude 😡 and zeb is a sweetheart 😊 .i think kripa shpuld try makin angad jealous by ignoring him.
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Originally posted by: deeya123

angad is too rude 😡 and zeb is a sweetheart 😊 .i think kripa shpuld try makin angad jealous by ignoring him.

Yes he is a very rude an arrgonat man when it is concerned with Kripa. Yuo never know it might be a wall to hide wats really there.

anyways thanx for reading and hope u continue.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 wohooooooooo again a gr8 part u r juzz too gud yaar lubd it 😊
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Originally posted by: newkidontheblok

👏 wohooooooooo again a gr8 part u r juzz too gud yaar lubd it 😊

hey thanx for appreciating

im glad ur having fun

well continue reading and enjoying.

The next part is cuming in a few minutes guys.

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Part 4

The estate was huge and beautiful. There were lovely garden grounds with a beautiful lake in between. Zaib and Kripa walked side by side along the lake observing and admiring the surroundings. They didn't speak but just often their hands might just touch.

"It's so beautiful here that one can never take their eyes off. I mean you live here so you might not find it so amazing but for me its just..." She held her two hands together and just smiled.

"You should see this place in autumn. its full of so many colours its simply mesmerizing. Then winter is a completely different story. Bare trees and mist. It looks as if you're souring in the clouds."

She stared at him wondering was he for real. He sounded so romantic that it was amazing how looks can be deceptive.

"What happened? why are you looking at me like that?"

"Nothing."
She looked the other way suddenly embarrasssed by being caught red handed. "I was just amazed after you said all that. It was so poetic."

They continued walking whilst Zaib showed her the differrent flowers that had bloomed in different grounds. She seemed to be fascinated by even the small things that he fell for her even more.

After a certain length they decided to stop and rest for a while. Zaib leaded her to a bench near the lake and they both sat down. Kripa's eyes were still fixed on the lake and the scenery beyond it. The sweet voices of nature kept touching her ears sending her in another world altogether.

"You know this bench has a lot of memeries. Zaib spoke with a sly smile trying to make it sound dodgy just to see her reaction.

She felt a bit awkward at that moment because that statement clearly had an underlying meaning. "Really? it must have been something."

It sure was. You know I can still feel it when i sit here. Oh it was so..." He could see how her reactions were changing which amused him. She was actually buying it.

Kripa immdeiately got off the bench as if she would catch a disease or something from it. Zaib burst out laughing. "You should look at your face right now. It's as if you caught someone red handed." He imitated her expression. She felt embarrassed and just laughed it out.

"I'm sorry, the moment was just getting a bit too serious."

There was something in his smile which hyptonized her. This smile was something she had always imagined on Angad and now she was actually seeing it, but it wasn't Angad. It was someone better. "You reminded me of myself. Practical jokes and pranks have always been my life."

"Brilliant! tub to hum dono kee khoob jamegee."
He got up and hugged her. At that moment he didn't realise what he did but soon it striked so he released himself. "I'm sorry. I got carried away."

Kripa thought "Why does he keep on apologizing. I know I barely know him but there is something in his touch which makes me feel comfortable as if he has the right to do so. What is happening to me?" She heard a clicking sound and it was getting louder so she jumped out of her trance and saw Zaib standing in front of her with his gorgeous smile. "I really like that about you."

"What?" becoming conscious all of a sudden, she began putting her hair behind her ears and pretended to straighten out her clothes.

"Relax. I was only talking about that glint in your eyes. whenever you drift off somewhere else it appears, tranforming you into someone else altogether."

"You've got to stop flattering me."
It was not possible to look him in the eye. Why was it that she felt shy on everything he said? She seemed very bold and staright forward with Angad but with Zaib it was a different story. everytime she spoke she thought twice as if she was trying to make a good impression. Did she want present herself infront of Zaib?

"Tell me one thing Kripa. Where did you learn such a sweet song?"

"Yeh to Anurag or Kakoon kee kahani hai."

"What?"

"I'm sorry. Its a new programme in India which has just made me fall in love with it. It portrays the love between two individuals where the girl doesnt belive in love but the guy convinces her that he is there to show her love. It's just a magical relationship between them. I'm surprised you haven't heard it."

Zaib was surprised to find her to be such a strong believer of love, just like him. Her thoughts were so innocent and so pure. Could it be she was the one? "That wouldn't be surprising because you see i've never been to India."

"Really. You haven't been but can speak so fluent hindi?"

"Well that would be because my mother more or lessly speaks in hindi so it's inherited."

"Oh you would love India. Especially Chandanpur."

He went closer to her. "I will if you'll take me." They both stared into each other's eyes clearly noticing how much both felt for each other. there was certainly something more than merely friendship. She became concsious again so moved her eyes away. "I mean, when i do come there one day, you'll show me around. Just like I did."

"Of course."
They both became quiet now as they were embarrassed. Zaib was because he couldn't get the right words out of his mouth and Kripa was because apparenly she was showing that she was really interested in him and wanted to get close. She had to tell herself to control it because she didnt even know him. They continued their walk again until Zaib checked his watch. "It's been five hours since we're out here. We were so involved that we didn't even realise we have crossed over to the other side."

Kripa turned immedately and saw the house on the otherside of the lake. It hid between the trees and flowers. It looked amazing. "You're certainly correct. when you've such great scenery and good company no one can realise anything else." She smiled. Their walk back was different. They were different. It was as if they had stepped out of a machine which transformed them. They both were filled with new thought processes and a pile of feelings.


Didn't you enjoy that or what. It was sweet. As they say jis cheez ka aghaaz behtar ho os ka anjaam bhi behtar hee hota hai. At the moment it seems that way. This walk that they had changed their lives because now they both were feeling things which they never felt before. Was it love? or was it just infatuation? Hmmm, lets go back into the drama and see shall we...

That night loads of people were invited and the whole house was lit up with beautiful lights. There were distant relatives, close friends and business associates. A couple gate crashers were trying to get in just to wish their favourite singer Zaib on his birthday. These girls were not going to give up so easily so some had found a way in through the back wall. They took off their heels and pulled up their dresses and climbed up. Crazy or what?

Angad got dressed in a black suit with a colourful tie. He stood in front of the mirror whilst he gelled his hair and then combed it out straight in place. everything had to look neat and perfect. Instead of being happy and excited about a party he was quite serious and bored with the idea. Parties and anything to do with fun bored him. He found himself an alien in between them but that night he had to consider other people's feelings especially his mother's who had organised everything. When he was ready he opened the door of his room and was stunned.

"Hi, you're looking handsome tonight." Kripa looked him up and down. She was hoping that by now his mood would have changed and atleast now he would talk with her properly. She stood there wearing a black dress with beads on one side. The dress complimented her eyes and she was hoping Angad will atleast compliment her.

"I could say the same for you, but you see I'm not that good at complimenting women. Now please excuse me, I've a hall full of guests waiting." Angad striaghtened his tie and then moved Kripa aside. Still his opinion hadn't changed about her and after that morning he became more affrimative that she cetainly hadn't changed.

Kripa's heart died again seeing that he still hadn't changed. If Zaib would've been in his place then he wouldn't have had stopped showering her with compliments. Just a simple nice would also have had settled Kripa but here Angad wasn't even ready to look at her. Thinking about Zaib made her forget that Angad had walked off towards the stairs. She made her way there and before he could put his foot on the first step she held ono his arm. "I don't mind if you don't compliment but would you mind escorting a young woman along with your aquaintance?" She slipped her arm through his giving him no choice.

He made a face and just continued because prcatically he was being pulled. She just didn't take a no for an answer. As they got down to the middle of the stairs the guests began glaring and clapping for the birthday boy. He just had a staright face. "You know everyone is looking at you so at least smile." Kripa said with grinding teeth so others don't realise what she is saying. The look on his face was as if he was in a funeral. It was his birthday and still no emotions?

Once completely down Angad released himself from Kripa and mingled in with the crowd who all bombarded him with wishes. Her eyes searched around for Zaib. Where was he? In between everyone she felt quite alone because of the hostality by Angad. Zaib was the only one who made her feel wanted. He must be already amongst the crowd but where? As she made her way forward she ran into a couple of girls rushing around.

"Did you see him yet?" A desperate blonde asked another girl who had a skimpy dress on.

"No. He was here a while ago near the drinks table but when I looked again he had disappeared."

"We better find him before anyone finds us."
The girls just rushed away.

What was going on? Kripa was confused as to who were these crazy girls and who were they looking for. Then she noticed a pair of eyes under the drinks table. She knew those eyes pretty well so she made her way over there.

All the guests were enjoying the party and were talking with each other about business, social life, house life and about their partners. All amongst them was Zaib hiding behind the drinks table because he had noticed the group of girls. He cursed his security for letting them in. He knew they were nothing but a couple gate crashers. Now getting away from them wouldn't be easy so he had to wait till they were gone so he could sort them out. He kept on peeping over to keep an eye on the girls and to see if his coast was clear or not. Suddenly he felt a tap on his shoulder which nearly made him fall on the floor.

Kripa got a jerk herself seeing him so scared of something. Now her curiosity levels had increased seeing him act so suspicious. She thought "What the hell is going on here?"

"Kripa, what are you doing here?"

"That's what I want to ask you. What are you doing here? strange things are happening."

"I'm sure you must have noticed some crazy girls running around."
Zaib pointed towards the stairs from where the girls were going up and down. "Do you know why they're running around?"

"Well it's a party and they clearly look like pin heads to me."

"True say but these girls are basicly just gate crashers,"
He got excited and stood up. "Who have most conveniently invited themselves in just to wish me." He turned around to look at the girls. that is when he realised he was standing up and he got an even bigger bolt when he saw the blonde spotting him. "Hey I'll talk to you later, I have to go." As he made his way towards the crowd he could see the girls coming his way. As he stopped they would stop. He made one step and they followed. Then he just made a run and those girls followed. "Security! help!"

Zaib began ducking down and running through the crowd but it didn't seem to help because the girls just didn't get off his trail. He went under tables, through crowds of important people, through mainly all the doors of the ground floor but still he couldn't get away. When one girl was taken care of another replaced her. Where were these coming from? Finally he stopped by the stairs all puffed out. There was relief as it seemed the coast was clear but it was too early to judge that because they popped out from the crowd. Zaib got annoyed and decided to run upstairs and jump out of a window or something. Then he discarded that because the stupid girls wont leave him there either. they would just be stupid enough to jump out with him. He went the other way and decided to run in circles in order to confuse them whilst he called security.

"Bhai help! I need your help." Zaib screamed as he went pass Angad who looked at him with surprise. At first he became worried but then when he saw those girls behind him he frowned. "You're back to you're tricks again aern't you." Angad just jerked his shoulders with disbelief and carried on talking with his collegues. Zaib was frustrated that even Angad turned away from him. Now he had to do something himself.

He was getting tired now so he stopped and bent over to lean on his knees and to catch his breath. "God damn it. don't they get tired?" He picked himself up again and brisk walked towards the stage. He saw Prithvi setting up the mike and putting the guitar properly. He gestured him to come over to him and help him.

Prithvi looked at Zaib with a quzzical look. He couldn't undertsand what actions he was making. He kept on moving his hands towards himself. Then Prithvi saw he was holding a mike so he thought maybe Zaib was asking for that so without thinking twice he threw the mike towards him.

A shocked Zaib catched it and glared at Prithvi. Before he could curse him the girls began cheering.

"Wow, he's going to sing guys."

No, no, no. That is not what he was going to do. But the girls had already cheered and the crowd around him had also begun clapping. now he had no choice.

"What have you done?" an angry Kanan came to Prithvi and flipped his head.

"Ouch! Hey I didn't know what he was saying. He kept on doing actions of calling something so I thought he wanted the mike."

"It's his birthday dumbass. He's not supposed to sing. We're supposed to sing for him."
Kanan just walked away trying to solve the problem but now Zaib had already become the center of attraction so he had to sing.

Kripa couldn't tolerate the commotion anymore. Poor Zaib was left all alone and she had to do something. She looked around and found Angad busily talking away, ignorant of the situation. She made his way to him. "What kind of broher are you? leaving your brother to suffer down there. Do something."

Angad turned towards the crowd who were cheering and pushing Zaib to sing. "Relax. Look this is not new for Zaib. It happens to him all the time. He'll be fine." He returned back to his conversation.

"God he's so stone hearted. Atleast show emotions towards your own brother" she thought as she made her way towards the crowd and to a helpless Zaib.

He finally agreed and the lights were switched off. All the crowd seemed surprised as to what happened. Then they saw different colour lights swiching on near the stage and smoke was let out. Then loud music with drums beating started and everyone's eyes fell on the spot near the stage where Zaib stood with a mike. He began.

"Eh, dunya hasino ka mela. Mele me yeh dil akela. Ek dost dhoondh ta hu me, dosti ke liye. ek dost dhoondh ta hu me, dosti ke liye."

The girls joined him in dancing. "ohoo dunya hasino ka mela. Mele me ye dil akela. Ek dost dhoondh ta hu me, dosti ke liye. Ek dost dhoondh ta hu me dosti ke liye." When he noticed that the girls were busy he decided to chip out of there because he really didn't want to sing. He thought of camouflaging in the dark amongst the crowd but as he kept on going the crowd moved out. There was no way he would be able to get out of this. The girls catched up with him. "ho, yaha, waha, idhar, udhar, chehre hai kitne haseen. Magar jaha rooke nazar, surat wo dekhi nahi." He took the girls one by one and danced with them. "Yaha, waha, idhar, udhar, chehre hai kitne haseen. Magar jaha rooke nazar, surat wo dekhi nahi. Wo husn dhoondhta hu me, aashiqui ke liye." The girls moved apart. "Dunya haseeno ka mela, mele me ye dil akela. Ek dost dhoondh ta hu me, dosti ke liye. Ek dost dhoondhta hu me, dosti ke liye." Now Zaib got a chance to run away from the girls for good. He ducked down between the crowd and sneaked towards the counter window in order to climb over it and get to the main door but to his bad luck he couldn't get away so easily because the girls prevented him. He shook his head and kept going round them. "Hey, ada, nasha, nazar, badan, sub kuch tere paas hai. Magar tu wo ghata nahi jiski mujhe pyaas hai." He pulled the girls in and out one by one. "Ada, nasha, nazar, badan, sub kuch tere paas hai. Magar tu wo ghata nahi jiskee mujhe pyaas hai. Ek jaam dhoondhta hu, mehkashee ke liye." He moved the girls away so he could dance alone. "Dunya haseeno ka mela, mele me ye dil akela. Ek dost dhoondh ta hu me, dosti ke liye. Ek dost dhoondhta hu me, dosti ke liye." This was the point where he could slip away because the music had become a bit fast so the girls and the crowd would get involved. He ducked down again and ran away. One eye stayed on the girls and the other stayed on the direction he was going in. Suddenly a hand pulled him into a corner and he practically crashed into the person between the wall.


end of part.

Hope you guys liked it. &nb sp;




Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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angad is acting like a jerk but poor zeb caught b/w girls.i think its kripa who pulled him.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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grt part..its prob. kripa...cont. soon

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