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Posted: 17 years ago
Next time I'll give you a full out long response...ill make a remark on everything 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
anu kamal kar ditta yaar !!
it was so sweet part !

and seriously i cant see anjie's pain ,it hurts a lot .
but im glad atul will be there to take care of her.

-kanu
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Anu....👏 👏 👏. Great update. The dream scene was fab, I almost thought for a moment that anjie had changed and the ice maiden was melting. Oh i liked the "Entertaining, very entertaining" dialogue 😆, funny & sarcastic at the same time.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Anu Bear, this is not fair😡 You give us such a good scene and then you take it away immediately😆 The way that you portrayed the dream was excellent - showcasing it from different perspectives😳 and I loved how Atul observes every little thing about Anjali, and how she does the same for him, even if she doesn't realise it😳

His realisation at the end was 😍 as finally all the pieces fell into place in his mind, and I loved how Atul was a bit....different in this chapter; he got angry in the beginning, frustrated...rather than always being cheerful, which, even if I love that about him, isn't always realistic. But you gave him some more shades, which only enhance his character.

I just read Sunaina's TB article, and in response to the "dream man" question, she says "Positive attitude towards life, and the ability to have fun and live life to the fullest." It occurs to me that this is exactly what Atul is and has, and here's another reason why Atul and Anjali are just so perfect a match, because there seems to be a lot of Sunaina in Angie, and vice versa.

Anyway, lovely update - and continue soon, please!😳


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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Annnuuu!! 🤗 🤗
'twas an awesome update, yaar!! 👏 👏 really loved the dream sequence! i could even imagine Atul shaking his hands in air 😆 😆 the moment i read that blushing wala part i knew it would definitely be Atul's dream.. cuz how itni jaldi anjali mein itna badaa change aana toh mushkil hai..

anyways, interviews kaise huay?
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Posted: 17 years ago

Anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu..............total dhik chak dhik chak dance time....

Oye my atul is in love...hun ki karaan...atleast his choice is soooooooooooooooo much better than the other idiot who is currently standing under windows and folding his hands in pleading...oye woh haath jod raha tha, can u imagine??????????????????? needs a really really hard shake...and some lessons frm atulster....but i dont think anjie is an ice maiden at all...that epithet must always and forever more be reserved for hte lesser sister....

ab what do i say about what u have written....man, is this guy smart or what...u know, anu, on a more serious note, i really really didnt like the way they showed atul falling for anjie at the dandiya...........but the way you have made him fall in love with her, the whole set up, the whole realization , its what love is really made of isnt it?????????? and the dream.........omg....the moment i read shy , blushing and sorry..........i knew it had to be a dream...but omg what a dream....what a dream....cracked the scene sweetums, loved it totally....and i can sooooooooooo imagine atul with his biggest grin and shaking his hand in the hand..oh, i soooooooo love my atulster...it was gentle, funny and yet soooooo touching...........

darling i am just writing straight off coz its teh only way i can write, so if i miss anything,please dont mind...i love each and every part...

and the scene between the father and the daughters, the reaction of anjie and our smart man's astute insight...anu, we can never ever see this in the real serial, not even one in a million chance...so SNT is our only hope...so well-etched, so subtle, you dont even describe the exchange and yet you say a thousand words...atul's sensitivity, be it to plants, to hte environment , to people's pain or in recognising the hidden gem in anjie is portrayed in a way that only we who love him can know in our hearts and never ever hope for hte creatives to even imagine...hte feeling the sudden sighting of a locker label can bring, the sudden memory of a word, or a smile or a look.......ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....

the realization of love comes suddenly, yet stealthily...it creeps upon us like a spring's morning, when suddenly the frost is gone and the green of the leaves peep out of the branches of a hitherto barren tree....hte leaves are peeping for our man, can spring be far behind???????

🥳 🥳🥳🥳

Go, atul...i know he knows how to get his girl, how to soothe her troubled soul, how to show her love like no other, and maybe in hte process drill some sense into the head of hte other idiot who has misdirected his affections towards the most undeserving candidate ever...but as usual i digress...

i can just imagine him singing....

tera chehra kitna suhana lagta hai
tere aagey chand puran lagta hai

i will not say anything about your writing...i dont think i have the words, the capability or the locus standi to comment on your caliber of writing...let me just say that u write like a poet, think like a philosopher, dream like a romantic and feel like only a woman can....your words weave a magic which is truly unparalleled, both in humor and in seriousness...

what would we do without you sweetie..in this drought-stricken times where there is no AA1 being shown at all, though i must say anjie's reactions to atul's situation on thurs brought some cheer...and her smiles at him were worth many million dollars...

a really really old song for them

koi pyaar ke dekhe jaadugari
gulfaam ko mil gayee sabz pari..

and she would have to be sabz would she, given his green views!!!! 😆

Bravo girl...and all this in the middle of your interviews!!!!!!!! 👏

I KNEW I WAS FORGETTING SOMETHING..............

Diabetes inducing society has its own Mutual Admiration Society......🤣

Edited by dmg2c - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: 4frenz

anu kamal kar ditta yaar !!
it was so sweet part !

and seriously i cant see anjie's pain ,it hurts a lot .
but im glad atul will be there to take care of her.

-kanu



Kehan, is that you??😕😕 Did you change your ID yaar?? But thank you soooooooo much for the sweet comments as always!🤗🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hdalal

Hey Anu....👏 👏 👏. Great update. The dream scene was fab, I almost thought for a moment that anjie had changed and the ice maiden was melting. Oh i liked the "Entertaining, very entertaining" dialogue 😆, funny & sarcastic at the same time.



Thank you so much, Hemangi!🤗Did you really think it was real for a moment??😆😆 I thought that shy waali line would instantly give it away😉😆...but so glad you liked that "Entertaining" waala dialogue! I loved writing it!!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: psawyer

Anu Bear, this is not fair😡 You give us such a good scene and then you take it away immediately😆 I feel like giving an evil smile here like you always do when people are after you when you leave a chapter hanging at the end of Love😆😆The way that you portrayed the dream was excellent - showcasing it from different perspectives😳 and I loved how Atul observes every little thing about Anjali, and how she does the same for him, even if she doesn't realise it😳 Thank you so much, Vasu Bear!🤗...and so glad you noticed that slight detail about her noticing things about him too!

His realisation at the end was 😍 as finally all the pieces fell into place in his mind, and I loved how Atul was a bit....different in this chapter; he got angry in the beginning, frustrated...rather than always being cheerful, which, even if I love that about him, isn't always realistic. But you gave him some more shades, which only enhance his character. So glad you liked the realization part, Vas! I had mixed feelings about it when I was writing it....dunno why something felt off about it...but maybe it wasn't so bad after all!😆😆...as for the shades to Atul...I really feel that more depth needs to be added to him....and this is my little "revolt" against the billion scenes that they show of him in the show just running after Angie mindlessly...Yes, he is a sweet and cheerful guy, but I'd like to believe that he has his dignity as well!! So in my ff a.k.a. my dreamland, I've decided to bestow him with that!😉😆😆.

I just read Sunaina's TB article, and in response to the "dream man" question, she says "Positive attitude towards life, and the ability to have fun and live life to the fullest." It occurs to me that this is exactly what Atul is and has, and here's another reason why Atul and Anjali are just so perfect a match, because there seems to be a lot of Sunaina in Angie, and vice versa.Hai really?? She said that? I've gotta go find this article now...but you're right, I've always felt that there is a huge part of Sunaina in Angie...especially in the emotional and more mellow moments when she's softer...and you're right! That is why Atul IS the perfect match for her in a way...now we only need for Angie to realize that😉

Anyway, lovely update - and continue soon, please!😳 Thank you so much, Vas yaar!😳....Will continue as soon as I'm able to!😳...or to put it your way..."Sooooooon very soooooooooooon"😉😆😆


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ifrahnaqash

Hey Annnuuu!! 🤗 🤗
'twas an awesome update, yaar!! 👏 👏 Thank you sooooooo much, Ifrah!🤗🤗really loved the dream sequence! i could even imagine Atul shaking his hands in air 😆 😆 the moment i read that blushing wala part i knew it would definitely be Atul's dream.. cuz how itni jaldi anjali mein itna badaa change aana toh mushkil hai.. So glad you enjoyed that part, yaar! It seems to be everyone's fav. part from this chapter😆😆...and yes, Atul standing there shaking his hand is something I could totally visualize as well...along with the moment when he does the double take when the "real" Anjali walks in😆😆

anyways, interviews kaise huay?Interviews were good yaar!😃😃 Thank you for asking!😳

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