'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 19

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nureat01



Fatty Bear!!🤗🤗🤗 Finally, I got a jhalak of you!! Whew!! Where've you been, yaar??...I've missed you!!

Thank you soooo much, yaar!😳😳....LOVED what you said about Atul-Angie...that dual personality to them...so true! Well, atleast in my dreamland it seems to be true😆😆...less said about the show, the better..and thank you for liking the characterization once again😳😳

Yes, the inevitable has happened indeed!😳😆😆....and how did you know that my brain works overtime?? *wonders if the fact that she's been updating pretty quickly recently might have something to do with it*😉 Yes, my brain does work overtime....I've been told many times that I think too much for my own good😆😆....but in this case, I'm all for it!😉😆

Thank you for the wonderful compliment yaar!🤗Will try to update soon!

p.s. I finished Kite Runner during my endless round of flights...want a review??

Yes. PM. NOW.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

Hey Anu! Hey Borna! I'd been waiting for your comments, my fellow massive AA1 fan!😳😳😆

I have a limited bit of computer time, since the one in my room is not functioning... 😭 Awww...I was wondering where you'd disappeared to the last few days...I'm sorry yaar! I hope your computer gets fixed soon!

This last chapter totally blew me away!!! 👏 👏 All those subtle emotions from both Atul and Anjali were so beautifully portrayed that I just sighed when I finished reading it...Haila... Awww...Thank you so so much, Borna!🤗🤗...I'm so touched that you liked it this much!!😳😳
The scene with Angie and Shashank made me feel so bad for Angie...Poor Angie! 😭 I know yaar!...Little Miss Sugar just keeps popping up everywhere! 😕 And it's all so much about perceptions and co-incidences, nahin? If Shashank had maybe managed to reprimand Ridz in that moment before she corrected herself...maybe it would all be different! But given Angie's painful history since her childhood, she can't really be blamed for taking something like that to heart so quickly, hana?
Heehee! The daydream was awesome! Now I'm curious to see what Angie would look like when she's acting coy... 😆 I think she could pull it off, but we won't get to see that for quite a while, na? Yes, we won't be getting to see that for a while for sure😳😆😆...but when it does happen, I'm SO going to enjoy writing it!!😍😍.😆...cuz I totally agree with you! She could definitely pull it off!

In reference to those earlier posts about Sunaina's TB interview: Awwww, that's so sweet of her! I totally agree, though. Positivity is a must in order to be able to go through life!
And I can also see SO much of Sunaina in Angie...Like you said, it's especially visible in her softer moments. 😳 Oh, how I wish there were more of those... *sigh* I so wish for that as well yaar!

Keep up the wonderful updates, Anu! I love your dreamland so much - it makes me happy! 😳 Awww that is so sweet, Borna!🤗🤗Glad that my little dreamland makes you happy as well!😳😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
Edited by SRK-Kads4ever - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww Borna...you truly humble me yaar! 😳 😳 I'm at a loss for words, so these will have to do 🤗 🤗 🤗

And I know what you mean about the proponal scene...even in some of the most illogical moments in this show, Sunaina truly shines! 👏 👏 Wish we got to see more of her instead of the n-o...but *sigh* it's not meant to be ...which is why I extract my little revenge in here by keeping n-o appearance to the minimum and AA1 stuff to the maximum! 😈 😆 😆 Well duhh! It IS an AA fan-fic 😉 😆 😆
Edited by nureat01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey anu,
I just read the whole Socha na tha. I really really wanted to read it form last 3 weeks n had it bookmarked but never for time to read it in peace....and its sunday today so just remembered tht I had this pending...

One word-Fantastic...
you have expressed Anjali's nature n the reason behing her behaving the way she does so correctly...
okay I ll directly move on to the last part...
Ommgg.g..honestly, whenever I read that Atul couldn't breath in elevator scene n bicycle scene...u won;t believe me...I was feeling breathless too!....All thanks to your wonderful writing...you make me feel every scene happening...
Thank you for preserving the Atul-ness in the fanfic as it has lost somewhere in the show and is taken more as a foolness n a pass time 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww Dhvani...Thank you so much for taking the time out to read it and comment on it! 🤗 🤗

I'm so glad you liked my little attempt to preserve the Atul-ness as you call it in this fan-fic 😳 😆 😆 ...yes, what he's been reduced to in this show irritates the heck out of me, so I have no choice but to write this ff instead.

And thank you so much for liking the elevator scene and the bicycle scene so much! That is a wonderful compliment yaar 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey,

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You have a wonderful control on words...i love the way you portray each and every scene and character.

ive loved the way you have described Anjies character and the justification behind her actions.... Atul ofcourse is Atul...loveable in every essence..

youre really good...thank you for writing such a good FF

take care
Naina
xxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
@Naina: Thank you so much 😳 😳 I don't know about wonderful yaar...but I try my best 😳 😳 Thank you for liking it so much, and leaving such sweet comments! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
WOWWW!!! 😍

How did I miss this? It was fantastic, beyond words. 👏 👏 👏 Truly magnificent.. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
@anu...great job once again!! 👏 Saw the mention in the other post and came to check it out!! 👏 Must say you are really building up the story well!!

And boy u hve dream sequences et al 😃 ...for a bit there I was so shocked reading that ('fore it turned out to be a fantasy)...I was like this is just so not anu! Mujhe laga R ko dekh dekh ke u hve gone in reverse overdrive...angi blushing!! But abs loved the way u ended it with typical angi sarcasm and the 'entertaining' bit.

Atul's glimpse into Angi's vulnerability was also very well handled...w/o any thing overt being said...just the way the whole scene was enacted! The kind of person Atul was introduced as in DMG (not the champu he is now)he wud have picked up the vibes of the interaction b/w the father and the daughters and found smthng amiss!!

And finally his realisation...sweet resignation...atul style!!

Lage raho Anu bhai...makes for such a good read!! 👏 👏

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