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Posted: 17 years ago
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Khatti Meethi Taqraar!!

Armaan: I am already late on my first day working for papa's business!! Uss sale sharabi kal raat hi mili thi…mere gaadi ko maarne?? Pehle sab kuch kho chukka hoon ab meri gaadi sahiba…queen Victoria ko kuch hogaya to…!!

Armaan is mumbling to himself about his pathetic life when smack he bumps into a girl. She dropped her chocolate smoothie on his brand new white shirt and all over his papers which had fallen on the ground.

Armaan- What the hell!!! App dekhke…
But before he could finish the girl began to incessantly apologize in wht he thought to be at least ten different languages…but then again he had slept only for 3 hour last night!

Riddhima- Oye teri, dekhiya saab I am sooo sorry mere se ghalati hogayee, mujhe dekh kar chlana tha, ab dekho na aap ke shirt par mera smoothie gir gaya and you seem late for work…dekhiye you just hold on for a second mai dekhti hoon ke meri bag me saaf karne ke liye kuch hai….
She looks in her bag but still won't shut up. Her excessive chattering was annoying armaan yet he was amazed that she had been talking without a pause for at least a whole minute!
Ridz- Yeh lo milgaya naa?? Ab is on the go detergent stick ko apne shrit par lagaana aur choo mantar…dhabba mit jayega!!! Kaash yeh aapke papers par kaam karta to kya baat hoti naa????

Armaan- Dekhiye mujhe time nahi hai, I will buy another shirt on my way!

Ridz- Arree yaar ab aapko dukaan mein a naye shirt ko dhoondna hoga and then the cashier lines iffooo, aap meri njaadoo ki chaddi kyun nahi use karte do minute lagega fataafat by god!!!

Armaan hesitantly takes it from her hand and applies it on the stain.

Ridz- Vaise mera naam riddhima gupta hai, lekin sab log mujhe ridz karke bulatein hain!!

Armaan- I am Armaan Malik

Ridz- HAILA Malik group of industries ka rebel beta, jisne business padhne ke bijai apne papa ke marzi ke khilaf mbbs kiya...wahin jiske papa kuch mehne pehla expire hoge aur jiski girlfrend ne dump kardiya ??

Armaan- Meri hi zindagi ka update dene ke liye bohut bohut shukriya aapka !!!

Ridz- Oh sorry woh haina ghalati se mistake hogaya !! Vaise aap chalkar kyun jaa rahein hain?? Aapki to vaddi vaddi gaddiyan shaddiyan hongi ???

Armaan- jee nahi koye vaddi gadiyan ka factory nahi hai mere paas, sirf do hain aur donon bhi repair par hain

Ridz- ei lee pehle hi bolna tha ?? Ek kaam keejiye, why don't I drop you, mai wahin ke baazu wale hospital mein intern hoon tum ko choddoongi??

Armaan- Nahi…

Ridz- Dekho maine tum par smoothie giraya aur tumhe late banaaye haina?? To yaar hisaab barabar to karne do!!

Armaan- Theek hai.
He walked over to her car very reluctantly.

Armaan- Vaise aap hamesha aise badbadaati rehti hain??

Ridz- Aap nahi tum!! Aur haan mujhe baatein karna BOHUT pasand hain!! Aap ko problem to nahin??

Armaan- Nahiin mujhe kaunsa problem hone waala hai???

To himself- armaan to kahaan aur kaunsa namoonon ke saath phas jaata hai??

Cumming next :

2 days later armaan's rani bumps into some other car again!! He gets out of his car and marches over to the other car reluctantly when he sees none other than Riddhima!!!!

Catch the next taqraar in part two 😉

Edited by <-*Sandhya*-> - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ nupur i know it may sound a bit like jab we met coz of the dumped gf and dead tht...the business too...but keep reading i assire you it will have my masaalas in it thru and thru!!

Everyone plz leave comments gud or bad i dun mind!! I worked really hard on this!!

Edited by <-*Sandhya*-> - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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COOL IT WAS LIKE IM WATCIN JAB WE MET BUT IT S GUD N FUNNY PLZ CONTINU 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey!it was a gud prt
cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this is amazing just like jub we met!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
hey.pleas continue. i am waiting 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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interesting storyline.. can't wait to read.. plzz continue..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow sounds exciting plz continue 😛 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I AM SOOOOOO Srry guys…I know I updated it quite/really late but I had a major project due this week, and my life(sorta) depended on it. I will be more frequent with my posts and updates. So without further ado here is part two(lol tht rhymed 😆 ) newayz!!:

Ek aur taqraar!

A (whispering to himself)- dammit 8 baj gayeeegaye, ab to dadi sejooti to milegi. Mai unke bday par phir late hogaya!!!

He sits in his car and drives out of the parkway as fast as possible….when he samshes into another car. He is quite upset so he gets out of his car and marches over to the other one.
A- Ayyy andhe ho kya?? Theek se gaadi chalaane nahi aata? Agar chalane nahi aata to itni badi gaadi rakhte kyun ho? Bloody drivers!!

To his surprise the person who gets of the car is none other than riddhima!

R- TUM?!?! Subha ko mere milkshake giraaya aur maine kuch nahi kaha…socha bechara uski bhi to shirt par gira, to chod diya. Aur abh khud gaadi chla nahi sakte aur andhe mujhe kehte ho. Apnea ankh ke saath saath apna dimaakh bhi check karvaalena. Tum to aise chalar rahe the jaise do minute main kayamath aane wali hai aur tum bhagwaan se last minute apne paapon ke liye maafi maangne jaa rahe ho.

A- Kya??.... 😕

R-Kya kya?? Mujhse maafi mango aur kya??

A- tumse mai maafi kyun maangoon ??

R- lagta hai aankhon aur dimakh ke sath saath tumhe kaan bhi check kraane padenge ! Suna nahin maine kya kaha ? Ghalati tumhari thi...aur saara damage ka cost tum doge ! Samjhe??

A- Mai doonga?? Ab aapko dimaakh check karvaana chahiye! Main paisa vaisa bilkul nahin denevala. Aur yeh aap kaan khol ke sunlijiye !

R- Saala Kanjoos. Itne vadde baap ke vadde vadde bete ho, aur ek choti si gaadi ka damage cost nahin de sakte ?? Theek hai to phir jao bhaad mein !!! Vaise bhi mujhe aapki bheek ki zaroorat nahin hai ! Main apni gaadi ka repair khud karva sakti hoon !

A- to itne der bak kyun rahi thi ? Pehle hi keh sakti thin a??

R- GO TO HELL

A- wahaan bhi aake mujhse takraajaogi. Lekin agar tumse chutkaara milega toh theek hai narg bhi swarg lagega meri maa.

They both huff and puff and walk over to their cars and drive off. Both swearing at each other.

Preview- The next day Armaan's little cousin brother meets with an accident and is admitted to the hospital…his doctor is none other than Dr. Riddhima Gupta!!! 😉

For all those who appreciated my work…hnx soo much I will try my best to not let y'all down- hope you like this part….will post the next asap!!

plz leave ur commentz guys...gud and bad all are more than welcome😊


Edited by <-*Sandhya*-> - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey.too good yaar. pleas continue sooon.loved it 👏

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