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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
Great part!

Ridz is and Armaan arguing is like the classic DMG scene. Please continue soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
haha very nice ff hun! please do continue!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey sandhya, very nice storyline...plzzz post jaldi karna thanks.
Ash.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey sandhya loved ur parts just now read both the parts........... 👏 👏 👏
so armi now has only his dadi............
i hope ki AR jaldhi se dost banjayein......... 😉
waiting for ur next part do continue soon............ 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey it was really nice .. awesome work ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey new ff!!Welcome n wht an intro yaar..the part was really gud n full on fighting..why do they alwayz fight??this can be the question of the year now!! 😆
newayz im sure u'll soon make thm like each other rite!all the best wid it!!n im waiting for the next part soo plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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New Characters-

Dadi- Armaan's only remaining blood relative. She is very sweet and kind, and armaan shares any small problem with her. He did this even when his own parents were around. Armaan sometimes calls her My Love when he has done something wrong.

Rahul- A 10-year-old orphan whom dadi has brought up with love and care. Armaan calls him champ. He is like a little brother to him and he loves him a lot.


Recap: Armaan bumps into Riddhima's car and they both have a fighting sequence, although armaan won't admit it, Ridz wins the verbal duel hands down!

Armaan is driving off in his car, miffed at ridz. As usual he is mumbling in his mouth when he reaches his dadi's place which has an ambulance standing in front of it.
A shocked Armaan rushes out of his car and runs to see what happens.

He sees dadi standing with tears in her eyes.

A- dadi kya hua?? Aap itni pareshaan kyun lag rahi hain? Sab theek to hai?

D-Beta who rahul…

A- Rahul... kya, kya hua ushe??

D- Beta who neeche daud raha tha, jub who seedhiyon se girgaya. Maine tumhe contact karne ki koshish ki lekin tumne to cell yahin par chodh diya. Toh maine ambulance bulvadi.

A- Rahul…who theek toh hai, hosh main yah phir…

D- Maine doctors se poocha, lekin unh ne kuch kehne se inkaar kardiya. Keh rahe the ke bohut khoon behchuka hai, ab woh kuch nahi kehsakte.

A-Oh god! Yahaan paas mein hi sanjeevni hai, wahin par admit hoga yeh. Ishe sabse best treatment milni chahiye.

D- Who usse wahin le jaarahe hain. Bhagwaan kare yeh theek hojaaye!

A- Don't worry, kuch nahin hoga champ ko. Hum ushe champ bas yuhin to nahi bulaate!

Chalo hum hospital chalte hain.
Armaan tries to console a helplessly sobbing dadi but is on the verge of tears himself.
They drive to the hospital.

Meanwhile….

Ridhimma is also driving off mumbling and swearing about armaan, when her pager rings and reads emergency. She immediately turns around and rushes to the hospital.

When she enters the hospital, she sees a nurse running toward her.

R- Nurse Bonita, patient kaunse ward mein hai or status kya hai?

NB- Dr.Gupta, patient emergency ward mein hai, 10 saal ka bacha hai, seediyon se girkar sir par lagi hai. Head injury bohut severe hai aur khoon excessively behraha hai.

R- Triage?

NB- Immediately life threatening, agar abhi treat nahin kiya gaya to teen ya phir chaar bhi arteries tear hone ke chances hain, leading to subdural hematoma. Patient coma mein jaa sakta hai, ya phir jaan bhi kho sakta hai.

R- Theek hai, ushe abhi operation theatre mein admit kardo, aur uska koi family?

NB- Haan bhai or dadi. Aur registration bhi done hai.

R- Theek hai, forms par sign le aao, aur mein operation ki tayyaari shuru karti hoon.

NB- Jee doctor.

The Nurse Gives the news to Armaan and dadi and asks them to sign on the papers saying that the patient's life may be lost, and no responsibility will rest on the shoulders of the doctor.
Armaan reluctantly signs it and hands it over. Dadi is crying unconsolabely.
And the operation begins.

1 hour later…Armaan is too nervous, so he decides to go to the mandir. Armaan leaves and at the same time the operation theatre light goes off.

Ridz exits the OT and walks over to dadi.

R- Rahul?

D- Jee main uski daadi hoon. Doctor, kya hus, mera bacha theek to hai?

R- Fikr karne ki koi baat nahi, kyunki Rahul bilkul theek hai. Lekin it is a miracle. Woh bacha zindagi aur mauth se har pal ladhraha tha. Upar wale nehi rehem kiya.
Humne ushe kuch hi din mein General Ward mein shift kardeinge. Who abhi rest le raha hai. Aap kuch der mein usse mil sakte hain.

D- Bhagwaan ka laakh laakh shukr hai.

Armaan comes rushing to see what happens just then ridz turns the other way.

A- dadi?

D- Rahul theek hai, ushe kuch nahi hua…who doctor hai nah woh keh rahi thi ke chamatkaar hogaya!

A- Such mein, Rahul theek hai, yahin bas hai mere liye.

After hearing armaan speak, ridz thinks that she has heard this voice before..she turns around to see armaan

R- Tum??

A- TUM?? Tum idhar kya kar rahi ho.

D- Oh beta, ishine to rahul ki jaan bachayee….waise tum dono ek doosre ko jaante ho?

A- Wait tumne mere bhai ki bachayee. Tum to jaa rahi thee naa??

R- Haan, jaa to rahi thee, lekin who emergency sunkar gaadi ghuma kar chalee aye. Vaise, aapka bhai bilkul theek hai, aapko fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi. Aap please nurse Bonita ke saath jayee aur kuch formalities hain, woh samjhadegi!

While ridz is talking though, armaan keeps staring at her.

R- Mr. Mallik?? Aap kahaan dekh rahein hain?

A- Who..kahin nahi. Haan main Nurse Jorita ke saath jaata hoon.

R- Bonita….nurse bonita!

A- haan wohi.

After a while ridz is getting ready to go to back home when armaan calls her name.

A- Dr.Riddhima, who main aapse rahul bachaane ke liye shukriya kehna chahta hoon.

R- Dekhiye Mr.Mallik…
A-.Armaan

R- Armaan, tumhe thanks kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi….mai ek doctor hoon aur patient ki jaan bachaana mere farz hai. Aur gara mai jaanti bhi ke who aapka bhai hai, to bhi mujhe farak nahi padta…woh mareez hai aur mai doctor.

A- Dekhiye, jo kuch bhi humaare beech hua, mai uske liye sorry. Kya hum ushe bhula kar nayee shuruvaat kar sakte hain?

R- You mean jahaan mai aap ke white shirt par smoothie na giraaoon?

A- Haan who achcha hoga, aur jahaan mai aapki gaadi par na maaron??

R- Toh aap maante toh hain ke aapki ghalati hai ?

A- Maine yeh toh nahi kaha?

R- aap maafi maangrahe hain ya sara blame mujh par daal rahe hain?

A- Gaadi ka accident meri ghalti nahin.....damnit hum phir shuru hogayee.

He then moves his hand forward

A-friends?

Ridz takes his hand and says friends. Just then a fat nurse is walking with a bucketful of water when she slips and it all falls on armaan and riddhimma….

R- Lagta hai yeh shuruvaat kabhi normal nahi ho sakti!!

They both laugh and leave.

Precap- Armaan's friends along with ridz's friends go to the same camp for a vacation.
Here Shubhankar and Sapna are introduced.Anjali(armaan's ex) is also there, but they do not know of each others' presence. Anjali and Riddima get to be very good friends…..but in the evening they show that riddhima and anjali have a massive fight ending in riddhima telling her shell kill her( as an expression of course)


Sorry guys kuch zyaada hi lamba hogaya…but I may not be posting till Thursday but I will try….hope you liked it,
Yeah there were a lot of medical terms so sorry about it…..but now armaan and ridz are friendzz which was the whole point…hope this part didn't bore you…..comments gud and bad are all more than welcome…it encourages me to write more and better!!!
And Thnx for the previous comments guys
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey. great. u r really good. thnx 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wat?did u say "kuch zayada hi lamba hogaya"no darlin not @ all infact it was short n i was so lost in yo FF tht i was expectin more of it aur ek sawaal puchna tha ARMAAN DOCTOR NAHIN HAI?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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too long? oh gosh, the longer the better sandhya! haha well i really loved it! at least they are friends now, ab kuch pyar ke batein karen? cant wait for more, continue soon!

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