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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: aaakkii
Yeah!!!...Christine is really innocent ...& she has suffered the most ....suri di ...dil khush kar diyaa aapke comments ne..hehe....no ..no Ryan is like this only ....& his charecter has shaped up this way due to his PAST ...sad ..no.....but lets see what happens when Jaanvi enters...
Let u remember..Jaanvi......Ryan's nightmare...so lets see how's she gonna sambhaalo him 😉😆

aaki yaar i know jaanvi ryan ka nightmare hai.... lekin nightmare kab ek sapna ban jayegi..aur woh sapna kab zindagi kii khoobsurat haqueeqat ban jayegi uska tho patah ryan aur jaanvi ko bhi nahii hoga...😉😉😉 aur kyunke jaanvi is ryan's nightmare... ryan ko tang karne mein bada mazaa aayega..😆 you please continue soon dear..me waiting for the next part eagerly.... 😊😛😃

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sidivyapall

@sidivyapall

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: aaakkii

Oh !!!...so ur Hindi was like this too ....then I shud have given u the role of Jaanvi😉...that wud have been a dream come true hai naa....Raj ke opp...neways ...ab to teri Hindi sudhar gayi hai ....so let Jaanvi be jaanvi....

& yup !!!...very bad haan ...Ryan pe buri nazar 😆...next time se jyaadaa shirtless waale scenes nahi lihkungi ...kahin Ryan apni izzat bachaake meri story se Bhaag gayaa toh😆

& those Bluish -Green eyes ...they suit only fair & very fair people.....I've mentioned in my stry that .....he has got his mom's complexion ...means he's very much phoren guy (very very fair😉)....so ye eyes to exclusively Ryan ke liye hain.....RAJEEV'S BEST IN HIS COAL-BLACK EYES (he's wheatish)😛

chal be...jyaadaa hi lambaa ho gayaa....kahin kisi ko ye na lage ki promo post kia hai😆

arre baap re... itna lamba reply!!!! 😆😆 omg omg omg... im gonna faint at the mere thought of being cast opp. Rajeev!!!!! but it would be a loss of casting me bcoz, i'll just tie a rakhi and go away... so keep the role of Jaanvi for Aamna... they r perfect together!

oye! meri niyat bilkul saaf hai!!! shak hai toh sirf aur sirf tere niyakton pe huh!!! 😆😆 YJHZ mein bhi tujhko Sameer se pyaar hua hai... toh abb Ryan kyun nahi...!!!??? 😆😆

rajeev gora toh hai... lekin haan yaar Bluish-green eyes don't suit him! black eyes only for him!

aur haan... tu part kab posting!!!??? jaldi karing huh!!!

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sidivyapall

@sidivyapall

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

yaar aakkii!!! where r u yaar... plz continue soon...!!!! don't make me use another oneliner... im all out of ideas! 😆 😆

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160991

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Sai-licious
yaar aakkii!!! where r u yaar... plz continue soon...!!!! don't make me use another oneliner... im all out of ideas! 😆 😆

no need buddy ....gonna update now😛...& sorry...(which I know is absolutely of no use .....with a lazy updater like me...but then what's wrong in trying ur luck😉)....

neways luv u

Akanksha😃

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

aaki me waiting..palkein bichakae for the next part... 😊

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160991

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

guys ....what I'm really thinkng is that ...inspite of giving bigger updates .....I wud write shorter & more crisp ones ....that way updates will be frequent....7 my readers will be happy with me .....I think its okkay with u people if I promise regular updates in return....hehe....

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Sid was standing in front of his casino……how bigger it seemed one day …..& how insignificant it seems now ….in his existence ……from now on …there wont be any MAURYA ROYALE in Amsterdam…

He was selling this casino to " Heyer Builders" , who were most probably thinking of redesigning the casino into a resident hotel…..

Maurya Royale was…oh sorry.. ….uptill now ….is one of the lovliest buildings in Amsterdam…..the building looked like a ship with glasses done in the shades of pink &green ….one of the most awesome & prolific imagination of his Architect …..Catherine….

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Ryan was sitting in his room ...reading newspaper .....& u know what the front page read......

"Maurya royale crashed"

he started with reading the article .....that his cell rung....

"Good D'sousa .......I knew only u can do this!!!!!"said a deep male voice...

"We better talk work....& no need to flatter me....I'm already aware of.....how good I am....well!!!!.....I hope by now ....2 billion dollars r in my account...."

"Yeah!!! that I've made sure ....but .....I'm really curious..."

"Let some things be a part of ur curiousity sir ...If u end up knowing it all ....u wont need me anymore ..."

"That's the thing I like bout u D'sousa!!!!!.....well meet Mr Herb Cohen...he 'll tell u bout ur next assignment!!!!!"

"send me the details ....U know I dont like to see anybody in the same business ...."

There was a silence for almost 5-6 seconds ....

"okkay!!!!"

& the call got disconnected....

This was one of the most active members of the underworld ....who with time ....got quite fond of Ryan ....It was only 6 months that Ryan had joined hands with their gang ....

Wrecking Maurya royale was not an easy job , with all those advanced temperature checks, Happiness meter...& brain studying equipments......but seemed quite interesting to Ryan ....that's why he took up the work of digging its grave.....

from all the informations he got bout the casino ....the thing that really excited him was .....the super computer in which ...the passwords of all the gambling machines were uploaded.......but the hall in which it was kept ...was a high alert on security ....there was no way possible for anybody to enter that hall ....except Sid maurya ......

NOBODY KNEW ....WHERE THE HALL ACTUALLY WAS ....& HOW TO REACH THERE ......so the first thing Ryan did ...was to spy on Sid Maurya ......in a week or so ...Ryan was aware of this Man's daily routine ......only one thing seemd mystry .....the guy was found nowhere on saturday night......

Now all Ryan had to do ...was to solve this MYSRTY ....

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so here goes the next part ....its short ...but next part's gonna come soon ...may be on Monday .....take care ...bye ....& dont forget to comment...alright ....n yeah ...Vandu ....dun be upset ....(I read in some of ur comment that ur quite hurt by the fact that ...none of the RA ffs r updated now-a days ...from now on I promise to be regular 😊 )

Now hurry people.....do comment

Luv,
Akanksha 😛

Edited by aaakkii - 17 years ago

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saba

@aishwaria

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Posted: 17 years ago

#37

eik dam ghatiya, baqwaas, bekaar keh opposites 😆 wo actually kya hai na keh i can't recall their opposites but i m damn sure that u must be knowin them 😆 eik minute yaad aaye awesome, superb, fantastic mind blowing etc etc. Really liked it, Ryan ka kya dimaag hai yaar what brains he has man mujhe de de mere maths mein ache marks aa jayein ge 😆. It was small but cute. Ryan ka kya attitude hai he has got style 😎. I loved his attitude and answers to the gang member, they were so cool 😎 😎 😎. Even i m curious keh aakhir aar yeh Sid Saturday nights ko kahan gayab ho jaata hai is it somethign related to Jhaanvi. hmmmmmmmm plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon waiting for the next part eagerly. 😊

saba.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#38

aakki very good...interesting..keep up the good work going... the story is very different..and i'am liking it very much... 👏 do continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 17 years ago

#39

nice part..........yehhh me was very gussa that no one is updating RA fics........so i thought i'll not come here again......but ananya updated hers the same day and u n saba updated today.......so...well....i ahve come back......the rest of the ppl have pmed me that they'll continue soon....... 😳