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sultana_sange

@sultana_sange

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

Hey aaki,first how r u? sullu here,i am v sorry 4r not being in touch as was v busy and some problems came along.i used to miss ur ffics v much but now inshallah i ll b regular.second have caught all missed parts of YJHZ N REALLY LOVED TOO MUCH.And now urs this new ff CConnections, its mindblowing,fantastic,grest story line,i really loved it.ur simply great writer.pl pl continue soon cant wait more.waiting anxiously. l

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sultana_sange

@sultana_sange

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

aur haan pl band karne ki baat mat karna, aur sochna bhi mat hum sab besabri se intezaar kar rahein hai.

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sultana_sange

@sultana_sange

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

dear aaki kahan ho,pl continue.cant wait more.
Happy new year and best wishes for bright future.dono ffs(CC & YJHZ)Jaldi se continue karo.i am waiting v eagerly.

Edited by sultana_sange - 17 years ago

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

aakii kaha ghu ho gayi cont karonaa jaldi se

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

oh finally the search is over ...actually i was seaching where my story went missing ...finally got it 😊

luv,
Akanksha 😛

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

akki continue soon dear... 😭 😭 😭

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aditi

@AngelsHeaven

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

hey where r u???
missing ur fick
continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

#58

hello pple, now finally I have made up my mind to continue wid this story.....actually after the exams were over.....I was kinda anxious for my results n all .....n whenever i thought ...I should start the story now ....I felt scared of the standards I had set by writing the first 2 parts of the story....Its been a long time ...that I 'm away frm nething creative n story writing ...I was like ...oh wat if it doesnt turn out that well...n all ....darr gayi thi yaar....

but then ....DARR KE AAGE HI TOH JEET HAI ....hehe...guys continue to kar doongi....but yeah I think after 2,3 parts ...confidence aa jaayegaa....i'm feeling like I have started afresh ....so pls maaf kar diyo..if I do mishtakes 😳 n I hope I match up to the standards I have set

N yeah !!!! AAMIR dekh ke hi toh houslaa buland hua hai...warna main sochti hi reh jaati ...continue nai karti....I saw it a day before yesteday ....n after dat...for three days ...i'm continuously thinking bout it....n yep thinking bout my story too.. 😆 ..so finally I came up with a solid storyline ...which I was unable to make wen I started (the story started as a rough patch in mind, nothing like a clear storyline)....but now ....it has become even more wonderful than it wud have been If I had continued it then only....dekho sab acchhe ke liye hi hota hai... 😃

So now...bohot bak bak kar chuki....now I'm goin to work on this part n most probably post it today or upto tomorrow morning 😃

So cheers AAAKKII is finally back.....I hope u guys still remember me....n ofcourse miss me 😛

With luv,
Akanksha 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

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So, the Saturday night question!!! Interesting one….thought Ryan , but he had to wait for its answer till next Saturday…..still a lot of time ….but yep he cud do something extremely useful in this one week

On Monday morning…..sid saw someboday waiting with a big bag in his hand right in front of his cabin….when he noticed the man closely….he found ..a meek old person …with a huge mustache …. brown shoes n a similar color hat Sid came close to him …..the man seemed to suffer frm some kind of illness n his clothes seemed tattered too….on the top of it ….his air conditioned office had made him shiver badly

S: what do u need old man?

Old man smiled at him with confidence….so rare at his age …n holding his stick , he stood up to shake hands wid Mr. maurya

O: hello Mr Maurya!!!….myself Jack Allen…it was really difficult for me to take an appointment …u see old age troubles & all…so I thought it wud be convenient to u to meet me now

S: oh that's perfectly fine….tell me Mr. jack , how cud I help u?

J: Can we talk in ur cabin…its very urgent

S: sure!!!!

Both went inside the cabin….the old man opened his bag n took out something …it seemed like a plasma TV ….but a bit smaller ….its ends were strong and metallic, from the backside it seemed like a music system and on the upper side there was a strong handle that too metallic….of the color of bronze…the piece looked beautiful n exquisite …like an art work ….Sidharth loved each n everything bout it
S: So u want to sell this gadget to me …I think I really like this one….wat is it …T.v. or something

J: that's the thing bout it ….nobody really gets wat it is …actually it is a showpiece …(added the old man with a grin)

S: oh really!!!..(smiled Sid)…really it seems very pleasant

J: Its one of my priced possessions …or u can say my Great grand dad's …its was designed by him only….so along with many basic things like house & stuff …this thing was passed on to us from generation to generation…but I am not married ….due to some reasons irrelevant to explain to u though

S: oh its very much fine …after all its ur personal life …u want to share it wid anybody or not depends solely on u

J: oh thanks son ….for being so understanding….I suffer frm Hepatitis

S: oh I'm sorry but…

J: please don't be ….coz of my disease …n I being the only person left in my house ….I donated all I had to a charity n this thing ….I want to sell this to u ..(said the old man without mincing his words)

S: okay!!….but why me ?

J: good question!!!…..actually it's the last office I'm visiting….this last week I was in quest of someone who will take good care of it….as its my ancesstorial property worth million dollars….nobody wanted to pay the actual price to me and many of them kicked me out of their respective offices…in many places I wasn't even able to make it …due to the appointment problem with busy people like u ….somehow I managed to reach over here …& met u ….if u want to buy it its okay …if u don't want to buy its okay too….

S: I dint mean dat …was actually curious to noe ..why u thought of me to buy this thing …I understand ur problems…in this old age u have to do all this left right ….don't worry Mr. Jack …I will buy this one.

J: but I want its actual price ….1million dollars

S: that's not the problem…fine I give u this cheque n buy this thing of urs

J: Thanks a lot boy

S: oh !! anytime.

The old man came out of the office with a mischievous smile ….he slowly walked with the help of his stick took a cab ….n went to his home ….oh ye kya…..this house ….ye to Ryan ka hai …ye Buddhha yahaan kyun aayaa hai…

He had the keys …opened the door …got inside …threw this white wig that was constantly irritating him….removed that big veerappan style mustache , & went inside the washroom to rinse his face thoroughly with water ….the man was none other than Ryan D'sousa ….he smiled at himself

Ryan: (to himself) ur too gud at it ryan ….jus too good

After dat ….he made a cup of coffee for himself & switched on his laptop…opened a folder ….n wat we see…….Sidharth Maurya's cabin….oh yes Jack Allens great grand dad had put a camera in this priced possession of jack Allen hehe…this was Ryan's great idea to check mr Maurya every now & then …yes that was Ryan's special spying machine …yup there were risks involved …but that's the fun bout it all …& Ryan D'sousa's mind plans

R:wats up ? is this thing gonna be here only ….well fine I'll have my camera watching u Mr. Maurya

He fed Sidharth Maurya's name n identification in the camera through his laptop & as soon as he clicked the requisite option,
A insect like metallic thing came out of the showpiece …..n started flying on its own ….

On the laptop …..Ryan cud see the vidio …the whole office of Sid Maurya ….n on the top of the right side of his laptop was written

"Searching Sidharth maurya"

As soon as the fly saw Sid …it rested on the wall…while on the computer …again on the top of the right side ….it came written that …
SEARCH IS OVER

Ryan focused his camera on Sid …n he cud exactly hear everything goin around……uptill now his plan had worked …n he was doin anything n everything to make it a success

Edited by aaakkii - 17 years ago