CrOss COnneCtiOn!!!.Raj-Aamna happy new year!! ... - Page 3

continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzz........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

Originally posted by: togepe30

SHAALAA TOOM ……SEETI TO MAARTAA JAATAA ……IDIOT

hahahhahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahhahhahahhahahahah ahhahahahahahaaahhaahhaahhaha!!!!!!!!!

Omggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!! 😆 😆

hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehheh......really its so funny!!!!!!!!.....Ryan knows Hindi......hope he agrees to teach her😉

Originally posted by: dhvanisoni

^^^yeah ...haha 😆 tht made me laught lik anything...behara doodhwala broke his leg...lolzzzzzzzz....good hindi...Loved this part....and Ryan's past and his disease is makin me sad....very sad...the story is soooooooo touching...really..i m lovin it....

Yeah!!!!!.....his desiease is making me sad too ....thnks u found it touching ....& yeah ...do KEEP LOVING IT

Originally posted by: aishwaria

The dooddh waala scene was hilarious 🤣, seeti to maarta jaata 😊 this Jhaanvi is too much 😆 😆, amazing start and amazing FF, the Ryan's parents thingy is too intriguing, abt his dad and all i think that he was a thief or something like that as well or might be an undercover officer 😉 😉. Plz continue soon aaakii warna mera to curiosity se bura haal ho jaaye ga.

Thanku jee.....yeah u got it very well ....that's the main SUSPENSE of the story ....Ryan's father...Raj...& boil with curiosity ....me too going to be inactive coz of my exam on coming monday😭😆😆

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

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Thanks Jyothi ....kabhi bhool se kuchh likh bhi diya kar yaar😛

Originally posted by: Sai-licious

🤣 🤣 🤣 what a way to end off the part...: "SHAALAA TOOM ……SEETI TO MAARTAA JAATAA ……IDIOT " 😆 😆 i remember when my hindi was like this 2 years ago... 😆 and yaar, even though i was very sad when Ryan was in his bathroom thinking of his dad and all... when u mentioned that he was shirtless... well ek pal ke liye toh main uska dard-vard sab bhul gai!!!! and haila, wat eyes yaar!!!! i can't stop thinking about those eyes of Ryan's... not the nakli waali, but obviously uska Black coal-like eyes toh one piece hai aur uske baare mein toh main hamesha sochti hoon and anywayz, the bluish-green eyes... omg i can only imagine someone with those eyes... 😳 😳 😳 par i haven't been able to decide yet if they would suit my shweetu Rajeev... 😛 😳 😕 ok good part!!!! continue soon!!!!!

Oh !!!...so ur Hindi was like this too ....then I shud have given u the role of Jaanvi😉...that wud have been a dream come true hai naa....Raj ke opp...neways ...ab to teri Hindi sudhar gayi hai ....so let Jaanvi be jaanvi....

& yup !!!...very bad haan ...Ryan pe buri nazar 😆...next time se jyaadaa shirtless waale scenes nahi lihkungi ...kahin Ryan apni izzat bachaake meri story se Bhaag gayaa toh😆

& those Bluish -Green eyes ...they suit only fair & very fair people.....I've mentioned in my stry that .....he has got his mom's complexion ...means he's very much phoren guy (very very fair😉)....so ye eyes to exclusively Ryan ke liye hain.....RAJEEV'S BEST IN HIS COAL-BLACK EYES (he's wheatish)😛

chal be...jyaadaa hi lambaa ho gayaa....kahin kisi ko ye na lage ki promo post kia hai😆

Originally posted by: fravashi

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww akkii.the part was simply awesome 👏 . hmmmmm.... but rayan's mom is not a culprit and he should understand that 😭 .if he won't forget about all these things his health is in danger . i mean his headache and all 😭 .waise i loved the way jannvi speaks english 😆 . u know u r right.seeti aur ghanti mein farak hi nahi samajti 😉 . ha haaaa..... that was hilarious 😆 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

Finally dil Garden-garden ho gayaa aapke comments dekh ke ...thanks...& sorry u'll have to wait ...I've my exams on Monday...so😭

Originally posted by: sun_423

aaki yaar the scene between jaanvi & the dhoodwaala was hillarious.. main tho ghir-ghir kar has rahii hoon.. that was really so damn funny..hahaha..aur uske upar se jaanvi kii hindi.. uska tho jawaab nahii... 🤣i'am really feeling bad for cristine.. woh bechari kismat kii maari hai... ek taraf her husband committed suicide aur doosri taraf her son hates her... aww..poor thing... 😭 ab coming to our hero..oh..man he has so much of attitude..but according to me he shows this type of attitude just to hide his pain of his dark past... i feel bad for him too..but i'am sure whenever jaanvi enters his life his life will change for the better.... aur jaanvi ryan ko sambhal legi.... 😉 please do post the next part soon.. the start of the fic was too interesting..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

Yeah!!!...Christine is really innocent ...& she has suffered the most ....suri di ...dil khush kar diyaa aapke comments ne..hehe....no ..no Ryan is like this only ....& his charecter has shaped up this way due to his PAST ...sad ..no.....but lets see what happens when Jaanvi enters...

Let u remember...

Jaanvi......Ryan's nightmare...so lets see how's she gonna sambhaalo him 😉😆

Originally posted by: aaakkii

Thanks Jyothi ....kabhi bhool se kuchh likh bhi diya kar yaar😛

do not woory agli part se zaror likhoongi ab jaldise apni dono kahani post kardo

fab part...
can u use the screen names or the real names or the actors... these r really confusing me... ur wish... it was just a suggestion... dont get me wrong...
continue soon