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Posted: 17 years ago
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hai bagawan yeh ek ganta jaldi se khatam kar doo! plzzzzzz 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Everyone,
Well finally Im updating a new episode of Pehla Nasha.
This week I also updated the characters on the front page if anyone noticed that the role of Nick has been given to Vivan Bhatena because I felt that he would suit the role better and Atul has also been added to the front page and I have added a new pic of Ridz.Well,without further delay,here's Episode 5!&& Since I havent updatedFriday or Saturday Ill try to update Epi. 6 today later on if I get lots of comments and Ill update Epi. 7 tommorrow!

Episode 5:

Recap:Armaan saves Ridz,AR plan a
study date,Armaan discovers their parents are old friends,AR start thinking of each other


Later that Morning...

Armaan picks up Nick and soon is in the school parking lot.Nick notices that Armaan is unuasually quiet this morningas he was lost in the thought of Riddhima.
N:Armaan.
Armaan keeps on smiling and thinking of Ridz.
N:Armaan!Yaar isko kya ho gaya?Tumme phirse diarhea toh nahin ho gaya?!Cuz we can go to the bathroom,no prob.Pichle Baar tum aise chup chap behte the toh...you know what happened.
A:Arre,yaar!Nick,tum bhi na sometimes your like another Atul!Mujhe diarhea nahin hai!
N:Haan,Haan.Mujhe sab pata hai..pichli baar you know what happened!Jhoote!
A:Nick!Just SHUT UP!
N:Sorry!I guess tumme diarhea nahin hai.
Armaan groans as he parks his car in the parking lot of SFHS[San Fransisco High School]
He just then sees Ridz getting out of her car and taking off her Chanel sunglasses.He smiles at how beautiful she looks when her hair is in her face and how truly beautiful her smile is.Just then Atul enters the HS[High School]and parks hi "Voice Against Pollution" Bike and notices Armaan standing there staring.
At:Armaan!Hey Armaan!
Armaan keeps on lokking at Ridz.
At:Armaan!Kahan ko gaye?
Armaan finally snaps out of his thoughts and says,
A:Oh hi Atul!
At:Hey,dekho!Ridz aur Sapna aa gayi!
AA walk over to RS.
At:Hey Sapna!Hi Ridz!
A:Hey guys!
RS:Hi Armaan!Hi Atul!
Atul and Sapna start talking and walk into the HS,while Ridz and Armaan are standing in the parking lot.
A:Hi.
R:Um..Hi,Ridz says as she puts her cell in her Gucci purse.
Armaan smiles at her.
R:Armaan.
A:Uh..Haan!
R:Woh you know our study date right?
A:Yeah.
R:Well,where are we going to go?
A:How about Taco Bell?[Restaurant]
R:Armaan,that a fast food restaurant!No way we'll be able to focus there.
A:Oh,Then..
R:How about Starbucks Coffee?The one by Williamson Avenue?In the book store?
A:Yeah thats fine.
Armaan wished it were a formal date,Starbucks Coffee and a book store were not romantic at all.
With that,the bell rings and AR walk to their homeroom.

That Evening...

Armaan reaches the book store 1 hour early.He begins to look at the Shakespeare setion of books.He doesnt understand a thing.
A:Log yeh sab padte kaise hain? 😆
Just then Ridz enters the Coffe shop part of the store and sees Armaan by a shelf of books.She is so surprised that she starts laughing. 😆
R:Armaan.Should we start now if your done trying to understand Shakespeare? 😆
Armaan puts the book down quicky.
A:Uhh..yeah!Tum chalo!Mein aata hoon na!
They both walk to a table.
Ridz takes out the poster.She explains how she wants to do it.Armaan looks at her lovingly and smiles at how pretty she looks.
They both start working on their project and soon they are finished.
R:Thanks Armaan.
A:For what?
R:For actually making an effort to complete the project.I didnt expect this from you.
A:Yeh sab toh maine tumhare liye kiya hai.
R:Huh?
A:Mera matlab,humare liye!Toh humme bura grade na mile!Is liye!
R:Oh.Thanks anyways!
Ridz walks over to him and gives him a hug.Armaan's heart starts beating fast,he has had many hugs from girls before even kisses.But why was he feeling so good to have a hug from Riddhima?He slowly puts his arms around hers.
They finally break free.
R:Okay.Toh mein chalti hoon!
A:Haan.
R;Mein Chaloon?
A;Haan.
R;Okay toh mera haath chodo.
A;Oh.
He quickly lets go of her hand.
Ridz gets into her car and gets home.She opens the door.
R:Hi dad!Hi mom!
S:Riddhima!Tumhare liye surprise hai!
R:Kya Papa?
S:Dekho Kaun Aaaya hai!
We see a guy in a white jacket and he slowly turns and we see his face.It is Iqbal Khan aka Abhimanyu from CHA.
R:Raj!


Kaun hai yeh Raj?Jaane ke liye dekhte rahiye Pehla Nasha!

Okay you guys Ive updated with so much difficulty this time!I cannot even tell you!Please Please Comment!


Edited by jasnoor_sahota - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
really nice plz post the next part cant wait
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: maha_elahi202

really nice plz post the next part cant wait

Thanks!

Will continue!

Love,

Jasnoor❤️

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ppl please comment!
only one reply? 😕
Come on,atleast 10!
I worked soo soo hard! 😭
If I dont get more replies then im not continueing!

Love,
Jasnoor ❤️
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Posted: 17 years ago
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who is raj?
is he ridz bf?(better not be! 😡 )
is he his closet frend?
is he her finice?(better not be! 😡 )
or is he her bother?(yes! dats better! 😉 )
oh sooo many guestions and i have no idea wat can be?
oh i hope AR together! 😳
plz contd....... i really wanna know who dis raj is?
plzzzzzzzzz 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz don't tell me it is her bf or her fiance that her parents got for her!!!!!!!! neway lovely!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

who is raj?
is he ridz bf?(better not be! 😡 )
is he his closet frend?
is he her finice?(better not be! 😡 )
or is he her bother?(yes! dats better! 😉 )
oh sooo many guestions and i have no idea wat can be?
oh i hope AR together! 😳
plz contd....... i really wanna know who dis raj is?
plzzzzzzzzz 😃

I cannot tell you just now...

What I can tell you is to think of the mvie Mujhse Shaadi Karogi!😛

&& Yes I will Continue!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bookadict303

plz don't tell me it is her bf or her fiance that her parents got for her!!!!!!!! neway lovely!!

😆

I am laughing reading all your responses!😆

Youll find out who this Raj is in the next part...😳

Stay Tuned!😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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soo cweet armaan is in love with our lovly ridz thats too gud yaar
diaria part hehe that was really very funny 😆
study date mein armaan is concentrating on ridz instead of project hehe thats kool
waise whose raj yaar...tum plz usko ridz ka bhai yaa friend banado
in short i simply loved ur part, u rock
now next update should be soon plz continue soon

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