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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

greatff plz contd..... i realy wanna know wat happens nxt.... 😳 👏 👏

thanks alott sweety!I really appreciate that you read each part and comment. Because of the over 900 views I know that lots people read my FF but Id just like comments,thats all!It doesnt take a minute to even leave a lil smiley face,Id love that too.I understand that sometimes people don't have time but I mean please comment if you read because I work really hard writing my FF and when people dont comment it just feels like im doing this for nothing.But you,always comment and read and I really appreciate that,i really do😃.So please people, read and comment😕. Id really appreciate if you guys did that.

Love,

Jasnoor😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I really want to no wat happens next!!!!!! rite soooooooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz rite the nxt nxt soon..... i am dying 😭 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

plz rite the nxt nxt soon..... i am dying 😭 😳

hey don't worry😕

i wont make you guys wait any longer😊

Episode 4 will be up today..

Sorry to make you guys wait the whole week😔

Ive been really busy with homework and all🤔

But Ill try to make up for it by writing Episode 4 and 5 by the end of Sunday!How's that?Thank you so much guys!Love you all!

Love,

Jasnoor

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Im really sorry..😕

Ill continue verry verry soon😊

Love,

Jasnoor

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello Everyone!
Im really sorry for the delay this week in posting the next episode 😕.Its that I have been very busy with my tests and homework..Well without further delay,here's Episode 4!

Episode 4-Kuch Kuch Hota Hai
Recap- AR are assigned their first project together,AR fight and are assigned detention in the Cafe,A Guy try to rape Ridz and Armaan saves her,Armaan offers Ridz a ride and wonders what is happeneing to him.

Now:

Armaan walks Riddhima to his car.They are both awkward after what has happened.
On the way to A's car Ridz says:Thanks.
A:Kis Liye?
R:Mujhe us psycho se bachaane ke liye.Aggar tum na hote toh woh pata nahin kya karta!
A:Its Okay.Waise tumhari mercedes kahan hai,wahi jise mere ferrari takraee thi?
R:Actually Sapna and me are supposed to ride together but today I had detentin and I told Sapna to take it.
A:Oh.
Armaan turn around and notices Ridz shivering and takes off his jacket and says,
A:Yeh Lao.
R:Its Okay.Mujhe Nahin chahiye main manage kar loongi.
A:maine kaha na lao.Ok fine.
He walks to Ridz and puts the jacket around her.
A:Kahin tumme pnuemonia ho gaya toh tumhara baap mujhe maar dalega!
R:Very Funny!& Thanks.
A:Maine kaha na chipkali ki its okay..
R:Chipkali?!
A:I mean sorry,Riddhima.
R:Its ok Macchar...
A:Kya?
R:I mean Armaan,right Armaan.
A:Its OK,Aur waise bhi hum dono ko aadat ho gayi hai ek doosre ko naam bulaane ki.
Just then,AR get to the car,Armaan opens the door for Ridz and Ridz sits inside.Armaan walks to his side and starts the car.
Then Armaan and Riddhima are silent for a while when Armaan says:Waise ab hum project kaise karenge?Its due on Monday you know and tommorrrow's Friday aur phir weekend aur aaj humne koi kaam nahi kiya.
R:Toh phir hum kal finish kar lenge.
A:Right.Jaise poora project ek period mein finish ho jaayega!I wish aaj hum laade na hote,phir na humme detention milti aur kuch kam bhi ho jaata.
R:Ur right.I think we should do it on the weekend,but where?Oh turn right on A street.Anyways,tumhare paas koi idea hai?
A:I dont know,your place or mine?Or somwhere else?How about a coffe shop or something?
R:Sound good.When?Not tommorrow.Its Friday.I hate spending Fridays at coffe shops doing homework.
A:Acha toh Saturday?Mein tumme pick kar loonga!
R:What?Tum toh aise kar rahe ho ki jaise tum study date nahin koi formal date plan kar rahe ho!
A:Arre nahin nahin,I mean aggar Sapna ko car chahiye ho toh.
R:Armaan,her parenta have a car!Ho do you think they get to the grocery store?
A:Sorry,Toh tum khud Aa jaana.
R:Teek hai,Mera ghar aa gaya.Tum andar aake Mom Dad se kyun nahin mil lete?Theyll be happy to meet you!
A:Nahin mujhe chalna chahiye.
R:Come on Armaan.
A:Teek Hai.
Armaan gets out of the car and Ridz gives him his jacket.
A:Thanks.
R:Welcome.
Ridddhima opens the door and calls,:Mom!Dad!Im home!
Shashank and Padma from DMG walk down the stairs.
S:Riddhima,Finally your home.Kahan thi?
P:Haan Beta,tum kahan reah gayi thi?
R:At the High School.Mom,Dad this is Armaan,Armaan Malik.Armaan this is my mom and Dad!
A:Hello Mr. and Mrs. Kapoor.
PS:Hello Armaan.
S:Tumhara naam Armaan Malik hai?Kahin tum Ranbir Malik ke bete toh nahin?
A:Jee Haan,Aap ko kaise pata!
S:Arre beta,he's a very old friend of mine!I havent seen him in years!Say hello to him for me!
A:Jee Uncle.
S:Aur haan,usse ke dena ki yeah mera # hai aur woh is par phone kar de.
A:Jee main Dad se bol doonga ga.
P:Kitna acha ladka haina?
S:Haan,bilkul Ranbir par gaya hai.
A:Okay Uncle Auntie I should be going now.
P:Arre kaana toh kaake jaao!
A:Nahin Mom Dad Pare shaan honge main chalta hoon.
PS:Teek hai.Bye Armaan beta.
A:Bye.Bye Riddhima.
R:Bye Armaan.

The Next Morning...

Armaan recalls the moments from yesterday.He dreams of Riddhima and how pretty she was.The he comes to his senses and tells himself to wake up.
A:Arre yeh main kya kar raha hoon?Why dont I just admit to myself ki main Rddhima ko pasand karta hoon?

Riddhima is in her room thinking of what Armaan did for her yesterday.The way he was so friendly with her parents.He was so sweet...and he was so handsome..
R thinking:OMG!Mujhe kya ho gaya?Subha Subha Macchar ke khayal?NO WAY!

PRECAP : Shashank calls Armaan's dad and invites him for dinner.Armaan and Riddhima's Study Date.

Guys,I need loads of comments to continue on the next part!Please Comment and leave loads of smileys!

Love,

Jasnoor❤️

Edited by jasnoor_sahota - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
gr8 part jasnoor👏👏. plz plz continue soon can't wait till there study date😳

Love Iram😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
hey daer...i loved it...study date that would be kool...they r now thinking about each other also awesome yaar...n thanks 4 pm...4m now on i would read ur ff regurlarly its awesome
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!! loving it!!!! awsome part!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
no more replies? 😕
Was my part that bad? 🤢 😭

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