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Posted: 17 years ago
omg finally u have updated where have u been these many days 😕
any ways comming to ur ff its really awesome 👏 and that truck driver said arman and ridz as laila majnu no they r not laila majnu becoz there love should not fail but i loved that dialogue 😉
omg arman is gonna confess his love in 3 months thats great
and atuls dream is so funny even he gets married also he will ride bicycle that too with anjali 😆 😆 😆 and yaar really intezaar ka phal meetha kardhiya 😉
if u dont mine try to pm me after ur next part pls
and now pls dont delay
plsssssssss continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: urmila_17

omg finally u have updated where have u been these many days 😕
any ways comming to ur ff its really awesome 👏 and that truck driver said arman and ridz as laila majnu no they r not laila majnu becoz there love should not fail but i loved that dialogue 😉
omg arman is gonna confess his love in 3 months thats great
and atuls dream is so funny even he gets married also he will ride bicycle that too with anjali 😆 😆 😆 and yaar really intezaar ka phal meetha kardhiya 😉
if u dont mine try to pm me after ur next part pls
and now pls dont delay
plsssssssss continue soon

Well, actually sweety ive been offline and very busy w/ SO much. Plz bear w/ me and now im writing two FF's so yeah.. But i just LOVE writing and getting comments!hehe thanks i tried to be funny as i am pathetic! Thank so much for the long comment!

TC,

Jasnoor

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Posted: 17 years ago
der se hi sahi update toh kiya
i hate raj yaar kyun ar ke beech mein aa raha hai
and pls agli baar jaldi update karna
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ mahi4u:Thanks sweetie!
@ vidu93: yaar im so busy so sorry aur agle part ke liye im still working mujhe samja hi nahin aa raha ki mein kaise kya likhoon!

Love,
Jasnoor
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Everyone,
Im sorry to have disappointed you as i know yuo guys have been waiting for Episode 15 for the past 2 weeks! As a writer sometimes i cannot understand what to write next sometimes so I thought maybe you guys could help me out! Okay for Episode 15 here's the first part pl tell me what should happen next id be grateful!


Episode 15:

[COLR=RED]Recap: Armaan & Ridz finally get out of the jungle,AR both have an eye-lock, when both AR get home they see all their old friends there, Nick falls for Maahi, Atul falls for Anji, Armaan & Raj both begin their fight to win their lady love



NOTE:This Episode will feature all of the lover boys trying to win their lady love and of coure Armi/Raj action.So please read ALL of it! Thanks Guys For all of your love and support.I tried to make it as long and as entertaining for you. If some of you could give me your feedback on some of the itty bitty AR scenes and me trying to be funny on the parts it would be great so I could improve even though I am such a pathetic writer guys I am trying my best.


The Next Morning…..

Raj was going totally crazy! He was irritated by AR's new friendship which soon had the danger of turning into love which he could not let happen at any cost. He had just seen Ridz and Armaan fighting over who should go to the bathroom before them

Ra: Yeh Armaan ne do hafton mein Riddhima par kya jadoo kar diya? Shes totally changed!
On the other hand, Armaan was happy w/ their new friendship totaaly believing in the quote "Dosti Hi Pyar ki Pehle Seedi Hai". Nick was close to falling head over heels in love w/ Maahi and Atul well, lets just say he was in a little bit too much awe of Anjali. But here we had all of these Awara Paagal Deewana Majnu's and not one one single jodi? Well, as we already know that Armaan and Raj are already head over heels in love w/ Riddhima. But whose intentions were clear and whose love was strong? That was yet to be proven. Would Raj become a villain in the life of AR or was he actually a nice guy? But what Armaan was thinking was a huge leap from what Raj had expected.

A: Yeh Raj ka bacha!Jahaan bhi dekho wahaan problem banke kadha ho jaata hai!Kabaab mein hadhi!Koi baat nahin ab tum dekhna yeh Armaan kya karta hai!

At about 11:30 AM, everyone was ready to have breakfast downstairs.Ridz sat down at the first seat she found and Armaan jumped to sit next to her when Raj came and pulled the chair and sat in at once. Armaan looked at him with an expression of hatred and sat down next to Atul who was staring at Anjali.

N: Hey guys!Hum aaj kahin bahar goomne chale? Im sure Anjali and Maahi know some great places!
Ra; Great Idea!
R: Haan! It should be fun guys!
Sa: Lekin kahan?
Anj: How about hum picnic par chale humare farmhouse par?
At: Yeah!
R: Sure!
A: Sounds great!
After breakfast, everyone packed stuff into the big car and __________________________.


What should I write next?What AR scenes should be included?ANY IDEAS???!!Plz help me!Im stuck!


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Posted: 17 years ago
jasnoor first of all calm down.dont panic.i can understand its so difficult to wirte a ff with such a busy schedule. do put some ar scenes in the picnic part.u can show girl falling for raj and armi takes advantage of this.sorry im biased towards armaan 😆 show armi and raj fighting for riddz.it keeps the readers attracted and stuck to ur ff.u can also show riddz thinking that armi and raj have something b/w them.show she feels something for both of them.so that the both dont get to know what riddz actually thinks and feels about them.this was my idea.hope u like it
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
plz do continue soon u r doing a g8 job

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