FF:Pehla Nasha:Note- HELP NEEDED!PG37 - Page 8

Originally posted by: dmg_sonia

Choo Chweet Sonia!

Promise to write soon!Love all you guys!

Im having a great day!

Love,

Jasnoor

Okay Guys,
Since you are all so betaab to see who this Raj is im updating early,Thank youu so much for all the comments!See Sonia & Kanzi,now that I am updating,youre not gonna die 😆,&& BTW Sonia,Continue your FF cuz i am absolutely dieing to see those AR scenes && I took your hottest hunk Dr. Armaan siggy hope you dont mind!Well,here goes Episode 6!


Episode 6 - Kaun Hai Yeh Raj?

Recap:Armaan falling for Ridz,AR's study date,Ridz recieves a surprise

Where We Left Off...

Okay so we left off when Ridz says Raj now this is what happens....

R:Raj?!Tum?You Idiot 10 saal baad humari yaad aayi?!
Ra:Sorry,Ridz!Ab mein aa gaya hoon,na?
R:Toh Londona kaisa hai?Uncle Aunty kaise hain?
Ra:Teek Hain,Papa kise business ke silsile mein nahin aa paye.
R:Acha.
S:Raj Beta,Tum andar ja kar unpack kar lo aur naha lol.
Ra:Jee.
S:Riddhima Raj ko apna kamra dikha do.
R:Okay Papa.

In Raj's Room....

R:Yeh raha tumhara kamra kaisa hai?
Ra:Acha hai.
R:Toh yeh batao ki tum yahaan itni achanak aur 10 saal baad?Kaise?
Ra:Well,actually meri 1 month ki training hai SF mein toh jab yeh puri ho jaati hai toh mein vaapas London chala jaaonga.
R:Kya?!Toh tum apne business ke liye aaye ho!Aur hum?Tumme humari koi phikar hai ki nahi?
Ra:Sorry,Sorry!Okay main tumhare liye aaya hoon!Better?
R:Yes.Now get ready and come downstairs.
Ra:Okay.
With that Ridz leaves.

Raj Thinking:Riddhima tumme kaise bataaon ki yeh business toh sirf ek bahaana hai tumse milne ka,bachpan se maine toh ek tumko hi pyar kiya hai,I Love You Riddhima..

Downstairs 15 mins later:

S:Arre Raj Beta,Main tumme apne ik purane business partner se milan chahta hoon,yeh hain Ranbir Malik aur yeh unka beta Armaan Malik.
Ra:Hello Uncle.Hi Armaan.
A:Hi.
A:Uncle Ridz kahan hai?
S:Woh yahin hogi beta,lo woh agayi!
Armaan turns to see Ridz walking down the stairs,Raj turn too they both look at her lovingly admiring her beauty...
R:Hey Armaan!Hi Raj!
A:You know this guy?
R:Yeah!Hes my friend from like we were 3!
Armaan is jealous knowing that Raj knows Ridz longer.
S:Armaan,Riddhima,Raj!Aaao Dinner kar lo!
RRA:Okay.
At dinner,Armaan and Raj keep on looking at Ridz.Armaan notices that Raj too is looking at Ridz in that way.
A while later,Raj is alone n the hallway on his cell.
Armaan comes from behind.
A:Pyar karte ho na usko?
Ra:Kisko?
A:Riddhima ko.
Ra:Haan kyun?Koi problem hai?
A:Nahin bas yeh ki mein bhi Riddhima se pyar karta hoon aur woh meri hai.
Ra:Acha?Woh tumhari kya hai?Biwi ya Girlfriend ya Fiance?
A:Abhi tak toh kuch bhi nahin par bahut jald she will be all of them.
Ra:Teek hai,toh main bhi kehta hoon ki Riddhima sirf meris hogi.Sirf meri.
A:Aggar mera pyar sacha hai toh woh meri hogi zaroor.
Ra:Aur Aggar mera iradha paka hai toh woh meri hogi.
A:Dekthe hain.

Moments later Shashank and Ranbir walk in.
S:Tum dono yahaan ho?Aur hum dono tumme doond doond takh gaye!Kal humare ghar yahaan diwali party hai.Armaan beta tum zaroor aana waahan sab honge.
A:Jee Uncle.
Ran:Yeah Beta,Nick,Atul,and Sapna are also invited!


Armaan and Raj give each other a smile.The party will definitely be fun....

How was it?Please Comment!&& Ill post the promo soon!



Please Comment!!!

Love,
Jasnoor

perfect....... going... keep up the amazing work... ....

Originally posted by: darkness4ever

perfect....... going... keep up the amazing work... ....

Thank youu...

Will keep it up!

Thanks for being first to reply!!!😃

Originally posted by: jasnoor_sahota

I know I wanted to make an FF that took place in US for a change,you know one that we can relate to...

Glad you liked it!

Thank youu so much!

Love,

Jasnoor

Thanks Jasnoor for repling.. and hey i just love your ff since it's in U.S because it's just exotic u know what i mean........ya SF... (That's so raven) nice place to be... really good place..............

and if this creative head start thinking.. and set their stories aborad i think it will rock.. u know what i mean. the life v go through............... keep it

up............................................👏👏😃

Chao...............

firstly thanks a ton 4 updating...yaar ur update was rocking as usual 👏 ...

i think ridz considers raj as a friend; this is wat i understood 4m the update
aur aakhir mein ridz armaan ki hi hoga i know that 4 sure becoz i know u r a true AR fan, it will be fun seeing armaan n raj fighting 4 ridz
u rock gurl, keeping up dear

n u can take "hottest hunk' siggy, u know that siggy is made by me, im glad u liked it

Originally posted by: darkness4ever

Thanks Jasnoor for repling.. and hey i just love your ff since it's in U.S because it's just exotic u know what i mean........ya SF... (That's so raven) nice place to be... really good place..............

and if this creative head start thinking.. and set their stories aborad i think it will rock.. u know what i mean. the life v go through............... keep it

up............................................👏👏😃

Chao...............

Aww...😛

Youre choo chweettt!!!

I know my FF is different && really im glad that you like it so much because I thought people might not like it cuz of the different setting,cuz India and US are so different,but cant tell you how glad I am at the feedback im getting!&& Im so happyy that you like it!

Luv,

Jasnoor

Originally posted by: dmg_sonia

firstly thanks a ton 4 updating...yaar ur update was rocking as usual 👏 ...

i think ridz considers raj as a friend; this is wat i understood 4m the update
aur aakhir mein ridz armaan ki hi hoga i know that 4 sure becoz i know u r a true AR fan, it will be fun seeing armaan n raj fighting 4 ridz
u rock gurl, keeping up dear

n u can take "hottest hunk' siggy, u know that siggy is made by me, im glad u liked it

Aww Sonia Dear....

Thanks so much!!!!

Yes I added Raj cuz I wanted to have that two handsome hunks fighting for the girl of their dreams you know,i luuv romantic comedies like that,its so awesome!😍

&& your hottest hunk siggy is amazing sweetyy...👍🏼

&& Thanks for calling me a tru AR fan,you dont know how much that means to me,really!Im so honored...lol

&& Thanks you rock,too!

Luv,

Jasnoor

Originally posted by: jasnoor_sahota

Aww Sonia Dear....

Thanks so much!!!!

ur always welcome dear

Yes I added Raj cuz I wanted to have that two handsome hunks fighting for the girl of their dreams you know,i luuv romantic comedies like that,its so awesome!😍

thats kool even i love romantic comedies; this is one more common thing between us😃

&& your hottest hunk siggy is amazing sweetyy...👍🏼

thank u dear but now i hav stopped making siggy; i had made 3-4 only

&& Thanks for calling me a tru AR fan,you dont know how much that means to me,really!Im so honored...lol

i know i really fells honored; AR rocks, they r the best

&& Thanks you rock,too!

thanku

Luv,

Jasnoor

i love ur ff n u...all thanks to DMG n india forum i hav found a gr8 friend in u

luv,

sonia

Originally posted by: dmg_sonia

i love ur ff n u...all thanks to DMG n india forum i hav found a gr8 friend in u

luv,

sonia

Aww...😳

How chweet are you gonna get?!🤗

&& Me too...

Thanks to DMG & IF Ive found such a great friend!😃

Im so glad that you love romantic comedies,too we have so much in common!😃

Luv Ya,

Jasnoor