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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part n promo plz write soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Well,many of you have been wanting Atul and he will be added in Episode 2 in my FF and as mahalakshmi2303 wrote that she wanted me to assign an actor to nikhil,well,I did put pics on the front page which described each character's role but im still confused that who should be nikhil aka nick.Im thinking either Vivan Bhatena or Iqbal Khan will suit the role.
Perhaps you can tell me who i should assign the role to or if you have any other suggestions to who should be assigned the role.please comment and the person that most ppl suggest will be assigned the role and added on the character's thread on the front page also Atul and his desription will be added soon,too so stay tuned for that right now im a lil busy so ill have Episode 2 up in an hour or two! So stay tuned and comment! 😃

Love,
Jasnoor


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Posted: 17 years ago
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yyayaya!!!!!
plz plz continue...like in 2hoursss!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay everyone!As you guys wanted,i am now posting Epi 2! 😃
Atul is going to be introduced in here so dont miss it! 😉 && please tell me who should be Nikhil,Vivan Bhatena or Iqbal Khan,both from Choona Hai Asmaan (CHA). 😕

Episode 2:

Recap- Armaan,Ridz,& Sapna's Introduction.AR's first meeting.

25 minutes later..
After the huge disagreement between AR in the middle of the street they both drive off to school angrily 😡.
Riddhima: Sapna,tumme Kya zaroorat thi un idiots ka saath dene ki?
Sapna:Aur tumme kya zaroorat thi unse ladne ki sadak ke beech mein?
R:Un dono nein meri nayi gaadi todh dhi!
S:Aur tum dekhe nahi chala sakti thi?!
R:Ok,enough un idiots ke baare mein,its not like were gonna see them at skool!Lets just stop!
S:okay
Then the both drive off to school.

Conversation between Armaan and Nick.
A:Yaar,tumne dekha woh ladki kaise hum illzam laga rahi thi?
N:Haan yaar,bighde baap ki bigdi beti!Uske kapadon se hi pata chalta hai.
A:Haan Yaar.
N:chalo uske baare main ab baat nahi karte,vaise bhi kahan hum un dono ko school mein dekhen gaye.
A:haan.
With that,both AN drive to school.

At San Fransisco High School:
Both RS and AN reach school.
Armaan and Nick split to go to their homerooms and Sapna & Riddhima walk to theirs.
Period 1-Homeroom Ms. Davis 8:35 AM

Ms. D- Class,take your seats look for the desk with your name on it and begin to read.
Riddhima finds her seat and sits down,Sapna is seated right across from her.Just then Armaan enters and takes his seat next to Ridz.Ridz turns around and sees Armaan.

Both AR:YOU??!!
A:Chipkali tum?!
R:Macchar tum?!
Just then ms. davis tells them to be quiet.
they both stare at each other with hate and begin reading like this:



After school...
Ridz finds Sapna and says..
R:sapna,tumme pata hai woh macchar?
S:Konsa macchar?
R:arre woh jo subhe mila tha,blue and green shirt wala.
S:oh woh,haan,ok lemme guess you thinks hes sorta hot,rite?
R:eeeww!!!NOO!!!
S:then what?
R:woh yahin padtha hai aur meri saari classes mein hai aur mujhe usi ke saath bethna pade ga!
S:hahaa
R:Tum haas rahi ho?Tumme pata hai kitna mushkil hai?
S:Ridz,just ignore him!
R:uggh,never mind,tum toh wahi mummy wali advice dogi.Chalo chalen ghar?
S:haan,chalo.

Next Morning....
As the previous morning,Ridz and Armaan get dressed and pick up Nick and Sapna.
When they reach their homeroom class,Ridz and Armaan stare at each other angrily,sit down and look opposite ways.
Ms. Davis:Class,we have a new student today!His name is umm...A-tool Jo-shi.Here he is.Please sit down next to Sapna Mr. A-tool Jo-shi
Atul:Mam,correction my name is Atul,not A-tool,for example like screwdriver.
Ridz,Armaan,And Sapna giggle.
Atul:You say it like Atul.
Ms.D:A-tool.
At:Never mind.Where do I sit?
Ms. D: Right there,(pointing next to Sapna)
At:Ok.
Atul sits down next to Sapna and they both smile at each other.
At:Hi,im Atul,not A-tool.
S:I know,hi,im Sapna.
Ridz turns around..
R:Hi,Riddhima,Riddhima Kapoor,or Ridz.
At:Hi,Im Atul.
R:I know.
At:Inka kya naam hai?(pointing to Armaan)
R:Yeh?Macchar
At:Machar,konsa machar?Kahan?Tumme Malaria toh nahin hai?Aaaj Kal Yeh bimari San Fransisco mein bahut phehli huyi hai.
S:Are nahin,Ridz mazak kar rahi hai iska naam Armaan hai,Armaan Malik.
At:Oh,Hi Armaan.
Armaan turns around..
A:hi
Ridz gives him "the" look.He gives her "the" look back.
They both continue giving each other looks.
Just then the bell rings...

Okay,this was a long part!How was it?And who should be Nikhil?PLEASEE COMMENT!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
vivan ofcourse...
he will suite the role..
hes so cuteeeeee...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gr8 part... i think vivan should b nik...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow jasnoor great part yaar loved it........... 👏
i dont see CHA say dont know u decide............
atul's entry was super...... 😆
do continue soon.......... 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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HEY THAT WAS GREAT ... I THINK IQBAL KHAN SHOULD BE NICK AND U SHOULD HV ANOTHER CHARACTER IN UR FF CAUSE THEN NICK/ATUL WOULD BE BY HIM SELF SO U SHOULD ADD ANOTHER GIRL FOR WHICHEVER NICK/ATUL.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i fink it should be iqbal khan rolling nick! 😛
nice update, plz carry on.....
i cnt wait to read how dey fell in luv, well i guss dey were fighting n armaan fell in luv? 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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NEW PROMO - Pehla Nasha

Armaan and Riddhima are in History class and the teacher announces partners for their new history project

And...

AR are assigned partners and the teacher tells them to start working on their project.

AR start arguing as usual on how to do the project, after several attempts of telling them to stop,the teacher finally gets tired and announces DETENTION 30 mins for both AR
Sapna is worried as to how she will get home becuz she is supposed to ride with Ridz. Ridz tells her to take the car and that shell just call her parents to come pick her up. Ridz is waiting for her parents outside the school after detention.

Suddenly, this psycho appears and he trys to do "zabardasti" with Ridz. Ridz runs away from him and he is chasing her. Meanwhile,Armaan is walking to his car and Ridz bumps into him while running.

What will Happen next? Stay tuned for Epi 3 tommorrow! 😃

Edited by jasnoor_sahota - 17 years ago

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