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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow jasnoor great promo now cant wait to read the part............. 😃
do continue soon........... 😉 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wicked 😉 promo just like dmg's plz write nxt part soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plzzzzzzz write next update sooon 😳 coz reading the promo is making sooooooooooooo inpatient n i have always been inpatient😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 promo jasnoor. plz plz continue soonnn i'm getting really impatient to read the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dear...i read ur fic 2day...i must say its awesome mind blowing 2 continue soon im waiting 4 sure
i will be ur regular reader 4m now onwards

luv,
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay this is for all of you who have been impatient to read Episode 3,sorry it was posted so late!It was supposed to be posted yesterday but I was still in the middle of writing it.So here it is!

Episode 3:

RECAP- Armaan and Riddhima discover that they go to the same high and they are seated together in all of their classes.Atul's Entry.Atul meets AR and Sapna.

After the bell...

Atul,Sapna,and Ridz walk to their next class,History.
At:Hey,guys,tumme pata hai room 203 kahan hai?
S:Arre,woh toh humare class hai,Ms. Peters.
At:Acha!Chalo ab mein yahaan kisi ko toh janta hoon.
R:Atul,tum class se pehle teacher se mil lena woh tumme bata de gi ki tum kahan beto gaye.
At:Ok,thanks Ridz.
R:Your Welcome.
5 minutes later they all reach their classroom and take their seat.Armaan & Nick come in late as usual.
Ms Peters:Hold on a minute,latecomers!
AN:Uhh,Ms. Peters!
A:Did you get a new shirt?
N:Love your haircut!
Ms. P:Ok,enough!Do not try to flatter me,it wont work.So why are you two late?
A:Umm...Were not late!
Ms P-Then?
N:Were just unusually not on time!
A:Uhh..Yeah!Get it?Unusually not on time!
N:hahahaha! Isnt that Hilarious!?
Ms. P:No.Enough of all these excuses!Sit down,next time its a detention Mr.Armaan and Mr. Nikhil.
N:Its NICK! Not Nikhil!
Ms. P:Ok,sorrynext time Ill call you Nick,if you dont yell like that!
A:Sorry,Ms. Peters!He can be rude sometimes.
Ms.P:Its ok. Now sit Down!
AN both go to their seats.
Ridz looks at him with disgust.
A:Kya dekh rahi ho Chipkali?
R:Tumme Macchar!

Ms.P:Okay Class,were going to be doing a new project for this week.It will be due next Thursday.You will be assigned partners with whom you will work with.Turn to page 53 in your book,read it and make a poster on it.Any questions?Ok Sapna and Atul,your partners start working.Nick and Anjali,your partners.Armaan and Riddhima your partners.
AR stare at each other with a "no way" look on their face.
Ms. P:Do you both have any problems with each other?Because I can just assign dettion in the cafe instead.You know,cleaning up all the food and garbage and gum off under the tables.

AR:Umm,No Sorry Ms. Peters!We wont do it again!
Ridz looks at Armaan,her expression giving a "its all your fault" look.

A:Ok,about our project.Were gonna do this colony.
R:No this one,its easier.
A:I said this one,so were doing this one.
Ms. P:Armaan!Riddhima!Quiet down.
AR cannot hear Ms. Peters under their loud argument.
Ms. P:That's it! Cafe detention for both of you after school 30 mins!

At San Fransisco High School Cafe 3:00 pm

A:Yeh Sab tumhari galati hai!Aggar tum meri baat maan lati toh yeh sab nahin hota!
R:Acha?Maine toh sirf yeh kaha ki hum easier wali cheez karenge par tumko toh har baat par argument karte ho!

Ms. P:You two can leave.Times over.
AR both leave the Cafe.

After Detention 3:35 PM

Ridddhima calls her parents but cannot get a signal.She trys over and over again.A guy suddenly appears and starts staring at Ridz's clothes.Ridz notices him staring at him and goes to wait somewhere else.Suddenly the guys starts to touch her.Ridz tells him to stop.Then she slaps the guy and starts running.Meanwhile,at the other end of the school Armaan is walking to his car.Suddenly,Ridz bumps into Armaan.Armaan is about to say something but just then sees a guy running torwars her.Ridz starts running again and the guy finally catches her and punches her and her nose starts to bleed.Armaan has a strange anger arise in him and goes up to the guy and starts punching him really hard and is about to kill him just when Ridz says..
R:Armaan,Stop!Maroge usko kya?
Armaan lets the guy go.
A:Tum teek toh ho?
R:Haan.mein bas apne parents ko phone karloongi aur woh mujhe lene ajayenge.
A:Ek minute,mein tumme aise chodh ke nahin jaane wala!Dekho koi aur paagal a gaya toh tumme bachane ke liye koi nahin hoga!
R:Kya?Tumme meri itni phikar kabse honi lagi?!
A:Mera matlab,kal mujh par na koi illzam lag jaye ki mein ik bechari ladki ko aise hi chod ke aa gaya.Ab chalti ho ki nahin?
R:Teek hai,chalo.
Armaan thinking:Yaar,mujhe kay hogaya?Mujhe kaya ho gaya jab is chipkali ko koi ched raha tha?

Ab Kya hoga?Kya Armaan ko Riddhima se pyar toh nahin ho gaya?Jaane ne ke liye dekte rahiye Pehla Nasha!

Edited by jasnoor_sahota - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awsome part!!! hey tum kahin SF mein toh nahi rehti? I know how it is having American teachers butcher your name. I hate it! I live in Illinois. Continue soon though!

Komal
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 part👏👏 plz continue soon. armaan falling 4 ridz😳can't wait till the next part.

Love Iram😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Coming Up Pehal Nasha...



Armaan is still wondering whats wrong with him and is talking to himself in the hallway at school the next morning.

A:Mujhe Kya Ho gaya?Main Paagal toh nahin ho gaya?

Riddhima an Sapna have just entered the building and see Armaan acting weird.
R:Armaan Kya hua?Tum itna ajeeb kyun ban rahe ho?
A:Tum Kaun ho?
A thinking:Mujhe Phirse Chipkali toh nahin dhikaye de rahi?
R:Armaan.Mein Riddhima!
A keeps staring at Ridz.
Then he comes to his senses and leaves.

Aaage Kya Hoga?Kya Armaan ko pata chal jaayegaga ki usko Ridz se pyar hai?

Stay tuned and please do comment!I have 892 views and 34 comments!Come on you guys can do better!I seriously need more comments then Episode 3 to continue tommorrow on Friday.

Love,
Jasnoor 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
greatff plz contd..... i realy wanna know wat happens nxt.... 😳 👏 👏

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