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sanjana25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#331

hey ssry 4 late comment it was really gud plz contd soon make rn 2gether get revenge

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#332

Poor Raj and Naina, poor Navin, Tezeeb, their parents and last but definitely not the least poor Alekh! We have become so inured to these terrorist attacks that they no longer register properly any more. It's like we've become deadened. I agree with Raj that death by hanging is too good for that don, but I can't help but recall that quote of Nietzsche "he who hunts monsters must take care that he doesn't become a monster himself"

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springsign29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#333

both the updates made me really sad especially naina .,the girl has suffered so much in life and nw ths , her brother brothr bhabhi and poor aalekh is dead.but i really lyk naina's fighting spirit atleast she not given up......and ys wish raj and nia wrk together to punish those ba****ds.ud soon.

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#334

good going.. the story is going very interesting...👏 please continue soon..😊

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: springsign29
both the updates made me really sad especially naina .,the girl has suffered so much in life and nw ths , her brother brothr bhabhi and poor aalekh is dead.but i really lyk naina's fighting spirit atleast she not given up......and ys wish raj and nia wrk together to punish those ba****ds.ud soon.

yes they will

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: sun_423
good going.. the story is going very interesting...👏 please continue soon..😊

i will

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: sanjana25
hey ssry 4 late comment it was really gud plz contd soon make rn 2gether get revenge

yes they will

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#338

they were all seated at the dinner table...
all except raj...

"raj kahaan hai ma?"
naina asked his mom..

"aata hoga beta...
par u haven't touched your food....
kuch to khao?"

"bhookh nahi hai ma..."
she was depressed...
and her diet had gone down considerably...

"naina...kha le kuch....meri khaatir.."
her mom pleaded...

"kya hai ma!!"
she shouted...
"do din kuch nahi khaaoongi
to marr nahi jaaongi!"

"naina!"
raj had come out....
"kaun sa tareeka hai yeh baat karne ka?"

"usse kuch mat bolo raj..."
naina's father grumbled...

"kyon nahi uncle!...

bahut ho gaya...she's not the only
one going thru a bad phase...

hum sabne bhi kisi ko khoya hai....

we're all trying to handle ourselves...
aapko iski chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi hai....
she has to come out of this....
aise to yeh paagal ho jaayegi..."

glaring at him..naina got off...
pushing her plate away..
tears enveloping her eyes...

"you can't force me to eat...
aur apna lecture apne paas rakho!"

she pushed him a bit...
& slammed the door to her room shut...

"nia!..."
he went after her

"stop behaving like a child....
darwaaza kholo!...
har choti baat par darwaaza mooh par maarna kisi
cheez ka solution nahi hai.."

"go to hell!"
she screamed....

"raj....kya baat hai?"
his mom questioned...

"jee?"

"tum pareshaan kyon ho?..
i haven't seen you talkin to her
like this...kabhi bhi.."

he held his head in his hands...
genuinely tensed...
"naina ko kahin door jaana hoga...
bahut door..."

"kya matlab?"

"...uski jaan khatre mein hai ma...
someone's trying to kill her too..'"
he sounded desperste....

"kya?!!...par kaun?..
tumhe kaise..."

she looked at him with anxious eyes...
and so did all the others
who were sitting there....

"someone was..
lurking outside our window yesterday...
black hood mein koi tha..."

"r u sure?..matlab..kahin tumhe..."

"ma!...i'm not having hallucinations...
relax!...bas main chaahta hoon..ki woh
jaldi theek ho jaaye....aur..
thode time ke liye yahaan se....kahin bhi..."

"london..."
naina's father suggested....

"itni door...i mean..."
he was confused...

ek taraf naina ki safety..
aur doosri taraf woh khud....

main kaise reh paaoonga uske bina....

why did life always come to
a standstill at such a point??

"main jaanta hoon...
tumhaare liye mushkil hai beta...
par...hum dono kal shaam...
waapis jaa hi rahein hai...

naina ki tickets book karwa dete hai..
she'll come along..
atleast jab tak yahaan ki situation
theek nahi ho jaati..."
her father continued...

"raj...tu bhi chala jaa yaar..
for sometime...."
huda suggested....

"nahi!...main kahin nahi jaa sakta...
kuch..kuch adhoore kaam
poore karne hai mujhe..."
a fire raged in his eyes...

"sirf tumhe kyon raj?"
naina had overheard the entire conversation...

infuriated...angry..she came out...

"hote kaun hai aap log meri life ki
decisions lene waale?...
i'm an independent person...
main akele manage kar sakti hoon...
aur marne ka mujhe koi darr nahi hai....
main kashmir
chod kar nahi..."

"u will naina..sabke liye best.."

"raj...andar chalo...
we need to talk..."

she was frowning....
and dragged him in....

banging the door shut....

"main bhaag jaaoongi raj"

"kya?..bhaag.."

"if you force me to leave....
i'll desert you and run away.."

"talk sense!...paagal.."

"main nahi tum ho rahe ho raj!...
kya adhoora kaam hai tumhaara?
kabir ko maarna hai na...
apne dost ki maut ka badla
lena chaahte ho....

main bhi!...he was my brother....
samajh kyon nahi aata tumhe?"

"aata hai jaan...
par main tumhe..."
this was going to be difficult...
"main tumhe khone se darta hoon...."
his eyes reflected his sadness..

"aur main tumhe khone se raj...
even if i had to sit passively
and watch...i want to stay by your side...
main tumse door nahi jaa paaoongi...
bhaai ko to kho hi diya...ab agar tum..."
she clutched his shirt.....

"nahi hoga kuch mujhe...."

"yeh to main bhi keh sakti hoon raj...
par woh tumhe khokla lagega....
zindagi-maut ka faisla hum nahi karte...
atleast...baaki pal main sirf tumhaare saath..."
she was crying profusely....

"par..."
he was lost..
holding her shoulders..

"jitni safety tum mujhe provide kar sakte ho...
utni koi nahi kar paayega raj....
koi nahi...
please mere saath aisa mat karna...
nahi to....nahi to....i'll..go back to drugs..."
she was actually threatening him...

"bakwaas mat karo!...
this is blackmail!.."

he knew his crazy wife would go to any length
to stick to him..so he had to give in...

"alright!...special agent!...
i hope tumhaari interpol ki training tumhaare kaam
aaye!"
he pulled her into his arms...

she closed her eyes...anticipating a kiss...

her cheeks wet with tears...

but he lingered deliberately...
knowing..that she needed all his support and love....

he hugged her tighter...
and she opened her eyes in surprise....

slowly..he kissed her eyelids...

her forehead...

and she gave herself up to the strength
in his muscular arms....

finally...
he took her lips in....

moistening them...
caressing them with his tongue...

as she seemed to draw emotional
strength from them....

she kissed him back...this time...

there was no hurry..no lust...no demands...

they were just caring..loving each other...
unconditionally....

the kiss deepened....
before they finally separated...
"i've missed you...."

"me too...."
she smiled...after a very long time...

"don't ever stop smiling jaan!"
he rubbed his nose with hers...

Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gham...
Tere Sang Hai Ham..

Hans Ke To Dekh Tu Ek Baar, ..
Khud Hi Aa Jaayegi Phir Bahaar ..
Gaa Le Nayee Sargam,
Geet Ek Naya Gaa,
Aaya Naya Mausam Aaya Din Naya...

Ched De Dhun Vo Aaj Chha Jayein Mastiyan...
Chhod De Khul Ke Aaj Lehron Mein Kashtiyan ...
Thokar Mein Masti Ho, Kankar Bhi Jhoomein...
Man Bhi Thirak Jaye, Baadal Ko Chume..

Ye Hawa Tere Paas Aake Hai Bah Rahi...
Jhoom Le Mere Sang Kanon Mein Kah Rahi ...
Lahra Ke Balkha Ke Muskura Ke Ji Le...
Pi Le Hawaon Ko Gunguna Ke Ji Le...

Sach Hai Ye Bas Ek Baar Milti Hai Zindagi
Karvatein Badalti Hai Pal Pal Ye Zindagi ...
Har Pal Ko Gale Se Hans Ke Laga Le...
Pal Pal Mein Chhupi Jo Khushiyan Chura Le...

that's the only way to survive in this world....
raj would make her realise soon...

har pal ko khul kar jeena chaahiye...

kya pata..kal ho na ho!!!

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"naina..salim india deport hua?"
raj asked.....

"nahi...i've tried my level best...
bas...ambassador se baat karne jaa hi rahi thi...."

"go on...main bhi yahin hoon.."

she made an international call to dubai....

"agent ahluwalia...interpol...
tranfer my call to the indian ambassador
immediately.."

"yes ma'am!"
a curt reply came....

"hello..."

"goodevening sir...."
she introduced herself....
& made her demand..

"i'm afraid it isn't possible!...
dekhiye..aapke kehne par humne
bina proofs ke don ko arrest kiya...

we don't even have a case against him...
aur ab..agar usse india bheja..
to yahaan dubai mein hungaama ho jaayega..."

"par...we have his son here too...
terrorism..drug trafficking...
100 other charges are up on him...
you have to..aap jaante hai woh innocent nahi hai.."

"i'm really sorry...i.."

raj snatched the phone from naina...

"sir..captain rajveer singh shekhawat..
indian army...problem kya hai?..
aapke paas case nahi hai..humaare paas hai..."

"really?..u mean.."

"yes sir..in fact..
we have witnesses here...

jinke suddenly hostile ho jaane ki bhi
kaafi high chances hain....
jisse pehle aisa kuch ho..
we want malik here...."

"witnesses!..excellent...
pehle kyon nahi bataaya!....
main kuch karta hoon...
don't worry...day after tomorrow...
he'll be in delhi..."

"central jail?"

"central jail for sure!"

"thanks sir!"
he smiled....
.....................

"hostile witness?..
kis ki baat kar rahe the raj...?"

"kisi ki nahin..."

"bataao!"

"nia!..i lied...

there are no witnesses!...
we have nothing here....

bas..ek baar woh delhi land kare....
main usse central jail bhi nahi
pahunchne doonga....i promise u dat!"

"u lied!...wow!.."
she was stunned.....

he winked...
"aur ab...we have another work.."

"kya?"

"hum..kabir se jail milne jaa rahe hain..."

"no way!..main nahi..."
she looked disgusted...
"i'll..shoot him .."

"tum bhi chalogi naina!...
both of us...
kyonki kal...
woh jail se bhaagne waala hai..."

raj grinned..while naina's jaw dropped!

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#339

thats all

waiting for ur replies

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#340

Sorry 4 not commenting on the previous part. Both the parts r fabulous. I specially luved the way Raj consoled Naina. Their convo was just gr8. N now they r bak on track n they r going to avenge Navin n Tehzeeb's death 2gether.

W8ing 4 the next part eagerly. PLS CONTINUE SOON.