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Posted: 16 years ago

#351

"i think it's a real bad idea!!!"

naina shook her head....

she lay in his arms..
as they discussed certain strategies...

"main kisi par vishwaas nahi karti raj...
except you....

aur huda..abhimanyu ko
itni badi responsibility handover kar dena...
...won't it be a mistake???"
she was tensed...

"aisa kyon soch rahi ho?"

"u remember..back in delhi..
mujhe huda par shak tha..
aur tumne mujhe...gusse mein kaha tha..
that no one from the army...atleast your
colleagues could be involved in this.....

kya hua phir raj??...

wasn't aalekh a friend?..

wasn't he in the army?
dhoka diya usne hum sabko....
he says he loved me.....!!

to phir mujhe itna bada dhakka dene se pehle...
he didn't even think once...!"

her voice had risen...
and raj felt her speech quiver...
he knew she was on the verge of tears.....

"theek hai jaan..."
he held her tighter...

"maanta hoon main galat tha..
par...ek baat socho....

agar..huda..abhi mein se koi traitor hai bhi...
to bhi woh mission ka part hona chaahenge...
afterall he'll be saving his own boss!"

naina thought for a while....
before a realization dawned upon her...
raj was correct...

"shaayad..tum sahi ho...par...
interpol se bhi koi saath..."

"nahi nia!!..
jitne logon mein yeh baat spread hogi..
chances of success will drop....

hum illegal kaam karne jaa rahein hai...
we're kicking the system...."
he explained....

"yudi...he's a great friend raj...
aur woh sab jaanta hai..
can he atleast go along ..?"

"hmmmm...haan...
uske saath koi problem nahi honi chaahiye...
waise bhi..he's in delhi..."

naina sighed...
snuggling into his arms....

he lied down completely..
& she lay on top of him...

her chin resting on his bare chest....

"how come you're
going against the system....?"
she whispered....

"system ke saath tab tak chalna chaahiye..
jab tak system saaf rahe....

agar system hi galat hai...
to usse saaf karne ka haq
bhi humaare paas hi hota hai...

rules follow karne ka kya faayda..
jab implementors...
executors hi rule break kar rahe ho..."
he smiled.....

"anyway...baatein bahut ho gayi...
it's time for some...."

he enveloped his arms against her waist...
his hands sliding in through her nightie...

Kehta Hai Pal Pal Tumse...
Ho Ke Dil Ye Deewana...
Kehta Hai Pal Pal Tumse...
Ho Ke Dil Ye Deewana..

Ek Pal Bhi Jaane Jaana...
Mujhse Door Nahin Jana...
Pyaar Kiya To Nibhana...
Pyaar Kiya To Nibhana...

Abh Zindagi Ka Maksad...
Hai Bas Tumhara Saath...
Ek Baar Keh Do Tum Bhi...
Haathoon Mein Le Ke Haath....

Hum Tum, Tum Hum Ban Ke Rahein...
Hum Raaz Humsafar...

Shikwa Kare Na Koi...
Ek Duje Se Umar Bhar...

Pyaar Humara Ho Aisa Ke...
Dekhe Ye Zamaana...
Pyaar Kiya To Nibhana...
Pyaar Kiya To Nibhana..

"abhi nahi!.."
she got up..
"pehle huda...abhi..yudi se baat karle?
they hv to leave tonight itself!"

"chalo..."
he resigned himself to fate!!

.........................................

"par..tum malik ko bhagaana kyon chaahte ho??
don hai woh!!"
abhimanyu asked aloud...

raj knew he had to hide
certain things from his friends....

although..he hated himself for it....

"kyonki..wahaan delhi mein..
aise bahut log hain...
jo don ko bhagaa denge...

main chaahta hoon ki navin ,tehzeeb,
aalekh ka kaatil..
humaari hiraasat mein ho....
we'll take care of him in our own style...."

huda saw a certain fire in his eyes...
he was hungry for revenge...

"main tayaar hoon...
airport se jis jeep mein usse laayenge...
usse hum rok lenge....

u don't have to worry...
do din mein salim humaare
kadmon mein hoga!"
huda seemed excited...

abhimanyu nodded...

"yudi bhi tum dono ko delhi mein milega...
he'll help you..
naina's talked to him..."

they nodded....

"maan gaya tujhe raj...
wat a grandific idea!!"

"grandific??"

"well.....
grand + terrific!...
sounds cool na!!"

they all smiled...

"tickets airport se collect kar lena...
u guys leave in 5 hours...
all the best!"

naina wished them luck...
just a little nervously...

"fikar mat kar naina...

navin..tehzeeb..aur aalekh ke kaatilon ko
hum aasaani se..."

before he could complete..
an anger surged thru her....

aalekh?!!!...

they weren't doin this from him...

"aalekh..us jaise dost se.."
she began heatedly...
but raj stopped her..glaring...

"us jaise dost se accha
dost humme kabhi nahi mil sakta..
right guys..?"
raj handled the situation.

"right!"
..............................

"why d hell did you stop me?"

"naina...tumhe pata hai tum
kitni badi bewakoofi karne
jaa rahi thi!..

no one knows about aalekh's letter...
or the fact that he's a traitor...
aur unhe pata nahi chalna chaahiye!"

"par kyon?"

"socho...agar in mein se koi mila hua hai...

to don't u think they'll realise
wat we're tryin to do..

agar unhe pata chala..
ki hum aalekh ke baare mein jaante hain...

it'll take dem a second to realize dat
hum kabir ke saath kya karna chaahte hain!"

"oh.....tumhe itna dimaag kisne diya?"
she wondered aloud!!

"bas...hum to born intelligent hai..."
he raised his collar and she giggled...

pulling her into his arms...

he kissed her...
deeply, pasionately....

she felt his hunger..his need....

after all they hadn't made
love since their marriage...!

kaash main bhi tumhe
utna hi pyaar de paati..
jitna tumne mujhe har waqt..
har ghadi diya hai...

i promise i'll never let you
down again!!

Na Main Tumhe Sataoon
Na Tum Mujhe Sataoo

Main Tumko Samajh Jaoon...
Tum Mujhko Samajh Jao

Chahaat Hi Pooja Ho
Man Mandir Ho Jaaneman

Ek Duje Ke Bin
Ek Pal Bhi Lagta Nahin Hai Man...

Phir To Jeevan Ban Jayega
Pyaar Ka Taraana.....
Pyaar Kiya To NIbhana
Pyaar Kiya To NIbhana..

he'd given her all the support that she needed....
& she'd do the same for him soon...
but not today....

not wen she was so tensed...
so worried....about the future...

"kya hua jaan?.."
she was looking at him rather strangely....
"naina?"

"ah..woh..nahi..kuch nahin....
bas...thanks for being there always.."

"wat?!...tum theek to ho?...
mujhe thanks bolne ki
zaroorat tumhe kabse padne lagi...!?"

"once in awhile..

a wife must tell her
husband how much she appreciates
his love...."
she smiled....warmly...
holding him closer...

"not this wife!..
her husband already
knows that for a fact...!!

aur mujhe lag raha hai...
that aaj madam bahut thaki hui hai...
isiliye...ab so jaaye?"
he smiled in return....

she nodded....

they returned to their bed...
& she slept in his arms.....
.............................................

early next morning.....

IN DELHI...

a police van raced on the highway...

carrying a man who was potentially dangerous for
the people across the world...

he was rather old..
though not fragile or weak in any sense...

his greatest weapon was his brain..
that worked superfast...

he knew that there had to be a logic..
something grand behind the plan..
which was why he was deported to india...

a country whose operations were being handled by
his son...kabir...

suddenly his chain of thought broke
as the van came to a hault...

"kya hua sharma?"
an inspector sitting next to
malik shouted at the
driver...

"saab..aage raasta band hai..."

"band hai!..
par abhi kal shaam tak to theek tha...
tum ruko ..main dekhta hoon...

tum log is par nazar rakhna..
saala bahut shaatir hai..."

he told the other policemen...
& jumped out...

a lot of construction work was goin on..
it seemed...

"aye bhaai??...kya ho raha hai yeh sab?"

"kya saab..dikhta nahi hai kya?
woh itna bada board laga hai...

diversion create karna hai..
is liye landmines laga kar aage ki sadak
ko uda rahe hain...phir flyover banega"

"hey bhagwaan!
yeh kahaan fas gaya!
agar central jail jaana hai..
to kaise jaayenge?"

the man in the bright orange labourer suit..
wearing a helmet..stepped closer...

"arrey baap re!..
bahut lamba raasta lena padega...

yahaan se 9-10 km ulta jaa kar , wahaan se..."
as this man talked to the inspector..

2 others crept closer to the van...
knocking the door slightly....

"huh?...suna tune.."
one constable asked the other...

"lagta hai saab waapis aa gaye honge...
jaa khol.."

since the front & back of the
van are insulated from each other..

a man sitting behind can't see
what's goin on outside....

the moment the door was opened...
2 men..in similar orange suits...
jumped in...

spraying a formula on everyone...

they gave each other a wink...
followed by a high-five...

except the driver...
everyone in the van..

including malik...lay unconscious....

"jaldi kar yudi...
jisse pehle woh inspector waapis aaye..

malik ki body ko us car tak pahunchaana
hoga humme....quick!"
abhi whispered..

abhimanyu & yudi...
picked him up
with some difficulty..&
carried his body
to a car that lay hidden behind some bushes...

"huda ko bulaane ka time ho gaya hai!..
one...two..three...go!"

"huda bhaaaaaaaaaaag!!!!"
they screamed together...

"hurrrrrrrr...."
huda winked...took his spray out..
knocked the inspector down with ease...

and ran at the speed of lightening....

he heard someone firing...
"yeh saala kaun macchar aa gaya ab!!..."

running he turned about & saw the driver firing....

"hadh ho gayi!...
driver ko to hum sab bhool hi gaye!!..
chal huda...jaan bachaani hai to daud!!"

daud
danaadan daud..

idhar daud hai... udhar daud hai..
ye jina yaaro daud hai...

koyi aage hai koyi pichhe hai...
bas bhaagam-bhaag hai daud hai...

paison ki hai daud kahin ...
pyaar ke pichhe daud kahin...

duniya hai divaani kaisi hai bechaini...
har koyi to kuchh na kuchh chakkar mein hai

hau lafada jhagada gadabad hai ...
tauba kitani bhagadad hai...

are jine ko maaraa-maari hi chalati hai..
par marane se jaan duur-duur daudati hai..

run for your life run for your money
run for your love
run run run run daud daud daud.....

jumping...dodging bullets...
he entered the car...

"driver ko mera baap behosh karta!!
dhakan ki aulaad...
shakal kya dekh raha hai..bhaago!!"

the tyres of the car screeched as they turned 180 degrees..
& dashed away .....

"yeh thi inki security!!!
15 minute lage humme salim ko
udaane mein...
ram jaane yeh desh kahaan jaayega!!
agar police waalon ke haath mein itne bade suraak hain..
to bechaare criminals ko bhaagne ka incentive to
milega hi na!!
huda grumbled....

"desh ka to pata nahi huda...
par haan...
ab kashmir jaane mein wardi kaam aayegi!"
abhimanyu winked..

these guys changed into their uniforms..
and finally reached the airport....

"ma'am...this sir here is from interpol.."
huda pointed to yudi...

"& we're captains huda & abhimanyu...
special plane ready hoga humaare liye...
we're transporting a criminal to kashmir....
here are the tickets....."

they were cleared almost instantly.....

and after an hour...

were on their way to kashmir...
glad that their mission stood accomplished...!

this part was easy....
but the next..
who knew wat future would have in store!!!

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#352

ab isse zyaada
loooooooooooooong update nahi de sakti!!

i hope you guys had fun...

hopin to see everyone reply dis time round..
ab end mein saath mat chodna guys!!!

jab itna jhel liya..to thoda aur sahi!!

luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

bye!!

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#353

wow I'm really tensed yaar, I hope whoever the traitor is, he doesn't manage to mess up the plan...the way this ff is going ANYTHING can happen...btw, the scenes b/w raj and naina were wonderful....I wiish deeps would include more of them....

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springsign29

@springsign29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#354

the parts were fabulous.....feeling tensed fr raj n naina but really lyk their spirit......continue soon

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: sea_nyx
wow I'm really tensed yaar, I hope whoever the traitor is, he doesn't manage to mess up the plan...the way this ff is going ANYTHING can happen...btw, the scenes b/w raj and naina were wonderful....I wiish deeps would include more of them....

thanks for comment

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#356

"chandok bol raha hoon beta..."

"uncle..aap..sab theek to hai na...??"
naina had just picked up the phone....

"of course sab theek hai...
maine to tumhe aur raj ko ek good-news
dene ke liye phone kiya hai..."

"good news?..kya?"

"raj hai wahaan par?..."

"jee.. phone loudspeaker par hi hain..."

"good-evening sir...!"
raj wished him...

"good-evening major!"

"m...major?"
raj & naina looked at each other...stunned..

"exactly...you've been promoted..my boy!"

"promoted!...that's excellent!..."
naina jumped with joy..
as she held raj's hand tighter...

"par sir...promotion ki wajah?"
he was more surprised than ecstatic..

"wajah?!...u saved the prime minister...!
aaj subaah mujhe defence ministry se specially
phone aaya tha...
you absolutely deserve it rajveer..."

naina felt a lump rising in her throat...
"bhaai..kitna khush hota aaj.."

raj gazed at his wife lovingly...
and enveloped her in his arms....

"haan beta..."

he'd met naina's parents in delhi...
before they'd left for london....

"he was a great soldier...
thoda laloo zaroor...."

he stopped...and they realised that
he was too emotional to talk...

after a silence he continued....

"major...is rank ke saath-saath..aapko ek
naya mission..ek new responsibility bhi
di jaa rahi hai...

aaj subaah...don..salim malik ko
india deport kiya jaa raha tha....
police van par attack hua aur...
aur woh faraar ho gaya....

defence ministry ko shak hai..
ki woh apne bete kabir malik
se milne kashmir zaroor aayega..
you have to get hold of him....ALIVE!"

"ALIVE!?...par...zinda kyon sir?"

"indian police department ki izzat bachaane ke liye!..
jitni aasaani se don ko udaa liya gaya...

it seemed some professionals were behind it...
ab international law-making, law-executing
bodies mein india's reputation is at stake...."

"yeh kaun sa logic hua uncle??"

naina seemed irritated....
she'd never let those bas***ds live!

"yeh main nahi bol raha beta...
yeh political pulls & pressures bol rahein hain...
ministry aaj kal aise hi function karti hai...!"

"disgusting!...."
naina mouthed...

B.C sighed
"rajveer..kashmir mein red alert kar diya gaya hai
we have contacted the force there..
u'll get all the help that you need...all the best...!"

"thank you sir...."

"naina..apna dhyaan rakhna beta..."

"jee uncle..."
..............................................

"ab kya raj?...
humaara plan?"
she looked upset...

"sir ne yeh to bata diya...
ki huda, abhi, yudi succeeded in their plans,....

to phir ab...ab plan aage jaayega....
till the last stage...."

"lekin..."

"lekin kuch nahi jaan....
ministry political pulls ke under aa kar
jo marzi kare..main jo karoonga woh
sirf 'friendship' pulls ke under hoga....

main navin se apni dosti..
marte-dum tak nibhaaoonga"

he closed his eyes....lost in the days he
spent with his best-friend....

a tear trickled down his eye....

this was probably the first time...
wen raj had displayed his feelings in front of her..
his hurt...his depression....

she realized how much he loved navin...
maybe even more than her...

par mujhe sambhaalne ke liye....
he had bottled all his feelings in his heart...

raising her hand...
she gently wiped the tear of his cheek....
& his eyes shot-open...

"a..i'm..sorry..mujhe pata hi nahi chala...
main kab ..."

she entwined her fingers in his...

"you know wat?...
i'd be dead without you..."

she tossed her arms around his neck..
bringing his face closer...

clutching her waist..he pulled her closer...
until...their lips met....
...........................................

"dhyaan rakhna apna raj...
be really..careful..."

she was really tensed,....

"chinta mat karo nia!...i promise i'll be back...
in fact..kabir mera kuch nahi bigaad sakta....
i have the ace remember....
aur waise bhi..."

raj stepped closer to her & whispered...

"zindagi har kadam ek nayi jung hai...
jeet jaayenge hum...
jeet jaayenge hum...
tu agar sang hai..."

he winked and bid her a goodbye....

she nodded...

"please god....please...
bhaai ki taraah raj ko bhi mujhse door...
mat karna..please bring him back to me...."

..........................................

"yeh li jiye commissioner...
here's the court order....

kabir ko airport army ki nigraani mein le jaaya
jaayega..i'll be with him all the way.."

the comissioner nodded....

"yeh to hona hi tha..
delhi police ki bewakoofi ne saari police-force
ka naam kharaab kar diya hai..."

kabir was brought out...
& he smiled wen he saw rajveer...

..............................

"ek minute officer...
i'll go in first...
check kar loon sab kuch andar..
phir kabir ko bhejna..
& den you step in...."

raj ordered a sub-ordinate....
who instantly agreed...

raj went in..
then came kabir...

but before the other officers could step in...
raj sat next to him & whispered.....

"rod tooti hui hai...
tumhaare handcuffs easily slide ho jaayenge..
take me hostage..& we'll jump out...."

kabir grinned...

it was a perfect plan...

bechaara captain...

yeh jaanta bhi nahi ki aaj is
duniya mein iska aakhri din hoga...

aur phir iski biwi ki bhi
main dhajiyaan uda doonga!
....................................

the van was moving at a reasonable pace...
45 minutes had passed....

and the 3 officers who sat at the back..
apart from raj..seemed calm..relaxed....

with the rocking motion of the van..
the hand-cuffs kept slipping along the rail....

nearing the edge..every passing minute....

kabir looked at raj..
who quickly nodded his head....
& smartly shoved his gun in kabir's hands ...

reacting almost immediately..
kabir held the gun tighter in
his hand & stood up...

"aye!!...hilna mat..!..
udaa doonga isko nahi to!"

he placed the gun on raj's temple...
& pulled him alongside....

"kabir!...stop it!..
officers..meri chinta mat karo..
shoot him....!"

"s..sir..."

"i said shoot him..now!!"

"soch lo officers...
tum aage bade..aur yeh gaya...
whooooooooooosh!!"

he was holding raj's neck....
slowly moving towards the door
of the moving van....

"dammit!!..fire!"
raj screamed.....

"s..sorry sir...
aap..humaare mentor..how can we...?
our senior..."

the officers gazed at each other...
troubled...in a dilemma....

& finally...tossed their guns on the floor...

"goodness!..yeh tum logon ne kya kiya???"
raj slapped his forehead..
internally thanking them....

"shaabaash...ab tu..darwaaza khol..
chal..jaldi...."
an officer obliged.....

"chalti hui van se koodoge to maare jaaoge kabir...
surrender kar do......"

kabir looked at him and smiled...

brilliant actor!!

"nahi captain...both of us are jumping...!
now!!!"

& he pulled rajveer along....

...............

they fell on the floor with a thud..

raj hitting the ground first..
while kabir landing safely on him...

smiling...kabir got up...&
saw the van beginning to stop...

kabir screamed...

"jaao yahaan se!...agar van ruki..
to saari goliyaan iske bheje mein utaar doonga!"

after a moment of hesitation....
the van continued on its way....

every officer inside knew...

that by the time they'd inform anyone about the
incident..

kabir would be in a different world!

raj meanwhile had his eyes shut tightly...
in pain...in severe agony....

he was sure he'd broken some bones...
while kabir survived the impact....

"haaaaaa!!!...
azaadi ki khushboo hi alag hoti hai..."

kabir spread his hands..
feeling the air hit him....

"afsos...tumhaari aazaadi ab khatam hui captain..."

raj didn't bother correcting him...

"kya..matlab?"
he clutched his elbow..
which bled profusely...

kabir grinned..&
pointed the gun at raj's chest...
"you're finished...."

raj smiled..meekly....

"tum..itne bewakoof ...
to nahi ho sakte..kabir.."

"wat?"

"c'mon give me a hand up..
arrey uthaao mujhe...!!

warna tumhaare baap ko duniya
se utha doonga main!"

raj's tone changed from mocking to that of detest...
"don't forget...he's still my guest!"

kabir's arm fell down...

"kaafi shaatir ho tum...
i underestimated you...."

"i knew you would..."
he said in an obvious tone...

"to chaahte kya ho?"

"waise to tumhaari tabaahi....
tumhaari maut..."
raj's eyes reflected his deadly emotions..

"par filhaal...apni biwi ki jaan...
get the hell out of here...
specially out of our lives...!"

kabir nodded....

"theek hai...
chod diya tumhe...
waise bhi..
kabir kisi ka ehsaan apne sar par nahi rakhta..
baba aur meri rihaai ki badle...
tu aur teri biwi ab chain se jiyo...."

this time kabir meant wat he said...

"bhaag ja yahaan se...
jis se pehle mera iraada badal jaaye ..."
raj warned him....

for he knew...
that although kabir had
stepped back from his revenge...

raj's animosity had leapt by bounds....

mere doston ke kaatil ko..
itni aasaani se nahi jaane doonga...

main tujhe physically to khatam karoonga hi...
par usse pehle mentally...financially...
nanga kar doonga kabir.....i'll destroy you...

sadak par le aaoonga tujhe....

khatam kar doonga tera saara business...

teri himmat ko tod doonga
..tere contacts...
sab kuch aag mein bhasam ho jaayega...

your end..is near....

waada hai mera navin...
main badla zaroor loonga....

he saw kabir walking away...
& finally... vanishing out of sight....
................................

"yeh sab!!..raj tum..."

naina's face went pale wen she saw his
uniform had virtually turned red ...
drenched in blood...

"relax jaan...main theek hoon...
zara sa..."

"zara sa!!..
yeh tumhe zara sa dikh raha hai....
o god!...take my support..."

he'd been limping and smiled
at naina's suggestion..

"anyday biwi!!.."

he put his arm on her shoulder..
as she clutched his waist...
and escorted him to the room....

"let jaao...careful.."
slowly she helped him down on the bed....
"bahut dard ho raha hai kya?"

"of course not!"
he replied a little too quickly...

she raised her eye-brow a bit..

"a..thoda sa...bahut thoda sa...sach.."

she helped him out of his shirt...
and applied medicines to his elbow...

"itni chot lagi kaise?"

"main aur kabir chalti hui
van se kood gaye...his idea!.."
raj lied....

"moron!...pata nahi
abhi tak zinda kyon hai!"

"bas..kuch aur pal...

by the way jaan...
do me a favour yaar...
laptop yahaan le aao....

tracking system activate karein....
aur phir dheere-dheere..."

"zyaada excite mat ho...
woh sab main dekh loongi....
filhaal...yeh lo..."
she handed him a glass of milk...

"haldi-waala doodh!
tum biwi se maa ban ne ki
training le rahi ho kya?"
he winked...

she blushed....
"shut-up!"

"haay...kya andaaz hai!..."

"lagta hai dimaag par bhi chot lagi hai..
kyon patidev??"

"dimaag to pata nahin..par haan..
dil zaroor halaal ho gaya hai!...
come here...."

"come here...no way..!
haalat dekhi hai apni...
masti band karo..aur chup-chaap so jaao...!..."

"isi liye to bula raha hoon...
sone ke liye..ek saath..ek bed par..
ek chaddar ke andar...
ek.."

and he continued teasing her for awhile.....
...........................................

"khaao!..."

she shook her head...
"main..drugs ..nahi..loongi..."

"nahi maanogi...to raj ko...
bahut chot pahunchegi naina...
do you want to see him die....
slowly..tadap-tadap kar...
ek-ek ang..."

"nahi!..don't do anything to him...
please...
main..main khaati hoon...."
she had tears in her eyes...

"kyon?...why're you...?"

"doing all this...?
you're too smart..
agar tumhe mere baare mein pata naa chala hota...
to shaayad yeh sab ki koi zaroorat nahi padti..

tumhe dard nahi de raha..
u should be thanking me....

ab aur bakwaas nahi...take those pills...
it'll be the easiest ,painless death...
drugs mein slow-poison bhi hai...
enjoy yourself...
feel yourself floating....."

she was far-away from him...
too far....

i loved you raj...i really did....

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#357

that's all guys....

gtg now.....

don't ask me italics kya hai...

it's the future again...
real close future...!!!

hope it was interestin....

byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#358

Nice part. Its gud dat Raj is a major now. Even I was thinking dat he shud be promoted coz he saved the defence minister. Well luved the way he executed the plan.

Raj n Naina's scenes wer very beautiful, specially where Raj cried in front of Naina 4 the 1st tym.

Well this near future is really confusing. but as u said its very near, we'll w8 4 dat part 2 cum.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#359

wow the parts b/w Raj and Naina was really sweet and I'm soo happy he got promoted....I can totally understand Naina's frustration at the govt. But what I'm really concerned with is the parts in italics!!! looks like Naina is going to be in horrible danger soon :( Thanx soo much gazal for taking the time and pain to update and thank deeps as well 4 me!!

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388456

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#360

hell,.......i am again so late........i am really very very sorry.........well, meri pehli request toh reject ho gayi.....bechare Naveen aur tehzeeb had to give their lives.......i have literally cried in those scenes when raj and naina found out the truth abt naveen's death.......par tumne kaha their bodies were not found due to the fire......sach bataoooo i would not even mind ekta kapoor waale idea to bring back a dead guy by plastic surgery if deepika has those ideas for bringing back nanoo and tazz....hehehe......really......pata hai after reading the last few updates it is so difficult for me to come out of its daze......its amazing.......

even the way raj brought her back from her depression while bottling his own pain......it touched me.......

And now the last update......it is getting interesting by the moment........Raj-naina's romantic tit bits are really beautiful.....good to see they have recovered enough to give each other the time both deserve..........par ab yeh italics kya hai???....dekho meri last request toh kharij kar di gayi ab yeh waali mat karna.........plz plz take care of them and let them win without losing each other......plz.....

And thank you so much for the wonderful updates.....sorry for not being able to reply on time..........