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springsign29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#271

phew!!!the update really made me blush.......do update soon......

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sanjana25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#272

it was such a romantic part pl contd soon

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Posted: 16 years ago

#273

It was beautiful........wow......the setting was perfect....the dialogues were perfect.........the people were perfect.........and the whole amalgam of it was perfect........great update........

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#274

ok gazal....definitely blushing here...lol. but seriously yaar, beautiful update....nothiing jarring or over the top and navin was so cute with his concerned brother act....and the last part was equally gr8...only raj would think of singing a song in a blizzard....sorry for the late comment. i was travelling.

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#275

Its such a beautiful part. Just luved it. Navin was a cute responsible brother. That was nice. And RN rocked undoubtedly.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz
It was beautiful........wow......the setting was perfect....the dialogues were perfect.........the people were perfect.........and the whole amalgam of it was perfect........great update........

thanks

i m glad that u like it

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: sea_nyx
ok gazal....definitely blushing here...lol. but seriously yaar, beautiful update....nothiing jarring or over the top and navin was so cute with his concerned brother act....and the last part was equally gr8...only raj would think of singing a song in a blizzard....sorry for the late comment. i was travelling.

i m glad that u like it

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Its such a beautiful part. Just luved it. Navin was a cute responsible brother. That was nice. And RN rocked undoubtedly.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

thanks for comment

yes naveen is

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#279

as the two lovers lay
in each other's arms..

plans to destroy their lives were being made......

"saara mission tabaah ho gaya...
na assassination hui...

aur na hi hum defence minister
ko kidnap kar sake.....
kabir bhaai ka gussa saatve aasmaan
par hai..."

"jaanta hoon...
par kiya bhi kya jaa sakta tha...

jaise hi humaara attempt fail hua....
captain rajveer singh shekhawat
ne dono ministers ko
waapis..tight security mein delhi bhej diya..."

"to kya tum so rahe the??...
yeh baat pehle..."

"nahi bata sakta tha...
kisi ko nahi pata tha...
captain bahut shaatir hai Anwar..."

all their codes..their 'marriage'
plans had gone down the drain....

disappointed..they cared no more
if someone even heard the converstaion....

"kabir bhaai ka message mila hai..."

the traitor had reported all his
findings about naina's career ..

the fact that she was in interpol to
kabir..& he'd been furious....

anger that he didn't know
possible was expressed by his hard
..cold features

"us..usne mujhe dhokha...

maar do ...khatam kardo usse...

aur yaad rahe..
aasaan maut nahi honi chaahiye...

tadpa..tadpaa kar maarna ....
itna dard..ki sahaa naa jaaye...
bheekh maange reham ki...

kuch bhi kar..
kuchal car ke neeche...
chotte-chotte tukde kar...
rape her..anything..
but i want her dead..."

even the traitor had been horrified
hearing the brutal ..gory details....

but he knew her...
knew her from the challenge
she'd thrown at him..
in front of everyone..

"nahi kabir bhaai..
uski haar..uski maut mein nahi hai..."

"kya matlab..?"

"maut ka usko koi khauff nahi..
par haan..kuch log hain..

jo usse jaan se bhi pyaare hain...
agar un ko kuch ho jaata hai...
to woh toot jaayegi..."

kabir nodded..understanding...

"theek hai...khatam kardo kisi ko..
usko..jo naina ki jaan hai..
uska aashiq..uska bhaai...
uske dost....koi bhi..."

"mera paas ek plan hai..."

"kya message aaya hai...?"

"kabir bhaai ne tumhaara
plan approve kar diya hai...

bas..u have to execute it properly...
& u'll get what you want...
power...."

the traitor smiled.....
....................................

"now...."
she was spiralling out of control...
"i..can't..stand..it...
i want you....raj..please.........."

her eyes shut tightly....
as she lay aroused..
erotic in his arms...

he smiled..
glad he'd been able to
please her...

but there was something that troubled him...

it was his somewhat 'promise' to navin..

"take me raj!!"
she moaned...

almost nervous...scared of something...

he kissed her..hard on her lips...

comprehending her delightful expression....

"darr lag raha hai mujhse??"

he whispered....nibbling at her
ear..back to the very basics....

"tumse nahin...khud se...
i feel i'm seeing..stars..."

he chuckled...
& began withdrawing....

"what??!...kahaan jaa rahe ho?"
she was sullen..all of a sudden...
"i thought...."

"nahi Nia..i don't think it's
the right time..."

"kya matlab?"
she was aghast...

have i offended him...?..
she wondered...

"naina..woh...i think...
i want you as my virgin bride..."
he loked down..shy..
looking very cute...

she blushed..exceedingly...

never having heard something as romantic
as this before....

her eyes welled up with light tears of
happiness....

she pulled him back in the circle of his arms...
hugging him tightly...

a meeting of bodies...
warm..despite of the cold weather..

a meeting of flesh..

but most importantly....
a meeting of souls...

the moment had passed anyway...
& they both knew it...

she nodded...

all of a sudden ..an idea hit her head...

she grinned...
as he still lay on top of her...
"ab tumhe kya hua?"

"raj...marry me now..."

"what?!!..par..
kaise?...kahaan?...
aur..nanoo..ke bina?"

"kaise..woh tum jaano..
tumhaare saare filmy ideas kahaan gaye??..

nanoo ki chinta mat karo..
he'll be the happiest man in the world..
haan thoda..bhaav zaroor khayega...
zyaada problem hui...to phir se shaadi kar lenge..."

he was shakin his head in disbelief..

how the hell did she come up with such ideas!!
it was..outrageous...but...
exceedingly..tempting to resist...

"our parents will be on the top of the world.."
naina was in a dream world....

"true..but inspite of that...
uncle-aunty...mom-dad...
dono se bahut jhaad padegi..
soch lo??"

she winked...
"masti bina zindagi mein mazaa
kahaan hai??"

"accha!!..masti soojh rahi tumhe.."

he tickled her all over...
kissing her naval..
hiding his face in the valley
between her breasts...

"raaaaj!!!..."
he was arousing her again...
"stttttttttttttttop!!"

and he did...

"alright!...shaadi kahaan karni hai?
yahaan mandir..gurudwaara..pandit..
koi nahi hai..."
he smiled...

"to phir ek hi jagaah bachi na raj.."

"kahaan?"

"yahaan!..marry me right in my arms...
aise hi.."

he thought for a second...& grinned....
"aankhen band karo..."

"kyon?"

"naina!!..close your eyes.."

she did....

he scooped her up in his arms...
made her stand....

finding a sharp log...
he cut his thumb..just a little bit..
till blood oozed out...

filmy...

naaaa!..this is original!!
he chuckled...

"aankhen kholoon?"
she was impatient...

he smoothened her hair out...
with his fingers...

aur finally..

captain rajveer singh shekhawat ne...
naina singh ahluwalia ki maang bhardi...

his touch told her what he'd done...
and she flickered her eyes open...

hoping to face him....

but she was devoid of dat...
for what she faced was something far more
passionate....

she looked into the mirror...
and saw a married couple....
holding each other tightly....

raj winked at her..
sucking his thumb...
"kaisi rahi?"

a tear dropped down her cheek...

"naina!!..jaan... kya hua?"
he turned her around....
wiping her tear off.....

"hmmm...iski permission to aapko nahi milegi...."

she'd never felt so blissful before...

'jaan'..dat sounded beautiful...
coming from his lips....

"kiski..kiski permission....rone ki?..
kyon?"..she wondered...

"right!..jab tak main tumhaare saath hoon...
i don't want to ever see tears in your eyes...
samajh aayi..Mrs Shekhawat??"

she nodded...feeling light-headed...
drunk...

it was hard to digest....

everything had happened so quickly...

a second ago..he was her lover...
& now..he was much more...

her husband..her soulmate...
and her lover!!!
(how could she ever forget the lover bit!!)

"aur ab..."
he whispered..
skillfully using his hands all
over her nude body...

"it's time to complete..our unfinished task...!.."

he winked...picked her up again....
placing her on the bed....
& lied on top of her.....

this time there was absolutely
no stopping them....

they were married..&
it was their wedding night...

who would have thought...
just a few hours back..
she was locked up in prison...
with her world-upside down...

& now.....

she was groaning again..moaning
with the intense pleasure.....

he explored her body again..

leaving a tingling excitement behind...

his hands moved to her breasts..
followed by his mouth...

as a sigh escaped her lips....

his caress grew intimate...
pressing deeper...

she put her hands on his shoulders...
opening and closing them...

as a flame leaped within her....
her breath caught in her chest....

his arms too trembled with strain..

his knee eased between her parted thighs...
mouth possessing her with hot..
passionate longing....

she could feel his need...
rubbing against her...

and yet again..she found herself...
ready to have him in her...make him..
a part of her....

"take....me.."
was all she managed....

& this time he did....
without any hesitstion....

the first time he possessed her...

her senses reeled..

for a second..a sharp ..
rending pain..made her gasp..

as her nails dug into his shoulders...

for a fleeting moment they stood still..
their hearts beating frantically....

then..it came again..easier this time....

filling her..sending waves of warmth in her...

he rubbed himself against her stomach....

and their gentleness disappeared...
as lust took over....

which had been contained so far.....

all control bursted....

as
he thrust into her again..& again...
sharply mounting their enjoyment.....

they reached higher scales..
unquenched...
bodies fusing in a union...

mystically...
then came the perfect..
gentle descent...

they reached a plateau of ecstacy...
slowly coming back to earth

they lay close...
her hair entwined in his fingers..

his hands..taking full advantage of the
movement of his hips..

as she moved up a bit...
to kiss him.....

exhausted...they lay together....
unaware..uncaring...of the world outside....

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#280

..
that's all folks...

finally...shaadi ho hi gayi!!!

kyon..tha na surprise?????????????

i know kaafi filmy update hai
but then...maine pehle hi kaha tha
ki thodi weird ho jaaye to digest kar lena!!!!

anyway...tell me how the update was...
hope you enjoyed it!!

waitin for loads of replies!!!

is baar nahi aayi..
to phir kab

this info is for those who don't read these scenes....

guys..last update ka initial para sab pad sakte hai..
the one in blue & purple...(not the red one!)
woh terrorist conversation important hai!!

and i'd like to inform them dat naina & raj stand married..
(don't ask how!!)

jahaan tak traitor ka sawaal hai.

aagli update main traitor ka naam bataane ki soch rahi hoon...
let's see how it turns out

gtg.......
luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv uuuuuuuuuuu
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago