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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#191

fantastic update gazal, but I feel so sorry for Raj and myself as well cause this means I'll not get to see any of their romance for some time

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#192

Nice part. But cant c Raj in pain. I knw Naina is doing this 4 them but pls make the lovers' union soon. UD SOON.

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: springsign29
the ud was really gud,was sorry to c raj suffer so much ,but naina bhi kya kare she is trying to save raj's life.update soon.

ya u r right

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: sea_nyx
fantastic update gazal, but I feel so sorry for Raj and myself as well cause this means I'll not get to see any of their romance for some time

thanks for comment

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#195

4 months later....

IN KASHMIR:

"alright guys!..
listen up!"

raj clapped his hands ....
as they all looked around dreamily...

"i know this place looks heavenly...
but we've got a mission to take care off!...
huda!"

raj slapped him lightly....

he had been admiring a kashmiri woman in burqa!...
"kya chaal hai..!"
he'd spoken aloud....

"kya hai??..maar kyon raha hai...?"

"focus!"

"wahi to kar raha tha..."
raj glared at his comment...

"khundak mat kha!...
khud to kudiyon se mooh pher rakha hai..
mujhe kyon brahmachaari banaana chahta hai!"

"bakwaas ka time nahi hai huda...
be serious for once please!"

"sorry.."
huda apologised..
noticing dat unitntentionally he'd hurt raj...

"no problem...dhyaan se suno...
we're 5 heading a unit of about
20 soldiers from delhi..
& the rest are from here..."

"par raj..already itni security hai..
humaari kya zaroorat hai?"
abhimanyu asked him...

"zaroorat hai...
coz that entire unit is reserved to protect
our ministers only on special occasions...
hum nahi jaante ki terrorists kya karne waale hain...
we've no clue about their strategies!..
to humme aise log chahiye...
in ordinary clothes..uniform mein nahi...
jo 24x7 ministers ke saath rahein..."

"and we'll be taking turns doing that?"
aalekh questioned..

"absolutely...."

"aur tab tak baaki log kahaan rehne waale hain?"
huda asked...

"take your pick...
either at the hotel..or at my ranch..."
raj answered...

"your ranch? here in kashmir?"
abhimanyu seemed impressed...

"dad ne kharida tha..bahut saal pehle...
it's huge....outskirts par..
with a beautiful view...& lots of room...
navin aur meri families ne yahaan bahut se
holidays saath manaai hain.."

he said this a bit painfully....

"to phir sochna kya hai...wahin chalte
hain....!"
huda smiled...

"hang on!...tu, aalekh aur abhi...
tum logon ko sabse pehle report karna hai...
u can come in the evening...
filhaal...march off!"

"main hi kyon sabse pehle!!!"
he cribbed....

"kuch kar na boss??"
huda asked raj....

"mere haath mein nahi hai yaar....
planning ko follow to karna padega..
aalekh u have the address right?"

"yup!..main le aaoonga sabko..cya!"

& the guys went away....
...................................

as raj & navin drove....
navin told him....

"tehzeeb ka kya karna hai??"

"kya karna hai?.."

"i mean..woh bhi to wahin ranch par hai na..
u know how her modelling
assignment got postponed & stuff.."

"ek second!....don't tell me tune usse humaare
arrival ke baare mein inform nahi kiya hai!"

"ah.." he figeted uncomfortably...
"nahi kiya..."

"nanoo!..you're impossible!..
ab suddenly us par 5 soldiers ki care ka...
shit yaar!"

"hum dono ki theek se baat bhi nahi hui hai raj..
from the past 1 month...
she's been too busy...
sirf haal-chaal.."

"bahaane mat bana!...
i bet you wanted to surprise her...?"
he asked sarcastically...

navin nodded...feeling a bit guilty...

raj sighed...
"ab kar bhi kya sakte hain..
hotel mein rehna koi chahega nahin..
rooms ki to problem hai nahin..
we'll manage sumhow!"
...............................................

although it was march..
the weather was freezing.....

it snowed occasionaly....

raj & navin finally arrived...

KNOCK-KNOCK...

An old man rushed forward to open the door..
while tehzeeb felt a bit alarmed...

kaun ho sakta hai???

"kaka...dekhna to kaun hai..."

"haan beti..."

the man stood shocked at the sight of
the two handsome men at the door...

"raj...nanoo baba!!"

"kaka!!"

navin picked the man up
& whirled him around before putting
him down...

"kya haal hai aapka kaka?"

raj smiled...warmed at the sight of the caretaker
who'd been with him for the last 25 years...
watching him grow...

"main to theek hoon beta..
par tum dono achaanak...
arrey...andar to chalo..
baahar bahut thand hai..."

a fire warmed the living room...
it indeed was a cosy place....

raj looked around...
lots of memories clouded his mind...

they'd had picnics here...
he remembered playin hide & seek
with nia & nanoo...

he remembered the day wen they'd
mixed ink in the flour to avoid eating ghar-ka -khaana..
& how nanoo & raj had been punished...
while nia escaped scot-free...
inspite of it being her idea....

nia....why did everything stop there???

tum mera peecha kab chodogi naina...

"navin!!...
raj....tum dono.."

he was shaken out of his reverie wen tehzeeb
stepped in the living room....

while navin rushed to take her in
his arms...shouting a big surprise...

raj had the awkward feeling dat
she wasn't happy to see them there...!!

maybe i was just imagining...
he wondered...
wen he saw her warmly smiling at navin...
& then at him..

"kaise ho raj?"

he knew dat flatly meant...
"are u still thinking about naina??!!!"

& he couldn't meet her eyes....

"theek hoon..."
he turned away...

"we're sorry..mujhe nahin pata tha
ki navin ne tumhe bataaya nahi ki we're coming..."

"iski surprises dene ki aadat kahaan
jaane waali hai..."
she pulled his cheek lovingly...

"ah..maybe you won't like it...
par aalekh, abhi, huda...bhi shaam tak aa jaayenge...
there are ample rooms..to
tumhe koi problem nahi hogi...."
raj made it clear to her....

"if u guys want...i could shift out of here..."

she knew she couldn't!..it wasn't possible!

"arrey nahi...we'll all manage...
filhaal...kaka!!"
he shouted..

"mai apne room mein jaa raha hoon...
fresh hone ke liye...
...aur haan baaki rooms bhi
theek kar dijiye....dost log aayenge.."
raj smiled....

tehzeeb froze....

instantly she stopped him....

"ah...raj...tum koi aur room le lo please..."

"huh...why?"

"woh..woh mera saara samaan wahaan bikhra hua hai..."

"par tum to us room mein se aayi na...."
he pointed towards one...

"haan....i'm sleeping there only...
par woh room...i've spread my suitcases all over...
i'm sorry..."

"shut-up tazz!...chalta hai yaar....
main doosra room le leta hoon...
they're all the same...."
he went away...

tehzeeb sighed....

bach gayi!
warna aaj to bas......
kuch karna padega!....

.....................................

he regreted his decision...

mujhe yahaan nahi aana chahiye tha....
every room..every corner screams about her...

har kone mein tum ho yahaan...
mera saara bachpan tum ho...
saari masti tumhaare saath kari hai....

you're a part of my life...

hell!...ho kahaan tum???

Akele tanha …
jiya na jaaye tere bin

bhulana tujhko…
bhulana tujhko namunkin

sulagti hain meri raatein
sulagte hain mere palchinn
sulagte din…

mujhe tanhaiyaan deke
mera jeena kiya mushkil

tere sadme ke sadmon se
tadapta hai bechara dil

tere saare gunahho ki
sanam tujhko saza dunga

mohabbat ki tadap kya hai
tujhe bhi main bata dunga

barasti hain meri aankhein
akelepan mein rota hun

tujhe hi yaad karta hun
sukoon se main na sota hun

nahi!....i don't want to see you ever again...

although he forced himself to believe
dat he was no longer in love wid her...

yet wenever the oppurtunity came...
he overheard navin talking to his mom in london....

only yesterday he'd heard them saying dat
naina was doing brilliantly at her job in london...

he wondered why she hadn't failed......?????
why aren't u miserable????

he went to the bathroom to freshen up...

shit...!..mera spare samaan to abhi bhi
us room mein hain...my towels..& stuff...

i'll have to go get it!...
he sighed....feeling lathargic after the journey....

...........................

"arrey..room ki light bhi on hai...
lagta hai tehzeeb andar hai...
anyway.."

he tried to open the door...but it didn't budge...

he knocked..but no one answered either...

lagta hai thand se jam ho gaya hai...
he tried harder....

finally he managed to open it...
after a lot of struggle.....

"tehzeeb tum....."

his eyes widened in shock....
he felt the ground slipping beneath his feet...

wat d hell?????

yeh sab............

his eyes widened in shock....
he felt the ground slipping beneath his feet...

wat d hell?????

yeh sab kya ho raha hai?????
was dat......

tehzeeb stood frozen as if caught guilty
doing something she shouldn't have....

"ra...raj?....aap log please apna kaam
kariye....i'm sorry doctors...."
she stammered

"tehzeeb yeh sab..woh...doctors..
that's n....naina!!"
he pushed open d door wider & almost
tumbled inside...

"dekhiye..please take him away..."

"naina...nia!!"

he stood utterly bewildered at watching her lifeless form...
stacked on the bed ....like a statue....
& knelt beside her...touching her face...

there was an iron band around her head...
& lots of needles were being stuck into her...
one after the other....with a great force...

raj winced...&
screamed at the doctors...

"stop it!!"
he rushed forward & held one of them tightly...

a fire in his eyes...
he'd kill anyone who'd hurt her...!

everthing was forgotten as he took her state in...
she seemed minute ...pale...

her skin no longer shone as it usually did....

one of her leg was in plaster ..
but wat terrified him the most was the
fact that her entire chest region
was wrapped away in bandages...

her hair were neatly tied back
as if someone was doing them for her...

tears sprang in his eyes as he stared
at her unconscious figure......

Har Ghadi Badal Rahi Hai Roop Zindagi....
Chaav Hai Kabhi..kabhi Hai Dhoop Zidnagi...
Har Pal Yahan ...Jee Bhar Jiyo ...
Jo Hai Sama...
Kal Ho Na Ho....

he was seeing her after 5 months...
probably the most horrifying 5 months of his life..
that he'd had to spend with nothing but her memories....
hating them...loving them....

he'd cursed her a million times perhaps..
wondered why she didn't suffer as much..

but never wished it to happen to her...
atleast nowhere in his deepest of thoughts....

"raj..please baahar chalo....
i'll explain..."

he didn't budge...
"raj please!!"

"yeh log naina ko haath bhi nahin
lagaayenge!"

he warned...looking menacingly at the doctors!

"doctors ko apna kaam karne
do raj...please.."
tehzeeb tried to persuade him...

"impossible!
can't you see wat dey're doing to her??!!!
woh needles...usko dard...
her body....navin...navin kahaan hai??"

a grief in his eyes...
he suddenly remembered navin...

"i'll be back in a second..
& if..if u even..touch her..
i swear u guys are dead!"
he walked out..while the doctors stopped..
scared of him at last...

tehzeeb followed him
pointing at the docs to proceed...

"navin!!"
raj shouted...

"kya hua...?
chilla kyon...raj...raj are u alright??
tere chehre ka rang kyon udh gaya hai?"
nanoo sounded tensed....

"navin...nia...woh...
nia..."

this was the time wen the shock
actually settled down in his heart ..
registered....&
he felt an agony pierce through him...

"nia...kya hua usse?
raj..bol...woh to london mein hain ...
wat??"

raj pointed towards the room..

"kya hai wahaan?"

this time tehzeeb answered...
"naina...naina hai..."
...........................................

meanwhile aalekh, huda & abhimanyu
stood in the same hotel where the ministers
were stayin for the peace talks...

"wow!...kya jagah hai na?"
huda exclaimed...

"kya..hotel yaan kashmir??"
aalekh asked...

"both...!"abhimanyu interrupted

"hmmmm..par main bahut thak chuka hoon yaar..
i want to go take some rest...."
aalekh grinned

"filhaal to us mein time hain...
& we need to stay alert..

sumhow mujhe lagta hai ki woh log attack to
event ke time hi karenge..."
huda thought aloud....

"tera matlab hai jab ministers
ne speech deni hai...
press reporters hone ke bawajood attack hoga??"
aalekh questioned....

"press repoters hai isiliye to keh
raha hoon....the terrorists will
want dat attack media cover kare..."
huda answered...

"i guess you're right...
aam janta mein dehshat failaane
ka sabse accha tareeka bhi
to yahi hai....media!"

they were to spend about 3 hours here...
in different corners of the place..

while one was posted outside at the entrance...
the other stood at the backside of the hotel...
and the third roamed about in the corridoors inside...
....................................................

in the same hotel...
long ago...a room had been booked by a family...
or so the hotel manager thought....

the family had booked one of the biggest
rooms in the hotel since they were
7 in number...

a grandfather, grandmother, 3 sons, one with a wife..

the family was discussing the
marriage plans of their second son....

"dulhan ka kaam khatam ho gaya hai kya?"

"jee...."

"shaabaash...koi saboot?"

the son hung his head in denial...

"tumhaari hone waali biwi bahut chalaak hai...
jab tak pakka saboot nahi milta..
hum shaadi kaise kar de...
kahin us ne beech mein kuch kar diya to?"

"par maine khud usse ring pehnaai thi...
aur abhi to woh gehri neend so rahi hogi....
uthne ka chaance....kam hai"

"aakhri baar tum usse kab mile the?
aur tumne usse kaise gale lagaaya?"

"aakhri baar.."
the son thought for awhile..
"arrey...jab woh jail se nikal rahi thi tab...
kabir bhaai se milkar...."

SLAP!

"kitni baar tumse kaha hai ki
yeh naam zubaan par mat laao!
khatra hai!"

"maafi...."

the third son looked astounded...
"dulhan....woh to london mein thi na...
kashmir kab aayi?"

"bahut samay se yahin hai...
waise beta delhi ka business
kaisa chal raha hai?"

"thap gaya hai..
kayi competitors mere peeche hai..
to supply kam ho gayi hai...
iski dulhan ka hi to haath tha...."

"isiliye to usse ring jaldi pehna di gayi...
ab kahin vaadiyon mein bhatak rahi hogi..."

"main chalta hoon....shaadi ki tayaari karni hai.."

"khuda-haafiz"

.......................................
to a person standing outside...

the conversation would either seem genuine
or weird but never possibly could anyone
(except u guys!!!)
guess or imagine dat inside the room a
terrorist organisation had just finished discussing the plans
for an attempt to kill the prime-minister...

& more importantly the fact...
that they'd tried to kill naina!

in their coded language..

naina had been the dulhan....

the ring was the bullet that had pierced her heart...

the shaadi was the assassination plan...

the business was drug trafficking..

& the competitors were the police.......!

.............................

abhimanyu was happy with the way
everything had gone off....
he smiled...
..............................

"kya hai wahaan?"

this time tehzeeb answered...
"naina...naina hai..."

"wat??!
nia kashmir mein hai??
kab se?"
he smiled at last...

"navin...go in...."
she didn't have the courage to tell
him wat he might see inside....

navin a bit surprised
rushed in.....

the moment his eyes set on
her...his breathing seemed to cease...

his mind seemed to stop functioning....

"yeh...wat....?..who?"
only monosyllables came out....

his reaction was pretty similar to
raj's...
only he didn't have to witness them injecting her....!
............................................

all 3 of them sat in front of the fire....
a mug of coffee thrust into their hands
by kaka...

a kaka who now seemed equally subdued....

"wat d hell is goin on tehzeeb?"
raj finally asked...
"naina ki yeh haalat..."

"wat i don't understand is..."
nanoo interupted...
"ma ne mujhse jhoot kyon bola!"

"kyon ki...naina ne unse promise liya tha...
she didn't want to tell anyone about her location..."

"except you!"
navin scoffed..sarcastically....

"haan navin...except me....
i promised her ki main chup rahoongi...."
her eyes dropped...

"yeh yahaan kitne dino se hain...?
aur iski chot..another of those attacks??"
raj's eyes widened....

then spoke...
"par yeh kaise ho sakta hai...
yahaan kashmir mein naina ko
jaanta hi kaun hai?"

he was outright confused....

"nahi...koi attach nahi tha..."
she had to do this!

"to phir?"

"skiing karte hue massive accident ho gaya...
us din kaafi tez toofaan tha..
i told her not to leave...
par naina maani nahi.....
supposedly she hit straight into the bark of a tree...."

there i've done it....
wasn't so difficult...
i'm sorry for lying guys...

raj winced....

"aur naina yahaan kabse hai?
as in how may days...?"
he had to ask...
somehow it made a lot of difference to everything...

"last ..."

"last what?"

"last 3 months..."

"3 months!!..
naina india mein hi thi all this while....
my God!"

he just couldn't believe wat he heard....
...
woh mere itne paas thi aur ....
phir bhi...itna door.....

Chaahe Jo Tumhe Poore Dil Se....
Milta Hai Woh Mushkil Se...
Aisa Jo Koi Kahin Hai ...
Bas Vahi Sabse Hasin Hai....

Us Haath Ko Tum Thaam Lo....
.woh Meherbaan Kal Ho Na Ho....
Har Pal Yahan ...
Jee Bhar Jiyo Jo Hai Sama...
Kal Ho Na Ho....

Palko Ke Leke Saaye...
Paas Koi Jo Aaye....
Lakh Sambhalo Paagal Dil Ko...
Dil Dhadke Hi Jaaye...

Par Sochlo Is Pal Hai Jo...
Woh Dastan Kal Ho Na Ho...

"why the hell didn't you....
kya sirf naina tumhaari dost hai...
meri taraf tumhaara koi farz nahi hai tehzeeb..??"
raj grieved....horrified at how everthing was turning out

"don't put me in a fix raj..
tum jaante ho ki main tum dono
ke liye ek baraabar hoon...
it's just dat..
sab kuch itni jaldi ho gaya..."

"woh sab chodo ...
just tell me one thing....

kya naina ki condition improve ho rahi hai??
i mean is dat why she's here &
not at some hospital??"
navin asked.......

"hospital.....
nahi...she's being treated here only...
ghar par...baahar..."

she instantly shut-up...
regretting the fact that she'd almost let
the truth slip out....

"by the way..
yeh accident hua kab?"
raj asked...

tehzeeb was tired..
frustrated of answering their endless questions...
sick of lying one after the other ...

why couldn't she be just blunt &
straight-forward???!!!

yet..she knew why she couldn't....

she remembered the time wen nia
had stepped into this house...

soaking in blood...

clutching her chest...

& all she'd been able to manage

was a don't tell them..
& no hospital...

before she'd fallen onto the ground....
& succumbed to this state....!

"bataao tazz...raj ne kuch poocha..
accident kab hua tha?"

suddenly they heard a doctor yell at
the other.....

"c'mon!!..immediately...
shocks do!!..
now!!!..."

"wat d hell!!!"
all three of them rushed in....

they saw her body rising
up a bit & falling down with a thump...

"d..doctor..yeh...sab...naina theek to hai?"
tehzeeb fumbled...

"dekhiye...
aaj suddenly inhone saari medications
ko respond karna band kar diya hai...
aise to inki state partial se totally aisi ho jaayegi.."

"to kya shock therapy..."

"there's a limit to it....
isse zyaada shocks diye to yaan to yeh
mentally instable ho jaayengi...
warna...warna she'll...die..."

navin almost screamed...
and raj clutched him tightly....
both stupefied....

"ghabraiye mat...
abhi inki heartbeats phir normal ho gayi hai...
but this may happen again...
isiliye to humme inke saath 24x7 rehna padta hai"
one of the docs sympathised with the guys...

"now..please leave.."
............................
"itna kuch ho gaya yaar.."
navin was hugging raj & crying..
& raj couldn't stop his tears either...

"nia...hosh mein kab tak aayegi??
i mean beech mein kya woh..
kabhi respond..."
raj stammered..

tehzeeb didn't know how to tell him..
they were already broken-hearted...

"i thought u guys might have guessed...
naina ki yeh haalat pichle 2.5 months se hain...
she's...
she's slipped into a partial coma.."

"coma!!"

they felt dizzy..as everything halted..

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#196

well guys....
dat's it for today...

i think aaj to update kaafi long hi thi....

i hope you enjoyed it...

don't ask me main sabko itna dard kyon de rahi hoon!
but i promise a very
romantic scene after sometime!!!

haan ji to ab bataaiye kaisa laga...

nia is back...
(kaafi jaldi le aayi na waapis!)

btw...medical procedures sab guesswork hai...
so don't curse me for it!

btw..woh terrorists ka scene kaisa laga!!!????

& lastly..
naina's in coma....!

so while all of us cried for raj...
naina was dying!!

gtg...hope to
see looooooooooooong replies..
cyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#197

wow Gazal, looks like it's not Naina but we bechare readers who are getting the shock treatments 😆.....and yaar, like her even we have reached the limits of our ability to stand it. Any more and our own mental stability will be affected 🤪.

But poor raj 😭 imagine suddenly getting such a shock....and poor naina as well. Just like you brought her back so quickly (thanx for that btw 🤗 ) we want the romantic scenes equally quickly

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springsign29

@springsign29

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#198

feeling so sorry for naina as well as raj ,both r suffering without any fault of theirs.......naina's state is pitiable but i dont think that tehzeeb is at any fault, she was just keeping naina's promise.update soon