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Posted: 16 years ago

#211

dat's all guys....

got to go...

cyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

waitin 4 replies!!

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#212

Nice part n a very gud twist must say. Poor Naina had to bear a lot. But I hope now everything will be f9 coz Raj is also here. BTW Its gud dat she is regaining consciousness. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Nice part n a very gud twist must say. Poor Naina had to bear a lot. But I hope now everything will be f9 coz Raj is also here. BTW Its gud dat she is regaining consciousness. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

thanks for comment

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#214

"r..raj..."

he stirred....
& then his eyes suddenly flew wide open...

was this a miracle???

he looked at her...but she lay still....

then he turned around..
to see if someone stood at the door...
but there was no one...

par maine abhi kisi ki aawaaz....
naina hi to...
lekin ab....who the hell called me??

a sudden disappointment filled him...
he guessed he'd just been dreaming....

holding her hand tightly in his...
he lifted it till his cheek...
& then lightly kissed it.....

suddenly he was stunned...
he'd seen her eyes flicker...

"naina...nia??"
he called out lightly...

a light movement...& t
hen her eyelashes quivered...

slowly....she opened them....

yes..his spirits rose...
yes she was out of coma!!

as her eyes adjusted to
the darkness in the room...
the bedside lamp being the only source of light...
raj's eyes began to glisten with tears....
the joy spreading in him steadily....

she saw him sitting next to her...
her hands clutched in his.....
& she stared in the deep pools of his beautiful eyes....

"tum"
was the first word dat escaped her lips....

& he felt his heart give out a leap...

visions flashed through her mind...
as she recalled all dat had happened between them..

yet...inspite of everything...
he sat here...holding on to her..

kahin tehzeeb ne sab kuch bata...?
no!!...dat would ruin everthing......

abhi woh log sirf mujhe...
ek reporter ko maarna chaahte the...

& the last time...
unhe shaayad kabir ne meri supaari di hogi...

agar un logon ko raj ke baare mein pata chala..
to woh isse bhi jaan se...aur bhaai ko bhi...

tears of sheer frustration rose to her eyes....
she'd reached too far to come back....

kaash..kaash main marr hi gayi hoti...
sab khatam ho gaya hota...

a tear trickled down her cheek....

"nia!!....kya hua yaar?
shit!!...u in some sort of a pain...
dard ho raha hai kya?"

she shook her head....
as he wiped her tear off...
"i'm sorry raj...for everthing..."

time stood still
as he accepted her apology...
& did much more than simply forgive her....

he placed his trust in her yet again...
giving his heart in her hands .....

Tere liye, hum hain jiye, honton ko siye ....
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye ...
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye...
Tere liye, tere liye ....

Zindagi, le ke aayi hai,...
beete dinon ki kitaab ...
Ghere hain, ab hamein,
yaadein be-hisaab ..
Bin poochhe, mile mujhe,
kitne saare jawaab...

Chaaha tha kya, paaya hai kya, hamne dekhiye ...
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye.

Kya kahoon, duniya ne kiya,
mujh se kaisa bair ...
Hukam tha, main jiyun, ...
lekin tere baghair ...
Naadaan hai woh, kehte hain jo,
mere liye tum ho ghair...

Kitne sitam, hampe sanam, logon ne kiye ...
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye..
Tere liye, tere liye ...

"don't worry about anything...
main doctor ko le kar aata hoon...."
he left her...

she had a feeling dat she was losing him again..
specially wen he left hold of her hand.....

she'd felt blissful wen his fingers
had been entwined with hers..
just like old times...

.......

"doctor...navin....guys get up!!"
he shouted....

it was 3 and all of them sleepy stepped out...

the doctor rushing out fastest anticipating
an emergency....

raj smiled & sent him in...
telling him dat his patient was out of her coma...

the doctor's mouth fell open....
and he decided dat he'd rather trust his eyes
dan this man's words..

a man..who seemed a little ...unstable to him...
a little too much in love!

everyone crowded around in the living room...
rubbing themselves as they felt cold...
snuggling out of their warm beds...

abhimanyu stifled a yawn...
"kya hua?..sab theek to hain?"

he'd returned a little after dinner time..
& had been equally heart-broken to
hear about naina's condition...

"bol raj...?"
navin asked...a little tense...

"good news hai navin...
naina's fine...
out of coma....."
he had a wide grin on his face.....

"wat??!!"
all of them screamed loudly.....

navin ran inside.....
at the speed of lightening....

stumbling...
trembling..he approached his sister....
"naina!!"
he fell down on his knees...

shaking he touched her face....
"wat d hell were you upto??!
tu...kaisi hai sis?"

"rona ...band...kar...nanoo..."

he hadn't even realised dat his face was wet...

"kis baat ka badla le rahi hai yaar...
ek hi lifetime mein kitni baar
khud ka band bajaayegi...
mujhe heart-attack se maarna hai kya??"

she smiled...&
her eyes began to droop a bit...

"a...i'm sorry..please baahar jaaiye..
let her sleep abhi..
subaah tak she'll be perfect...

inki chest bandages remove kar denge...
but yes...the plaster might have to
be there a little longer...

i.e if she's unable to walk tomorrow.."
the doctor told navin..
who reluctantly left her alone.....
.............................................

dat night the family of terrorists at the hotel
had received a phone call...

"haan beta bolo?"

"shaadi ki sabhi tayaariyaan ho gayi hai..
kal shaam ko function hai...
bas wahi par saare phere le lenge..."

"shaabash..."

"ah..ek buri khabar bhi hai..."

"kya hua?"

"dulhan neend se jaag gayi hai..."

"kya??!!..par usse to humne.."

"nahi..galat khabar thi...
woh uthi hui hai..
kabhi soyi thi hi nahi..
par haan..uski haalat theek nahi hai.."

"theek hai..
filhaal shaadi kar de..
phir uska bhi soch lenge..."

the prime minister was supposed to
be assassinated tomorrow at the peace talk
dat he was delivering at the imperial grounds....
in the evening...

the terrorists assured that media
would cover the event....

& as far as naina was concerned...
they had an entirely different plan for her.....!
..................................

"raj..aaj morning mein kiski duty hai hotel
mein??..i mean all of us...or"
huda asked...the following day...

"well for the first few hours in
the morning it's just me,
navin & you...
aalekh aur abhimanyu baad mein aayenge...
hotel se imperial grounds tak hum paancho ko
ministers ko cover dena hai..."

he was a bit upset...
he wanted to talk to naina before he left...
but duty.....

"raj...main ek baat kahoon...
why don't i go right now instead of you??"
abhimanyu questioned...

"but you returned pretty late last night...
tujhe rest..."

"no problem yaar...mujhse zyaada rest ki
zaroorat tujhe lag rahi hai...
you haven't slept a bit it seems..."

"u sure...?"

"positive..."

"thanx a ton yaar..."

navin & tehzeeb were still not on talkin terms..
& it bugged raj...

"navin..chod na yaar...
ab naina theek hai na...
forget everything...."

"but.."

"navin!!"

"alright...!"

"great!"
raj smiled...
"i'll send her to you"

raj yahaan apna kaam nikaal raha tha..
sending tazz out would mean dat he &
nia would get some time alone!!

he went upto naina's room..
& saw tehzeeb helping her drink her soup...

she was free of her bandages now...
& since she'd walked a bit..

the doctor had decided her leg had had
enough rest...although she was warned to
be a bit careful!!

her plaster was off too..& she lay on her bed...

making a sick face as she swallowed her
disgusting soup!!

raj chuckled at her expression...
& the ladies looked up...

"kitne nakhre hai madam ke!!.."
tehzeeb sighed...

"tazz..navin bula raha hai..
u go..i'll make sure she drinks it...."

tehzeeb smiled...
& went away....

raj sat down next to her...
on her bed..."so..how do you feel?"

"much better...body's ..a bit..sore"
her smile had disappeared...
it was time to answer his questions...

he knew why her body was sore...
the way those injections had been given to her...
he shuddered...

"raj...woh..maine...tumse ..."
it was very difficult for her....

"shhhhh...kuch nahi jaana chaahta main...
there's a time for everything..
aur abhi..soup ka time hain..."

"you've..."
before she could say anything..
he thrust a spoon of soup in her mouth....

she smiled... understanding him....

i'd feel cheated ...if i was in your place..
par tum..how could u still love me??

it hurt her dat she'd had to lie to him...
but .....

he fed her for a long time...
spoon after spoon gazing in her eyes...

she couldn't meet them..

finally she refused the next spoon...
wiping her eyes...but the next tear dropped...
"maine...tumhe ..dhoka...nahi diya raj...
trust me..."

"i do....
i guess i always will...
even if you shoot me dead..."

she closed her eyes...

"main tumhe chod kar nahi jaane
waala naina...
even if you push me away this time..."

dil keh raha hain ...
tujhse yu rishta jod lu...
teri dhadkano ko chu lu ...
tera jism odh lu ...

aankhon mein teri hain mera he chehra ...
chahe tu yeh maane ya na maane....
teri mohabbat pe hain mera pehra...
chahe tu yeh jaane ya na jaane...

tere liye main ...
jaate hue lamho ko mod lu..
teri dhadkano ko chu lu...
tera jism odh lu....

bechaini ko chain tune diya hain ...
bin tere mushkil hain reh paana...
ho paana hain tujhko hain..
yeh tay kar liya hain...
tu hain ishq mera jaane jaana...
tere labo se pyar ki kaliya tod lu...
teri dhadkano ko chu lu ..
tera jism odh lu....

they had stayed away too long from each other...
but the distance couldn't reduce their feelings ...
their emotions ,their love...

and as of now...even this little distance between
them seemed a lot....

absolutely involuntarily...

raj found himself kissing her...
while she drank the sweetness from his lips...
thirsty...

the kiss was exceedingly passionate...
borne out of a 5 month separation...
dat had been equally torturous for both...

they were rejuvinating themselves....

it was a revival of sorts...
a springing back to life.....
a home-coming....

his hands slipped through her nightgown...
massaging her back...

while hers held on to his neck...

his lips moved downward..to the hollow
in her neck....as she moaned...
filling the long gap..pleading for more....

she shifted a bit to thrust
herself fully into his arms...
& her gown slipped upward....
exposing her thigh...

his hand rested there for awhile...
caressing it....

there was an urge in them to cross all limits....
but the time proved inoppurtune....
as they heard footsteps..
& separated....

he pulled down her gown...
covering her properly...

"raj.." aalekh peeped in...
"we'll leave in 15 minutes ok...
plan shaayad change hua hai...
jaldi jaana padega..."
he smiled..winked at naina & left...

raj grinned...
"bahut din ho gaye na...."

she was hurt...

it was all because of her..
dat dey'd had to stay apart for so long...
but she would be doing the same
mistake again....

"zyaada mat socho...
anyway...tumhe is weather mein skiing ki kya soojhi??"

"skiing??"
she stood confused...

"haan..tumhaara acc..

nahi..kuch nahin...
i thought u went to ski..."

it struck him..
dat tehzeeb had lied to everyone.......

he needed answers now..
& he knew clearly whom to approach...

"main chalta hoon...& one last thing..."

he bent...& planted a quick kiss on her forehead..
"love you.."

........................................

"tehzeeb...we need to talk.."
she stood in the kitchen...

"kya hua??...
naina needs something??"

"no..but i do..."
his voice sounded harsh...
yet...unaccusing....

"bolo...wat is it?"
she persisted wen he stared hard at her....

"naina ki yeh haalat kaisi hui??"

oh-man!!...ab kya ho gaya??
she wondered...

"kya haalat?...accident...?
skiing...i told u na.."

she was really good at acting...
hats off to you!
raj thought....

"i want the truth tehzeeb...
naina ski karne kabhi gayi hi nahi....
ab please....aur jhoot nahi...
bahut ho gaya hai!!"
his volume was rising...

she looked away..
as if guilty...caught....

"go ask her den..."

"usse poochna hota..to kab ka kar chuka hota...
but u know very well dat she'd never tell me willingly..."

"then wat makes you think i will....?"

"tehzeeb!!...please yaar...
already mere aur nia ke relationship
mein bahut pange ho chuke hain....

i've got her back in my life bahut mushkil se...
& i don't want to lose her....

bataao mujhe....

kyon rehte ho tum dono itne pareshaan??
woh kaun si baat hai jo nia ko
khaati rehti hain??
why is she distancing herself from me??
speak-up tazz...meri khaatir..."

he held her shoulders tightly..

the desperation in his voice melted her....

she was tired of keeping everthing a secret...

she knew wat she was
about to do was morally incorrect..

she was getting into forbidden territory...
but she'd had enough...

she sighed...

"alright raj...i'll tell you everything...
maybe then you'll appreciate the
gravity of the situation...
you'll realise ki usne aise kyon react kiya...
but promise me...
this conversation doesn't leave this room..."

he nodded..
glad dat he'd finally know everthing..

"tumse door kyon chali jaati hai baar-baar...
yahi tang kar raha hai na tumhe??
then the answer is pretty simple..

it's for your safety..& navin's too..
she's involved into something ...scary..."

"wat??..."
his curiousity was getting the better of him...

meri naina...involved in wat??

"ready for a long story?"

he nodded...

"Hi..."
she put her hand forward...

"meet me then..tehzeeb ...
i'm not a model...but a psychologist with..."

his eyes widened....................

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#215

well....
dat's a really
loooooooooooooooooooooooooooong update..

& yes..now it's over....

i hope aap log itni long update se bore nahi hue....

anyway...tomorrow will be action packed...
quite a lot of things are goin to happen...

ab bataaiye aaj ki update kaisi thi???

aur haan.....
loooooooooooooooooooooooooooong update means
looooooooooooooooooooooooooooong replies!! ;)

RN romance bhi bahut jaldi aa jayega...
put a little dose even today...

terrorist conversation samajh aati hai..
bahut stupid to nahi hai???

anyway..gtg..
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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springsign29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#216

the updates were really good👏, felt really bad fr naveen, must hav broken his heart to c his nia in such a pitiable condition😭, bt nia is nw out of coma , and i feel happy fr raj and naina nw , bt nothng hurts them anymore.....

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sanjana25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#217

it was really gud plz contd soon

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#218

Wow this is getting more n more interesting n at the same tym Dam mysterious. W8ing 4 the next part. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#219

oooh! what a cliffhanger gazal!!! and that too when all the secrets finally seems about to be revealed....but fantastic part yaar and the songs were really appropriate! can't wait for the nxt part, so update soon and yeah thanx soo much for the pm

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: springsign29
the updates were really good👏, felt really bad fr naveen, must hav broken his heart to c his nia in such a pitiable condition😭, bt nia is nw out of coma , and i feel happy fr raj and naina nw , bt nothng hurts them anymore.....

thanks for comment

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