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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap: mum is happy to see pari happy

Soon everyone began to feel that pari was back to normal. Being with armaan she was entertained and that same time she could tell him everything. Armaan was really close to pari whatever the problem or happiness was, pari always told him. They had formed a relationship which couldn't be explained.

Armaan was a type of boy who would phone pari at middle of the night to ask her when is she coming over. pari suggested him to stay at their house. Even the family agreed , everyone trusted armaan as they knew him since he was small.

Armaan was a foody and loved pari's cooked food, he said that pari had some magic in her hand. Then one night someone came into pari's room , the person face was not shown only his boots and jeans , the person went to pari who was sleeping and pari screamed and the person put his hand over her mouth .the person started to laugh, it was armaan. He laughs at pari , who was standing there in anger. "very funny" pari said. " okay I am sorry, now come with me" "where ??" "it is a surprise , close ur eyes"

Pari wondered where armaan was taking her. She opened her eyes and saw that the whole room was decorated and in the middle there was a cake which said happy birthday pari. Pari couldn't believe it. "u remembered" "of course I remembered" . armaan put the mysic on and started to dance with pari. Then they both cut the cake and armaan gave her the present he brought. Pari opened the present it was a blue shalwar , "please wear this in the party, I am sure u would look beautiful"


The next morning
Everyone was preparing for pari's birthday party. Then tina and shiv came over.
tina was wearing:



shiv was wearing:

"hi tina how are u?" pari said happily. "I am fine" . "shiv are u taking care of my sister" pari said. Shiv was smiling and tina looked at him. " oh so that means shiv is taking good care of tina" "di di" tina said shyly. Armaan came. "omg bhaiya, aap ?" shiv said to armaan. "tum I was looking for u in Mumbai , where were u?" "um.. I am a bit confused here" pari said. "let me explain" armaan said. "well , shiv is my small brother, when I came from america I lost his address , I couldn't find him, but um what his doing here?" "he is my husband" tina said. " and she is my sister" "u mean she is tina , omg u have grown since I saw u"armaan said. "yeh armaan hai" pari said to tina. "omg armaan how are u?" " iam fine" armaan said "that means shiv is that cute little boy call guddu" pari said. "pari I thought u promised not to call me that" shiv said annoyingly. Everyone laughed.
Everything was done , singhania family parties were always the best. Pari came down dressed in blue shalwar. "here comes the birthday girl" everyone said.
pari was wearing:




First their was a pooja , where pari's nazzar was taken then she took ashiwar from here elders. The music went on and everyone started to dance.
armaan was wearing:

Armaan danced to mahiva (from the film kal ho naa ho) with shiv and tina.
priya was wearing



Then priya made annocement "ladies and gentlemen, today is my pyari di's birthday, my di who always cares for us and loves us so much, I would like to share some pics of some memories I have". the light went dim and on the screen the pics were shown. They were from her childhood and some happy moments she had with her sisters , her brothers and her mother. Everyone clapped. "come on everyone it is time to cut the cake" summit said. Pari cut the cake and everyone sang 'happy birthday to u' . she fed the cake to her mother and her brothers , her bhabhi and her sisters and then armaan. The music started , tina danced with shiv, priya with Rajeev.
rajeev was wearing

"can I dance with u" armaan said to pari. "yes" pari said. They both danced , looking into each others eyes, they forgot the world. The episode finishes on them.


Edited by zeefan 1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
OMG! 😃 tht's so kl fab job mate! 👏 finally shiv and tina came 😳
Edited by Wisdom Mistress - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
wonderful part sawdi
oh Rajeev outfit really looked smashing
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
thankx. loved it. continues soon.
khusi❤️
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap: pari looking at armaan eyes.

Suddenly the music stopped pari came back to reality, everyone clapped. "looks like ur sister is really good at dancing" someone said. " my sister is good at everything" shourya said.
Everyone was tired after the party. The servants were taking off the decoration while the women of the house were taking off their jewellery. Pari was also taking hers off , armaan came in to her room. "ur looking really beautiful" armaan said. Pari smiled. "I want to tell u something" , before I go" "ur going" " yeh I have to, my brothers here so.." . armaan was about say what he wanted to when shourya came , " oh armaan here shiv waiting outside for u" armaan and pari went out. " come again tina" pari said. They both hugged. tina , armaan and shiv went into the car and drove off.

The next day
Pari woke up and she had flash backs of armaan. She came down and everyone was looking at her. "kya howa?" "yeh Mr Sharma ha mein nai tumara rishta iska behtay say howa hai" PARI WAS IN SHOCK . He handed over the guy photo. Pari didn't look att the phot and was thinking. " are u happy with this marriage" prena said. Pari nodded and gave a small smile. She went into her room.

Shourya came into her room. "u are happy" " yeh of course bhaiya" " listen pari if u have anything then tell me" " I will" the episode finishes on pari 's worried face.

Sorry guys it 's short but I have lot of homework to do plus I am really sad.



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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
y u sad sawdi and yh talk bout h/w
thats which one:
I.T
Maths
Geography
and Biology Test
all 4 monday
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Hey sawdi tht's fab!! 😃 y r u sad u can tell me as im ur bst frnd!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
nice episod.
loved it
continues soon
❤️khusi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
hey yaaar it has been so long plzzz update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Meray jeevan saathi

Everyone is preparing for the engagement, everyone looks really happy, except pari. "Pari beta" Prena said. "Tum khush to hona?" "Of course mum" she gave a fake smile. " I ca see that beti is not happy" "no it's nothing like that" pari said. " I know when my daughter is happy, ur mother knows everything about u" " nahi maa, wo kya henna kay main nervous feel karahi ho" "bas itne se bat, pari when I got married, I felt the same, but everything will be alright after marriage". "Hey maa, what's with the decoration, anything special?" "Ha special to hai, tumhari dost pari ka rishta paka hogaya hai!" Armaan was in shock. "Rishta?" Armaan said. "Main abi aati ho" Prena said. "Pari ur getting married? I thought.." "Hey Armaan gives a hand here" someone called. Armaan left, while pari was getting more worried.



After there were left alone, "pari ur getting married?" "Yeh I am" "how could u?" "What do u mean?" "I mean that how could u get married, don't u feel anything for me" "no I don't" "then all that going out together, having fun was…" "..Was a attraction" "kya tum mujhe se pyari nahi karti ho?" "Nahi" "look into my eyes and say u don't love me" " I don't love u" tears rolled down armaan's face. He holded pari's wrist tightly "u can't do this to me, I love u so much, u can't!" " Leave my hand Armaan, leave my hand!" "No I won't" pari slapped Armaan "u slapped me, u slapped me!" "Armaan i.. i .." " No pari! No! , I am sorry pari I misunderstood u, I thought u loved me, but I was wrong, I wish u good luck with ur marriage, good luck" Armaan went crying. Pari was crying, she was remembering Armaan, Armaan was remembering her. I am sorry, I am sorry, I had to do this, and if I didn't then u won't go from my life, pari thought. Why pari? why pari? Why did u do this to me? Armaan thought. Background music: Om shanty Om's sad song, jag soona sonna lage

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