first ff updated part12pg9plz comment - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

42

Views

6.4k

Users

8

Frequent Posters

zeefan 1 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#21
i hope everyone continues to like it 😆 😆
zeefan 1 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#22
Meray jeevan saathi
Precap: pari looks in shock to see shiv and tina kissing
Pari rans , she passes her driver who calls her but she doesn't listen.
Why me?? She thinks. Just then her mobile rings "hello" pari says "hello it is me shiv where are u? aren't u coming ??" "nahi mujhe headache hai" "oh anyway the surprise was that I love ur sister, I know that it is a shock for u , but I ensure u I would not carry on this relationship further until u agree to it, here ur sister wants to talk to u" "di , di I am so happy today I got my pyaar , di hello , di aap kuch bolti kyun nahi ho" tina said "nahi mujhe tori see headache hai, may bohot khush ho" "di I am coming" . pari put the phone. She came home . Radha notice her tearful face. "pari kyaa howa , tum ro rahi ho?" "sab kuch barbat hogaya hai bhabhi" pari narrated how she saw shiv kissing tina. "oh pari" radha said. Pari hugged radha.
Shourya had heard everything he was in so much anger. "I will kill him" he said to radha " sunnyay , calm down , dekyay pari ko aap ki surat ha., she needs ur support" radha said. Shourya went to pari and hugged her. She cried.
Priya had heard everything , she then confronted pari. "di how can u do this , it is ur love, I will call tina" "nahi don't do that , u will not tell tina anything , meri kasam" "per di…" "no!". Just then tina entered, she hugged pari , she was so happy but then she noticed that pari didn't look happy. "di kya howa, aap rorahi hai" pari was about to say but then priya interfered "wo… jis insaan di pyaar karti hai wo kisi aur say pyaar karta hai" priya said. Pari looked at priya. "di?" tina said sadly and hugged pari.
Next morning:
Everyone was eating breaksfast, just then the three sisters came to summit"summit bhaiya wo priya kisi say pyaar karti hai , she wants to marry this guy" pari said. Summit bhaiya looked up, "okay but I want to meet this guy" "tik hai bhaiya" tina went to her room , she was so happy , jumping on her bed. Pari looked happy for her sister, but priya didn't look happy. "di how can u do this u are giving ur right to tina" "priya for me my sisters are every thing , shiv's love was just a small crush that's it" pari went , leaving priya in a unhappy mood.
Pari thinking about shiv , all the memories, tears flowing from her eyes.
The song 'yaar rabba' plays in the background. tina informs shiv that summit wants to meet him.
Shiv came over the next day , summit was impressed and had immediately agreed for the marriage. Time flyed and pari got more lost into her thoughts. It was soon sangeet. The singahanaia family had decorated their whole manshion with lights. There was naach and gana. Mukti dances to 'say say'.

The song finishes and pari goes to her room thinking about shiv. The episode finishes on her face.


Patel 1993 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#23
hey sawdi
great part. u should've added
Prem to make more masti. He would have made it
much more fun. Anyways continue soon please
zeefan 1 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#24
Meray jeevan saathi

Recap: pari is in thoughts of shiv

"pari! Pari!" prena called out. Pari came out of her thoughts and went to the hall. It was haldi rasam. Everyone putted haldi on her, so did pari. Everyone was happy but no one took notice that pari was upset.

The next day was mehindi, all the girls were teasing Tina, it was said to be a rasam to write the dulha's name on the brides hand with mehindi. Even pari smiled for her sister but inside she was crying her heart out. "Di aap meri mehindi may gawo gi nahi" Tina said. So with her request pari started dance even though she was in no mood. She danced to 'nah nah mujhe mehindi naa mujhe ko laga na'. Tina loved it.

The next day was the wedding as rasam the dulha came riding a horse. The mothers doing the arti. The pandit calls the bride, priya and pari comes with Tina.


The pandit does all the hymns, and the rounds are done finally shiv puts sinndoor in Tina's forehead. Pari looked hurt but tryed to hide it. Tina and shiv take aswar from the elders then she gets vidayi , everyone is crying especially the brothers and pari and priya.

Shiv then took tina home , tina did the coming into the house ritual. they both went to their room.




Tina in a googat waiting for her hubby.


Shiv came in the room , he saw tina in a googat. He had a gift for her , he slowly opened it, it was a necklace .
"for me?" tina said. "yes for u" . they both hugged and the scene faded away.

One month passed and pari was in a worse condition ,she hardly talked or smiled. Didn't come out from her room very often. It was like all her happiness had gone. Priya , all the bhabhi's were praying. "hai bagwan humare pari ki charay mein khushi wabis la" kumkum said."meri di kay leyay ek angel la jo pari ki sindagi ko cushy say barlay" priya said. The epi finishes on the face of the idol.
Patel 1993 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#25
nice one. wonder when armaan will come in
continue soon sawdi
Wisdom Mistress thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#26
sawdi gr8! woah u got tina and shiv married very early 😳 u shuld have stretched it lke ekta does 😛 but excellent i luved it don';t knw wat thinbking bout but fantastico 😃 👏
zeefan 1 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#27
Meray jeevan saathi
Recap: everyone was praying for pari

Pari was in a worse condition, she wasn't the bubbly girl , everyone knew. Pari was skating down the road, lost in her thoughts, and suddenly she bumpes into a guy. They are both rolling around, staring at each other (The song in the background plays I love u my angel from pyare mohan).

"I am so sorry , I dropped ur papers" pari said . "no I should have looked" boy said .. "doctor huh?" pari said. "yes" the boy said. Pari then helped him to gather his papers. The boy then went to his car and drove off.

In the afternoon , pari was helping in the kitchen when suddenly the door bell rang ,pari called priya to answer the door. Priya on the other hand was drying her nails as she putted nail polish on it. Priya then answered the door, she was really shocked "tum!"


The boy who was standing was the same guy who pari bumped into in.

"omg!, armaan , how are u?" priya said. "good" armaan said. "kohn hai priya?" pari said curiously. She went to the door and saw armaan, she was really shocked. "yeh armaan , our family chiildhood friend" priya said. Pari didn't say anything , she was surprised. "aur um yeh kohn hai?" armaan said. "dr armaan this ur closest friend pari" . "pari kaisi ho tik ho?" armaan said. "good" pari said.

"all this happen and u pari being my closest friend didn't tell me anything" armaan said, later that day. "what would I tell u, everything happen so quickly, and anyway my sister are everything to me" pari said.

"kis methi say baniho tum? Pari anyway, now that I have come , u will forget all ur sadness" "yes guru" pari joked,. They both laughed.

Armaan took pari for a ride in the car, pari who was silent most of the time. Armaan notice this and pulled the car aside, he put the radio on and came out of the car. He started to dance with pari in the song sunno nah sunna from chalte chalte. Pari who didn't wanted to dance but soon she was enjoying it. Then they stopped by the pani pori stall. Pari ordered two pani poris. Pari eat her's and armaan broke his. Pari started to laugh, armaan just staring at her. "maybe I forget how to eat them , while living in america" armaan said. Her mother who was passing by to go to the shops saw her daughter with armaan. She was really happy that pari was back to normal.

The epi finishes on her face.

Edited by zeefan 1 - 17 years ago
Patel 1993 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#28
good one sawdi.
Now armaan is here,
i think his and pari's love story will be starting
soooooooon
Edited by Patel 1993 - 17 years ago
zeefan 1 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#29
yes thats what i am intending to
Wisdom Mistress thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#30
gR8! 😃 wonder what happens nxt? xcited 😉

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

10 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

RiKara SS : Safed (chapter 7 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

7 months ago

NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated) NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated)

[NOCOPY] Cover credits to Shibani aka oh_nakhrewaali P R O L O G U E The whole house was decorated like a bride. The lights were shimmering,...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".