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Posted: 17 years ago
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look sawdi, try and make ur updates longer please. I bet ya anything that pari loves Armaan init. Her name should have been Ridhima - u know RidhimArmaan. Put the names 2gether 😳.

well continue soon and this time alot quicker please and try to make updates longer. pretty please, coz i'm begging here to ya, please please please.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Sawdi!! dat was nice 😉 but mke it longer nxt tym it was short but i undestnd exams and stuff!!
But nxt tym mke it longer dying to knw wat hppened btween shiv 😳 and tina!!
Cheerz!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PRECAP: ARMAAN REMEMBERING PARI AND VICE VERSA

It's engagement day, the groom comes with his family. The ritual starts. The boy puts the ring into pari's hand, and everyone claps. Now it's it is pari's turn, her hand shaking. She looks at Armaan who moves his head away. "Come on pari," says one of the bhabhi. Pari then puts the ring on the boy's finger. Everyone claps; Armaan has tears rolling off his face. Then everyone talks about how pari and the other boy look so cute. Armaan watches, he feels jealous.
" Hey what's Armaan u don't look happy, it's ur best friend wedding" shiv says. " Yeh i am happy really happy" says Armaan

The party finishes, pari goes to her room. She removes her jewellery and thinks about Armaan.

Next day pari goes to mandir. "Hai ishwar Armaan ki raksha kar Na, usay takat dayna kai wo yeh dard saiay"
Pari turns around to see Armaan. Pari goes. " Wait pari, ur hiding something from me"
"Umm" " Ur are aren't u, look Armaan i told u before i don't love u" "really hmm then say it in my eye"
" Look Armaan." "That's no the answer of my question" " i think u should go" "fine i will go but not until i know the truth"" what truth?"" the truth ur hiding from me" " what are u talking about" "are u telling me or not?" "Look..." "So Ur not, okay" he puts his hand on the diya, "jab tak tum mujhe sachay nahi bata nahi dayti, yeh hat nahi hatay ga" pari looks in shock.




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