first ff updated part12pg9plz comment

hey guys iam starting my first ff with a help of my best friends here is jhalak of it.
kumkum as the older bahu



sumit as the older son of the house

second oldest bahu radha

second oldest bhai shurya

third oldest son aditya

third oldest bahu pooja

chota son shabd

choti bahu bani

mother:prena

the oldest daughter pari

the second oldest daughter priya

choti daughter tina

armaan

shiv

rajeev

enjoy
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thnx god u changed.
itlooks excellent 😉 , fab 😉

sawdah
ur writing a ff
NO WAY !!!!

dats kool
post part 1 soon 😊

yay sawdi. But you said in school that you updating on Fridays not Mondays or whenever you put this up. Anyways, me and Wisdom Mistress will help of corse, so don't worry. we gt ur back

Meray jeevan saathi: made for each other

"Today it is a special day for us as it is presentation day, and as u all know that it is the 12th anniversary of this collage"
The audience clapped, then the teacher continued "I would like to call Mrs Chawla to do the honours of presenting the award to the fellow students." Everyone clapped and then the teacher announced the student of the year ,a girl came up (her face wasn't shown) and took the reward. Best fashion designer was given to girl called Priya (face not shown) who came up and sat down. Finally the sport personality was given to a girl called Pari.

The girl came up and said "I can't accept this reward because this reward should be given to my parents who nourished me with The girl came up and said "I can't accept this reward because this reward should be given to my parents who nourished me with principles and sanskar. who gave me the ability to learn and to stand up in front al of u aur meri sab say bari takhat hain meri behanay, kuch be ho hum ek dosre ka sat khabhi nahi choray gay" Everyone started to clap and then priya and tina from the audience came on stage and hugged pari.(their faces can be seen). (Background song 'meri duniya'). pari takes ashiwar from her mother. "cheetah roh beti, humay ab pey garv hai" her mother then kissed her forehead.

Next day:
"priya kaha hai" sumit said. Everyone looked at each other. "who tayar horahi hai" pari said.
Then priya came down from the stairs. (Background music: priya that's priya). Priya then sat down and pick the newspaper up. "Oh we're in the front page again" pari and priya were having Eye signals with each other, both hesitating. "Um bhaiya wo um mein apsay kuch um bolna chati hoo".
"Bolo" sumit said. "wo actually um priya wants to go nightclub" pari said. " priya u know I don't like u going to nightclubs" summit said. "bhaiya please" priya said "man bhi jayay na" kumkum said. "okay" summit said. "yes" . priya said in excitement .Then the brothers went office while the bahus went to the kitchen. The limo door opened and priya came out wearing the most fashionable dress anyone could think of. Everyone was looking at her , who wouldn't ,the singh family daughters were consider as the most beautiful women and sons as handsome men of the world. Everyone wished to be like them , some copied their fashion. As she stepped out of the car two dogs came across her and looked at her with in amazement ,she jumped in fear telling them to go but it was no effect them. "bodyguard !!!!!" she said. "take these dogs away from me u know I hate dogs". the bodyguard did what he was commanded.



The nightclub was crowdy and the music was really loud. Priya started to dance , enjoying herself. Someone hand touched her shoulders , she turned around in shock. "tum???????"

hope u enjoyed it !

oooooooooo.
wonder who it is?
sawdi lemme ask you sumting
is priya youngest daughter or is it tina?

Woah! great characters and great update! 😃

now its the Q of hu is was 😆

Henz

Sawdi we r the singhania's tld ya at schl! 😡
but fab 👏 but whre is tina? 😕

Meray jeevan saathi

Recap: someone from behind has its hand on priya shoulders, she turns around in shock.

"Tum????????????" "Tum nay to mujhe dara di ya, you scared me" the person is shown, first his jeans, his jacket, lips and eyes. The full face is shown it is Rajeev. (Her boyfriend) "Scared, of me? Girls faint when they see me but u are getting scared??!!" "Listen okay I am not scared of u!" priya said with attitude." "Hmm yeh chayra gosay mein nahi acha lagta hai", iam sorry, please forgive me ,my dear queen" priya laughed "okay" they hugged and then started to danced.it was night time and everyone was getting very worried about priya as she had not returned. "ab bet bi joy,woh ajay gi" (bhabhi 2) "how can I sit radha babhi , priya has not returned and when summit bhaiya finds out that she is not here, wo bohot gosa karay gay"

Just then the brothers return from office. "di they are here" Tina said .Pari looking more worried. "Priya kaha hai, where is she?" the first question summit said. Everyone became silent. "I said where is she?" In a louder voice.
"woo um .."radha said. Then priya stepped in waving to Rajeev. "Yeh bye". Then priya stopped when she found that summit was watching her. Priya was very scared. "Kaha ti tum, where were u?" "Um who um…" "Yeh umm um kya

kahti ho, saf saf bolo where were u?" priya did not say anything. "Nightclub? Right?" "how many times have I told u to be home by 9 but no u never listen to me" "ab choray bhi na, who bachi hai" kumkum said (bhabhi 1) "bachi, bachi, kabtak hum kayay gay kay who bachi hai, some day or a another she will have to take her own responsibilities" "dekyay shat ho jayay, pari take priya to her room" "ji".
"Phew I thought I was nearly going to die" priya said in relieve. "priya, don't take it lightly it is a warning; don't do again" tina said." "Chill lil sis, it was only 11, plus I had a good time, I am going to sleep see u in the morning"
"But priya…" "Leave it , she won't listen, u go and sleep, I'll be okay" "really?" "Yes" priya was upset, and then shourya came. "Hey my pretty sweet fav sister is upset, come on forget about it" "how can I? Priya is very nadan even more then Tina" "look okay pari stopped worring and give me a smile". She smiled. "That's a good sis" .they hugged.


Morning: "summit bhaiya, can I go shopping"
"yes" , he said. pari was coming out of the shops when a car nearly crashed into her,when suddenly a man saved her.pari is unconscious.