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i bet u anything it was jeev (rajeev)

Mera jeevan saathi

The family members reach the hospital where pari was admitted. meanwhile in collage tina was talking to her friends when suddenly her phone rang. "hello" "hello tina, tina chali acho" "chali acho , kyo kya bhabhi sdab tik to hai" "pari hospital mein" "kya????????!, konsay hospital mein?" "Mumbai city hospital mein". meanwhile at the hospital , everyone was getting worried, then the doctor came. "doctor, kasi hai wo?" summit said. "she is out of danger". "kya hum mil satay hai?" summit said. "yes". pari came conscious, the first question was where her sisters were. Tina came rushing into the room. "di" . They hugged, then tina cried. "kyo rorahi ho pagli, mein tik ho" pari said cryingly. "agar aap ko kuch hochata to?" tina said. "di" everyone turn around to see it was priya. "tum kya kari ho?" tina said. "she is my sister!!!!"tina said. "sister oh , so now u remember , u were in the house but no u came late and can I know what was so important then di" tina said. "none of ur business okay!" priya said. "stop fighting u two" pari shouted. "I am sorry di"priya said. "it's okay" pari said. The sister hugged. "mein sab kay leyah coffe lati ho" tina said.while coming back, someone stopped. It was the same guy who save pari."oh to tum oh meri di ki angel" "yes mein who ho" the guy said. "thank u" "wasay mera name shiv hai" shiv said (igbal khan)."so?" "whats ur name?" "hmm not telling why don't u guess? "hmm is this a game ?" "whatever u think" . tina then went. Shiv then visted pari, "thank u " summit said. " it's okay as humans we have responsibilities" shiv said. "cheta roha beta" perna said.

The next day:
Pari was this discharged and taken home. Doctors had adviced the family to give her a good care. the door bell rang, it was shiv."hi aunty can I come in" "sure beta acho"perna said."rastay mein chara at to sucha pari say milo" "ha who os kamray mein hai". shiv went to meet pari , they were having a good conversation and priya was watching them. hmm lakta hai story twist hona wala hai priya thought. the episode finishes on priya and pari talking to shiv face.

Note:pabs have a great umrah, and eid!!!!!!!!!!

Sawdah xxx


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good one. nice update
but it was short.
looks like the twist is gonna start.
continue soon sawdi

thnx 😃 sawdi! gr8 ff but don't make tina jealous 😛 as i am not dat kinda person! 😉 gonna miss ya 😭

lovely work sawdah...cont asap u wont believe it but im hooked n plzzzzzzzzzzzz try n add lakshya to e story also haha(my request 😆 )

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zavy

Mera jeevan saathi
Precap: priya is watching pari and shiv talking.

"priya what are u watching" tina said. "wo …um" priya said.
"omg ya yahi bi agaya" tina said. "hey u mister , how dare u meray ghar me ani ki" "look main to" "mein to kya tum.." "tina , he came to see me" pari said. "no di u don't know these men, they come to ur house and then trick u" . "looks like ur sister has a temper"shiv said. "sorry wo meri behan" pari said. "it's okay, anyway need to go, chat later preety" refering to pari. "and u too temper girl". shiv left. "tina tum be na , kitna acha larka hain" "acha larka!" tina said shockly.
I will get u , tina thought.

Tina went collage and there she had surprise waiting for her. " tum ???" tina said looking at shiv. "what are doing here, stop following me" "excuse iam not following u , I study here" "what???" "yes, I don't why u are so in a angry mood when u see me" "it is because of ur surat". "oh my god, he is so hot, is he ur boyfriend" , tina's friends asked. "no, he is just someone following me" "oh , ur so lucky to have a hot guy following u, I wish I was so lucky" they said. Tina went.

Then shiv started to sings ladka yeh kehta hai(main prem deewane hoon). He follows her, she gets irritated (just like in the film) video link:


http//www.youtube.com/watch?v=oju1s-KsoH8


(imagine tina instead of kareena and shiv instead of hirthik)
Finally she agrees to be shiv's friend.

Meanwhile pari's car broke and she waiting for a lift. Just then shiv is out of the collage and on his motorbike. he sees pari. "hey preety girl, what happen?" "wo meri car karab ho gi hai" "oh I see, well tum meri is choti see bike may lift le sak ti ho" shiv said. Pari then went on the bike. "by way where do u wanna go?" "mandir".
"sorry huh but I need to get something from my house just wait here" he said. Pari could not resistant not going inside the house. "sorry um I know it's a bit messy but.." shiv said embarrassingly.
" u leave alone?" "yeh , I have a brother who will be coming from america and my parents are in behar" . "okay lets go!" shiv said. pari's destanation reached but pari wanted shiv to come. "um look I don't believe in this " "please meray liya" "okay then". they both went up to the mandir , then pari started to ring the bell. they both prayed. Pari walked off and suddenly she realised that her dupatta was tangled in shiv's watch.the episode is finishes on pari's face smiling.

hey sawdi
nice one. continue soon
looks like pari is falling for shiv

thanks for comments update soon!
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Meray jeevan saathi

Precap: pari smiles when her dupatta gets tangled with shiv's watch

Pari insisted to take it out but shiv said he would do it. "Come I'll drop u" shiv said. There was so much traffic on the streets of Mumbai. The children of the street were selling roses to make money. Shiv brought one and gave it to pari. "Here this is for u". Pari blushed and smiled.shiv dropped pari off "thank u" she said. "anything for u preety girl" he said and drove off. When pari entered,radha teased her. "Oh to yeh horah hai, waisay yeh larka tumrah dost hai ya.." radha said. "wo bhabhi…" shourya came in "hmm don't u understand radha yeh humari pari ki honay wali pati hai" "bhaiya" pari said shyly and walked off. "nasrnalegay meri pari ki kushya per" radha said. Pari went to her room and all she could think was shiv, she held the rose tightly and kept it carefully inside a book


Pari couldn't sleep all night, she could only think of shiv. "Di" Tina and priya said. "Aap kaha kogayi ho" Tina said. "Stupid di ko pyaar hogaya hai" priya said. Pari smiled. "Di aap… oh my god, kon hai wo?" Tina said. "Tum may kudh bata chalchayga" pari said. "Now stop it Tina, let's go to sleep" priya said.
The next morning
Pari made dosai for shiv. She went to shiv's house and rang the bell. Shiv opened the door. "Oh pari tum, kuch kam hai" "nahi mainay tumhari liya dosai banaya" "dosai, my favourite, come in" shiv said. pari looked around the house was really clean. "Um …" pari said. "yeh I know you're surprised, I thought next time u come its more cleaner." shiv said. shiv ate the dosai he loved it. "Oh pari u are the best cook, I love u " pari looked up in surprise and smiled. "Oh yeh pari tonight there is a surprise for u" "for me" "yeh u".


The phone rang, Tina picked it up. "Hello" "hi it is me shiv, I just called to tell u that tonight it's a date with me" "meray bhaiya are going to kill me if I go out at late night" "honey it is only 9, anyway see u".
Night:
Pari dressed up, she thought that maybe today was the day she was waiting for. Tina was also dressing up. Looking at the two of her sisters dressing up, priya got confused. "Tum do no tyar hokay kaha jaray ho" "i am not telling u, di all the best I hope wo insane aap ko porpose karay" tina said."all the best tum may bhi" pari said. Shiv was waiting ,tina came , she was shock to see the romantic atmosphere. "yeh sab.." "tumari liye" . shiv then played the music and they both danced. Then in sky the fireworks lettered 'I love you'. tina was surprised and then shiv porposed to tina "will u marry me?" tina was so happy, they hugged and kissed.

Meanwhile pari came looking for shiv and found that shiv and tina was kissing. Pari was in shock . The episode finishes on her face.

Plz comment !

Sawdah
xxxxx

ooooo sawdi.
what have you been planning?
i bet armaan is gonna cum in now init.
Oh wisdom mistress wouldv'e been so happy.

continue soon please