WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey plz clearify the characters properly,,,,,,i m confused between prince and saumya,,,,,,,, the one in ur display pic is saumya or prince ,,,,,,,or u can even write their actual name
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

hey plz clearify the characters properly,,,,,,i m confused between prince and saumya,,,,,,,, the one in ur display pic is saumya or prince ,,,,,,,or u can even write their actual name

look saumya is the one in the display pic. thats saumya and pari. Rani looks just like Pari, but Prince is a different character. is that less confusing for u or should i explain it again?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part thirty six

2 weeks later, college has started and now Kripa is excited to get a fresh start. There were some regrets of leaving all those 1 yr memories of Shimla, but she had a feeling that, things were going to change and in Mumbai, a new leaf will turn in her life.👏

At St. Martin's college we see a red convertible stop in the car park. The guy checks himself out in the side mirror 😉 and we see that it is Angad. He is looking cool 😎 as ever, wearing dark shades, grey full sleeves T.shirt over faded jeans. He gave himself a smile 😊 and made his way out towards the main building. Just as he was entering his eyes fell on a sexy babe.

She was wearing one of her micro minis, wearing too much make up and a complete air head. But that didn't bother Angad because he was only interested in the other side of her.😉

Angad: excuse me, kahi aap ke dad terrorist to nahi?

Sexy babe: 😕 ji nahi

Angad: so then how did he manage to make such a sex bomb? 😉

The girl just smiled and coo ed over him. She found him attractive and incredibly hot.

Angad: by the way, my name's Angad 😉 but you could call me 'Hoxy'.

Babe: hmm, 'Hoxy'! my name's Simmone, but honey you could call me anything you want (traced her finger on his taut chest muscles).

Angad took her hand and playfully kissed it whilst looking into her sexy eyes. Just then he felt a light breeze touch him and he could smell a familiar smell. He turned his eyes dreamily 😍 and saw a cute face walking across to the main steps. She was dressed in yellow shalwar kameez; her dupatta was flying in the air and tangled up with her hair. Every time her hair came on her face, she struggled to put it back behind her ears. Her smile reminded Angad of the same smile he often had seen in Shimla. Was it her?

Kripa's heart stopped as she reached inside the building. She leaned against the wall as if she was hiding from someone.

Kripa thought:
yeh to wahee hai. Kya wo mujhe dekh raha tha? ☺️ My god! I can't believe it, he's really here!

A well built buff guy came and put his hand on Angad's shoulder. 😡 He didn't look pleased at all to see him.

Buff guy: zara hum se bhi pareeche hojaeh.

Angad: kyu, 😕 kya yeh registry hai?

Buff guy: 😳 smart guy, but why don't you tell me what you've been telling my girlfriend here…

Angad: (a bit surprised. 😲 Looked at Simmone and then at the buff guy) come on Simmone, I'm sure you can do better than this.

Simmone smiled and gave Angad a kiss in the air, just like a typical bimbo.

Buff guy: better koun hai, yeh to muqable ke baad hee pata chalega. Lagata hai do, do haath?

Angad: muqabla hamesha barabar logo ke beech hota hai,😆 per tum kehrahe ho to tumharee yeh umeed bhi puree karlete hai.

Canteen

There was a crowd around a table where angad and the buff guy are sitting. There are cheers 👏 and roars 🥳 going on where everyone is deciding who to bet on. 👍🏼 👎🏼 Angad and the buff guy are going to have an arm wrestling compettion and whoever is going to win will get a kiss from Simmone. Angad gave a mock yawn 🥱 as if to show off this is a piece of cake for him. The competition began. Angad tightened his grip on the buff guy and made sure he kept his stand. He kept smiling 😉 at Simmone and sent her kisses. He was just going to win when the doors of the canteen opened and in stepped the angel from before. He saw her looking at all the commotion and being surprised 😲 and then without giving another glance, walking off. Angad was lost in her beauty and simpleness, so much that he didn't realise he lost the fight. Everyone cheered for the buff guy. Angad didn't know what just happened.

Simmone:
see you later sweety (licked her lips 😛 and said in a sexy voice)

Angad sat there wondering why he always went into a trance whenever he saw her. It was starting all over again.

Angad: ab to is baar isko me milkar hee rahoonga.

Garewal house

Kashish: (on the phone) dekho ab me tumhare saat kaam karne ke liye tayyaar hu…ha…Pari ke saat meree koi dushmani nahi. 😡 Me bus Saumya ko hamaree zindagi se nikaal na chahtee hu…oske baad tumhe jo karna hai karo.

Angad: kispe itna ghussa horahee hai di?

Kashish became surprised 😲 to see him and quickly cut the call. She just hoped that Angad didn't hear anything.

Angad: are aap to ghabra gayee. I'm sorry me aise hee…

Kashish: kaisee baate karaha hai. Tujhe mere ghar pe aane ke liye ijazat lene kee zaroorat nahi. Karlee na paraiyo jesee baat.

Angad: di, wo me…

Kashish: chal. Ab itne dino tak kaha tha? Aate hee apnee awaara gardi shuroo kardi?

Angad: actually wo kuch puraane dost milgaye the or onhone zabardasti rokeliya mujhe. 😆

Kashish: ab yeh bahane baazi chore, or bata ke college me admission le liya tune?

Angad: yes di, I've done all the formalities or aaj pehla din oh ke aaya hu. Ab chalo jaldi se kuch khaane ka do, 😆 bohat bhook lagee hai.

Kashish: theek hai, tu haath mooh dhole, me khaana lagatee hu or wese bhi, Sujal ke khaane ka time bhi hogaya hai.

Angad: di, aaj jijz ke saat hee khaana khaenge.

Sujal's room

Angad: hi jijz!

Sujal: 😊hi Angad. Yaha kese?

Angad: ab aapko milne ko…😲 kya kaha aapne? Did you just say something to me?

Kashish: heiraan hogaya na? ghar pe rehta to pata chalta na. 3 – 4 hafte hogaye hai, jabse Sujal kee awaaz laut aaee hai. Ab therapy kee wajese improve horahee hai.

Angad: (lost for words) wow, this amazing! 👏 Lagta hai ab to mujhe ghar pe hee rehna parega. Jijz jaldee theek ho jaeh, I don't want to miss it.

Sujal: Saumya aur Kashish ka jadoo.

Kashish: nahi Sujal, sirf Saumya kee wajese aaj tum bole paaeh ho. 👍🏼 He's given you the best therapist in the country.

Angad: waake me, Saumya bhaiya is a gem. Kitna kuch kiya hai onhone jijz ke liye. Itna to koi saga bhi nahi karta.

Kashish thought: tujhe kuch nahi pata ke Saumya ne kya kiya hai. Jab tujhe pata chalega na, tub tu bhi osse naffrat karega, 😡 jaise me karti hu. Wo to bus Sujal ko khush karne ke liye, me yeh natak karahee hu.

Angad: kaha khogayee di?

Kashish: kahi nahi. Chal ab khaana kha lete hai.

All three are enjoying their food and sharing here and there talks, when the phone rings and Kashish picks it up.

Person on otherside: 😡 never cut my call again!


end of part.

Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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arey yaar angad ko khane se fursat nahi aur kashish ko khana khilane se,,,,,,,,, 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

arey yaar angad ko khane se fursat nahi aur kashish ko khana khilane se,,,,,,,,, 😆

when i wrote it the second time i did find it funny too. i didnt realise it until i read it again.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 ufff......... yeh ladkinyaa bechare angad ko hara diya 👏 👏 👏

great part continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tekhum

👏 👏 👏 ufff......... yeh ladkinyaa bechare angad ko hara diya 👏 👏 👏

great part continue soon

ab larki pe dil haar gaya hai to haarna to parega hee na ose

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Posted: 17 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: arwa72

ab larki pe dil haar gaya hai to haarna to parega hee na ose

kher uski to is haar me bhi jeet he lekin kuch badnaseeb bechare to har tarah se haar hi jate he

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tekhum

kher uski to is haar me bhi jeet he lekin kuch badnaseeb bechare to har tarah se haar hi jate he

yeh to acha point de diya aapne. chalo ab me ise zaroor aage istemaal karoongee.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#90

yeh to aapke upper he lekin me to yahi request karunga ki ladko pe thodi daya karna.

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