WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 10

Part thirty seven

Person on the otherside: 😡 jabhi me tumhare saat baat karaha hu, to phone kaat ne kee jurrat mat karma.

Kashish: (to Sujal and Angad) me abhi aayee. (goes to the next room) meree majboori samjho. Me yu tumhaare saat khule aam bat nahi karsaktee, or yeh tum bhi jaante ho. Mera bhai aagaya tha…

Person on the otherside: mujhe isse koi farak nahi parta. You hold no importance for me. It's me who you need.

Kashish: jaantee hu. per agli baar tum mujhe phone mat karna, me tumhe phone karoongee.

Next day at Parashar house

Mishti: Kripa! Hey Kripa kee bacchee kaha hai tu?

A half ready Kripa came out of her room and was delighted. 😃

Kripa: Mishti! (she ran downstairs and hugged her) itne dino ke baad aayee hai tu. 😒 Kaha tha na ke term shuroo hone se pehle aajaana.

Mishti: me kya kartee, mama ne permission nahi dee. 👎🏼 Per ab me aagayee hu or yahi rahoongee.

Kripa: chal jaldi se, mujhe tujhse zaroori baat karni hai.

Saumya came out of his room and was coming down the stairs when he noticed Mishti.

Mishti: hi Saumya bhaiya!

Saumya: hi Mishti, 😕 tum yaha?

Kripa: oho, aapse baad me baat hongee. Filhaal hame dair horahee hai.

Saumya: tu kabhi nahi sudregee. 🤪 Hamesha kee tarha, toofan mail. Chal ja, tujhse to baad me hee baat karnee hogi.

Kripa's bedroom

Kripa: you won't believe ke kya huwa hai yaha.

Mishti: kya huwa hai?

Kripa: wo yahee hai, [:D/] mere hee college me

Mishti: (overwhelmed [:D/] 👏 ) sach! kya tu osse millee? Kya tune osse baat kee? Kya wo jaanta hai tujhe? Kya…

Kripa: ek minute, ek minute. Thoree saas to le. Me osse nahi millee sirf do baar osko dekha. Or pata nahi dekhte hee mujhe aisa laga jese oskee nazar sirf mujhpar hee hai. 😍 God he's just such a…

Mishti: Sex God!

Both girls laughed. 😆 😆

Mishti: wah Kripa, ab to teree nikal pari. Chal ab is baar tu yeh moka nahi gawaaehgee.

Kripa: pata nahi me ose kuch keh paoongee bhi ke nahi. Pehlee baat to me oska naam bhi nahi jaantee.

Mishti: jaan pehchaan hogee, tabhi jaanegee na. Bus ab me aagayee hu, ab to teree yeh love story set karke hee jaaoongee.👏

St. Martins College

Angad sat near the entrance of the college because he was expecting her. From the past two days he had been monitoring the times she came to college and from where. That day he had pledged that he would talk to her and at least ask her name. It just took him to think about her, that she arrived through the iron gates. It was her car, but his heart fluttered and he knew exactly that it was her.

Mishti: Oh my God! 😲 Did you see him right there?

Kripa: kya kehrahee hai tu? Kya wo waha per tha?

Mishti: Kripa I'm amazed ke tu oskee deewaanee hai, per tujhe wo mazar nahi aata.

She parked the car and then both of them got out. Then she put her eyes immediately towards the ground.

Kripa: are, 😳 wo to yahee aaraha hai.

Mishti: (gave a quick peek, so that it doesn't look obvious that she's staring. She saw him striding over, with a determined look) aaj tujhe oske saat baat karnee hee hogi.

Angad got closer

Kripa: hey Mishti, mujhe darr lagraha hai

Mishti: wo koi tera khoon karne nahi aaraha hai. 🤪 Dekh wo pohoch raha hai yaha.

Angad was a few feet away.

Kripa: chal Mishti

She dragged her away from there before angad reached them. She was too shy 😳 to even look him in the eye, how was her tongue 😛 going to work?

Mishti: yeh kya kiya Kripa? 😡 Itna acha moka tha. Wo khud chalkar aaraha tha.

Kripa: pata nahi Mishti me nahi karsakti. I'm too shy 😳😳 to talk to him.

Mishti: shy kee bacchee! Din bhar to chapar, chapar kartee rehtee hai, per ek larke ke saat baat karne me tere mooh pe taale lag jaate hai.

Kripa: samjha kar. Ek ajeeb see haalat hojaatee hai meree, nahi karsaktee me.

Mishti: ek kaam karte hai, me ose apne dil kee baat bata deti hu.😉

Kripa: (pulls Mishti's hair) 😡 😡 khabar daar jo aisa kiya to!

Mishti: Theek hai, meree ma. Wo sirf tera hai, agar tu osse kabhi keh payee to. 😛 Warna wo mera.😉

Kripa chased Mishti playfully in order to beat her, but as she got into the campus grounds, she froze midway. He was there, right in front of her on a stage, a few distances away. Her heartbeats rised because, she felt his gaze, on her and only on her.

Angad had a guitar in his hand and was standing in front of a microphone. If she was not prepared to talk to her, then he would tell her what he has to say, by singing. 👏 So she would have to hear him.

Angad: listen up guys! Aaj me ek khaas paigaam, kisee khaas ko bhejne waala hu.

He strummed his guitar and played a cheerful tune.

Angad: Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga - 2

[Yeh dil to na keh saka yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka]2

[Tu jaane na tu
Chaahat meri kitni betaab hai ]2
Ho jo barso meri palkon mein tha
Tu wohi khwaab hai

[Har ghadi har ghadi yaadoon mein
vaadon mein iradon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga ]2

[Yeh dil to na keh saka yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka]2

then he got off the stage and began walking further towards her. He knew that she was standing amongst the crowd and listening to him as well and secretly watching him.

[Yeh Jhukti nazar
Jaane jigar hosh lejati hai ]2
Mein kaise kahon
Ek ajnabi dard dejati hai

Chupke se Chupke se teri neeedon mein
Khwaabon mein khayalon mein
Chaaunga Khojunga


[Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga ]2
[Yeh dil to na keh saka yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka]4

She felt him coming towards her, but she couldn't handle it. At no cost did she want him to see her true feelings so she camouflaged herself into the crowd.

end of part. enjoy guys.

Part thirty eight

Angad is sitting in his room throwing darts on the wall, whilst remembering her face.

Angad: (to himself) pata nahi kyu wo baar, baar mujhe dekhe bhaag jaatee hai. 😕 Socha tha, itna bara gaaana gaaoonga to kuch to baat banegee per nahi. 😡 Pura din dimaag kharaab rehta hai oskee wajese, or wo hai ke haath me aatee hee nahi. Larki hai ke express train? 😆 Ab mujhe koi or tareeka dhoond na hee parega. (Shoots a dart and it is bullseye). 👏

Thaapar house

Kripa: bhabhi, 😳 wo yahee hai, per pata nahi kyu me osse baat nahi karsaktee.

Pari: wo isliye kyu ke pyaar me aksar insaan thamsa jaata hai. Kuch karna chahta hai per kuch or hee hojaata hai.

Kripa: 😊 to kya aapke saat bhi aisa hota hai

Pari: 😆 kamaal kee to baat yeh hai, ke tere bhaiya hamesha aise boot banjaate hai. Pata hai shuroo me to mujhe dekh ke aise ghum hojaate the, ke lagta tha koi paagal agaya ho

Both laugh 😆 😆

Saumya: madam, 😉 hum to abhi bhi paagal hai, aapke peeche.

Pari: Saumya, 😡 mene aapse kitnee baar kaha hai ke knock kiye bagair andar aana buree baat hai.

Saumya: ab apnee honewali biwi ke kamre me aane kee ijazat lenee paregee hame?

Pari: filhaal aapkee honewali biwi aapse bohat naraaz hai, to ha lenee paregee.

Saumya: Kripa, sach me tum larkiya bhi na. Do hafte hogaye os baat ko lekin abhi tak ghussa thanda nahi huwa. Mere phone calls avoid karahee hai or yaha tak ke milne aata hu to kamre me band hojaatee hai.

Pari: Kripa, 😡 😡 apne bhaiya se kahe, ke agar inko takleef horahee ho to ghar jaake thande paani se nahale.

Saumya: 😃 hai, kitnee cute lagtee hai ghusse me.

Pari: 😒 Kripa, mene kaha na ke inse kahe ke yaha se jai.

Kripa: ab mujhe aap dono ke beech nahi parna, me chalee.

Pari: tu kaha jaarahee hai (pulls her back on the bed) 😡 tu ruk! Jinhe jaana hai wo nahi jaarahe or jise nahi jaana, wo jaarahee hai.

Saumya: uffo, Pari ab is beechaaree pe ghussa kyu nikaal rahee ho. Chal Kripa tu ja.

After Kripa left, Pari still sat with her back against Saumya. He crept up from behind and put forward a bunch of dark pink roses. She looked at them and just disregarded them.

Saumya: chalo theek hai, to phir me jo yeh triple chocolate ice cream laaya hu, wo me khud hee khaaleta hu. 😃 Ab kya kare, jiske liye laaya onhe, to koi interest hee nahi. 😛 (opened up the tub and with the corner of his eye, peeped to see if she was looking. He noticed her taking a peek) ummm…mindblowing! 👏 Kya kamaal kee hai.

Pari couldn't help but drool over the sounds he made. She so wanted it.

Saumya: (he could sense that she was tempting for it so he pretended to eat more) Ouch!

Pari: (jerked up and ran to him in panic) 😲 Kya huwa aap ko?

Saumya: (took her in his embrace and held her tight) 😉 Wese huwa to bohat kuch hai.

Pari: acha, to yeh phirse aapkee shararat thee. Chalye ab choreye mujhe.

Saumya: ab chorne ke liye thoree na pakra hai.😛 Me jaanta hu ke tum mujhe resist nahi karsaktee.😉😉

Pari: kuch ziada hee khush femee hai aapko

Saumya: chalo yehi samajhlo. To phir agar me tumhe yeh karoonga to tumhe kuch nahi hoga (lightly kissed her on the edge of her neck)

Pari: (tried to control the sensation) 😳 nahi hota

Saumya: yaha pe bhi nahi? (he kissed her further up the neck)

Pari: (it wasn't easy but she tried to stay firm) 😳 bilkul nahi!

Saumya: ab bhi nahi? 😉 (he kissed her on her jaw)

Pari: (it had become more difficult) 😳 😳 nahi…

Saumya was just about to kiss her on her lips when she hugged him tightly. Her head rested on his chest.

Pari: bus Saumya, bus! ☺️ Ab aap mera aur imtehaan mat lijye. Ha yeh sach hai, nahi rehsaktee aap ke bigair. Nahi rehsaktee. 👏

Saumya: are wah! Yeh to itne me hee maan gayee.😃 Lagta hai, mujhe ab tumhe more frequently naraaz karna parega, 😉 warna aise manane ka mazaa kese aaehga?

Pari: bohat bure hai aap!

Saumya: acha, phirse apnee achai dekhao?😛😉

Pari pushed him back and then leaned her head on his chest again. Then they both sat, enjoying feeding each other the triple chocolate ice cream. Many times Pari teased him and instead of feeding him she stuffed it on other parts of his face. 😆 He licked it playfully and sometimes even rubbed his cheeks with hers, so automatically it would become clean.

end of part

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Part thirty nine

St Martin's College

Mishti: Kripa, yeh dekh! 😃 (handed her a leaflet)

Kripa: 😕 yeh kya hai?

Mishti: 👏 Yeh bhangwaan ka bheja huwa dusra moka.

Kripa: kya matlab?

Mishti: oho! Yeh music talent contest hai. Tu isme hissa legi, or hona ho wo 'Hoxy' bhi isme hissa lega. Do lucky winners ko state competition me hissa lene ka moka milega. Zara soch, agar tum dono yeh jeet gaye so you will be able to spend so much time together. Tera kaam to hojaehga.

Kripa: Mishti, agar hum jeete to. Kya pata wo hissa na bhi le.

Mishti: 😡 stop being such a pessimist! I'm sure he will definitely enter. Are yaar oskee awaaz ke baare me tu to jaantee hai. 😍 Me teree awaaz ke baare me jaantee hu. Bus ab tu is contest me hissa le rahee hai.

Kripa: mene kabhi aise stage pe gaana nahi gaaya. 😒 Wo to me sirf apne shoke ke liye gaati hu.

Mishti: ha to is baar bhi to tu wahi karahee hai. I won't let you miss this opportunity. Wese bhi, me already tera form bhar chukee hu.

Kripa opened her mouth to object but wasn't allowed.

Mishti: now no arguments! Ab chal!

Angad saw the leaflet on the notice board and a light bulb 👍🏼 switched in his head.

Angad thought: honaho, wo is contest me zaroor shaamil hogee. Ab to me ose nahi chorunga. Shimla me to haath nahi aayee, per yaha…😈

Thaapar house

Prince: Rani! Rani!

Rani: kya hai, 😡 pura ghar, ser pe kyu utha rahai hai aap?

Prince: Rani, wo mera button toot gaya hai. 😛 Zara seedo na.

Rani: 😒 aap koi or shirt pehenleejye na. Dekhye chule pe sabzee rakhee hai, jal jaehgee.

Prince: nahi! Tum jaantee ho na ke yeh meree favourite hai. Ab chalo, jaldi karo, mujhe dair horahee hai.

Rani reluctantly goes to the drawers, takes out thread and needle and then stands in front of Prince to sow the broken button. He comes closer to her, so close that there's no space between them. She begins sowing, 😳 trying to avoid his gaze. When she goes to cut the thread with her teeth, she sees Prince staring at her with hunger in his eyes. She is dazed 😍herself and just keeps staring at him. The eye locking session continues for some time, which looks forever. Both are talking with their eyes.

Prince: mujhe in aakhon me hamesha ke liye dhoob jaane do

Rani: aapto rehte hee hai hamaree aakho me

Prince: pata nahi tumhai hur 😉 kahu ya aasmaan se uthree huwee pari.
Rani: aap jo bhi kaheye, me to hu sirf aapkee Rani. 😳

Prince: dunya waalo se kese bacchao yeh aakhe. Na churale koi yeh tumharee aakhe

Rani: aaeh he jaha me hum aapke liye. Sirf aapke liye hee hai yeh hamaree aakhe

Prince: mujhe hamesha ke liye qaid karlo inme.

Rani: hai, aapka hee ghar yeh hamaree aakhe.

They were really close by now, lost completely in each other.

Surekha walked outside the hall and she could smell something buring. She sniffed around and finally reached the kitnchen where she saw the sabzee burning on the stove.

Surekha: hey bhagwaan! 😡 Yeh Rani bhi na, kuch dhyaan nahi deti (turns off the stove, coughs a bit because of the smoke and then goes out) Rani!

Rani and Prince are too engrossed in each other to realise anything else. 😍

Surekha: Rani! Rani!

They still couldn't hear or see anything.

Surekha: Rani! Rani tu…(she saw them together and got shocked 😲)

Now it was loud and clear so they separated immediately and pretended like nothing happened.

Surekha: 😡 😡 itnee dair se tujhe bulaarahee hu. Dhyaan kaha hai tera?

Rani: 😳 😳 uh, k…kahi nahi. Kya…kya huwa ma?

Surekha: kya huwa kya? Puree kee puree sabzee jalgayee or tuhe ke…

Rani: Are! 😲 Wo to me bhool hee gayee (runs out)

Prince: (under his breath) aagayee villain! 😆

Surekha: kuch kaha tune?

Prince: 😃 nahi, kuch bhi to nahi. (runs to the bathroom quickly before Surekha began her daily lecture.)

end of part.

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Part fourty

Thaapar house

Pari: (on the phone) aaj aap 2 minute late hai 😛

Saumya: acha, din bhar ka hisaab rakhti ho mera?

Pari: ab kisisko to aap kee personal diary banna parega. Bhulakkar jo hogaye hai

Saumya: ab jab haseen sapne aankho me ho,😉 to phir kuch or nazar aahee nahi sakta na.

Pari: bus, bus, ab subhe, subhe shuroo mat hojaeh. Yeh bataye ke aaj kya khaas baat bataane waale hai aap?

Saumya: kya tumbhi! 😔 Hamesha mere mood ko maar deti ho. Are pehle thoree pyaar mohabbat kee baate to hone do, per nahi seedhe mudde pe aao.

Pari: aap roze subhe yehi baate karte hai, jinkee wajese aapko dairee hojaatee hai. 😆 Phir asal baat aap kehna hee bhool jaate hai. Isiliye aaj mene pehle hee kehdiya.

Saumya: choro yeh sab baate. Kya hamesha mujhe tumse khaas baat hee karnee hogi? 😃 Yuhee pyaar karne ke liye phone nahi karsakta?😉

Pari: itne subhe to nahi. 😒 Chalye na Saumya, jaldi se bataye na ke kya baat hai.

Saumya: (relunctant and helpless) theek hai bhai ab pariyo kee malika ka humkum to maana hee parega.

Both laughed 😆

Saumya: aaj Sujal kee swimming therapy shuroo hone waalee hai. 👏 Wo doctors ne suggest kiya ke it would be more effective and his muscles would slowly learn to come in motion.

Pari: 😒 lekin yeh to khatarnaak lagta hai.

Saumya: mene bhi yehi socha tha pehli baar, per physiotherapist ne mujhe confidence me liya hai ke sab kuch safe hee hai. I don't have to worry about anything. Or wese bhi me rahunga waha, to mere hote huwe Sujal ko kuch ho hee nahi sakta na.

Pari: isme koi shak nahi (glanced at the clock) chalye ab waqt hogaya hai. Ab aap office jaaye warna phirse dair hojaehgee.

Saumya: ummm. 😉 Aaj jaane ka mood nahi hai.

Pari: 😡 Saumya, phirse aap…dekhye agar aap abhi office nahi gaye to phir me waha aakar zabardasti bhejdungi.

Saumya: not a bad idea. 😛 Is bahane tumhare pyaare chehre ka deedaar to hojaehga. 😃

Pari: nahi sudrenge aap! Saumya chalye na mazaak choreye, warna me phirse aapse naraaz hojaoongee.

Saumya: are nahi, bohat nuksaan hota hai mera.

Pari: 😕 nuksaan?

Saumya: ha, pure 300 rs ka nuksaan

Pari: kya matlab?

Saumya: are tum naraaz hotee ho, to phir, mujhe tumhe manana parta hai.😛 Ab khaalee haath to tum larkiya kabhi nahi mantee to phool or ice – cream lane me 300 rs to hojaate hai na.

Pari: (outraged 😡) Saumya!

Saumya: 😆 okay, okay, samajh gaya me. Chalo phir baad me baat karta hu me. Love you sweetheart.

Pari: love you too! (gave him a kiss 😉 on the phone)

Saumya nearly fell off the stairs he was coming down from. That was unexpected.

St. Martin's college

All the contestants have gathered in the auditorium where the first round is going to begin. This was more of a testing round where participants would give an audition and the successful ones would move to the next level.

Kripa was awfully nervous 🤢 because she had stage fright. Never before had she gone on stage to even give a speech, let alone sing. Now she had to do it all, especially in front of a person who was very special to her heart. Her eyes searched around the auditorium for him but he couldn't be found.

Kripa: hey Mishti, mujhe nahi lagta ke wo yahape aaya hai.

Mishti: phirse tune yeh baate shuroo karlee. 😡 Don't worry mene ose dekha hai. He's back stage, rehearsing, kyu ke pehla number ossee ka hai.

Kripa: tujhe kese pata chala

Mishti: I heard them talking to him and telling him to go first. Ab yeh sab chore, or tu apne gaane pe concentrate kar. Aaj agar koi garbar huwee to phir sab kuch khatam hojaehga.

Kripa took in a deep breath and began rolling her dupatta over and over again over her finger. She was getting nervous 🤢 😭 by the minute, it seemed as if she would get an anxiety attack any moment.

The judges announced the opening of the contest and explained everyone the rules. Then the autditions began. Angad stepped out on the stage with a guitar in his hand. He looked at the crowd and wasn't pleased. 😔 There was one person that he was looking for and only that one person mattered. He looked up, down, left, right and then found her somewhere in the middle. Her gaze was down and she was playing with her dupatta. A braod smile 😃 aapeared on his face and he strummed his guitar.

Kripa looked up at him and her heart fluttered ☺️ because she could feel him looking at her and only her.

Angad: (began humming and then sang) Chhookar Mere Man Ko Kiya Toone Kya Ishaara. Chhookar mere man ko kiya toone kya ishara.
Badla Yeh Mausam Lage Pyaara Jag Saara
Chhookar mere man ko kiya tune kya ishara.

Tu Jo Kahe Jeevan Bhar Tere Liye Maein Gaoon, tere liye mein gaoon.
Geet Tere Bolon Pe Likhta Chala Jaoon, likhta chala jaoon.
Mere Geeton Mein Tujhe Dhoonde Jag Saara
Chhookar Mere Man Ko kiya tune kya ishara.

Aaja Tera Aanchal Yeh Pyaar Se Maein Bhar Doon, pyaar se maein bhar doon
Khushiyaan Jahan Bhar Ki Tujhko Nazar Kar Doon, tujhko nazar kardoon
Tu Hi Mera Jeevan Tu Hi Jeene Ka Sahaara
Chhookar Mere Man Ko kiya tune kya ishara. Badla yeh mausam, lage pyaar jag saara. Chhookar mere man ko kiya tune kya ishara.

Althroughout Angad kept looking at Kripa and her vice versa. Why did she feel that he was singing for her?

Kripa thought: aisa nahi hosakta. 😳 Wo mujhe nahi jaanta. Per baar, baar mujhe aise dekhta kyu rehta hai? Kahi ose yeh pata to nahi chal gaya ke me ose pasand…

Her thoughts were disturbed by an over excited Mishti who kept on nudging her. Indicating that he was singing for her. Kripa didn't want to believe that.

After his performance, many others came. Kripa became even more nervous.🤢 🤢 🤢She felt like she would get a heart attack.

Kripa: mujhse yeh nahi hoga. Me jaarahee hu

Mishti: (held her hand and pulled her down back on her seat )😡 kahi nahi jaarahee hai tu. Dekh itne aage aake, waapis peeche nahi jaaehgee tu. Just take a deep breath and relax.

Relax, was the last thing on her mind. She still felt that sensation 😳 so she knew he was somewhere out in the auditorium looking at her. How would she sing in front of him? 😲 What if her tongue freezes and her vocals get blocked? Finally it was Kripa's turn; she hesitantly stood up to go to the stage. Was it her imagination or was the whole auditorium silent? She stepped up to the microphone, picked up a guitar from the floor and stared at everyone. She didn't know what to do. The whole world seemed closing in on her. She closed her eyes and strummed the guitar. Then the words came out automatically.

Kripa: Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam
Oh, le liya dil, oh haai mera dil
Haai dil lekar mujhko na behlaana
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam

(Bahaar banke aaoon kabhi tumhaari duniya mein
Guzar na jaaye yeh din kahin isi tamanna mein) - 2
Tum mere ho, ho tum mere ho
Aaj tum itna vaada karte jaana
Chura liya
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam

As she finished she was applauded👏 👏by the whole auditorium. A weak smile appeared on her face as she tried to hold back the treacle 😭 of tears in the back of her eyes.

After all the auditions, the judges announced that the successful participants would get to see their names on the notice board. Everyone began to disperse, Kripa wanted to leave immediately but it wasn't her luck,😲 because he stood right in front of her.

end of part.

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