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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

oh sooo sad i feel bad for pari 😭 i hope kripa angad se eak baar mil le , anyways i love this story line you are doing sooooooo well 👏

hey thanks

it is sad but soon things will work out.

yeh she will have to meet him coz they go to the same college.

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Posted: 17 years ago
arey MSD wen are u going to post the next epi?????
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Posted: 17 years ago
to tell u the truth i completely forgot abt this as i was involved in something else.

ive just finished writing it so hopefully it wud be posted today.
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok fine......but plz psot it today only..........
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Posted: 17 years ago
sure ill do it soon

dont worry.
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okays i said ill post it two days ago but like i said before i simply didn't have the time to sit down and write the part. anyways im back after about 14 - 15 days and hopefully with a long part for all of u.

Part hundred two

Thaapar house


Surekha, Prince and Rani are sat in the hall discussing the recent events

Prince:
Ma, 😔 jo bhi huwa wo theek nahi huwa. Din bar din log tare tare kee baate karahai hai Saumya or Pari ke rishte ke baare me. 😒 wese to hame koi farak nahi parta kyu ke hum sacchai jaante hai per yeh samaaj me to in sabko jeena hai na

Surekha: Theek kaha tune jo hogaya so hogaya. Ab socho ke aage kya karna hai

Kamya: Me batatee hu ke kya karna hai

All heads turn towards the new visitors.

Kamya:
Istara bina bataye aane kee maafi chahte hai 😔

Rani: Yeh kya kehrahee hai aap? Aaye andar

Both Kamya and Abhay come in and sit down. Kamya sits next to Surekha.

Kamya:
Surekha ji, yeh sab jo bhi huwa wo sirf isliye huwa kyu ke hum sab laaparwa the. Wo baat jo humnein ek saal pehle teh kee thee wo hum bhool gaye

Prince: Kounsee baat kee baat karahee ho tum?

Kamya: Kyu ke Saumya kee kundli me dosh tha isiliye hamein ek saal intezaar karna para Pari or Saumya kee shaadi ke liye. Dheere, dheere jese waqt guzar ta gaya yeh baat hum sab bhool ne lage or aaj jab itna bara sawaal hamare saamne aaya tab jaake hamein yaad aaya ke in dono kee kabkee shaadi hojaanee chaheeye thee.

Surekha: Ye tum kehrahee ho Kamya? Tumhaare kehne per hee hamnein kundliya dekhai thi tumhaare guruji ko kyu ke tumhaara itna vishwaas tha

Kamya: Me maantee hu ke mere kehne pe yeh sab huwa, lekin ab mujhe lagta hai ke agar hamne wo qadam nahi uthaaya hota to phir aaj yeh din nahi dekhna parta

Everyone thought about what she said

Abhay:
Hum aaj yaha yeh kehne aaye hai ke jo baat adhuri rehgayee hai osse ab puree kardijye. abhi jo haalaat chalrahe hai ose rokne ka yahee tareeka hai

Kamya: Ha Surekha ji ab hamein in dono kee jaldse jald shaadi kardenee chaheeye. Wese bhi bohat dair ho chukee hai or ab or dair nahi karnee chaheeye hamein.

Prince: Theek kehrahai hai yeh ma. Kuch dino se me or Rani bhi yahi baat soch rahe the ke ab Saumya or Pari kee shaadi hojaani chaheeye

Rani: Ha ma, ab in dono kee shaadi karhee denee chaheeye. ab agar hamne yeh qadam nahi uthaaya to jo baat log karahai hai wo sach hojaehgee.

Kamya: wese bhi ab yeh dono ek dusre ke bagair rehnahi sakte to behtar yahi hoga ke ab hum inkee shaadi karde.

Abhay: Hum yaha aapse aapkee betee maangne aaye hai

Surekha: Yeh kya kehrahai ho Abhay? Pari pehlese tumhaaree hee amaanat ho chukee hai. Ab to sirf rasm or rivaaj baaqi hai. Tum sab ne mere mooh kee baat cheenlee or mere dil per se bhaari boje hata diya. Me to kabse in dono kee shaadi kee chinta me din raat guzaar rahee hu. Me bhi wahi chahti hu jo tum sab chahte ho.

Kamya: Me aaj hee punditji se shaadi ka mahurat nikaal ti hu 😊 ab isme or koi dairee nahi hogi.

Prince and Abhay hug 🤗 congratulating each other and Kamya and Rani follow suite.

Prince:
Rani yaha pe kya karahee ho 😃 Jao jaake mithai le aao. Hamare samdhi ghar aaye hai

Everyone just celebrated together on the new refreshed unsion.

Parashar house

Saumya was dwelled in his thoughts regarding everything that had been happening in the past year since Sujal's accident. Even though physically he wasn't responsible for it he knew that somewhere he was.

Saumya thought: Ek din Kashish mujhe itnee bari saza degee, yeh maine socha nahi tha. jabse wo haadsa huwa hai tabse me din or raat sirf apne aapko hee kosta raha hu. Mujhe laga tha ke Sujal kee itnee madad karke shayad me apne wo karam dhosaku or shayad phir Kashish ke dil me mere liye thoree to jage ban jaaehgee. Lekin me galat tha. Darr ta hu me ke jab Sujal ko pata chalega ke kya huwa hai to wo kya karega...Nahi mujhe osse her rishta tore na hee hoga. Osme hee sabkee bhalai hai...Phir bhi sochta hu ke maine koi gunaah nahi kiya or mujhe itnee bari saza milee. Per Kashish ne to paap kiya hai. Osne do jism, ek jaan jaise dosto ko alag kiya hai. Ose kya saza milegee? Meree tarafse oskee saza yehi hogee ke oske her ilzaam me qabool karchuka hu bina sawaal pooche or bina jhijhak ke. Or oskee sabse bari saza to yehi hogi ke me ose maaf kardoonga.

Just then his cell rings. He tries ignoring it for the first few minutes but the caller was adamant and kept ringing. He took the phone irately 😡 and stared at the name on the screen. He couldn't believe who was calling him and just didn't react.

Saumya thought: Me jaanta hu Sujal tu ne mujhe kyu phone kiya hai lekin me tujhse baat nahi karsakta 😒 (he kept looking at his cell) Me jaanta hu ke tu jaanta hai ke me jaa bujke nahi uthaaraha isiliye tu ne kaata nahi hai abhi tak, per mere dost me majboor hu...Nahi 😡 Saumya tujhe osse baat karni hogi. Yeh kaam to hona hee hai to abhise kyu nahi? You've to do it.

Relunctantly he pressed the answer button. He composed hismelf to make sure he didn't appear weak

Saumya:
😡 kyu phone kiya hai mujhe?

Sujal: Yeh jaane ke liye ke tu kesa hai

Saumya: (controlling his tears 😭) Itna sab kuch karne ke baad poochraha hai ke kesa hu? 😡 Acchi dosti nibhaayi hai tune

Sujal: Yeh kya kehraha hai tu? 😕

Saumya: Wahi jo tu sun raha hai. Me kabhi soch bhi nahi sakta tha ke mera apna dost jisko maine hamesha bhai kee tarha rakha tha wahi mere peeth pe choora bhokega

Sujal: Saumya, mujhe samjh me nahi aaraha, tu kya kehraha hai

Saumya: Ya to tu bohat bewacoof hai 😛 ya to bohat chaalaak. Ab bewacoof to tu hai hee nahi to iska matlab ke tu chaalaak hai isiliye itna anjaan banne ka naatak karaha hai. Manna parega tujhe Sujal 😡👏 aakhir tera maqsat pura ho hee gaya. Are agar tujhe sab kuch chaheeye tha to ek baar mujhse kaha hota, sab kuch tujhe de deta. Itna tamasha karne kee kya zaroorat thee?

Sujal: Yu paheli me baat mat kar 😒😕 saaf saaf bata mujhe ke tu kya kehna chahta hai

Saumya: Me yeh kehna chahta hu ke tune aaj apna asli roop dikha hee diya 😡 Kashish to sirf ek parda tha, ek aisa mukut jiske peeche ek aisa insaan tha jo itna kayar nikla jo ek aurat ka sahaara lekar itnee bari chaal chali. Tu itna gir gaya Sujal 😡😡 Tune hamaree dosti ko gaali dee hai

Sujal: Bus Saumya 😡 kabse yeh anaab shanaab bakraha hai. Lagta hai tu hosh me nahi hai jo yeh sab bole raha hai

Saumya: (closed his eyes 🥱) aaj hee to hosh me aaya hu. Itne saal se me jo bhram me jee raha tha, wo aaj aakhir me toote hee gaya. Teree dosti, tera pyaar sab kuch ek dikhaawa tha. 😡 Tune mera bohat galat fiada uthaaya hai Sujal, lekin ab bus! 😡😡 Tang aagaya hu me tere peeche daur te daur te. Ab me yeh bewacoofi daurata nahi rahoonga. Tune mujh pe daga baazi ka ilzaam lagaya na? asal baat to yeh hai ke tune mere saat daga baazi kee hai. Or ab tujhe is sab ka hisaab chuka na hoga 😳 Samjha tu? (clenched his teeth together trying to suppress his anger 😡 with himself. He couldn't let Sujal find out otherwise he would figure out he was just pretending)

Sujal:
Aaj bohat bari baat kehdi tune

Saumya: aaj kal bohat saari aisee cheeze horahee hai jo pehle nahi huwi. Ab tu in sabka aadee hoja kyu ke aaj ke baad her cheez ka hisaab lunga tujhse. Jitna waqt or paisa barbaad kiya hai maine tujhpe, wo sab ka barabar ka hisaab lunga. ab tu tayyaar hoja.

Sujal: Mera sab kuch to tera hee hai 😔 mere dost. Ab or kya chahta hai tu? Ab to sirf meree jaan bacchee hai lekin wo bhi tujhpe fida kardunda.

Saumya: (lets out silent tears 😭 as it was hurting him a lot but he had no choice) Waqt aane pe wo bhi leloonga.

He cut the phone before Sujal said anymore heart wrenching things. Now the tears flowed like a river 😭😭 out of his eyes. He had never imagained that he would ever say those harsh words to Sujal.

Kamya:
Kardiya apne dil ko patthar 😡 or dedi apne aapko saza?

Saumya: 😲 mama aap?

Kamya walked inside his room and sat down next to him and held onto his trembling hands.

Kamya:
Mat kar aisa Saumya 😒 Apne aapko aise ghute, ghute ke mat maar. Me jaantee hu ke Sujal kya hai tere liye. Are wo bhi mera beta hee hai jisse maine bachpan se paala hai. Tum dono kee fitrat se waaqif hu.

Saumya: Mama please 😔 aapne waada kiya tha ke aap mere her faisle me mera saath dengee. to is baar bhi...

Kamya: Me tere saath hee hu Saumya. Lekin me Sujal ko bhi acchi tarhaase jaantee hi or wo tere mann kee baat parh sakta hai. Tu chaahe kitnee koshish kare, yeh raaz osse nahi chupa sakhega.

Saumya: Mujhe har tarhaase koshish karnee hai isee me sab kee bhalai hai. Bus mama 😳 ab me kuch nahi badal ne waala. Maine jo thaan liya to bus thaan liya.

Kamya had no choice as she knew she could never win an argument with her son.

Kamya:
Theek hai teri marzi (after a brief pause) Are jo baat tujhse karnee aayee thi wo to bhool hee gayee. Aaj me tere sasuraal gayee thee 😊

Saumya: Kyu? 😕 kuch huwa to nahi na waha kisiko?

Kamya: 😒 nahi aisi baat nahi. sun meree baat. Me or Abhay waha teree or Pari kee shaadi ke baare me baat karne gaye the.

Saumya: kya? 😲 mama aise haalaat me aap log ko hamaree shaadi kee paree hai

Kamya: yeh sab oskee wajese hee huwa hai. Aaj agar teree or Pari kee shaadi hogayee hoti to phir aise haalaat peda hee na hote. Me jaantee hu ke logo ke baato ka koi farak nahi parta tujhe. Per soch ke ek larki ke liye bohat mushkil hai aise daur se guzar na. Wese bhi tum dono ke rishte ko bohat waqt hogaya hai to aaj nahi to kal shaadi to karnee hee hai na. To phir aaj kyu nahi?

Saumya: Is waqt hum shaadi ke baare me kese soch sakte hai 😒

Kamya: yehi sahee waqt hai beta 😊 Logo ke mooh band karne ka yahi tareeka hai. Bus ab tu mujhse koi behas nahi karega 😳 jese tu chahta hai ke me tere her faisle me tera saath du, ossee tarha me chahtee hu ke tu mere her faisle me mera saath de

Saumya Theek hai mama aap kee jaisee marzi. 😊 hamesha aapne mere liye faisle liye hai, wo sahee hee huwe hai to is baar bhi aapne sahee hee faisla liya hoga.

Kamya hugged 🤗 Saumya and kissed his forehead.

Kripa:
Kya baat hai 😛 aaj ma bete me bohat pyaar horaha hai (she walks in towards the bed) zara hamein bhi to yeh raaz bataye

Saumya: kyu, tujhe jalan horahee hai? Wese bhi honi bhi chaheeye 😛 )(hugs 🤗 Kamya from the side) kyu ke mama mujhse ziada pyaar kartee hai

Kripa: Nahi 😒 mama mujhse ziada pyaar kartee hai (pulls Kamya towards her and hugs 🤗 her)

Saumya:
Maine kaha mujhse karti hai

Kripa: Mujhse karti hai

Saumya: Mujhse

Kripa: Mujhse

Saumya: Mujhse

Kamya: Bus, bus 😳 phirse tum dono ne jhagra karna shuroo karliya?

Kripa: jhagra hamesha bhaiya shuroo karte hai 😡

Saumya: a ha, ha, ha 😛 me shuroo karta hu? hamesha uksaata koun hai mujhe?

Kripa; 😡 bhaiya aap...

Kamya: Chup! 😡 ab naahi koi jhagra karega or naahi koi behas karega. Is baat ka faisla me karungee. 😊 me apne dono baccho se bohat pyaar karti hu

Both Kripa and Saumya lean their heads with Kamya's while she pats both their cheeks.

Kripa:
Mama aapne wo raaz kee baat abhi batayee hee nahi

Kamya: Bohat jald is ghar me dhair saaree khushiya aane waali hai 😃 pura ghar oskee chamak me sajne waala hai

Kripa: (looks a bit lost 😕) Kya matlab?

Kamya: Are tere bhaiya kee shaadi honewaali hai

Kripa: Kya! 😲 iska matlab ke...

Kamya: ha

Kripa: Ab finally yeh...

Kamya: ha, ha

Kripa leaps with joy and hugs 🤗 Saumya really tight nearly choking him. He tries freeing himself but Kripa is just too excited. Finally after so many days he saw a glint of happiness 😊 in her eyes and finally her face had lit up with it. He felt very relieved.

Few hours later

Kripa's cell rings and she looks at the caller. She just keeps looking at it with two minds. whether to pick it up or ignore it just like all the time. then she thought that she has to end it right there and then. So she has to talk to him. At first the hesitation came so she dropped the phone back on the table. She just sat there listening to the ring tone and with a confused 😕 mind.

Mishti:
Kripa! Kripa! kaha hai yeh larki? (she searches the ground floor)

the phone still hasn't stopped so she knew he was adamant. Why didn't he leave her alone? Finally she made the decision to talk to him after all and make sure he doesn't bother her again. Just as she reached out for the phone, Mishti arrived.

Mishti:
To tu yaha pe bethee hai or me tujhe pure ghar me dhoondh rahee hu

Kripa: Ha wo Mishti me...

She takes the phone and is about to press answer when Mishti grabs it

Mishti:
Me yaha tujhse milne aayee hu 😡 or tu hai ke mujhe ignore karahee hai

Kripa: Mishti ek zaroori phone call hai, mujhe baat karne de

Mishti: Mujhse zaroori tera kounsa kaam hai 😛 baad me kardena (she absent mindedly presses the button on the phone and doesn't realise that it was the answer button. Then she puts the phone back down on the table)

Angad:
hello... (he stops as he hears their conversation in the background)

Mishti:
Tu phirse yu mooh latkaake kyu bethee hai 😔 aaj to khushi ka din hai 😊 aunty ne mujhe bataya ke ab Saumya bhaiya kee shaadi honewaali hai

Kripa: ha (tries to force a smile 😃) me bohat khush hu

Mishti: wo to tere chehre pe dikh raha hai. Come on Kripa, you've got to get out of the past. Bhool ja ose.

Kripa: kese bhool jao (tears 😭 welling up) oskee yaadein mere nas nas me shaamil hai. Din raat sirf oska chehra nazar aata hai. Oskee yaadein mujhe tarpaane lagee hai Mishti 😭 tarpaane.

Mishti: Tu kyu ose yaad karke apna ji bala ti hai. 😡 he doesn't deserve it! Jis aadmi ke liye tu itna tarap rahi hai ose teree na kabhi qadar thi or nahi kabhi hogee. Jab ose teree koi parwa nahi phir tu kyu oske peeche...

Kripa: 😭 kyu ke wo mera peecha nahi choreta. oskee yaadein mera peecha nahi choretee. Jab bhi me ose bhulaane kee koshish kartee hu wo koi na koi roop me mere saamne aajaatee hai jisse phirse mera mann os behrehem 😡 insaan kee taraf jhool ta hai. Mujhe samjh me nahi aaraha ke me kya karu (buries her face in her hands) kya karu me 😔

Mishti: (hugs 🤗 her)
Dekh me jaanti hu is waqt tu kis dorahai pe khari hai, but don't worry sab theek hojaehga 😳 me tujhe madad karungee or dheere, dheere oskee saari yaadein tere maan se dhoore hojaehgee.

Kripa continued to cry 😭 Angad had tears 😭 in his eyes too after listening to Kripa's painful plight. He realised how much pain she was going through and it was all because of him. Now he was even more determined to talk to her, ask for forgiveness and to take away all her pain.

Mishti:
chal ab tera mood theek karne ke liye me tujhe bahar le jaatee hu

Kripa: (comes out of embrace and wipes her tears) 😔 nahi Mishti mujhe kahi nahi jaana. Mera mann nahi

Mishti: kya mann nahi? osee ke liye hee to le jaarahee hu. thora bahar jaaehgee to apne aap tera mann halka hojaehga.

Kripa: lekin Mish...

Mishti: lekin, wekin kuch nahi 😳 bus maine teh kardiya to kardiya. Tu mere saat Rainbow restaurant (don't know many places in India so just made it up) jaarahi hai. ab jaldise tayyaar hoja.

Kripa: theek hai meree ma 😛 tujhse to koi jeet nahi sakta.

After hearing that Angad disconnected the call.

Angad thought: Rainbow restaurant? 😊 ab to me ose milke hee rahunga

Then he dialed another number

Angad:
Ha Josh, 😃 dekh mujhe tujhse kuch kaam hai.

He discusses a plan with him

Rainbow restaurant

Kripa:
😔 hum yaha kuch dair hee rukenge

Mishti: oho Kripa 😵 abhi abhi to aaye hai or tu jaane kee baat karahee hai. Dekh araam se bait.

Kripa: Mishti tu jaantee hai na ke ab mujhe aisee bheer pasand nahi aati 😒

Mishti: To kya zindagi bhar dunya waalo se naata tore degee? Is tarha se jiya nahi jaata Kripa 😒 or yeh tu bhi jaante hai

Kripa doesn't reply and just sulks 😔

Mishti:
Theek hai baba, hum yaha khaana khaenge oske baad chale jaenge. Theek hai 😊 Me order karti hu.

Kripa just nodded and rested her elbow on the table leaning on her cheek. The only reason she hated places like these were because they reminded her of Angad. He always use to hang around in places like these being a party animal.

After half an hour or so their food had still not arrived. Both of them were engrossed in a conversation. Actually Mishti was the one talking and Kripa was just listening answering in monosyllables - yes, no, um, etc.

Announcer:
Good evening ladies and gentlemen 😃 Aaj aap sab ke mano ranjan ke liye Rainbow restaurant ne ek naye singer ko hire kiya hai. he's known to be a charmer or oskee aawaaz me aisa jaadoo hai jo jaane waalo ko keech laata hai. Please put your hands together for our new performer

The audience applauded 👏👏 as the announcer left the centre stage. The lights went dim with only a few degress visibility enough to see someone standing but the face is dark. As the music began playing, the tune of the guitar sent flutters through Kripa. she didn't know what was causing it but it felt as if someone very close was around her. Then she saw a tall man step out of the dark and into the dim light of the stage and he sat down, still playing the guitar.

Eventhough his face was not visible, his profile seemed highly familiar which was making Kripa very uneasy. soon his voice filled the room.

Singer: dil se dil ka rishta jo hai
pal do pal mein mitta nahi
bandhan dilo ka tutta nahi bandhan dilo ka tutta nahi


Kripa's heartbeat began racing as if she was building up some sort of anxiety as that voice had completely stunned her 😲😍 she knew who it was but didn't want to notice. Then her heart skipped a beat as his sensuous melody flowed to her ears.

Singer: tere dil ka mere dil se
rishta purana hain
in aankho se har aansu
mujhko churana hain
mujhko churana hain
mujhko churana hain
tere dil ka mere dil se
rishta purana hain


For some reason the singer preferred to stay in the dark as if he was hiding physically yet still revealing soulfully.

Singer: teri bechaini ka teri tanhai ka ehsaas hain mujhko sun
main jo saath tere hu phir tujhe hain kaisa gam
dard baat lenge ham sun
in palko mein khushiyo ka sapna sajana hain
tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hain


Kripa desperately wanted to see who was singing. Even though the singer went around all the other tables but her's she could feel his eyes only on her. the same feeling she had when someone else's eyes always use to be on her. She would know immediately that he was looking at her.

Kripa thought: Yeh awaaz to sirf oskee hai, to kya yeh wo...

Before she could finish her chain of thoughts a spot light got shone on her as if showing she was an angel from heaven. She became a bit blind and tried to see clearly when lightening struck. Her heart stopped beating and she felt numb. That one face took her back in time. Back to the beginning as if nothing had happened. He was right here in front of her and she hated the fact he still managed to stir those feelings in her. the same feeling she had felt at their first meeting. Automatically tears 😭 flowed out of her eyes.

Angad saw the tears and became misty eyed 😭 himself. All her pain and surrow had been reflected in her tears and he felt so guilty as he was responsible for it.

Angad: kaise main batau yeh tera is tarah rona
dekha nahi jaata hain sun
shaam jab dhalti hain subah muskurati hain
khushbuye lutati hain sun
udaasi ke lamho mein hamein muskurana hain
tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hain
in aankho se har aansu
mujhko churana hain
mujhko churana hain
mujhko churana hain


After he finished he attempted to go up to her and take her in his arms 🤗 comfort her, tell her he is sorry, tell her how much he loves her tell her that now he's here for her. But she was quicker than him. Before he could make his move she shook her head still sobbing 😭 quietly and ran out of the restaurant away from the curious eyes of the public, away from a guilt ridden Angad and away from the pain he had given her.

end of part.



Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏

finaly aapko fursat mil hi gayee...

good part after long time...
saumya aur sujaal dono pe ab thoda zulm kam karo...jab koi khas dost aisy baate karta he to bahut takleef hoti he.....

plzzz next part me itna time mat lagana..

👏 👏


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Posted: 17 years ago
awww awesome; aww krpa ran away , hmm wonder how long but 😉

nice part

Faiza
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 great part dear thx 👏 kripa wowo kya baat hia 😆
Edited by monikaseth - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tekhum

👏

finaly aapko fursat mil hi gayee...

good part after long time...
saumya aur sujaal dono pe ab thoda zulm kam karo...jab koi khas dost aisy baate karta he to bahut takleef hoti he.....

plzzz next part me itna time mat lagana..

👏 👏


well i had to cum back and pls all the readers again

hmm wese agar aap gore se dekhenge to pata chalega ke is larai me bhi dono ka pyaar chupa hai. ek dusre ko itnee acchi tarhase jaante hai ke ek dusre kee takleef se waaqif hai.

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