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Posted: 17 years ago
now i have decided tht i will be in favour of kashish,,,,,,,now i will play a negative role over here πŸ˜† ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
i m tired of being in a support of these good ppls in our story,,,,,abhi hum bhi kashish ka saath denge uske revenge mein,,,,,,,,,hahahaha

hey i tell u i m always lissening to sad songs only,,,,,,,kuch nahi hota yaar,,,,,,give me some new idea,,,,,,because ur idea always works,,,,,this is my personal experience,,,,,sacchi
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

now i have decided tht i will be in favour of kashish,,,,,,,now i will play a negative role over here πŸ˜† ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
i m tired of being in a support of these good ppls in our story,,,,,abhi hum bhi kashish ka saath denge uske revenge mein,,,,,,,,,hahahaha

hey i tell u i m always lissening to sad songs only,,,,,,,kuch nahi hota yaar,,,,,,give me some new idea,,,,,,because ur idea always works,,,,,this is my personal experience,,,,,sacchi

hey Zahra now im worried abt u man, what are u saying being negative is very bad. very very very bad. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

first of all why do u want to cry? i mean dont worry be happy no πŸ˜†

tell u what either see a very sad movie or read a very sad novel. that wud work then. well it sometimes works with me.

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Posted: 17 years ago
Part hundred

Parashar house


Kripa is coming down the stairs when she hears some crashing noises from the study. She becomes curious and runs over there only to be horrified 😲 She finds a very angry 😑😑 and mad Saumya smashing everything in the study.

He is just destroying every possible breakable item as if he was taking his rage out.

Kripa walked in to calm a hyper Saumya as she was well aware about the peak his anger 😑 went to and then he was uncontrollable.

Kripa:
Bhaiya! 😲 Yeh kya karahai hai aap?

He didn't listen to anything but continued breaking the furniture. Then he picked a vase which was left and threw it at the mirror 😑 missing Kripa just by a fraction.

She becomes stunned 😲😲 and moves away quickly to stop him behaving like an animal.

Kripa:
Bhaiya please 😭 (trying to grab him) ruk jaaye bhaiya!

Saumya had become uncontrollable and he just pushed Kripa away aggressively 😑😑 and resumed with his violent activities.

she couldn't tolerate it anymore, she had to do something so she ran out of the room to the telephone.

Kripa: (on the phone)
hello? 😭 hello bhabhi...bhabhi

Pari: Kya huwa Kripa, 😲 tu itna ro kyu rahi hai? πŸ˜” tu theek to hai na?

Kripa: Bhabhi...😭 bhabhi wo bhaiya...

Pari: (hysterical 😲) kya huwa tere bhaiya ko?

Kripa: bhabhi aap please jaldise yaha aajayeh. Bhaiya bohat ghusse me hai πŸ˜” or saaree cheeze tore rahe hai. I can't stop him! Bhabhi aap jaantee hai na ke onka ghussa kitna khatarnaak hai. πŸ˜” please aap hee roke sakti hai onhe.

Pari: Me abhi aarahee hu.

Pari runs out of the house ignoring the concerned looks of her parents and Surekha. They all become worried 😲 seeing Pari run out like that after the call and they all want to know what happened.

Pari arrives at Parashar house and without wasting any time rushes to Kripa.

Kripa:
Oh Thank God πŸ˜” bhabhi aap aagayee.

Pari: Saumya kaha hai Kripa?

Kripa took Pari's hand and dragged her to the study. When both girls stepped in they were terrified πŸ˜”πŸ˜² It was like Saumya had completely been transformed into a monster a beast 😑😑 more like it. He was screaming out with agony 😑😑😑 and then both women were surprised 😲😲 when Saumya let out a loud cry 😑😭 and fell on his knees.

Pari immediately ran towards him and knelt down next to him and craddled his head into her arms. She comforted him and began crying 😭 herself. Kripa found it too devastating so she ran out of the room crying 😭 herself.

Saumya:
Pari sab kuch khatam hogaya 😭 sab kuch.

Pari: Saumya sab kuch theek hojayega 😭 aap please sambhaal ye apne aap ko.

Saumya: Kuch theek nahi hoga. Aaj ke baad kuch theek nahi hoga. 😭😭 sab kuch barbaad hogaya. Sab kuch.

He continued crying 😭 violently whilst Pari became really worried about him.

Pari:
Yeh aap kya kehrahe hai πŸ˜• Saumya?

Saumya: ha Pari, aaj maine meree zindagee ka aisa sauda kiya hai jisme her taraf se haar sirf meree hai (he came out of her embrace and wiped his tears) Pari aaj ke din maine apne zameer ko maar daala πŸ˜” apni zindagi ko apne haatho se khatam kardiya.

Pari: Kya kiya hai aapne? 😲 Please saaf, saaf bataye Saumya πŸ˜” mujhe darr lagraha hai

Saumya narrates the whole incident with Kashish and how she made him vow to iradicate himself from Sujal's life forever.

Pari:
Yeh sab...Kashish aisa kese karsaktee hai πŸ˜”

Saumya: Mujhe laga tha Pari ke Kashish kee nafrat itnee bari nahi hai πŸ˜” ek na ek din to wo samaj jaehgee or mujhe maaf kardegee. Per me ghalat tha πŸ˜’ Pari. Oskee nafrat din bhar din or ziada hotee gayee or aakhir me yeh din aaya.

Pari: aapne aisa kyu kiya Saumya? kyu oskee baat maan lee?

Saumya: to kya karta? 😑 osse tumhe zaleel karne deta? apne parivaar kee izzat yu hee bazaar me neelam hone deta? πŸ˜’ Nahi Pari nahi (cupped her face in his hands) Mere jeete jee koi bhi aisa nahi karsakta.

Pari: to iske liye aapne apni jaan se hee dushmani karli

Saumya: kabhi, kabhi zindagi me kuch paane ke liye kuch khona parta hai. to agar mere parivaar kee izzat paane ke liye mujhe mere bhai ko khona hoga to yahi sahi πŸ˜” Jeena seekh lunga oske baghair (tears welling up 😭) bhool...bhool...

He couldn't continue as he burst into tears 😭😭 Pari took him in her arms again and held him tight.

Pari:
Saumya aap is larai me akele nahi hai 😭 Me hoon na aapke saat. Hamesha rahoongee. hamesha rahoongee.

Both stayed in each other's arms for a while and cried 😭😭 their hearts out.

Garewal house

Kashish:
(on the phone) πŸ˜ƒ mubarak ho, ab hamara kaam hogaya.

Person on otherside: aakhir wo din aahegaya 😈 Me jaanta tha ke Saumya aisa hee karega, kyu ke oske liye apne parivaar se barkar kuch nahi hai.

Kashish: we got him right where we wanted him. Oske weak point ko humne pehchaana or phir ose istemaal kiya. 😊 end waqt pe Pari ko is case me shaamil karna tumhaara idea...maana parega πŸ‘

Person on otherside: yeh to me kabse jaanta tha Saumya apne upar saare ilzaam bardaasht karlega lekin Pari ke upar ek tinka daag nahi lagne dega. To bus πŸ˜ƒ yahi baat hamare fiade me aagayee.

Kashish: Bus ab kal is sabka faisla hojaehga or Sujal or Saumya hamesha ke liye alag hojaenge. Mujhe mera sujal wapis miljaehga or tumhe tumhaara raasta miljaehga. oske baad mujhe yakeen hai ke hamara rishta bhi khatam hojayega

Person on otherside: Bilkul 😳 Is ke baad hum dono ke raaste alag hojaenge or yeh raaz hamaree maut tak seene me dafan rehna chaheeye. 😑 Tum jaantee ho ke agar me Saumya ke saat itna bara khel, khel sakta hu to phir tumhaare saath bhi karsakta hu.

Kashish: mujhe yaad dilaane kee zaroorat nai 😑 kyu ke me acchi tarhase jaantee hu. Or wese bhi tumhe pakarwaanese mujhe koi fiada nahi hone waala πŸ˜’ me jo chahtee thee wo mujhe mil gaya to ab mujhe tumse koi lena dena nahi.

Person on otherside: or aisa hee rehna chaheeye. Acchee tarhase zehen me daal dena.

Both cut the phone

Then the guy on the otherside turns around in his swivel chair and stares at Saumya's picture on the wall.

Guy:
Aakhir aaj maine tumse wo ek cheez cheen hee lee Saumya πŸ˜ƒ Jiske liye tum jeete the marte the osko maine hamesha ke liye tumhaaree zindagee se dhoore kardiya. Yeh to shuruwaat hai 😈 ab dheere, dheere tumhaara sab kuch me cheen lunga. Ab tumhaaree khushi meree muthi me hai, meree muthi me

He lets out an evil chuckleπŸ˜ˆπŸ˜†

end of part.

and thus concludes the hundreth part. yippeeeeeeeeee sorry i got a bit carried away but i cant believe i reached to hundred parts. Wow, this story has gone a long way. thanks to all of u readers out there.
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Posted: 17 years ago
tooooooooooooo goood thx dear , congrats for 100th part. πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey MSD!!!!!!!!!!!!good part,,,,,,,,,,,kitna emotional part tha yaar,,,i really wanted to se saumya cry,,,,,,,he had never cried in any of his serials till now,,,,,,,i m very happy tht u made him cry,,,,,,,,,,and whoz this other guy??have u ever mentioned bout him before???
and haan thanx for the idea,,,,,,,
btw wen do u come online??bahut din se baat bhi nahi ki,,,,,,,,wanna tell u something imp.........
aur congratulations,,,,,,,aapki toh nikal padi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,100 parts......cool yaar,,,,,,,,,,,abhi is khushi ke mauke pe i think aapko ek kushi se bhara part likhna chahiye,,,,,,,,wat say??
Edited by brite_dawn52 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

tooooooooooooo goood thx dear , congrats for 100th part. πŸ‘

hey monika thnaks a lot.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

hey MSD!!!!!!!!!!!!good part,,,,,,,,,,,kitna emotional part tha yaar,,,i really wanted to se saumya cry,,,,,,,he had never cried in any of his serials till now,,,,,,,i m very happy tht u made him cry,,,,,,,,,,and whoz this other guy??have u ever mentioned bout him before???
and haan thanx for the idea,,,,,,,
btw wen do u come online??bahut din se baat bhi nahi ki,,,,,,,,wanna tell u something imp.........
aur congratulations,,,,,,,aapki toh nikal padi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,100 parts......cool yaar,,,,,,,,,,,abhi is khushi ke mauke pe i think aapko ek kushi se bhara part likhna chahiye,,,,,,,,wat say??

im glad i fulfilled ur wish. yeh i wanted to make him cry too as he hasnt cried like that yet.

yep ive mentioned the other guy severral times before when Kashish was talking with someone on the phone. remember all the time she had made the attempts on Sujal's life. perhaps u shud go over them again.

well i dont get much time nowadays to sit online but i wud luv to talk to u too. lets see when we get that time.

anyways thanks as usual for appreciating and yeh i can't believe i reached 100 parts. likhte likhte itne aage bhargaye ke paat hee nahi chala. πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 17 years ago
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congratulations,mabrook for 100 parts.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
arey i know bout tht other man,,,,,,but have u ever mentioned his identity in the previous parts,,,,,,,,,,
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

arey i know bout tht other man,,,,,,but have u ever mentioned his identity in the previous parts,,,,,,,,,,

nope that mystery is still left to be solved

it wud cum soon.

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