WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 69

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *F^a^i^z^a*

awww awesome; aww krpa ran away , hmm wonder how long but 😉

nice part

Faiza

thanks faiza

yeh she's very disturbed right now but soon she'll get around after all no one can run away from the charms of ANGAD! .

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 great part dear thx 👏 kripa wowo kya baat hia 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
great part
glad that soumya is gettin married but felt sad for kripa
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks deeya123.

yeh they're getting married but dont worry abt Kripa as she'll cum around soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
hellow MSD...........i know u are really very busy but plz take out sometime for ur ff also..............hope u will post the next part soon...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey Zahra yeh i know i was supposed to have posted the part a few days back but u know how right now life over here has become busy so i dont get time to come and write. i can only come and read.

but hey dont worry i'll definitely try and post the next part today.
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Posted: 17 years ago
okies MSD,,,,,,,,,
i understand and hope u wil post the part soon............
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Posted: 17 years ago
loved it heart wrenching seriously its high time the grudge of kashishs resolved before i want to kick or slap her
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0

loved it heart wrenching seriously its high time the grudge of kashishs resolved before i want to kick or slap her

thanks for liking it

yeah the grudge will continue for some more time but eventually things will cum around when her eyes will open.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part hundred three

Kripa ran out of the restaurant and as she was going towards the car she bumped into somebody.

Akshat:
Are Kripa 😲 tum yaha?

Kripa didn't say anything but stared at him with teary eyes 😭 she didn't know what took over her but she went forward and hugged 🤗 Akshat and cried 😭😭 out loudly.

Akshat:
Kripa kya huwa?

Kripa: 😔 Akshat wo mera peecha kyu nahi chorta 😡 kyu baar, baar mujhe aise tarpaane aajaata hai?

Akshat: kiskee baat karahee ho 😕 Kripa? (he pretends to be oblivious when he knew exactly who she was talking about. He had been present inside and had seen the whole drama)

Mishti: (came running after her)
Kripa! Kripa tu... (pauses when she sees Akshat) 😲 Tum yaha?

Akshat: Ha me wo kuch kaam se yaha aaya tha or Kripa... 😔 kya huwa hai ise Mishti, or yeh kis kee baat karahee hai?

Mishti: Bus kuch nahi 😡 wo Angad andar tha or wo... 😡😡 Gosh os aadmi me bilkul bhi sharam nahi. Itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi wo Kripa ka peecha nahi choreta. Ab to lagta hai ose sabak sikhaana hee parega.

Akshat: Yeh tum mujhpe chore do Mishti. Mujhe paata hai aise logo ko kese handle karna

He attempts to go forward but Kripa prevents him

Kripa:
Nahi 😒 Akshat tum is waqt kuch nahi karoge. Me ose kuch nahi karna chahtee

Akshat: Lekin Kripa wo tumhe...

Kripa: Please Akshat rehne do ise.

Akshat: Theek hai tum kehtee ho to is baar chore deta hu ose, lekin agar dubaara osne tumhe tang karne kee koshish kee to phir me ose nahi chorunga

Just then Angad comes running towards them in order to speak to her.

Angad:
Kripa please meree baat suno me...

Akshat: Kripa tumse koi baat nahi karna chahtee 😒 do you understand?

Angad: Me tujhse baat nahi karaha 😡 so you bloddy well stay out of it. Dekho Kripa me...

Kripa: 😡 koun hai aap. kya me jaantee hu aapko?

Angad: Kripa please 😔 me jaanta hu tum mujhse naraaz ho lekin ek baar mujhe samjhaane do

Akshat: eh 😡 tujhe kaha na ke yeh tujhse baat nahi karna chahtee. 😳 Just leave from here (pushes Angad back a bit)

Angad: (glares 😡 at Akshat)
Don't you dare touch me 😡😡 Mere or Kripa ke beech mat aah.

Akshat: 😛 warna kya karlega tu ha? (continues pushing him back)

Angad's head boils and his eyes become fiery

Angad: 😡😡😡
Teree to... (he grabs onto Akshat's collar and is just about to punch him)

Kripa:
Stop it! 😡😲 chore do ise Angad!

Kripa pulls Akshat away and just leaves from there leaving a crushed 🥺 Angad. Instead of caring for him she cared about Akshat and that too becasue he had brain washed her so much. He wiped the tears 😭 😭 from his eyes and walked away to nowhere as he needed to wash away his pain as well as Kripa's.

Soon Kripa was outside Parashar house. Akshat insisted on going along with the girls just to make sure Angad didn't come to bother them. The real reason was to prevent Angad from talking to Kripa as he knew that Angad knew the truth.

Akshat:
Thanks Akshat 😊

Akshat: hey thanks kis baat ka 😛 dekho Kripa you're my friend or mera farz banta hai ke me apnee friend ka khayaal rakhoo. Okay now you take care 😃

Kripa: Bye.

As she was leaving Akshat developed an evil 😈 grin on his face as now the bird had been trapped.

Evening at Thaapar house

Pari is sitting with her head in Rani's lap

Pari:
Ma mujhe samajh me nahi aaraha ke me kya karu. 😔 kese sambhaalu yeh dono bhai behen ko? Abhi, abhi to me Kripa ke toote huwe dil ko jore ne kee koshish karahee thee ke mere saamne dusree uljhan aagayee. Ma maine Saumya ko dard se rote dekha hai. Oske dard ko mehsoos kiya hai. Samajh nahi aata kese sambhaaloongee in dono ko. Chalo in dono ko to me sambhaaloongee ma, lekin mujhe koun sambhaalega. Darr ti hu ke kahi oskee wajese me kamzore na parjao. Aap bataye ma me kya karu?

Rani: Me jaantee hu ke in dino jo kuch bhi huwa hai ose lekar hum sab bohat pareshaan hai 😔 khaas karke tum or Saumya to ho hee. Dekho Pari agar Saumya is waqt kamzore par gaya hai to tumhe oskee taaqat bannee paregee 👍🏼 Ose is waqt tumhaaree sab se ziada zaroorat hai. Tumhaare pyaar or vishwaas ke wajese hee wo is imtihaan se guzar paaehga. Or rahee baat sambhaalne kee 😊 to wo sab Ramji pe chore do. Wo sab sambhaalenge. Tum ziada chinta mat karo.

She managed to console an overstressed Pari

Prince and Rani's bedroom

Prince:
Oho 😛 aaj kya huwa aaj itna andhera kyu hai?

Rani: Prince 😕 light to on hai to aap yeh kya kehrahai hai?

Prince: Are jab chaand pe grahan laga hai 😃 to phir andhera hee hoga na (cupped her face in his hand) Kya hum iskee waje jaan sakte hai?

Rani: (leans her head on his shoulder) Aap jaante hai ke hum sab is waqt apne apne pareshaani me uljhe hai ke hamne kabhi Pari se poocha hee nahi ke ospe kya beet rahee hai. 😔 Jaante hai wo is waqt kitne mushkil daur se guzar rahee hai ke osko khud samajh me nahi aaraha ke wo kya kare.

Prince: Tum fikar mat karo Rani, 😳 Pari bohat hee samjhdaar hai or zimmedaar bhi. Wo sab kuch baree acchi tarhase sambhaalegi

Rani: Yakeen nahi hota ke ab oskee shaadi hone waali hai. Ke ab hamaree Pari itnee bari hogayee hai

Prince: (puts arm around her shoulder) hmmm 😃 mujhe bhi yakeen nahi hota ke jis nanhi si Pari ko me apni godh me uthaake ghoomta tha aaj wo is ghar se bida hone kee tayyari karahi hai.

Rani: Aapko yaad hai jab hum log Saumya se pehli baar mile the to kya huwa tha?

Prince: (thought for a while 😍 and smiled 😊) kya maza aaya tha or os bechaare kee to hawa tight hogayee thee...

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Pari is in a shopping mall browsing around as if she is searching for someone. She is looking at the hanging clothes but is more interested in looking at the entrance of the shop.

Pari: (on the phone)
Hello...ha kaha hai aap? 😔 kya? Me yahee hu...theek hai.

She puts the phone down and continues browsing.

Few minutes later Saumya arrives at the mall and goes to the same shop Pari was at but he can't find her there. He keeps looking around but he still can't find her. Then as he steps out of the shop he spots her on the opposite side walking out with a handful of shopping bags.

Saumya:
Wow to madam saheba sach much yaha shopping karne aayee hai 😛 mujhse kehrahee thee ke me yaha bore horahee hu or aap jaldi aajaaye or yaha pe aaya to yeh... Abhi iskee khabar leta hu

He quickly walks in the direction he saw her going and keeps following from a distance. he couldn't stop admiring how beautiful she looked in a sari as it was the first time he saw her in that. Then he looses her because of his day dream so he keeps looking here and there. Then finally when he spots her he stops as he finds a middle aged man following her.

Prince:
Are meree baat to suno Rani, 😔 I'm sorry kaha na

Rani: 😒 Mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karnee. Maine jab kaha aapse aane ko to 100 bahane banaye lekin jab aapkee assistant ne bulaaya to forun chale aaye 😡

Prince: Oho tum bhi baat ka batangar bana deti ho (he grabs her elbow) Please meree puree baat suno

Rani: (jerks her arm out of his grip) hame kuch nahi sunna 😒 Aap jaake aapkee Jenny se baat kijye

She walks off and Prince continues pursuing her

Saumya sees the whole drama but he can't hear anything. he immediately flares his nostrils 😡 on seeing a stranger bothering his Pari so he rolls up his sleeves and moves into the direction behind Prince

Prince:
Rani please ruko...

Saumya grabs his collar from behind making him stop and look over his shoulder. He was quite surprised 😲

Saumya:
Ek baar jab wo kehrahee hai ke ose akela chore do to samajh me nahi aata kya?

Prince: Dekhye yeh hamare aapas ka maamla hai, so stay out of it (he tries to move forward but Saumya doesn't let go)

Saumya:
Yeh mera maamla hai 😡 Bari jaldi hai oske peeche jaane kee. 🤢 apnee umar dekhi hai

Prince: Dekho batameezee kee hadd hotee hai. Tum khamakha beech me parahai ho. Ab choro mujhe.

Saumya: Batamezee kee hadd to tumne paar kee hai 😡 Yu sare aam ek larki ko chere te huwe sharam nahi aatee?

Prince: 😲 kya? Dekho wo mere biwi hai okay so just...

Saumya: oho to itnee jaldi ose apni biwi bhi bana liya? Lagta hai bohat chaalu kisam ke ho tum. Jab police kee maar paregee na tab pata chalega.

Prince: Kise kya pata chalta hai wo to waqt hee bataehga. Pehle mujhe yeh batao ke tumhe kya farak parta hai me os larki ke peeche jao ke na jao.

Saumya: Because she's my girlfriend okay 😡 Ab tum samajh gaye ho to tumhaari bhalai isme hee hai ke yaha se seedhee tarhaase chale jao warna...

Prince: (now he was amused) 😊 warna kya karloge?

Saumya: Oh you pushed the wrong button. Ab to lagta hai tumhe seekha na hee hoga.

He is just about to give him a blow on the face when...

Prince:
Are dekho security guard aagaya 😛

Saumya turned around which gave Prince a chance to run out of there. Saumya realised he fooled 🤪 him so he chased after him.

Prince: (kept running until he crashed into someone)
Oh Thank God Rani tum milgayee

Rani: 😲 yeh kya haalat banayi huwi hai aapne

Prince: are mat poocho 😕 pata nahi koun paagal milgaya...

Saumya: (grabbed Prince's shirt again) Maine kaha tha na ke isse dhoore rehna 😡

He didn't wait anymore and punched him in the eye throwing him on the floor.

people around stopped and stared at what happened. Rani gasped 😲 as she was shocked. Who was this guy and why did he hit Prince?

Rani: 😲
Prince! (she knealt next to him on the floor and sat him up) Aap theek hai? (then she looks at Saumya) Yeh kya horaha hai 😡

Saumya: Yeh aadmi tumhe chere raha tha or iskee parwa karahee ho?

Rani: kya? Dekhye bhaisahab aap ko ghalat femee huwee hai, yeh mere pati hai

Saumya: Pati? 😕 tum mazaak karahee ho na? 😛

Rani: Jee nahi 😒 me aapko jaantee tak nahi to phir me kyu... (she gets diverted to Prince's moans

Saumya:
Tum mujhe nahi jaantee? 😲 mujhe nahi jaantee? Dekho yeh naatak choro or...

Prince: Dekho naatak to tum karahe ho kabse or...

Saumya attempted to attack Prince again

Pari:
Saumya! 😡😲

He stops and looks at a horrified 😲 Pari with her hands covering her face with shock.

Saumya:
Pari tum?

Pari: 😲 yeh kya karahai hai aap?

Saumya: is aadmi 😡 ko tumhe chere ne se roke raha hu... 😕 lekin tum to yaha (looks at Rani and then back at Pari, totally confused 😕)

Pari: (walking towards Prince)
Yeh mere papa hai 😡 inpe aapne haath uthaane ka socha bhi kese?

Saumya: Huh, Papa? (he felt like burying himself down under 🤢) per yeh... (refering to Rani)

Pari:
Yeh meree ma hai. 😔 Gosh Saumya aap aisee harkat karenge maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha

Pari took hold of Prince and then all three of them began walking off leaving Saumya standing there

Saumya: (to himself)
to wo Pari ke papa hai or wo oskee ma 😕 to phir wo Pari ko nahi chere rahe the? 😛 Mujhe kya pata tha ke dono ma betee kee shakal ek jaisee hai? Oh God pehlee hee mulaaqaat me sasurjee ke saamne pachka hogaya

Prince: Pari tum is larke...

Saumya: Sunye, Uncle! please rukhye

Prince: Are yeh larka peeche hee pargaya hai 😆 mujhe to lagta hai paagal hai. Chalo jaldi yahase

Pari: Papa ek...

Prince doesn't listen, grabs both Pari and Rani's hands and begins walking forward, Saumya follows.

Saumya:
Ek min please rukhye 😛 Uncle mujhe aapse baat karnee hai

Prince increased his speed 😆. Pari kept trying to talk to him but he didn't listen as he was afraid for their safety.

Saumya:
Yeh to bare akroo nazar aarahe hai 😡 Phir bhi I've to continue. Uncle! Please rukhye

Pari: Papa mujhe aapse baat karnee hai

Prince: Jo bhi hai wo ghar jaake karna, is waqt is paagal insaan se bachna hai hame 😆

Pari: Papa osee ke baare me. Please ek baar sun to leejye

Prince still doesn't stop and carries on.

Pari:
Papa wo paagal nahi hai

Prince: 😕 tumhe kese pata? (looks over his shoulder) Are wo abhi tak peeche hee hai

Pari: Kyu ke papa me osse pyaar karti hu

Prince made an abrupt halt. It felt as if someone threw utensils from the 20th floor. He couldn't believe what he heard 😲

Just then Saumya just caught up but he didn't see where he was going and he stumbled against a flower pot which made him loose balance and fall in front. Prince saw Saumya flying towards him and he was in a state of shock to react so he didn't even move and before any of them knew Saumya and Prince both fell on the ground on top of each other.🤣

Prince:
Lagta hai aaj tumne mujhe maar daalde ne kee thaan lee hai

Saumya: I'm sorry uncle 😛

Some time later...

Prince, Rani, Saumya and Pari are sat on a table in the food arena. Rani is applying an ice pack on Prince's eye and head whilst Pari and Saumya are sat across awfully nervous and afraid.

Prince: (looked at Saumya) 😳
to tum meree betee se pyaar karte ho?

Saumya: Ji...ji...wo aap...kee betee mujhse py...py...pyaar kartee hai

Prince: To iska matlab ke tum nahi karte?

Saumya: Ji nahi (he jerked up) 😲 mera mat...matlab yeh hai ke me...me...me...🤢

Prince got up and began moving onto Saumya

Saumya: (kept leaning back on his chair)
Uncle...sir...wo darsal...🤔aap...me...wo...s...s...sorry...me...

Prince grabbed Saumya's shoulders and made him stand up. He still had a stern angry look 😳😡 whilst Saumya was slightly trembling.

Prince:
Relax young man 😊 (he lessened his grip on him) Tum to aise darr rahe ho jese tumne bohat bara jurm karliya ho. 😃 are bhai pyaar kiya hai koi chori nahi ki.

Saumya: To iska matlab aap ko koi aitraaz nahi?

Prince: Yeh to maine nahi kaha. 😛tumhaare kuch imtehaanaat lene honge barkhudaar 😳 oske baad yeh faisla hoga ke tum meri Pari ke laayak ho bhi ke nahi

Saumya gulped and looked at Pari who was equally as nervous. She knew that her father will approve of Saumya because she loved him but still she hoped Saumya didn't goof up as usual.

Prince:
To tumhaara naam kya hai?

Saumya: Ji S...S...Sa...Saumya

Prince: kya? 😛 Bara hee unique naam hai S,S,S, Saumya.

Saumya: Ji S,S,S Saumya nahi, sirf Saumya.

Prince: Hmm...😳 kuch kaam waam bhi karte ho ke bus yuhi logo ka peecha karte rehte ho?

Saumya: Ji me wo...hmmm 🤢 kya karta hu mein...wo (the very presence of Prince was making him intimidated and he became conscious) Ji me wo...

Prince: Yeh kya ji me wo, ji me wo laga rakha hai . Maine poocha koi kaam karte ho bhi ke nahi?

Saumya: Ha kartoo hu na me wo...uh...😛me...

Prince:
Iska matlab ke kuch nahi karte

Saumya: Ji ha...😲 nahi mera matlab hai ke abhi kuch nahi karta lekin bohat jald kuch karunga

Prince: 😡 Saaf, saaf batao

Saumya: (took in a deep breath and then spoke in one breath) Ji maine abhi abhi parahi puree kee hai or papa ke business me bohat jald shaamil hone waala hu 😊 or baat yeh hai ke me aapkee betee se bohat pyaar karta hu or shaadi karna chahta hu or me waada karta hu ke me ose hamesha khush rakhunga (then he intakes breath after seeing Prince's stern face)

There's silence for some time until Prince breaks the ice with his laugh 😆 The rest look upon him with amazement 😲😲😲

Prince: 😆
bara hee kamaal ka namuna pasand kiya hai tumne Pari (he gets up) 😳 Khare ho.

Saumya gets up slightly afraid 🤔 of what he is going to do and hesitates to go near. Prince grabs hold of him and gives him a hug. Then pulls out.

Prince:
Pari hame tumhaaree yeh pasand... (drum roll) 😊 pasand hai.

Pari leaps with joy and hugs 🤗 Rani. Saumya is overwhelmed 😊😊😃

Prince:
Ek baat yaad rakhna 😳 agar meree betee ko kabhi bhi rulaaya na to I'll kill you 😡

Saumya laughed 😆 out loud thinking Prince is joking again but when he sees Prince's serious face he stops and gives him a sheepish look 🤔😛 Then Prince bursts out laughing 🤣 and patts Saumya's back.

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end of part.





Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago

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