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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
Thanks for liking it , More romance will follow. keep on reading 😳 😉 😳
Edited by sunaina02 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
loved it!!!

when is the next part coming up!!

Hope to have more romantic sceens of RN!!!

Keep goin!!

Cheers!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
excellent!!!!
mind blowing!!!!!!!!!!!!
touching!
pls continue soon yaar
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continued

"Chalo mere ghar"

Rajveer picked up the dupatta and wrapped it around Naina's head , planting a kiss on her forehead. He picked up her bag on his left shoulder and holding Naina with his right hand led her to his simple makeshift home.

His home was an one-room abode , brick walls but thatched roof , quite common in rural Punjab. As they came near the doorstep, Rajveer asked Naina to stop and stand there.
"Tum aankhen bandh karo aur jab tak main aapas na aoon, yehi pe khare raho.. " saying this to Naina , he went inside. Naina, like an obedient student stood there, her eyes tightly closed.

Soon Rajveer came out with an earthen bowl in his hand. A lone lighted thin stick of a candle stood on it surrounded by a handful of wheat and rice. He held the bowl up close to Naina's face.

"Naina, aankhen khulo"

As Naina opened her eyes, Rajveer himself was astounded by the beautiful scenario he was witnessing – naina's face., wrapped around by the maroon piece of cloth ,her tanned skin glowing golden , reflecting the candle light, and her bright smiling eyes shining like diamonds…….Rajveer wanted to worship this goddess!

"Tum mere apne ghar mein pehli baar kadam rakh rahi ho , aaj meri ma ya bahen hoti to tumeh zarror aise hi swagat karti. " Rajveer uttered.

" You know Naina, I have no memories of my parents as they died when I was less than three years old. Neither do I have any sister, nor a brother. I am absolutely alone. My school and college years were all spent in boarding houses and supported by my parent's lawyer. Only when I joined the academy did Lala Sahab contact me and accepted me as a son. He said that he knew my dad."

After the "aarti" done with, Naina entered the room, slowly putting her first step over the threshold – the threshold that every woman has to cross . The room was small and bare except for some basic necessities of life.. A bed stood on the right-hand side neatly covered with a bare threaded but clean spread. Few pieces of clothes and a towel hung on a rope besides the bed. On the opposite side stood a rickety table with a more rickety chair next to it. . A tray containing wound dressings, scissors and medicine was lying on that table. Just to the left of the door, there was a wooden platform with few utensils, cup, a jug of water and a small kerosene stove. Compared to the luxury of Rajeev's quarter at KMA this was indeed a very humble abode but for Naina, this home of her beloved was her paradise on earth.

Naina looked at the tearful eyes of Rajveer and smiled. She threw her bag on the bed and got down to business.

"Sir aap ka ye bandage bahut ganda hai, main ahbi dressing kar deti " Naina pushed Rajveer to the rickety chair.
She lit the kerosene stove and put some water to boil. She took out soap from her bag and asked Rajveer where she could wash hands. Rajveer waved towards the left of the hut. . Naina went out and found a paved area with a tube-well. in the middle. While washing her hands she looked around. A big house stood towards the east about 200 feet away with a big courtyard bustling with usual activities.

Naina returned to the "hut". This time Rajveer like an obedient patient did not move an inch from that chair. Naina gently took out the old bandage from his arm, screwing up her face and nose. "Kitna ganda hai " .
Tenderly but deftly she cleaned the wound of any dry pus and blood with cotton wool and warm water. . She again wrapped it with a new bandage. Meanwhile Raj was staring at her and observing her closely. Every time Naina looked up , her eyes met those of Rajveer. And each time her cheeks turned a shade rosier.
When finished with the dressing, Naina lovingly patted the wound and turned around to throw the litters outside. Rajveer also got up from the chair and got hold of Naina's right hand and swiftly pulled her to him. He held her face close to his, getting lost in her eyes. He bent down and got closer to Naina, his lips almost touching Naina's.
Unconsciously Naina parted her lips .The litter bag dropped from her hand and her arms went around Rajveer's neck.
Rajveer desperately wanted to kiss Naina.
Naina was eager too.
But their lips did not meet.
Rajveer managed to control himself.
He just smiled at Naina, whispering – "Thanks Naina"
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65

👏

amazing!!!!

😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
I was much more eager to read that 😳 ...but he controlled himself 😳 ..anywayz...chances n situations will come up 😳 ..so waiting for that...do update soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Naina blushed and ran out of the room.

Rajveer followed her out. They ran towards the field, Naina giggling and looking back at Raj waving at him . Raj quickly covered up the distance and stood in front of Naina.
"Naina kaun , kaun jaante hai ki tum mujhko dhundne aye ho. ?"
"Koi bhi nahin!"
"Matlab?"
"Matlab no one,"
"Tum kya paagal ho gayi"
"Paagal ?" Naian again ran away laughing. Sound of her laughter filled the air . It was like the sound of mountain spring falling on pebbles nd stones.
"Sahin kaha aap ne , main sachmuch paagal ho gaye hoon, diwani hoon, magar bahut khush hoon"
She went round and round with her hands spread out and face turned upwards towards the sky."
She lost her balance and fell down on a mound of wheat .
Raj came and dropped down beside her.
"Aap jaante hai kyun main paagal hoon?"
"Nahin , tum bolo na ?" ,
"Kyun ki …………" Naina again tried to run from there.
This time Rajveer was serious..
"Naina be serious,. If you haven't told anyone , soon people will get worried and will search for you. It wont take them long to trace your whereabouts and find you here. And I will also be caught"
This made Naina serious. She came and sat beside Raj on the mound, holding his hands.

"Aise main kabhi nahin hone doongi."

"To phir dhyan se suno meri bat." RAj continued,

" You will stay here for three to four days and help me establish contact with Chaubey.
I need a cell phone and I need some money and a stock of ammunition for the gun you have brought for me. "

"Uh hun that is my gun." Naina protested.

"No, I know it is Chauhan's gun ,- how could you mange it ?!"
"Yohin to Captainji – aapke liye mujhe kya kya nahin kadna padti, churane bhi ." Naina pouted her lips."
Raj lovingly patted Naina's right cheek, "I know Naina "

"Naina baat suno – In the evening after it is dark, we will go to the nearest telephone booth and ring chaube. .He will send me these things upto Malaudh and you will collect them from there and pass it over to me. After that you are free and must return back."
"One more thing, you must take all the other cadets Alekh, Huda, Yudi, Pooja , Ali into confidence. " Raj insisted, "This is a long struggle against the deadliest enemies of our country., we cant fight it alone. "
"Main to yahan sare jeevan bitane ke liye ayi hoon." Naina thought., but did not say it aloud because she knew that the ball was in Raj's court once again.

Naina was listening to him while holding his hands. Slowly she put her head on his chest and closed her eyes. Rajveer tenderly held her in that position,, kissing the top of her head. He was astounded by the spirit and determination of Naina. He even loved her more for it. Somewhere he felt himself lucky to be loved by a girl like Naina. Well did Naina really love him? They have never really confessed to each other in terms of nouns and verbs.
"Should we?" he wondered.
Natural rhythm of Naina's breathing indicated that Naina had fallen asleep. Rajveer hugged her even closer.


Edited by sunaina02 - 18 years ago
diya7000 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
😳 no need to say that it was once again sweet part..so do update soon..
Edited by diya7000 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
jadu hai tera hi jadu.....................
next part................................
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
plz su upadte kerde yaar verna mujhe nind nahin ayegi .. naian to so gayi
per RAJ ne meri ninde uda di hai teri is fic ki vjah se

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