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Posted: 18 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sherlock_holmes

hey buddy its as usual brilliant. 👏 Guess we all should have nominated you too for the golden awards. It wud have been great both u nd rajveer getting awards at the same time

Muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah for such a nice compliment. 😛

I am flattered and have turned all red to imagine myself with Rajeev😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
Ok dear friends here is the mext part.




Holding her hand, Rajveer led Naina to Bhabiji's house. It was a very short journey, but for Naina it was the first journey of her new life, akin to the saat phere every couple does during the wedding ceremony. Henceforth Naina would follow Rajveer in each and every step of her life, led by him, guided by him. So with her hands in Rajveer's hand, she feared nothing.

As they entered the courtyard, a bevy of girls of different ages ranging from five to seventeen gathered around the couple talking nineteen to the dozen, laughing and squealing with delight. These girls loved to discuss about Rajveer, the new "Chachu" in the kheti amongst them. Rajveer being as handsome and charming he was, always invoked interest in girls of all ages. Presence of a probable Chachi" with the Chachu took their interest to new heights !!

Bhabijee, a generously endowed woman with a pleasant and smiling face, draped in traditional Salwar kurta came out of the kitchen
"Oh Veeru Bahi , aap ne pahele kyun nahin bataya ki Sonia bhi aye hai. Humein to inhe shaan ke saath swagat karma chihiye tha. "

"Bebe aaj hum inke liye sangeet manaengi , bahut maaza ayega, main khub nachungi," said one of the young girls.
"Chup, aise shor mat rachao", Bahibijee mildly rebuked the girls, all of whom laughed and winked at each other as Rajveer was till holding Naina hands. Realising this, Rajveer immediately dropped her hand and cleared his throat.

Soon Naina was guided to a room upstairs with a bed, a wardrobe and a large window facing the fields. She quickly freshened up and changed into the other set of clothes she had. It was of bright red color and went very well with her slightly tanned complexion. Naina was a naturally attractive girl with flawless complexion and beautiful dark eyes. She did not need any makeup or jewels to enhance her beauty. She combed her dark brown hair and let them lose on her shoulder and back.
Naina was looking stunning when she came down , no wonder Rajveer stared dumbstruck at this beauty which again made the girls giggle.
Bhabiji had prepared an elaborate lunch and with lot of care and attention served it to her guests.. After lunch, Rajveer left, telling Bhabiji that he would come around six evening to take Naina to the STD booth.

This time Bhabiji led Naina to her room and closed the door behind her as they got inside.

"Naina – mujhe sab kuchh malum hai, tumhara naam Naina hai aur wo Rajveer hai. , lekin yahan par aur kisiko yeh malum hona nain chaiye, is liye tumko main Soniya naam se pukarungi aur mera naam Geeta hia, tum mujhe Geeta Bhabi bol sakti ho."

She further explained how her husband also worked for the army as a sepahi and was disqualified due to some kind of health problem. They were distantly related to Chaubey and always took good care of the fugitives that Chaubey occasionally sent to them.

" Tum abhi araam karo, Rajveer bhaiya tumhe chhe baje lene ayega. "

Edited by sunaina02 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
ab tum batao tum kab update karne ke liye wapas auggi...
bcoz I am eagerly waiting................
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
I will update again tomor late night or day after tomoro.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
Good going..frnd..but next update should have to be long..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Continued



XII

It was little past seven in the evening; Darkness had already engulfed the Punjabi countryside. The night sky was inky-blue with just a curve of an Eid-like moon in the western horizon. The sky was studded with twinkling stars. While walking through the fields, Rajveer and Naina could feel the chill of the north Indian Autumn. Naina drew her dupatta closely around her . Observing that, Rajveer drew Naina closer to him. Dressed in traditional folk attires, they were looking very much like a lovey-dovey newly married local couple. The happiness of being together and their love for each other literally shone in their eyes making the play-acting even more real.

"Aap to kamal si dekh raha hai, " Naina could not stop her giggles when she first saw Rajveer in traditional Punjabi salwar matching with his bearded face.

"Aur ye kya hai ? " Rajveer pulled the tousled braid of Naina's hair tied with silver and pink ribbons, " Tum soldier ho ya nachnewali ? "

" Wo Geetabhabi ki un-makeover scheme hai – ek cadet ko gaon-wali ledki banane ka. "

It took them an hour to reach the STD booth along the highway, the exact spot where Naina got down from the bus that same morning. They entered the booth together playfully jostling with each other. Watching them together, the middle-aged booth operator was quite amused .
Naina held the receiver and Rajveer dialed the number.
Busy tone.
To kill some time, Rajveer played around with Naina's fingers . "Chaube milega, nahin milega, milega, nahin milga….."
Once more Naina dialed the number. This time it was ringing.
" Chaube speaking "
" Naina "
" !8"
"57"
" Malaudh"
" North east Sir"
"Kahan ho tum?"
"Geeta Bhabi ki pas "
" Veeru Chacha kaise hai?"
" Bahut ac ….. " Rajveer made a sign to Naina"


" Bahut burra sir , we need money, medicine and the means to contact doctors and medical help. "

"On the road away from Malaudh to the west, there is a big pharmacy called "Siddhi baba Medicine store" Collect everything required from there"

"Code word – Mujhe 5 saline bottles chahiye. " The answer would be " How many tablets and injections." You should answer – "56 and 8"

"But when?"

"Some time is needed to make things ready, So day after tomorrow after 11 am. "

The line was disconnected with a click.

They got out of the booth and paid at the counter.
Rajveer and Naina were so engrossed in each other , they did not notice the shdow following them keeping a distance of twenty feet.


Edited by sunaina02 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
wow...interesting!!!!!!!..but why sooooo short update??do post d next longer part soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
interestung!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
phir se picha kiya,he bhagban ........................
anyway update soon..............
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continued

On their way back to their village, the night was already so dark that the fields around them seen to shine brightly even in the faint starlight.

The starlight shone in their eyes too. They were walking holding their hands and did not realize when desire crept in and flowed through the veins of Rajveer into those of Naina. Suddenly each became conscious of the physical presence of the other. Rajveer became conscious of Naina's feminine countenance, soft fragrance of her hair and her pink luscious lips. Naina gradually sensed the masculine strength in Rajveer's finger gripping her wrist. The natural body odor of Rajveer excited her more than the fragrance of any expensive toiletries.

Naturally their pace slowed down. They stopped under a tree. Naina looked up at Rajveer's eyes . Something was happening inside her. Her mind was going through emotions she had never felt before. Her body was experiencing something unknown before. She began to pant and drops of sweat appeared on her forehead. Thousand years of social inhibition stopped Naina from making the first step. She stood there with her back against the tree her head tilted, face turned towards Rajveer, her heart throbbing , her lips apart. and eyes shining with unknown anticipation.

Rajveer looked down at Naina. His hands were put against the tree. He drew closer to her. He looked at Naina's face. It was so beautiful! He wanted to kiss every inch of it.- her forehead , the red and silver bindi on it, her arched eyebrows, her eyelids with long eyelashes. , the tip of the aquiline nose, the sides of her nostrils, the rouge of her cheeks and her pink and pouted lips. Yes, he wanted to kiss her on the lips.

They did not know that how their action had saved them. The man who followed them got convinced about their relationship and left them alone.
Edited by sunaina02 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
WoW ! Why did you stop here dear?

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