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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
wow dat was gr8 update 👏 👏
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
i wanna know. please update soon. i bet u it was that she got RAPED. god i feel like killing that person already.
Edited by Patel 1993 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
continue soon.. i really wanna know what happened 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
Part 4

Mukti starts crying and hugs Prem.
All of a sudden she faints.
Prem pickes her up and they all go home.

its been 3 hours and she hasn't woke up.
Everyone left and they left Prem with Mukti @ home.
Prem feels so bad for Mukti.
Prem thinks: wat could've happened???? wat happened in the forest?
Prem take her hand in his.
He walks around the room
In the Background this song comes on:
Sun Zara- Lucky-No time for Love:
sun zara, soniye sun zara - 4
aaj khamoshiyon se
aa rahi hai sadaa
dhadkane hai deewani
dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai

sun zara, soniye sun zara
sun zara soniye sun zara
aaj khamoshiyon se
aa rahi hai sadaa
dhadkane hai deewani
dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai
sun zara, soniye sun, sun, sun zara

beete lamhon ke saaye to
bas yahin tham gaye hain
yaad mujhe aaye teri baatein
palkon ki surkh chaadar pe
ashq bhi jam gaye hain
teri aankhon se na hat thi aankhein
bebasi ka hai alam
kya karoon main bataa
dhadkane hai deewani
dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai

sun zara, soniye sun zara
sun zara, soniye sun zara
aaj khamoshiyon se aa rahi hai sadaa
dhadkane hai deewani
dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai

sun zara, soniye sun zara
sun zara, soniye sun zara
choom ke apne honthon se
tere ghum ko churaa loon
laake tujhe de doon, khushiyan saari
apne har beqraari ko
seene mein hi chuupa loon
meri chaatein jaayen, tujhpe waari
sehmi sehmi labon mein
gul gayi hai dua
dhadkane hain deewani
dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai

sun zara, soniye sun zara
sun zara, soniye sun zara
aaj khamoshiyon se
aa rahi hai sadaa
dhadkane hain deewani
dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai

sun zara, soniye sun zara - 4

Mukti slowly opens her eyes.
Prem goes to Mukti.
Prem: Mukti...how r u.
Mukti: w...wat im fine...did u find the guy?
Prem: no...wat guy?
Mukti: i heard someone call me...i went in the forest and there was a guy there...and he...
Prem: wat did he do?
Mukti: he tried to do zabar dasti with me...he got all over me...he tried to...
Prem:wat?...wat did he try to do!
Mukti: RAPE ME!
Prem: KYA!

thats were ill end it today...hope u enjoyed! plzzz leave comments gud and bad!

luv ya
Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
omg wow dat was gr8 👏
luved da song 😃
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
nice fanfic...like that story...lol and of course the characters.... 😳
Edited by neha^^ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
i KNEW it. someone RAPED her. wow, what an update. continue soon. hope they find the guy who done it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
OMG OMG OMG😲😲....
that was REALLY VERY VERY good ff 👏 👏 👏
it was G-R-E-A-T.....
plzzzzzzzzzz cotninue soon...
dieing to read the next part 😳

Aisha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
hey guys...i never really said thanks to all the comments i get on wat i read...i really appreciat u guys for reading my ff!...ill try to make this update really gud! but u could write bad and gud comments after!

Part 5

Mukti didn't go to collage for 4 months...but the day she decided to go Parvati said for her not to go...but she begged and so she went to the collage.

Collage:

Mukti was in the canteen...she was reading all the new books she had to study with...many people came up to her and asked her..." rn't u the one who got raped?" but Mukti didn't pay attention to that...she couldn't even keep her mind on her work...her mind was off thinking about Prem.
Prem was the one who took really gud care of her these past 4 months. Then Maithili and KT came to her.
Maithili: Mukti r u sure...u really wanna stay here.
KT:....u guys...i have news.
Mukti and Maithili luk @ her @ once.
Both: wat?
KT: im in love!
Maithili: wat with who?
KT: laksh!.
Mukti and Maithili: wat!....does he love u?
KT: yes.
Maithili: i cant beleive my brother never told me this!
Mukti: he's been out of the house so lately! and we didn't even have shak on him
KT: wellu guys now dont be soo.....
Mukti: we got to tell mom!....
Maithili: yes u guys should get married!
Mukti: fancy clothes Fancy dres....
Mukti saw Prem coming...with Laksh and Adi.
Maithili: wat happened Mukti!
KT: y'd u stop?
Mukti: l...l..luk KT ur Laksh!
Maithili: ur stutering...u mean ur Prem!
Mukti: wat no!
Prem: hey guys wats up!
Maithili: nuthing! u?
Adi: Maithili can i talk to u???
Maithili: sure go for it!
Adi: not here come with me.
Maithili: ok.
They leave.
KT: laksh can u help me with my home work...let's go to the library!
Laksh: ok lets go!
They also left it was Prem and Mukti left.
Just then someone came upto Mukti
" hey...Mukti right"
Mukti nodded.
" hey im sorry about ur rape"
Mukti luked down...this time, that comment reminded her of her rape. Mukti got scared. she got up quickly and run out. Prem gets up and was about to go after her wen
" hey im really sorry.."
Prem: no u shouldn't have even said ne thing!
Prem then runs after Mukti

Adi and Maithili:

Maithili: so wat did u want to say?
Adi:...i...u...u noe wat !
Maithili: wat?
Adi:...i always wanted to say something to u.
Maithili: so did i
Adi: ok u go first.
Maithili: i ...
Adi: i...
Maithili: love...
Adi: love...
Maithili: u..'re shirt!
Adi: wat c'mon thats no fair!
Maithili starts running away wen Adi grabs her arm and pulles her back.
Adi: i love u
They had a major eye-lock!
Maithili: I…I…I love u too.
Adi: smiles and hugs her…then he lightly kisses her on her cheek and runs away.

KT and Laksh were in the Library but the weren't working on there work…they were romancing
KT was in Laksh's lap and they had a book over there faces . No one knew wat they were doing.

Back to Prem and Mukti:

Prem finds Mukti curled up into a ball in a corner were no one could c her. Her eyes were closed.
Prem tries to touch Mukti.
Mukti: NO! don't touch me!
Prem: Mukti…its me Prem
Mukti: noooo don't just leave me!
Prem shakes Mukti.
Prem: Mukti! Its me Prem.
Mukti: Prem! Plzz save me he's coming!
Prem: whose coming?
Mukti luks around her and c's that she's not in a forest she hugs Prem
Just then the buzzer rings everyone was going to there classes
" Prem! C'mon yaar lets go to class"
Prem: just coming!
Prem let go of Mukti.
Mukti: Prem???
Prem: c'mon lets go to class.
Mukti nodded. The both got up and walked to class.

On there way.
Mukti I forgot something u go ill be there.
Prem: r u sure.
Mukti: haan baba…mein abhi ayi.
She goes to her locker. There was no one seen in the hallway.

Prem's friend: c'mon Prem lets go
Prem: u go ill wait for Mukti
PF: ok c ya
Prem: yea.
Prem starts walking to Mukti's locker.

Mukti luks in her locker but has a feeling someone was behind her…she turns around…and is shell-shocked!
Mukti screamed
It was the guy who raped her.

Hope u enjoyed this part...ill try to continue tomorrow...but i might not get the chance ill try update as soon as i can.for now bye!

luv ya
Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
👏 👏
wow realli gd
cnt wait 4 more 😃
continue soon 😃

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