New FF PM/AM/LKT- prt 13 pg 12- End... - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 update! 👏
loved the song 😉 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
wow dat was gr8 i love dis ff soo far its goin gr8 continuee soon i love it 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
good part... sontinue soon 😊 😊
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Part 2

Wen they wake up they couldn't get out of bed cause of there headache...

Adi"oh no who brought me here?

Laksh" how'd i get here?"

Prem" mom shouldn't have foundo ut we were drunk...."

The three quickly took a shower...

Basu House:

Downstairs:
Prem: hey mom...how r u
Prerna: mein theek hoon tu nashta kar.
Prem: ok
Adi comes.
Adi: mom how'd i get home yesterday?
Prerna: oh...Maithili dropped u off...we found out u were drunk!...i told u not to drink y did u?
Adi: sorry we...
Prerna: and Prem y'd u drink?
Prem: sorry maa we actually....wait if maithili brought adi home who brought me and wat about Laksh?
KT: meine laksh ko chora tha ghar pe...aur Mukti ne tumhe.
Prerna: dekha betiyaan kya kar sati hain...ab jao sab nashta karo.

Deskhmukh house.

Laksk ran to Maithili's room...and just opens the door and c's maithili sitting on her bed.
Laksh: maithili how'd i get home?
Maithili: we brought u Adi and Prem to ur own houses.
Laksh: so did u tell mom?
Maithili: nope...but right now Mukti just went to tell her.
Laksh: kya???
he ran downstairs screaming" NOOO MUKTI!"
Mukti turned around: wat happened laksh?
Laksh:(whispered) dont tell mom about yesterday.
Mukti: i wasn't going to tell her.
Laksh: kya lekin Maithili ne kaha...
Jeevan: wat did maithili say?
Laksh: uhhh.....
Mukti ran upstairs and started laughing her head off.
Laksh: kal raat.
Jeevan: hmmm
Laksh: kal raat..mein, adi aur Prem...
Jeevan: mujhe sab pata hai.
Laksh: kya?
Jeevan haan...jab Mukti aur Maithili ghar aye the aur tum unke saath the...and u were drunk..i saw wat happened!
Laksh: sorry ajj ke baad...ill never drink.
Jeevan: tum log ajj kya kar rahe ho?
Laksh: hum..were going out...
Jeevan ok.
Laksh, Maithili and Mukti eat there nashta..and go to Basu house.

The three go in.

Mukti: Choti Maa!
Prerna: eyy meri bachi Mukti...tum log ajj yahan?
Laksh: hum yahan in theeno ko uthane aye hain.
Prerna: ohh tum log aaj kahan ja rahe ho?
Adi: ghumne...
Prerna: ok..

that is were ill end th update today!...plzzz comment!
luv ya Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey gr8 part update soon
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Wonderful part can't wait for the next part!!😳

Plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow awesum update 👏
continue soon 😃
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awesome update. can't wait for the second part.
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cool part .... continue soon 😊 😊
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Part 3

The Mall:

All 6 stayed together. Wen ever the girls wanted something the boys would buy..and for themselves nothing...the nthe three...Mukti, Maithili and KT thought of buying something for Prem Adi and Laksh!.

Mukti bought Prem:



Maithili bought Adi:


K.T bought Laksh:


@ the end of the day they give them there girft.

The next day was prem's birthday:
Basu Family and Deshmukh family go to the beach..which was near a forest.

The Three girls stay together and the three boys stay together...oh and the parents stay together.

Maithili saw that Adi was wearing her watch.
Mukti saw that Prem was wearing her cap and chain.
and KT saw Laksh wearing her T-Shirt.
They were all very happy.
The boys saw that they were smiling so they went to them.
The three say happy birthday to Prem.
then out of nowere Mukti hears her name being called.
She heads towards the Forest.
Maithili: weres Mukti going?
KT: i dunno let her go...
Maithili: no someone has to go with her.They all start arguing with each other wen they hear a scream.
The 5 run into the forest.
They find Mukti on the ground and shivering.
Maithili and KT: MUKTI!
Prem runs to Mukti and helps her up.
Prem: wat happened Mukti?
Mukti starts crying and hugs Prem.

thats were ill end it today...wonder wat happened to Mukti??? if u wanna noe then keep posting comments. gud and bad. ill update tomorrow!

luv ya Umam

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