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Part 12

That night…

Mukti was still up doing some work, and Prem was asleep on the couch…soon Aman came in and motioned her to go to bed with him in his room.
Mukti nodded and turned the light off in there room and went to Aman's room, but was still doing her work on the laptop in his room.
Aman wrote on a piece of paper "aap so jaye! Plz…"
Mukti: ok one minute, mein bas yeh cheezein baandh karoon, phir so jathi hoon, tu so jao…
Aman shook his head and looked the other way…
Mukti: theek hai, mein in sab cheezon ko abhi baandh karthi hoon…dekho! (Aman turned and saw Mukti turn everything off, then shut the comp off) ab so jao…mein bas bathroom hoke aati hoon
Aman nodded and closed his eyes.
Mukti soon changed into her pajama's and went downstairs for a glass of water.
She soon turned the lights on when she noticed KT in the kitchen as well.
Mukti: KT! Tum yahan?
KT: haan kya hai, kuch tabyat theek nahi thi toh, dawai lene ayi thi…
Mukti: oh, kya hua, mein tumhari madat karoon?
KT: nah mein theek hoon, bas...oh mil Gaya, mein bas abhi jathi hoon…
Mukti: ek minute KT, yahan bait ke Aram se pee lo phir jao
KT nodded. Soon Laksh came down the stairs.
Mukti: Laksh tum, sab uthe ve kyon hai, Adi aur Maithili bhi uthe ve hai kya?
Laksh: mujhe Pani Peena tha, issi liye mein neeche aaya tha…sorry…
KT and Laksh quickly after doing there things left the room. Mukti grabbed a glass and headed for the jug of water when someone grabbed her from behind.
Mukti started to scream, when they put there hand on her mouth, suddenly someone else ran by, and the guy let go of her and they both ran out.
Mukti ran back upstairs, first to her room, where she woke Prem up and told him everything that happened. Then they both went o Aman's room and noticed that her laptop and Aman were both not there.
Mukti: Aman! Aman!
Suddenly Aman came out from under the bed, he was crying but his cries were hardly heard.
Aman came and hugged Mukti.
Mukti: Kya hua?
Aman wrote couldn't say anything…
Mukti: Aman…kuch bolo, ya, likho…
Prem: Mukti! Aman is probably scared, lets go to bed, c'mon, well talk tomorrow…

The next day…
Mukti: mein soch rahi thi ke kya na hum, Aman ke operation kara dein…
Prerna and everyone at the table were shocked, except for Prem and Aman smiled at that…
Prerna: kyon, kuch hua hai?
Mukti: nahi, bas…I wanted to hear him talk again…
Prem: Mukti theek keh rahi hai, agar Aman thayar hai toh hum kar sakte hai na…
Aman smiles and goes and hugs Mukti…
Mukti: Prem, hum aaj hi Aman ko doctors ke paas le jate hai!

After breakfast they both leave with Aman to the doctors.

Hospital:

Prem and Mukti talk to the doctor about Aman, the doctor suggests that they wait another month, for all the formalities to be done, then they'd start the operation…Aman was so happy! The doctor did one examine on Aman that day, after those results came in they started doing the other examinations. Soon came the day of the operation. They doctors had kept Aman in the hospital for the month, Mukti and Prem kept coming to visit him. The doctors had called them that day, and said something about Aman's lungs, that night he had stopped breathing for a few minutes until they finally realized, everyone came from Basu house and were at the hospital that night, and the doctors started the operation…
Mukti was a little shocked over the statement that Aman had stopped breathing; she was sitting in the chair, with hope in her eyes, that her son would come out of that room, alive…
After a few hours the doctors still never came out.
Maithili walked up to Mukti: Mukti suno, tumhe ghar wapas jana chaiye, tumhe aram ki zuroorat hai, aur Prem bhi hai yahan! Tum chinta mat karo, ghar chali jao.
Mukti: nahi didi…mujhe ghar nahi Jana…mujhe Aman ke paas hi rehna hai…
Maithili: sun Mukti…
Mukti: nahi, men ghar nahi jaa rahi, that's final.
Laksh: Mukti…c'mon…tumhari halath toh dekho…
Mukti shook her head, she already had many tears in her eyes, they were filling even more, she wanted her child back, she wanted Aman, Prem who was sitting beside her, was also trying to comfort her, trying to tell her to go take rest, but she didn't listen to him either. Soon the doctor came out.
Prerna: doctor, Aman kaisa hai? Theek toh hai na?
Doctor: Aman is…out of danger, he is perfectly fine, everything should be fine.
Mukti: saach! kya mein usse mil sakti hoon?
Doctor: nahi voh abhi so raha hai…toh usse at least 5 ghante thak kisine nahi utha na…
Laksh: lekin koi toh yahan reh sakta hai, raath bhaar uske saath…?
Doctor: haan of course…lekin kamre mein nahi jana…
The Doctor soon leaves…
Mukti: mujhe yahan rehna hai! Mujhe Aman ke saath rehna hai…
Prerna: Mukti, nahi, dekho ab Aman theek hogaya hai, u ghar chal, tu kitni deir se uthi vi hai, chalo, ghar chalte hai!
Mukti: nahi, mujhe yahan rehna hai…
Prerna: Mukti beta…
Mukti: Prem…batao na choti maa ko, mein yahan rukoongi!
Prem: Mukti, maa theek keh rahi hai…tumhe ghar jana chaiye…
Mukti: agar mein ghar jaongi toh mein kaise so jaongi…dekho, mujhe ghar nahi jana…please.
Anurag: Prem, beta, agar Mukti reh rahi hai toh tu bhi reh ja…Mukti ki khayal rakhna, hum jaa rahe hai…
Prem: lekin…(they all left)…Mukti…tum aise kaise kar sakti ho, dekho tum us condition mein nahi ho, tumhe aram ki zuroorat hai…chalo mein tumhe ghar chod ke ata hoon…
Mukti: Prem…meine jo keh diya, vohi karoongi…
Prem: fine…theek hai…ek minute mein abhi aaya…
Prem leaves and soon comes back with Aman's doctor…they go to another room with Aman's bed and another empty one…
Prem thanks the doctor, and the doctor leaves quickly.
Mukti: yeh kya…?
Prem: tumhare liye…tum yahan so jao, aur Aman tumhare saath hi…
Mukti: Prem…meine kaha tha na…
Prem: na, I listened to you, now you listen to me…go to bed…
Mukti: theek hai…mein jathi hoon
She goes and lies on the bed. Prem grabs a chair and sits between Aman and Mukti, and then Mukti soon falls asleep.
It had been an hour since Mukti was asleep; Prem was falling asleep too, so he thought to go grab some coffee. He left, and when he came back, he stopped right in his track; he was shocked...
Prem: Ajay…
Ajay: hello Prem…or should I say goodbye…?
Prem: why are you here?
Ajay: get on the ground Prem!
Prem was helpless and tired he did what Ajay said.
Ajay: put your hands behind your head!
Prem also did that…he notice Mukti was awake and was tied to a chair…
Ajay: now pick, in front of your eyes, who do you want me to shoot…Mukti, Aman, or…her baby?
Prem: put your gun down Ajay!
Ajay: answer the question or ill choose!
Mukti whined…and mumbled through the rope around her mouth, trying to call Prem.
Ajay: Prem choose!
Prem: no tum apni gun neeche rakho!
Ajay: mein tumhe maroon kya?
Mukti screamed, and shook her head…
Ajay: now Prem choose!
Prem: no…
Ajay: fine ill choose…
He points the gun at Mukti's stomach…
Ajay shot the gun, but Prem ran to him and pushed the gun out of his hand, but unfortunately he had shot Mukti on the shoulder. Prem started to punch and kick Ajay, and so did Ajay to Prem. Mukti grabbed her shoulder in pain with both her hands. Suddenly the doctors and some police men came in.
Inspector: Eyyy! Pakro isse!
Ajay started to run out of the room, the police men started to run after him, some police men were still in the room…
Inspector: aap dono theek toh hai na..? Prem nodded.
Prem went over toh Mukti and untied her hands and the rope around her mouth, then went to talk to the inspector. Suddenly Mukti screamed in pain and grabbed her stomach...
Mukti was quickly taken to the operation theater…

That's where I'll end it today, cause im pretty tired and well that's the only reason, but guys, this is fan fiction is probably gonna end soon…then next update could probably be the last…but I hope you enjoyed this one and I hope to see many comments

Umam

it was aewsome
dont end it plz its rly good
i will be w8in for da nxt part

Hey guys...I just was looking back and noticed I made a mistake on Aman's age, I just fixed it, he is 7 years old...

Part 13

Mukti was taking to the OT, Prem and Aman(who had woken up at the gun fire) were both waiting out side…Aman was cuddled in Prem's arms, he was really scared, he didn't know what was going on…the doctor came out after about and hour…
Prem: doctor Mukti, voh kaisi hai…? Theek toh haina, doctor aap kuch boltay kyon nahi…
Doctor: Aapko kuch papers fill karne honge…
Prem: papers…
Doctor: Mrs. Mukti ko labour pain hua hai, aap bas humhe bataye ke hum kis pe aur deihaan rakhein…
Prem: mujhe koi paper nahi fill karne, aap bas Mukti ko bacha liye…!
Doctor: haan, hum poore koshish karenge, lekin aapko papers fill karne honge…
Prem: nahi, im not gonna, you go in and do you work! I am not filling any paper!
A Nurse suddenly came from behind him calling him for the operation
Doctor: acha mein chalta hoon, aap inke sign in pe le legiye...
The nurse nodded and the doctor left from there.
It had been another hour, Prem had signed the papers, and he doctor soon came out with news...
Aman: papa, doctor aa gaye!
Prem stood up to talk to the doctor...
Doctor: Mr. Prem...You're daughter is with the nurses right now, she'll be here soon...
Prem: aur Mukti, she's fine right!
Doctor: Mrs. Mukti...is ok; you can meet her once she is transferred to another room...
Prem smiled: Mukti is fine! Really!
He turned to Aman picked him up and started to the room where the doctors were taking Mukti, on the way Aman saw some thing he wanted to Prem stopped and got it for him, soon they got to the room and they saw Mukti but she had a breathing mask on her face...her eyes were open though, Prem stopped at the door, Aman jumped out of his arms and ran inside the room.
Aman: mama!
Mukti: Ah... (she took off the mask) Aman, beta...
Aman: mama, aapko kya hua hai...?
Mukti: kuch nahi...bas tumhari awaz sun kar, ja rahi hoon...
Aman: kidar jaa rahi ho...mama...
Mukti: bas, mein ab upar jaa rahi hoon, lekin tumhari choti behen tumhare saath hi rehegi...tumhare papa kidar hai...?
Prem then enters the room, he had tears in his eyes, Mukti put the mask back on her, then took it off again
Prem: Mukti...
Mukti: Prem dekho...humari Priya wapas aa gayi...
The baby girl was in a crib by Mukti...
Prem looked at the baby, and Aman went to the baby...
Prem: Mukti, tumhe...kuch nahi hoga...
Mukti: Prem, meine tumhe kabhi bataya nahi, par, jab mein check up ke liye gayi thi, toh doctors ne mujhe bataya, ke mere pregnancy mein kuch complications ho sakte hai, aur agar mein is bache ko paida karoongi, toh meri jaan ja sakti hai, meine kabhi yeh baath tumhe bataya nahi, sorry Prem...
Both were in tears, Aman wasn't getting anything...so he just stood looking at his new baby sister...
Prem: nahi Mukti, tum nahi jaa sakti...
Mukti: Prem, plz aise baatein mat karo, mujhe jana hoga...
Prem: Mukti, plz nahi...
Mukti: Aman, tum tumhari behen ka khayal rakho ge na!
Aman nodded still not getting anything...
Mukti: aur Prem, humare bache ka khayal rakho ge na...
Prem: Mukti...
Mukti: Plz Prem mujhse wada karo...
Prem: nods...: Mukti plz nahi jao...
Mukti suddenly couldn't breathe so shy lay back down and put her mask on her face, Prem started calling the doctors, but Mukti stopped him and just hugged him, as doctors came running in the room Mukti took off her mask a gain and asked Prem again...
Mukti: plz Prem, wada karo...plz...
Prem: nahi Mukti, tumhe kuch nahi hoga, doctors aap kuch kariye...
He tried to let go of Mukti but Mukti held onto him...
Mukti: Prem...wa...wada...karo...mein...mein ab...aur...inte...zaar nahi...
Prem: haan Mukti mein wada karta hoon...plz...tumhe kuch...
Mukti smiled: I love you Prem...
Mukti arms fell to her side, Prem still had her in his arms, and she fell back...
3 days later, Basu House...
Mukti's Aamtim Sanskar was going on, everybody was there, crying nonstop...
Adi and Laksh were sitting by Prem, but Prem was just staring at Mukti...Aman was sitting by Anurag, the baby was with Prerna.
(Kk guys I don't know and exactly remember how this is all done, so some of it is kinda made up, but if that is how it's done then, I remember I guess...)
The pundit was finished with al the prayers and then finally all the boys got up to carry the body...
We see Anurag doing all the rituals around Mukti's body, and then the pundit gave Anurag the fire (well the stick that has the fire on it), Anurag put the fire on the body, it hadn't covered the whole body completely before Prem ran up to the fire and started screaming, trying to put the fire out, he moved the wood, that was on top of Mukti's body, and hugged her, the fire was still on, the wood beneath her was flaming, Prem still stood there...Adi, Laksh and Anurag came and tried pulling Prem away, but he kept screaming at them telling them to leave him alone...Soon Adi and Laksh got Prem back, Prem hadn't cried for the last 3 days, finally he broke down, and didn't stop...Prem was still there until the fire was gone, Mukti's body was gone...Anurag, Laksh and Adi were still with Prem, it was early in the morning, Adi and Laksh went up to Prem...
Adi: Prem, bro listen...you can't hang out here, you'll freeze...
It was pretty cold out there that morning, and Prem was shivering...everyone had jackets on but Prem refused to wear one...
Laksh: Prem...c'mon, talk...
Anurag: dekh Prem, hum jane wale ko rauk nahi sakte, aur Mukti chali gayi hai...Prem, humhe ghar jana hoga...chalo...
Prem then stood up, he went up to were the ashes lay...he grabbed some in his hand...
Prem: mein tumhara aahkri khwaaish poori karoonga Mukti... (he closed his eyes as he remembered when Mukti said "I Love You")...I Love You...

3 years later...

"Mukti, Mukti! Kahan ho tum!"
Suddenly he saw someone crawl by the night stand...another boy slowly tip toed over to the table...
"BOO!"
The little girl by the night stand got scared and jumped up...
Mukti: uh oh...
"Doond liya..."
Mukti: shh ...papa didn't find me yet... (she whispered...)
"Mukti, tumhe shower lena hoga..."
Mukti: nope...nahi, muhe nahi lena...
"Theek hai, phir mein bhi tumhare saath nahi rahoonga, tumse gaandhi bhoo ayegi...yuck!"
Mukti: no...PAPA!
The little girl ran to a man...
"Ab batao, shower lo gi ya nahi..."
Mukti: haan loongi papa...
The man bends down to look at the little girl in the eye...we see its Prem...
Prem: tumhe pata hai, tum bilkul aapni maa jaisi lagti ho...
Mukti: mujhe pata hai...she hugs Prem...
Mukti: papa, kya bhaiya mujhe nela sakte hai...
Prem: sure, lekin kya use ata hai...?
Mukti: haan ata hai...lekin shh secret, mein use poori thara wet kar doongi hehehe! Chalo aap bhi dekhlena!
Mukti starts getting showered; the she throws all this water at the guy...
Mukti: Papa! Dekhiye! Aman Bhaiya ko!
Aman's whole face was soapy; he looked like a ghost...
Prem and Mukti started laughing...Aman started chasing Prem around the bathroom...
Soon someone walked in the room; Aman was running and bumped into them...
Aman: sor...sorry, mei...mein pa...pa a...aur...
"Its ok, vaise Aman, you stutter a lot...do you have some problems...?"
Aman: it's none of you business and I don't need to hear your baqwas...
(If you forget Arpita is Maithili's daughter she is 9 years old, but she is very smart!)
Arpita: oh my god! Too rude, mein jaa rahi hoon, agar tum bhool gaye toh aaj school jana hai!
Aman: oh shit!
He ran to his room, grabbed his bag, and headed out the door...
"Bhaiya!"
Aman turned around so did Arpita (because she left with him...)
Aman: Mukti...?
Mukti: bhaiya, aap bhool gaye, aap har rooz mujhe kya dete hai, school ke jane se pehle..?
Aman thought for a few seconds...
Mukti: jaldi ki jiye papa mujhe bahar ana nahi dete, meine shower liya tha isi liya, jaldi!
Aman bent down and hugged her...
Aman: theek hai
Mukti: bhaiya, khayal rakhna!
Mukti ran back in side the house, she ran to a picture that had garlands around it...
Mukti: mama! Aap mujhe aapna a...ashir...ashirwa...ad...di jiye..! She touched the floor beneath the picture and looked up..
We see the picture is of Mukti...soon everyone is around Mukti (little) and smiled looking at the picture and at Mukti (little), Prem came and sat next to Mukti (l)...he hugged her and kissed her forehead...
Prem: I love you....

Kk guys, that was the end of my ff, hope you all enjoyed the whole ff, and thanks to everyone for reading and commenting on each episode, sorry to those people who are fans of Maithili, Adi and Laksh, Kt, i didn't put many parts about them, it was supposed to be about all of them, but im a fan of only PM, sorry once again...if you all haven't read my other ff in Kasauti forums its called Chod Gaye, you all can read that there, I just started it, but this one is also only about PM...here is the link...
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=924301&TPN

love you all,

Umam