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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
gr8 part update soon dis is 1 of my fave ff keep it up soo far its goin gr8 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
ok ill try to update alot about PM/AM and LKT...but sorry if u dont like it.

Part 7

6 months pass:

Prem has feelings for Mukti but could never tell her.
Mukti is in love with Prem but they got into a fight so she never told him either.
Komo and Ajay...welll there still out there...but Prerna, Anurag,Jeevan and Parvati r back @ home safe.
Maithili and Adi get married...and Laksh and KT r engaged.

It morning in the Basu House

Adi and Maithili:

Maithili wakes up and goes to the bathroom...she comes out and didn't notice Adi right behind her...Adi slowly grabbed her by the waist...she screamed!
Maithili: ADI!!!!! WHY DID U SCARE ME LIKE THAT!
Adi: bcuz ur my wife.
Maithili: GRRRRR! 😡
Adi: dont be so boily! my wife do u remember wat happened??? to Prem?
Maithili: omg! yes c'mon...lets quickly go the the hospital.
Adi: Mahili?
Maithili:yea?
Adi: y doesn't Mukti go to meet Prem in the hospital....like me and u noe that Prem loves Mukti...y doesn't she come?
Maithili: Mukti told me that Prem and her are in a Fight...she cant forget the day he told her that he loved her....
Adi: really...but the day i told u that i love u nothing went wrong...I just can't see my bro be like that.
Maithili: goes upto Adi and hugs him.
Maithili: c'mon let's go to the hospital...she starts to leave
Adi: tell Birju Kaka to get some khana for Prem
Maithili: sure...
Maithili leaves and Adi gets dressed.

ok guys so sorry..but i have to go....this is one third of the update next ill try to update laksh and kt or Prem and Mukti!...ok...luv ya

Alllah Hafiz!!!!

Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
please do. hoping to see the next 2 parts to this
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
awesum!! 👏 👏
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
so sorry guys! im really sorry i never updated in such a long time! u noe its just loads of homeowrkand now Ramadan! soo ill try to update some right now. ok lol so here is the update:

Maithili and Adi soon leave to go meet Prem in the hopital(u guys i dunno y i put Prem in the hospital but just go with the flow!)
Hospital:
Adi enter's Prem's room quietly cause he's sleeping. He puts the food on the side and all of a sudden Prem jolts out of his bed. and Adi screams.
Prem starts laughing like crazy!
Adi: that was not funny Prem!
Prem stopped laughing...but they heard someone else laughing too.
Adi turns around and c's Maithili
Adi: not u too Maithili! c'mon it wan't that funny!
Maithili: ok.
Maithili: Prem how r u feeling?
Prem im fine...how come u gusy r here?
Maithili: we came to visit u
Adi:(whisers) yea and i can't even visit my brother?
Prem: well im fine...how is everyone @ home.
Adi: everyone is fine.
Prem: Maithili:...how is...Mukti?
Maithili: she is fine but she wants an abortion...and she wont listen to wat we say.
Prem: wat? but she noes...
Maithili: yea...but she doesn't listen...we all dont even care for the baby but...we dont want to lose Mukti.
Prem: u have to stop her.
Maithili: its too late she already booked an appointment.
Prem: no...(he tries getting out of bed but falls to the ground and he had a black out.)

Laksh and KT:

KT: Laksh c'mon we have to go meet Prem! get ready!
Laksh: im getting ready!...
Laksh goes in the shower but wen he comes out(like still in the washroom) he finds no towel.
Laksh: KT! KT!!!!
KT: kya hai Laksh...abhi thak taiyar nahi hue?
Laksh: KT please kya tum mjhe towel pass kar sakti ho?
KT: god..how could u forget ur towel?
Laksh: sorry.
Kt gives him his towel.
Laksh smirks. he wraps the towel around him and: KT kya tum mujhe vo shirt pass kar sakti ho?
Kt: kya hai Laksh...humhe jana hain! acha theek hain lekin jaldi!.
She grabs the shirt and was going to give it to him wen he pulls her in the washroom!
KT: Laksh!....stupid! yeh kya kardiya tumne! mere sare kapre kharab kardiya!
Laksh: sorry....kya mein tum dosre kapre laake doon?
KT: haan! plzz.i mean nahin nahin nahin!...tum yahan change karo aur mein bahar ok! bye!
She goes out and blushes!

well thats all i could write i have to go now! bye!

luvya! tc
Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
nice. hw cum prem's in hospital? mukti wanna abort her child. well she gonn have ta if she wants to as well
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
Part 8

Kt and Laksh finally get ready and go meet Prem....

2 months later Prem gets discharged from his room...and he goes home. He doesn't greet neone...he goes straight to his room and closes the door and goes to his dresser and takes Muktis picture out...he sits on his bed and thinks: Mukti tum kyon nahin ayi??? mujhe hospital mein milne....mein tumhara intezaar kar raha tha...choro tum yeh batao tum kyon apne bache ko abort karna chati ho??? mein hoon na mein usko apna naam de dooga...plzz Mukti wapas ao mere paas...i love u Mukti! i love u!
he sits there and crys in the background the song

To Phir Ao Comes on the Roxen Version:

To Phir Aao Mujko Satao, To Phir Aao Mujhko Rulao, Hooo

Hum Rahe Na Rahe, Ghum Sahe Na Sahe, Shamein Dhale Na Dhale, Yeh Rate Kate Na Kate.

To Phir Aao Mujhko Satao, To Phir Aao Mujhko Rulao,
To Phir Aao Mujhko Satao, To Phir Aao Mujhko Rulao,
Hooo, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Hooo

Hum Rahe Na Rahe, Dil Ki Sune Na Sune, Yeh Tufaa Thame Na Thame, Yeh Anson Ruke Na Ruke.

To Phir Aao Mujhko Satao, To Phir Aao Mujhko Rulao,
To Phir Aao Mujhko Satao, To Phir Aao Mujhko Rulao,
Hooo, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Hooo

Sapano Ke Samandar Mein, Doobte Chale Jana Hain, In Raho Mein Jo Khwaab Hain, Un Khwaaboon Ko, Mujhe Pana Hain, Hooo, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Abhi Jao, Hooo

Then Mukti enters the Basu House,
Prerna: Mukti beta tum yaha???
Mukti: haan Choti Maa Prem kahan hain?
Prerna: voh upar hain jao jake milo
Mukti goes to Prem's room.
Mukti enters and c's Prem sitting, he luks up @ her right wen she enters, he gets up.
Prem: Muk...
Mukti: bas Prem...mein tumhe bas yahi kehne ayi hoon ke baba ne meri shaadi paki ki hain ksis aur ke saath...2 hafte mein meri shaadi hain..mein tumhe yeh batane ayi hoon...thake tum mere peehca choro.
Prem: Mukti: mein tumhe kitni baar kaho ke I love you..aur mein tumhare biger jee nahin paonga.
Mukti: to jena sihko...mein ab khabhi tumhare paas nahin aongi...
Prem: to mein marjaonga.
Mukti luks @ Prem with tears in her eyes.
Prem: Mukti mein janta hoon tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho...plzz bas kaho ke tum mujhse pyaar karti ho.
Mukti luks away: Mein tumse pyaar nahin karti...
Prem goes upto herand holds her arms: meri ankhon mein dekh kar kaho ke tum mujhse pyaar nahin karti...
Mukti:(still luking away) nahin mein tumse pyaar nahin karti.
Prem: Mujhe dekho aur kahao Mukti!
Mukti: HAAN! Mein tumse abhi bhi pyaar karti hoon!
Prem: to mujhse door kyon ja rahi ho???
Mukti: kyon Ki mein kisi aur ke bache ki maa bane wali hoon.
Prem: to mein apna naam dene keliye tayar hoon Mukti(he turns around)..bas tum
Mukti: AHHH!
Prem turns back around and saw Mukti on the ground holding her stomach.

Thats were ill end it today guys i have go now im getting late! bye plzz leave comments
luv ya
Umam
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
she going into labour. i know it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
awsum 👏 👏
plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
r u goig to update cuz u haven't updated for months

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