New FF PM/AM/LKT- prt 13 pg 12- End... - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
awww, nice updaate!!!
realllly nice!
and lovve the characters, obvi.!!
continue soooonnn!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
hey guys i can't update tomorrow soo here's a promo!

Promo:

Prem punched the guys so hard he flew a mile away.
Prem luked back @ Mukti she was about to faint.
But before she fell Prem grabbed her.
house:
"congrats she's....."
Prem got a huge shock!

end of promo.

hope u guys liked it!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
OMG. she is PREGNANT. fantastic promo. can't wait for the next update. continue soon please
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
Part 6

The guys told Mukti about:
who he was and why he was after them
then pushed her in a storage closet nearby...(the closet is locked from the inside and the outside.)then he hid so he could c the reaction on Prem's face.
Prem got there and luked for Mukti every where.
Mukti was screaming from the inside: HELP KOI HAIN PLZZ
Prem heard her screaming and ran to the closet.
Prem: Mukti!
Mukti: Prem! plzz open the door.
Prem: ok...ek minute.
He tries turning the nob but it wouldn't open.
Prem: its locked!.
Inside the closet wasn't much room...it was really small.
Mukti started felling dizzy...
The guys came out and started laughing.
Prem turned to luk @ him.
Prem: tum kaun ho?
Guy: Ajay...just Ajay...i noe u dont noe me but u noe my mom.
Prem: y r u doing this!(his tone got angrier with every word he said.)
Ajay: My mom...Mom as in Komolika! told me to do this...she wanted revenge.u guys sent her to jail..i was just a kid wen i couldn't c my mom...and so my mom could kill ur parents i have to kill u.
Prem: but Mukti has nothing to do with this!
Ajay: yea but she has something to do with u!
Prem: wat r u talking about were just friends.
Ajay: u dont noe?! i thought u'd noe this.
Prem: wat?
Ajay: that Mukti....
Mukti: PREM!
Prem goes back to the door: wat...
Mukti: there's something in here...ill try to break the door with it.
Prem: ok try.
Mukti had found a ax she started hit the door...it finally had a hole big enough for Mukti to come out.
Ajay: finally now...i can kill both of u together...aww wat a cute couple!
Prem: dont u dare touch us! u get that!
Ajay: woah woah woah!....my mom is already with ur parents u noe that.
Prem ran up to Ajay and started a fight.
Mukti was having a huge head ache...she felt as if she couldn't breath.
Prem and Ajay were just punching and kicking...Prem didn't even hear Mukti call out his name.
Then Prem punched the guys so hard he flew a mile away.
Prem luked back @ Mukti she was about to faint.
But before she fell Prem grabbed her.
Bajaj House:
Prem entered and saw none wasw home...He was worried about Mukti but then also wat happened to his parents?
Was Ajay right?
Prem took Mukti upstairs and put her one the bed and called a doctor.
The doctor came and while she was doinga check-up, Prem tried calling Prerna and Anurag.
No one picked up.
Then he luked through the phone book and found Komolika's number....he dialed it.
Komo: hello???
Prem: were r my parents?
Komo: who is this?
Prem: WERE R THEY!
Komo: oh..Prerna's son! well there here with me..but there gonna die in a few hours.
Prem: dont u dare do ne thing to them u get that!
Komo: dont worry im waiting for some guests...aka u and ur sibblings....oh the the others too
The doctor came out.
Prem quickly hangs up.
Prem: how is she doctor?
The doctor smiles and says.
"Congrats she's 3 months pregnant!"
Prem got a huge shock!
Prem(whispers): wat?
Doctor: here r some medicine's ull have to give her.
Prem quietly takes them..
Doctor: make sure to give them on time...ok...
Prem: ok and thanks
The doctor leaves.
Prem goes in the room.
Mukti was on the bed...she was a wake.
Mukti: wat did the doctor say Prem?
Prem: she said...she said that....
Mukti: its nothing to worry about right.
Prem: actually yes...(he sits down)
Mukti: then Prem tell me!
Prem: she said...that...ur...
Mukti: wat?(she started shaking Prem) tell me Prem wats wrong with me?

Downstairs:

Adi, Maithili, Laksh and Kt enter the house.
Laksh: were r they?
KT: i dunno the Principle said that he saw them go out...that means they probably went here or ur house.
Maithili: yea....but i checked my house befor i got here they weren't there.
all ofa a sudden they hear someone scream from upstairs
They all go upstairs...they were right @ the door wen
Prem: UR PREGNANT!
They all got shocked.
Laksh: who did this?
Prem and Mukti luk @ them also shocked to c them.
Laksh went to Mukti: luk Mukti ur my sister i care for u now tell me who did this!
Mukti: a...a...Ajay.
Laksh: im gonna kill tha...
Maithili: no...were r mom and dad? we have to tell them.
Mukti: no...they'll....
Prem: there not @ home...and mine rn't either.
Adi: were r they?
Prem: Komolika!
He ran out the door...and luked again in the phone book for her adress. and was about to leave wen
Adi: wait Prem...
Laksh: were coming.

Thats were ill end it...plzz comment...gud or bad ones...but i need @ least five comments to write the next Part.
for now...bye luv ya!
Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
wow awesum!!! 👏 👏
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
awesome part. do continue soon please
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
great part!!! 😃 hope to see prem always beside mukti 😃 and more romance between all three couples! 😉 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
hey thats an awesome part hoping to see more L-KT scenes
update soon
-tuba
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Author's Message:

ok guys i have school starting tomorrow....so if i get 1 more comment then ill update on the weekend...and if i get time ill try to update after school! till then ..bye! luv ya!

Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
ok...guys ill update on saturday...cuz of school...ok...till then...luv ya tc bye!

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