Fan Fiction Pyar - Page 5

Episode #11

Some taps their shoulder n they turn around to see......

Prem (standing n looking at the view)

Ved n Niks (shocked) Bhaiya app?

Prem: yes me

Ved &niks: what are u doing here?

Prem (joking) i came here to watch a movie! 😃

Ved n Niks: huh movie? 😕

Prem: my to duffers sisters i came here to take a break from driving n bebo wanted to use the restroom so kareena took her. 😉

Ved: when did u came?

Prem about five minutes ago but i was about to scare u guys then i just tapped ur shoulder. (then they look n see a black totya minivan pull up n five people get out with a bird)

Arun: how everyone is here already. what a great view.

Tinu: hum saath saath hain! everyone laughs. purab who has a binoculars his looking at the scene at the lake n then he notices four people in the lake side having a pinic.

Purab: hey ved, niks, prem, look at this (he point) isn't that girl in swalar kamez disha. or is that my imagation. (then one by one everyone takes turn looking into the binoculars)

Ved: no its di n jiju

Prem: it is di (he is about to yell when ved n karu who is back stops on his feet playfuly) hey why did u do that for?

Karu: m duffer husband don't shout?

Prem: why?

Ved: my dearest bhaiya why don't we go n surpise everyone! 😃

Jassi: I will get the picinic basket. (she goes to the miniv n takes out the basket)

Ved: make sure everyone has hats and sun block lotion on! i will get the sun block lotion. (she goes n gets them n her cellphone n some deserts thats a surpise)

Karu: i will also get the picinic basket n the drinks. (she goest to the car n takes out a blue ice box)

Purab: i will get the videocameras n the camera.

Niks: i will get the mats!

Rohan: i will get the beach ball!

Prem: i will get the water bottle and food for tuffy n tinu.

Bebo: I will get tuffy n tinu

Uma: make sure that all three cars are lock and the alarms are on.

Bebo: mom can we go on the slides (looking at karu with puppy dog eyes)😭

Karu: yes but ask ur dad.

Bebo: but it is too late look(points at prem) papa& uncle have already started to slide. (everyone looks at them and laughs.)😃😆😆

Karu (laughing ) i guess u can also.if grown ups can u can too.😆

Jassi: u to rohan.

Bebo n Rohan yippe 😛(they run rohan has tinu on his shoulders n tuffy followers them n they slide arun goes with them)

while everybody takes the stairs it is about (30) carrying the stuff in their hands and looking at arun, purab, prem, niks n kids who are waiting for them with the pets. they get together n see that d.k n everyone is having a pick but they didn't see them. ved, karu, jassi makes a plan to surpise dk n everyone.

what do u think is their plan?

i will post the next episode tomorrow after my dentist appointment

plese write the next part
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Epiosde #12

Ved (calls disha cellphone)

Disha (picks it up) hello who is this.

Ved: hi di how are u?

Dish: fine how is everyone fine.

Ved: di everyone is fine. when are u guys going to come to the farmhouse.

Dish: right know we are on the road (dk is kissing disha's neck the 2nd generation khanna's kids are looking at this n takes a picture)

Prem: liar

Dish: did prem bhaiya called me a liar.

Ved: no di you must of heard this wrong. Bebo n Rohan are missing we told them to stay at one place n they moved way.

Disha (shocked n get up)they are missing. What are irresponsible. did u inform the police.

Ved; no bhaiya are looking for them. (jassi instructs the kids to go with tuffy n play the ball n they go to the spot accidently the balls hit dish's back both prem n purab are with them but they face is covered with a cloth n dish turns around she sees the kid)

Dish: ved i think i just saw the kids with two guys n tuffy is with them.

Ved(shocked)are u sure where are they on what road.

Dish: they are at dove lake.

Ved (shocked)dove lake? Di i thought u guys were on a road.

Dish: no we are at lake dove having a little picinic.
i have to go bye. (after this she explains everything to dk what happened n d.k and vedant go up to the kidnappers)

Ved: bye 😛 (smiling she points a thumb to karu n jassi n they move close)

Vedant: hey u two are these ur kids? (talking to kidnappers)

Prem & Purab (change their voice) hi they r my kids. do u have a problem

D.K oh yeah what are the kids n the dogs name?

Prem: he is laddo & she is guddi n he is tuffs

D.k wrong he is rohan, she is bebo n the dogs name is tuffy. (prem n purab grab the kids n start to run n the kids start to scream)

Rohan & Bebo (scream so loud n start to cry)d.k n vedant uncle save us.

Vedant: let go of the kids. or else

Prem & Purab: or else what? vedant goes to prem d.k goes to purab n start to take the kids snatch kids away from them. after letting go of the kids vedant is about to pick up the stick n beat both of them up.

Rohan & Bebo (yell) stop

Vedant n d.k. look confused: why

prem: because u don't want the kids to become orphans do u.

vedant (angry) orphans

Purab: yeah orphan n u don't want their moms to become widows right do u?

d.k no

(Niks& everyone comes up)niks (smiling) yeah jiju orphans (the kidnappers remove the cloth)

Vedant & D.k (shocked)u two! (looking at prem & purab smiling)

Prem: u should see ur face it looks so funny!

Ved: surpise jiju she hugs him and everyone greets them.

Niks: we thought why don't we surpise u guys by giving u a shocking news.

D.k u mean this is a joke?

Ved: of course jiju purab bhaiya so u from the resting spot n we thought of suprising u guys.

D.k. o.k do a joke but never play a prank were something happens to the kids because we will be worried.

khanna kid: sorry (everyoe goes to the spot where dish, malika n dk parents are n they explain everything to them n they all laugh. after this they have a big family picinic where everyone laughs n tell jokes. the guys plays soccers with the kids n the gals join them. so at 8:30 pm. they decide to leave for the poona farmhouse/beach house. dk parents & dish's parents in one car, d.k. n dish in one, vedant is with malika, ved, n niks in ved car n they tell them about niks n antarish. purab and prem are with their family. one hour later everyone arrives at the khanna's farm house.)

guys i am sorry for the delay i am having trouble logging in at my house because of cookie problem but i set up my computer allowing cookies in but i cannot login still. i will post some espisode tommorow n it will be the last for the week because i will be out of town on sat& sunday. then i will post new episodes on monday.

hey gud one. keep up da gud work. ohh n y dont u save dis website on ur favorites when ur log on den later u dont have to log on everytime. dats wat i do 😃

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You guys have better ideas than the writers of most of these shows!! 😆

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Episode #13

At 10:00 p.m everyone reaches the Poona farmhouse. The kids are alseep so Purab n Prem put them in their beds. Nihs so Mr & Mrs. Seghal, Vedant, n Malika their rooms. Mr& Mrs. Khanna along with D.k's parents go to bed because they are tired. The guys are in one corner of the family room talking while the girls are near the fireplace with their blankets sitting on the floor.

Disha (looking at Niks) So Nihs i heard that u have found someone? 😳

Niks (pretending) What r u talking about?

Jassi (teasing) come on Niks do not pretend. We know! 😆

Niks: know what?

Karu: about ur friend?

Niks: (shocked)what boy friend?

Karu, Jassi, Malika (looking at Niks w/supicious eyes)boyfriend huh?

Niks: oops 😕

Malika: looks like someone got caught red handed smiling n the others smile except niks

Dish: who is he?

Ved (buts in) he is Anatrish Raizada. (Niks is giving her i am going to get u look)

Karu: (looking at Ved)u new. Why didn't u tell me?

Ved: oh because i promised di that i won't tell anyone about them two.

Niks: (looking at Jassi & Karu)but bhabi who told u?

Ved: i know who told them our big mouth brother prem (she makes a face at him n the girls laugh the guys look up)

Prem: (wondering)whats so funny!

Ved(stops laughing)nothing bhaiya they contiue with their talk.

Disha:(acting angry)Miss. Niharika Meena Khanna y didn't u tell us about Anatrish i thought sisters are not suppose to hide anything frm one another. 😡 (Niks is about to speak then Jassi but in)

Jassi: same with bhabis we are suppose to be friends with one another.

Niks: sorry can u please forgive me.

Disha, 2 bhabis we forgive u.
the guys come and join the girls

Prem: tell us how u meant Anatrish

Niks(shly)o.k bhaiya 😳 then she explains how she meant anatrish the whole incident from the begining to the end. and everyone laughs

After that everyone in the living watches d.k and disha's wedding video

D.k (to Prem)doesn't Tara & Vedant make a good couple.

Purab: they sure do. but i don't think that Ved is ready to get into marriage or any relationship.

D.k: her mind is not but u can never trust a heart they never listen or agree with ur mind.

Vedant: they sure don't

Ved excuses her self n goes to her grandparents room n lights a small diya in their room her grandparents are in amirstar(spelling) and she misses them a lot. then she leaves the room. everyone goes to sleep.

great job! keep up the good work!