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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

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Posted: 20 years ago

#51

plz continue... wen will Dhruv fall in love wiv Vedika??

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zara

@TD.FAN

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Posted: 20 years ago

#52

that was good please wrtie the next part 👏

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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

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Posted: 20 years ago

#53

Episode #15
Day#1
Its a bright Sunday morning everyone gets up takes a shower, does a pooja, and goes to the dinning table to eat lunch. Dish, Karu, Jassi and Niks have prepared the breakfast. Everyone is at the table.

Uma: has anyone see Vedika?
Arun: (surpised) why?
Uma: I wanted to ask something?
Arun: oh
Dish: i think she is upstairs sleeping.
Uma: thanks beta(she goes upstairs to Ved's room)

The dream
Its a cold fog in a village where Vedika is wearing punjabi clothes with her two chotis. Then suddenly she sees a guy riding on a horse coming to her who has mask on his face he is about to take it of when..

Uma: Vedika (shakes her)utho beta.. its morning..

Vedika: mamma why did u wake me up? opening her eyes n then puts the cover back on.

Uma: (opens the curtains)Vedika its morning get up and have breakfast everyone is waiting 4 u.

Vedika: Mamma first u came n woke me up from a dream.

Uma: dream? 😕

Vedika: yes mamma a dream about my prince charming but it was a strange dream.

Uma: Vedika don't be silly u will meet ur prince charming some other day. Come downstairs and have ur breakfast everyone is waiting for u.

Vedika: yes mamma, i will be there in 30 mins. (she gets up and goes to her closet takes her clothes and goes to the bathroom)

Meanwhile
in Mumbai...
a guy is riding down a horse and wearing a black sherwani he see a beatiful girl in a village by the mustard seeds on a farm she is wearing a punjabi outfit and has a two long choti her face is covered with her duppta and her bangs he is bought to go to her when......

Kavita: dhruv wake up..

Dhruv: yawning Good Morning mummy.

Kavita: good morning beta

Dhruv: (streching his hands) mummy, why did u came i was about to meet my dream girl, then u came and woke me up.

Kavita: beta u can meet her tonight in ur dream. but did u forget? 😆

Dhruv: forget what?

Kavita: that u have a meeting tomorrow with Mr. Mehta in Poona.

Dhruv: oh yeah (he hits his hand on his forhead)and i have leave for poona today.

Kavita: yeah

Dhruv: okay mummy i will come downstairs in 30 mins to have breakfast.

Kavita: o.k beta, i have ur car is ready please pack ur clothes(she leaves, before going to the restroom dhruv packs is clothes takes out a outfit to wear, after shower goes downstairs)

Tara: bhaiya have a safe trip

Dhruv: takes sis what do u want from the trip.

Tara: bhaiya i want a salwar kamez with a matching everything.

Dhruv: o.k (he takes a blessing from everyone and leaves for Poona.)

Preview:
Will Dhruv n Vedika meet find out? 😳 stay tuned

Edited by ziddi - 20 years ago

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Sumaiyya

@swtlilangel4u

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Posted: 20 years ago

#54

GUD ONE. CONT. SOON. CANT WAIT. N I HOPE DHURV N VEDIKA MEET SOOT. YUPPPP. LOL
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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

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Posted: 20 years ago

#55

Episode #16

Poona
Vedika goes downstairs. she goes to the pooja room n bows. then she goes to the room where everybody was waiting for her. by the way she is wearing a yellow salwar kamez with matching everything.

Vedant n Prem (uses their fork n makes noise)beware, beware the princess of Poona has arrived from her palace. 😆 (everyone look up)

Vedika (walks up to them, and they bow their hands, joking)so my royal subjects what do u have planned to for me.

Prem: (joking)how my royal highness so good that u have woked up from ur precious sleep. please give us the honor to seat at the table so we can have breakfast. 😆

Vedant: yeah madam, its looks like u haven't slept 4 days.

Vedika (ignores them goes to the table)good morning everyone and sits next to d.k and Purab

Everyone: good morning everyone

Purab: vedika we have planned that all the youngsters will go exploere the farm. why the eldest will go walking.

Vedika: sounds great but bhaiya u guys go ahead because i want to go and stop by the mandir that is on the way when we were coming to poona. (its the same mandhir that Dhruv n Vedika stop at when they were returning from Poona in sinndoor0

Prem(makes a face)see guys we were waiting for ur highness for no reason.

Uma: that a nice idea but i think that mandhir is too far for u.

Vedika: (whinning)mamma please let me go i am a big enough girl to drive their and come back to Poona.

Arun: let her go Uma she is not a kid.

Vedika: thanks papa (she goes to her dad n guys him)i luv u papa.

Uma: o.k. u can go but promise me to call me whne u get there and come back soon before dark.

Vedika: i will (she drinks her tea)bye everyone have fun she takes her elders blessing)

Everyone: bye drive safely. Vedika leaves and goes to mandhir she also takes her camera with her.