Fan Fiction Pyar - Page 4

hi! i m really liking dis ff pls continue soon 😆

hey awsome ff!
i just started reading today and was really interested!
good job keep up the good work! 👏

me to i just star readying it today to
please con soon

ziddi write soon. waiting ohh n wats ur name? 😃

my name is mamta whats urs swtilangle4u

don't worry i have written two scenes where dhruv n ved meet for the first time.

Episode #10

Niks is driving the car n she stops at a rest stop to use the restroom. She n ved have one hour before they reach the poona farmhouse.

Ved(joking)di r u tired of driving too slow like a turtle? 😉

Niks(making a face) no silly i won't take a break n use the washroom.

Ved: same thing! (she opens the door for tuffy)come on boy get out! break time. (tuffy gets out of the cars, niks gives takes out tuffys food in his bowl, and his water)

Niks: enjoy ur meal tuffy! she walks toward the washroom takes tuffy water bottle to refill.

tuffy woof woof! 😆

ved (looks at tuffy) good boy all done(she put everything away after that she throws a stick to tuffy) go tuffy go get the stick ater that she throws a freebie which he catches n he starts to jump in the air.

niks (comes back)ved it is ur turn

Ved o.k. di stay with tuffs (n takes tuffys water bottle)

Ved comes back n see that niks with tuffy is sitting on the bench n looking at the view. coming in back of ved.

Ved: isn't the view beatiful u can just stand here n stair of the view.

Niks: huh (she looks around see ved)yeah it is so beatiful

Ved: (joking) di are u lost in the thoughts of Anatrish.

Niks(not pay attention) yes i miss him i wish he was here

Ved: should i call n invite him? n tell him to come because his juliet is missing him so much. pretending to cry😭

Niks: go n call him (ved takes out her cellphone n starts to dial his number by the time niks realizes what she said) ved stop don't call antarish

Ved: too late di.... hello antarish this is ved

anatrish: (confused) hi ved how are u?

Ved: did u talk to ur parents about Niharika n yourself?

Anatrish: no. why are u asking?

Ved: (lieing) because i have heard from her brothers that her parents went to Poona to talk about her marriage with their friends son.

Anatrish: (shocked) what? tell niharika to give me time?

Ved: fine u have one week to talk to ur parents about ur niharika's marriage bye the way niharika is out of town n she won't be able to contact u. okay bye antarish.

Anatrish (shocked) bye if u call niharika tell her i luv her n tell her i will talk to my parents about our wedding today.

Ved (making a face at niks) yeh why are u in a hurry to talk to ur parents about marriage. bye sweet dream

Anatrish bye thanks for the info (they disconnect the phone what and she looks at Niks)

Niks: what did u tell Anatrish

Ved: (laughing) i told him u were out of town for one week and that mom and dad went to poona to talk about ur marriage with their friends son.

Niks (mad) why did u tell him that?😡

Ved: because ur hubby will tell his parents about ur guys realtionship soon n when we return from poona they will come to our house with the proposal.

Niks (relief) what? (is cool down shly) did antarish give u a meassage to tell me?😳

Ved: yes

Niks what?

Ved: he said to tell u that he luvs u and he will talk to u about their marriage today to his parents.😉

Niks: i luv him too😳

Then ved n niks look at the view that is ahead of them and how the sun is reflecting the water.
the rest spot is like a hill when u look down u see trees surronding the lake which is between the trees. the hill has stairs coming from both left n right side that leads down to the lake & back n between the stairs is a slide for the kids n grown ups. the sun is reflecting the lake. the warm sun is bowling. ved is just day dreaming by staring at the sun.

Niks(snaps her finger)ved

Ved: huh di 😕

Niks: what are u thinking about?

Ved: i am thinking wouldn't it be romantic if someone proposes to u by the moonlight or by the sunset near the beach or ocean. their would be a table set for two surrounded by candelights. 😳

Niks: how romantic n filmi. (joking)u need to stop reading books n watching movie. 😆

Ved di 😡

Ved n Niks discuss how they should tell her parents about Anatrish n Niks marriage.

Someone taps their shoulder n they around turn to see....

i will post the next chapter tomorrow after i come back from school.

great part ziddi!
cant wait to find out who the person is!!

I HOPE DA PERSON IS DHRUV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ziddi!it really going well keep up with the good work
👏
write soon

hey. gud job ohh n ma name is Sumaiyya 😃