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Posted: 19 years ago

#61

yeahh, i kno....continue soon plzz!

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 19 years ago

#62

i will post two new episode tomorrow 😉

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@Serial_Addict

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Posted: 19 years ago

#63

That's gr88! ur finally continueing!! I can't wait!

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 19 years ago

#64

Episode #17
Dhruv is driving to Poona when he sees a Druga Maa's mandhir. He decides to park his car on across from the temple and go by the tali and stuff from the vendors and flowers. He goes in the mandhir takes of his shoe.
Vedika reaches the temple at 10:00am and she has tali and parsad that she made in the morning and brings from the container and puts in the plate and goes to the vendor and buys folwers. She takes out her shoe and touches her hand on the steps, rings the bell and enters the temple and rings the bell she has her oodhi on her head. She goes to the staute on the rigth of Santoshi Ma and dhruv is praying on the left statue of drug ma. Both give their talis to their pandit and close their eyes and pray. They open their eyes and see that a lady lights a diya or her husbands health in center of the two stautes and she leaves. Both Dhruv and Vedika notice that the light is twirling from the wind and is about to blow of and they both run to the center and cover the diyas with their hands and their touch eachothers and they look up and they see each others face. Oh the light is not put of.

Dhruv (to himself)kitni bholi bhali ladki hai and aur bahut khoobsurat bi. 😆

Vedika: (to herself)lagtha hai kabhi pele ladki nahie dehki mujhe to yeh koi mr. bechara laghta hai. 😃

Before Dhruv and introduces himself the pandit interupts. Vedika leaves and goes to her statue and takes the tali from the pandit.

Pandit 1: beti tumhara parsad aur tumahara santoshi ma ka kripa hamesha regha. Aur he looks at her right hand. Tumahara jeevan saathi yehi saal mein milega.

Vedika: 😃 and takes the tali and takes the pandit blessing and leaves to the left statue of druga and gives the second tali and does the same thing.

Meanwhile Dhruv is looking at vedika and says "how beatiful she is"

Pandit: beta aap ka parsad. beta tumhara jeevan saathi bahut jal milenga.

Dhruv thank u. and takes his blessing. mujhse to yehi ladki pasand yeh.

he closes his eyes and asks santoshi and druga maa that he should meet this girl again and that he should get married to her. lagtha yeh ki Dhruv ko luv at first sight hogaya. he open his eyes and see that she has left and he rings the door bell and goes outside to put his shoe on.

Outside the temple

Then when he his done. Someones yellow oodhi covers his face. He close his eyes.

A girl in a yellow salwar kamez is by her silver car getting inside and se has already put the parsad and tali in. Then suddenly she notice the wind has blown her oodhi towards the direction of the mandhir. She is running towards the person who face his covered by her oodhi her bangles and payal are making a lovely rythms while she is running. She slowly takes her other end of the oodhi and gently removes the oodhi she is shocked to see that the person is.................

O.k guys i will contiue later.

Can u guess who the guy and the girl are?

Edited by ziddi - 19 years ago