Fan Fiction Pyar - Page 3

Episode # 5
At the Shegal house…..
Mrs. Shegal n Malika do an aarti to welcome the bride n the groom.

Vedant n Malika: Welcome Bhabi into ur new house.

Sumirta: Malika take Disha into D.K's room, D.K. beta come with me.
Malika takes disha to D.K's room which is decorated with flowers. And she sits Disha on the bed. Bhabi this ur new room. Disha and Malika chat for a while.

Vedant (walks in) Excuse me ladies, excuse me sis may I talk to Bhabi for a while.

Malika: sure Good Night (she leaves)

Disha n Vedant: Good night

Vedant: bhabi this for you (gives disha a gift n it's a friendship braclet that has vedant's, malika's , and disha's siblings name on it.)

Disha: Thank you Vedant.

Vedant: Bhabi if u don't mind I have a question. How do you tell a girl that u love her? What do u say?

Disha: U like someone! (Excited) who is she? Does D.K. know about this?
Vedant(nervous) u know her but Bhaiya does not know that I like her a girl.

Disha: why don't u say something to her.

Vedant: I don't know we have been friends for so long that I don't want to break my friendship with her.

Disha: tell her how u feel. If u r shy then write ur thoughts in a card n give to her.

Vedant (excited) Thanks Bhabi u r the best. Good night.

Disha: Good night

D.K (comes in locks the door he lifts the veil gives her a rose) Disha today is our wedding night. I want to tell u something.
Disha: what?

D. K. : that I love u very much.

Disha: I love u too. (they hug)

D.K. u r the only woman in my life that I love and u will be the last. I promise to be a good husband n good father in the future. I want us to have a wonderful n happy journey. (Then he takes her left hand n puts a ring in her finger.)

Disha: (have tears in her eyes) I love u so much. (They hug n kiss. They talk some more. D.K. starts to take the jewelry out one by one n kisses his wife has he takes the jewelry of n then u know what happens next.)

Next Day:
Disha n Malika sings the aarti n everyone wakes up to their beatuful voices.
In the living room Disha n D.K opened all their wedding gifts n are happy to find a two weeks honey moon airline ticket to Paris from Vedika inside a card that has a note in.

Disha (reads the letter out loud):
To Di & Jiju
Have a wonderful married life. I didn't know what to give u guys for the people who have everything in the world. I remember when we were kids Di said that she like to go to Paris someday. So I thought why don't I purchase a ticket for both of u guys to Paris for ur honeymoon. Di will love to go to Paris with the person who she luvs the most in the whole world.
Have a nice time in Paris
Have fun
Take Pictures
Take care
Vedika
Vedant: that's Vedika all right buying a present from her thought.

Disha goes upstairs n starts to pack her luggage for their honeymoon to Paris. After the honeymoon D.K n Disha brings lots of souvenirs for everyone n they took lots of pictures of the places they went and they had a great time. After that Disha becomes an ideal bahu of the Shegal family n everyone loves her so much.
Thanks for reading. Please write Ur comments. Ziddi

Episode #6 Niharika or Vedika
At Aastha Hospital (is a hospital where both the sister r respectable doctor):

Dr. Ved Khanna: Take ur medicine twice a day after meals n drink lots of fluids.

Patient: yes doctor.

Dr Khanna If ur fever doesn't get better in within one week please come back. Okay have a nice day

Patient: Yes doctor (she leaves n the nurse enters)

Nurse: Excuse madam there is a call for u in ur office.

Dr. Khanna: I will be there in just I minute. Can u get the file for the next patient? (Doctor and nurse leaves)

Dr. Khanna (in her cabin) hello may I know who is speaking.

Caller: Excuse doctor Khanna can u come at this address my sister is sick. My name is Mr. Razida.

Dr. Khanna: O. K I will be there. (she takes the address and rings for the nurse n the nurse enters)

Dr. Khanna: Can u give my patient to Dr. Niks Khanna and tell her there is an emergency I have to leave.

Nurse: yes madam (she leaves n Ved calls Niks n she explains what happened n she agree n leaves to the address)

At the Riazada house:

Servant: A lady doctor has come. (Talking to his sir which is no another than Anatrish)

Anatrish: send her in

Servant: Come madam (Ved enters n is shocked to see Anatrish)

Dr. Khanna: So this ur house Mr. Riazada

Anatrish: (also shocked to see her) so u r Dr. Khanna. Yes this is my house my sister Tara is sick.

Dr. Khanna (shocked) Tara is ur sister. (to herself: Tara never mentioned at the wedding that Anatrish is her brother) Where is she?

Anatrish: Yes Tara is my baby sister. Come this way. (He takes her to Tara's room n she tells him to wait outside while she examines Tara. After 10 mins Ved come out)

Dr. Ved: Mr. Anatrish Tara is u called me just in time here r is the perception u need to give her the medicine 3x a day with each meals n make sure she drinks lots of water. If there is any problem u can call (Ved gives Anatrish her Dr's card which has her n Niks number but Niks #is first then it hers.)

Anatrish: thank u. (he gives her the doctors fee n escorts her to her car n she leaves) (to himself: she is smart, intelligent, mischievous, n beautiful person all in one) Ved reminds Anatrish of Niks.

In the Afternoon at Riazada house

Kavita: Anatrish I heard that a pretty girl came. Is it true beta?

Anatrish: Yes mom she was a doctor that came to check Tara. Her name was (he looks at the card n read it) Dr. Niharika Khanna.

Kavita: Niharika Khanna. I have heard that name before.

Anatrish: Mummy she was at D.K n Disha's wedding.

Titli Mami (enters)Oye Mudia Niharika to Disha ki choti bahen hai.

Anatrish: (shocked) What? She is? 😕

Kavita: (looking at her son) Yes she is Disha's younger sister. (Anatrish remembers at the wedding how he dance with Niks her n how he enjoyed her company n he goes upstairs to his room calls Niks cell phone.)

At Khanna house:

Niks cell phone is ringing n Bebo picks it up.

Anatrish: Hello may I speak to Dr. Niharika. (How did I dial her house #)

Bebo: yes may I know who calling?

Anatrish: tell her its one of her patience (Bebo takes the phone to Niharika)

Bebo: Niks bua there is a call for u.

Niks (looking at Bebo) who is it?

Bebo: its one of ur patient.

Niks: tell him to come to the hospital.

Bebo: bua said to u come to the hospital.

Anatrish: tell us its one of ur heart patient.

Bebo: he said its ur heart patience.

Niks: mom I am busy can u tell him to come to the hospital I will talk to him there.

Bebo: here talk to my Niks bua.

Uma: Hello

Anatrish: (happy)So u have finally come to receive my call. My sweetheart.

Uma (angry) Sweet heart? 😡

Anatrish: Yes my sweet heart I luv . 😛

Uma: excuse I want to tell u that; (Anatrish cuts her off)

Anatrish: since I have seen u I have fall in luv w/u from the wedding day to today I only think about u. 😳

Uma(angry) should I call the police?

Anatrish: (realizing her that it is not Ved's voice) who is this?

Uma: I am Niharika's mom if u call my daughter again I will send u to the police station. (Everyone from the dinning table looks at Uma, Ved n Niks exchange looks like who is this crazy patient) 😡

Anatrish: Mom?🤢 (he quickly puts the phone down n he is sweating)

Niks: Mom who was that?

Uma(still angry) 😡I don't it looks I it was a pagal patient who should be sent to mental hospital. Then she explains everything to every body n they all laugh. 😆

Prem: Poor guy will probably not call u ever again (looking at Niks) 😆

Niks: I wonder who that was. I don't know any guy.

Arun: Who ever it was? He will never call my daughter again (everyone starts to laugh) 😆

At the Riazada's house.

In Anatrish room Dhruv has just entered from his room n he knows that he called Dr. Niharika.

Dhruv: Bhaiya what need Niharika Bhabi say? (he is smiling n looking at his brother)

Anatrish: (still shaken) Nothing

Dhruv: Nothing. U didn't talk to her or u didn't call her mobile?

Anatrish: I did call. Then

Dhruv: Then what Bhaiya? Did u say I luv u to her?

Anatrish: Yes n No?

Dhruv: Meaning

Anatrish: Meaning, I had said I love u to her mom. 🤢

Dhruv: (looking serious trying not to laugh) If u were interested in her mom y didn't u tell me. 😛

Anatrish: (angry) Dhruv u r not helping! 😡

Dhruv (getting serious) Sorry Bhaiya the person u were suppose to impress to ask her daughter's hand in marriage is the person who u confessed ur luv to.(bust out laughing) 😆

Anatrish: (mad) Stop laughing tell me what to do? 😡

Dhruv (serious) Bhaiya u should send Niharika flowers to her house n right her a letter confessing ur love n tell her how u feel. 😳

Anatrish: Great idea! (Cheered up) do you think it will work? 😛

Dhruv: of course it will. U can trust me Bhaiya. Good night.

Anatrish: Goodnight (he starts writing a letter to Niharika confessing his love to her)


What will happen when Niharika reads the letter? What will she do?

hey very gud plz continue soon..
luv it 👏

Episode #7

Next Day:
In the early morning Anatrish goes to a hallmark n picks her a card n pays for the card n leave. Then Anatrish goes to the flower shop n buy yellow, pink and red roses for Niharika. And he puts the letter in the card n tells the cashier to deliver this at Khanna's resident.

At the Khanna's house
It is a Friday morning everyone is done eating breakfast. Niharika and Vedika are clearing up the table n going to the kitchen before leaving for work. Rohan comes running into the kitchen.

Vedika: (looking at him) Why r u running?

Rohan: Ved Bua there is a bouquet for Niks bua? 😆

Ved n Niks (looking at each other) A bouquet?

Niks(worried)Who can send me a bouquet? 😕

Ved: (excited) let's go see Di. (they finish the the chore n then leave the kitchen n go to the living room and see three bouquets of flowers in yellow, pink n red.) 😛

Niks: Who will send these lovely flowers to me? 🤢

Ved: Today is not ur birthday nor there is any special occasion?

Rohan (points at the card) Bua's there is a letter in the yellow bouquet. (Ved picks the letter n reads it to herself)

Ved(looks at Niks n covers left hand on her mouth) one of ur admires has sent u all this. (She takes left hand n points at the flowers)

Niks: (shocked) A secret admirer? Who could it be? 😕

Rohan (looking at Niks then looking at Ved) What is a secret admirer?
Ved: (looking at Rohan smiling) A secret admirer is someone who like u but they don't want u to know who they are?

Rohan (looking confused) Like someone is sacred to show there face? 🤢

Ved (trying not to laugh) Exactly, now go get ready for school n tell bebo to also get ready. 😉

Rohan: Yes bua. (he leaves running upstairs Ved n Niks stare each other for few moments.)

Niks: How will I find out who he is?

Ved: (reading the letter)In order to find that out u have to meet him today at lunch wearing a yellow salwar kamez and carrying one yellow, pink and red rose in ur left hand at Chat Caf at 1:00 p.m. He will be wearing a yellow shirt n a black pants also carrying a yellow, pink, red rose in his left hand. (Ved then gives Niks the letter n she looks at it)

Niks (worried) Ved please come with me?

Ved: No di he has sent u the letter not me. He is ur admirer not mine.

Niks: (still worried) But?

Ved: no buts (puts both of her hands on her hips) don't worry I will also go with u but I will sit behind u.

Niks(hesitates ) O.k I will go. (to herself: I wonder who this his that has written me a lovely letter confessing his love to me. Do I know him? I wonder what his he like?)

Ved: (joking) Di he is probably short, fat has no hair on the head he is black.

Niks: (angry n screaming ) Vedika 😡(Niks runs after her trying to catch her)

The two sisters leave for the hospital dropping the kids of at school n going to hospital Niks is wearing a yellow salwar kamez for her lunch date. Ved is wearing a white n pink salwar kamez both r looking really pretty.
At 12:30 p.m Ved n Niks ask for a lunch break from their supervisor for 1 hrs and they leave for Chat Caf.

Preview: How will Anatrish react to see Niharika not Vedika?

Episode # 9:
Saturday Morning At Khanna's house.

Niks and Ved get up early in the morning to do all the chores, make everybody's favorite breakfast. They have set the dinning table has if it looks like someone is coming for the dinner. They have put two flower vases out. They have also made home made sweets like barfi's, n peda's. They have also made samosa's white fresh chutney. Niks n Ved clean up all the mess they have made in the kitchen. They go n take a shower do pooja. Its 9:00 after the pooja everyone comes to the dinning table n is shocked to see all the food n everybody's favorite breakfast. Everyone has the impression I can't not believe my eyes.

Niks & Ved: good morning everyone (both r smiling) 😊

Arun (surprised) goos morning, Beta's what r all this? 😕

Niks (looking at mom & bhabis) Mom, bhabis u do not have to do any of the chores. Ved n I did everything this morning from gardening to laundry.

Uma: thanks beta. How sweet n thought of both of u to do.

Prem (excited like I can't wait to get started look) is this for me because u luv me. 😆

Niks (smiling) no Bhaiya its for everyone. 😛

Purab: whose birthday?

Ved: no ones

Prem: what do u want?

Ved & Niks (still smiling n trying to yell) Nothing (everyone knows that this two are up to something Everyone is like staring at them) 😊

Niks& Ved: what can we not do something for our family just because we luv u very much.

Ved: u know what Di I am starving let's eat! Come on kids lets eat. (Ved, kids, & Niks go to the table n take out the plate's n start putting food on the kids n her plate)

Rohan: Dadaiji y don't u join us it really good! I luv the biscuits n the bafri is so delicious.

Bebo: (looking at her parents) ma, papa the food delicious please joins us. (Mr. Khanna join the kids)

Arun: (looking at his daughters) guys this is delicious. Great job! (Everyone is drooling because the smell of the food is so good they join in. Purab n Prem between Niks n Ved because they want to find out what's going on. If u look at it is Purab, Niks, Prem then Ved)

Prem (whispering into Ved ear) Really what's the reason?

Ved (whispering back) Di has found her self a guy. Purab is also listing.

Prem (shocked little louder) What (everyone looks at them from their plate)

Uma: What happed Prem?

Prem (looking) mom Ved told me that we should all go a picnic at the beach today. 😳

Arun & Uma: that's a great idea Vedika. 😛

Ved (smiling) thanks mom (stomps her brother's feet with her left feet) 😃

Purab (whispering to Niks) who is he? Do I know him?

Niks (looking serious) yes Bhaiya u know him he is Anatrish Riazada n he is the son of Mr. Viren & Mrs. Kavita Riazada. (Prem & Purab are shocked to here this)😕

Prem: what? How long has this going on? 😡

Niks: (scared) about 3 months

Prem & Purab (shocked) 3 months. (Both r angry) u planned to tell us now.😡 😡

Ved: Please Bhaiya do something that mom n dad get ready for this marriage.

Niks (scared n whispering) I wanted to be sure if I love him.

Prem (looking serious) do u?

Niks (frightened) yes

Uma: (looks up & so does the others) what are u guys talking about?

Purab: Mom Niks suggest that we should go to our Beach/farmhouse in Puna for one week since it kids spring vacation. 😉

Uma: o.k. that after breakfast everyone should get ready. 😊

Arun: that's a wonderful idea. 😊

Rohan: can u call disha bua n D.K. fufa.

Arun: why not we should invited them also. Ved since it is your idea why don't u call your jiju n Di n invite them.

Ved: yes dad (she calls Disha n D.K. from her cell phone since has it with on the telephone n invited them they agree)

Uma (looking) what did they say?

Ved: they will meet us their but I also invited Malika n Vedant.

Arun: that great! So it settle very body for one week we are going to stay at the beach house n we r coming back on the next Saturday. 😛

Bebo & Rohan (excited) one week yeah can tuffy n tinu come 😆

Arun: y not they r family.

Uma: Prem n Purab do guys have any meeting?

Purab n Prem: no mom we do not have any meeting.

Arun: Niks n Ved call ur hospital n ask permission for one weeks leave.

Niks & Ved yes dad. (Ved calls her supervisor from her cell phone n asks for one week's day off n they agree)

Uma: everyone after breakfast I want everyone to go upstairs n pack their one week of clothes. Don't forget to pack ur camera, n video camera. (Everyone nods)

Jassi (looking at Rohan) I want u to take ur school work on the trip.

Rohan: yes mom

Kareena (looking at Bebo) same goes for u.

Bebo: yes ma

Prem n Purab are glad that their sister luvs Anatrish but r sad that she didn't tell them before.😭 After the breakfast the girls clear up the table n everyone gets ready for the family picnic. Purab n Prem tell their wife about Niks n Anatrish relationship they are happy for them but sad that Niks didn't tell them before. Ved n Niks help the kids pack n make sure they take their homework, have some games, their game boys, for their long ride to Puna beach house. They decided to split into two cars n Purab will drive the black Toyota minivan while Prem n Ved will drive their cars. Ved will be companied by Niks, n Tuffy for the journey.
I am sorry for any wrong spelling of the name I do not leave in India so I don't much about the cities n countries so I am just making names.

Thanks for reading
Ziddi

hey gud job.... 👏 👏 👏
lookin forward fo next chp... 👏

hello

it was really good story.
👏

o.k guys for the next part give me names for places to go for a romantic trip n a places where u can get stranded for a month.

i will update on 9/4/05

hey...well i have never been to india but hmmm Goa is a gr8 place to go or hmmm.... letsss ccccccccccc....
yaar i can only think of Goa...hehehehe 😃 😳