DK - Kaajjal After ML-p11 pg19-Dec 26, 07 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG Kashish, kya likha hai aapne!! 👏 👏 I can visualize each scene perfectly in my mind. I am so happy that you are continuing these ffs because this is the only way we can live DK everyday. You can continue this one till their marriage and beyond 😉 . That would be the ultimate treat! I would much rather experience Dev and Kaajjal in this manner, than in the current story track of the actual serial. (Except for Apu)
Uff, that "Mr. Singh" was killing Dev, but I loved it. How he wanted to grab her into his harms, and appreciate her simplicity and beauty. Fantastic. And the shock of Kaajjal when she realizes that Dev was part of this project...my stomach did butterflies. That heavenly voice of Dev - she immediately knew.
Thank you so so so sooo much for writing this ff and your other ones too! Sometimes I wish you would write double parts, because it's soo hard to wait. 😳
I'm sorry that I don't comment as much as I should...school is starting this thursday (my bday), and I am playing tennis for the school team, and there are so many things to do. But I will always read your ff, because DK story is after my heart. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
awe fantic work
iam feeling really bad for Dev 😭......can someone telly him plz that Kajjal had lost her memery plz 😭
Dev don't fell bad, even Kajjal had lost her memery she still loves u 😳
awesome job kushi
kushi i just loved this line in todays part ["You see Mr. Singh" she starts again, and Dev is about to slap her hard at this constant torture of Mr. Singh. He can't take this Mr. Singh nonsense any more, but he lets her have her way.] It was funny and sad 😆 😭 😆
keep up the fablious work
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
That was absolutely fabulous and verrrrrryyyyy verrrrryyyyyyy excellent!!!! 👏 Continue soon.

Zareen.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
great part kashish di 👏...like always, I just loved it 😳. I really liked the way you described dev's feelings when kaju was treating him like a stranger...it was just superb 👏..can't wait to read the next part.. keep up the great work and do continue soon.

love
Alishba 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: roopa_s

Wow Kashish .. excellent post .. You have very well potrayed the professional side of Dev & Kajjal very well .. Dev must be looking like a business tycoon when standing with the architects and explaining to them and Kajjal is so sweet when she is professional !

Great work Kashish .. I hope Kajjal will regain her memory when she interviews Dev and run to his arms for that tight hug ... and scream loud DEv Dev Dev !

Sweet heart as said always .. your posts make my day ! Although this post had no hug or anything like that it touched my heart a lot .. beacause of their professional style !

Great narration dear .. Do continue soon 😳 😳

😳 😳 😳

With millions of love , Roopa

Roopa my dear, I am soo glad you liked it. yeah this professional DPS, i just used to love him. still cant forget that DPS who was the real heartthrob. 😊

haan yar, these FFs are our way to peace, and i will try to continue them to bring happiness to myself and you all.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: rwishka17

OMG Kashish, kya likha hai aapne!! 👏 👏 I can visualize each scene perfectly in my mind. I am so happy that you are continuing these ffs because this is the only way we can live DK everyday. You can continue this one till their marriage and beyond 😉 . That would be the ultimate treat! I would much rather experience Dev and Kaajjal in this manner, than in the current story track of the actual serial. (Except for Apu)
Uff, that "Mr. Singh" was killing Dev, but I loved it. How he wanted to grab her into his harms, and appreciate her simplicity and beauty. Fantastic. And the shock of Kaajjal when she realizes that Dev was part of this project...my stomach did butterflies. That heavenly voice of Dev - she immediately knew.
Thank you so so so sooo much for writing this ff and your other ones too! Sometimes I wish you would write double parts, because it's soo hard to wait. 😳
I'm sorry that I don't comment as much as I should...school is starting this thursday (my bday), and I am playing tennis for the school team, and there are so many things to do. But I will always read your ff, because DK story is after my heart. 😳

Awww Ritu, yeh FF tu tumharay liyay hi hai. just for you honey. your comments are alwats appreciated, infact i look forward to your comments.

So school is starting soon. hmmmm, studies back in business 😊 I wish you all the best honey, hope everything goes great. Hey u play tennis as well, ahhh i love tennis, infact i play it aswell. so wish u all the best for that as well dear, u have to play for school, great.

take care and I will update soon. 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: dudleysam

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......kashu...took me ages to figure out this new FF shiftin its premisess biz...but finally got my head around it... 😳 ..

and finally...the scne....awwwwwwww.. 😳 ..poor devu....his heart screamin....love me dammit 😆 😆 😆 ....and mr. singh...even in the show...it was...s...s...sir....hilarious....as well as gut wrenching. 😭 😭 ...please yaar take him out of his misery 😭 ....btw....i felt he will kiss her now...., he seemed close to losing it.... 😳 😆
please continue eagerly waiting for the interview of the millenium....sparks will fly for sure 😃
sammy 😛

hahahah yeah sammy, mr. singh is really killing him ... i laughed on it as well while writting ... hehehehhe😆

glad u liked it honey, thanks. 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Very beautiful Kashish, i am crying for this penance of Dev..... This pain....Awww please at least let him know of her ML... 😭

But beautiful plot and hai... he will be in her radio-station.... 👏

Please continue soon...... 😊 😊 😊

hmmmm, soo he will find out Autumn .... patience honey ... heheheh 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#59


I too am eager for him to find out...but this tadap too is necessary (for him as well as for her), and in the end, it will only make their love stronger and that much more beautiful!

UFF I just love this one!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: IndianPari



I too am eager for him to find out...but this tadap too is necessary (for him as well as for her), and in the end, it will only make their love stronger and that much more beautiful!

UFF I just love this one!

bingo Payal, that is soo true. this tadap will make them realise each other's importance even furture and their love for each other even further ...

hmmm, i am glad u are liking it Sweety, if u like it i will write it 😊

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