DK - Kaajjal After ML-p11 pg19-Dec 26, 07 - Page 8

Kashish as usual outstanding narration 👏 ..Awwwww Dev really looks confused with kajal's weird behaviour 😆 😛 and kaajjal is still unable to understand the unknown attraction or that strong passionate bond which is drawing her towards dev 😳 😳 ..they both r so worried about each other yet r soo afraid to confess their love for each other 😳 ...Its like "Kitne door,Kitnee paas" 😳 😳 ..I hope they get their senses back at least in the jungle now 😉 😆 😛 ...Its really getting interesting Kashish 😛 ..Do continue soon 😳

ohh my GOD kashu!!! ive got goosebumps which are just not going away with this part of yours!!
wowww!! IT WAS MINDBLOWING YAAR!!!
too too too good!!!
the love they have for eachother is just OUT OF THIS WORLD!!!
the way kaajjal is trying to control herself.. but destiny has something else decided for her.. and that is.. bringing her closer to dev..
and dev.. haila.. itna pyaar!!!! haii main to maar jawan!!!

please do continue soon kashu....

lots of love, kaj

Kashish you are brilliant and super duper talented!!!! I luuuuved the way you described Kajju's state of mind sooo beautifully!!! It was flawless!!!! Wonderful! I was soooo spellbound! 👏 Continue.

Zareen.

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Kashish as usual outstanding narration 👏 ..Awwwww Dev really looks confused with kajal's weird behaviour 😆 😛 and kaajjal is still unable to understand the unknown attraction or that strong passionate bond which is drawing her towards dev 😳 😳 ..they both r so worried about each other yet r soo afraid to confess their love for each other 😳 ...Its like "Kitne door,Kitnee paas" 😳 😳 ..I hope they get their senses back at least in the jungle now 😉 😆 😛 ...Its really getting interesting Kashish 😛 ..Do continue soon 😳

glad u liked it jyoti. your tabela is coming up next 😊

wow kashish di, bahut accha!!it was an outstanding piece fo work you have written here. Dev heart going out to kajjal again, and kaajjal thinkinh that she maybe falling love with Dev. It's just fantastic.Good work!! cont soon. 😊

Originally posted by: ahem_brahmasmi

Hey Kashish,

Really beautiful narration 👏 👏 I loved every part of it and I can feel the romance returning. I just loved the part where Kaajjal is sitting on the wall...and Dev offers to give her a lift..and then her leg gets hurt and he holds her..and they both look at each other. Its all so romantic yaar...really you are really a very romantic writer. 😳

I just am feeling sad that Shreyas or Twenty Twenty didn't hire you. 😭 If you had got the chance to be the writer of the serial..yaar..hum sabke tho haal kya ho jaata. 😛 Daily serial dekhne ke liye kitne betaab hote. 😳

Waise Kashish...abhi Tabela scenes aanewaala hai kya? I am eagerly awaiting for the next episode and hope it will be lighted with romance and lots of passion. 😛 Do continue fast..yaar..I am eager to know what happens next. 😳

Love,
Priya 😳

awww i am soo glad u liked it Priya. hmmmm, these sweet romantic scenes were the essence of this beautiful love story. but what to say ... the makers have all the ingredients of destroying the show 😕

yes dear, tabela scene coming up. buckle up 😉

Omg, awww..that was SOOO beautifully written Kashish!! 🤗 🤗 wow, the way u have portrayed everything is just WONDERFUL!! I mean even the makers of Kaajjal couldn't do that and u've done it in a FANTABULOUS way! 😳 😳 ... Hats off to u!! 👏. I could actually see it all happening! Saari puraani yaaden yaad dila dein! 😍..those beautiful golden days!! 😳..The magic in ur FFs just blow us all away!!..I just luved this part..MIND-BLOWWWWING!! 👍🏼...

The way they interact with each other..n look at each other with soo much luv n passion in their eyes, is just outta this world!! 👏 ..i was seeing all those images in my mind..n cud see it happening!!😳...very very well written, once again!!...

Plz keep up ur magic and cont. soon..im waitng to read further!! 😛


luv
Aliza❤️

wow..fabullous part kashish di 👏..app ne to kamaal kar diya..I just loved how you described DK's feelings towards each other..you have truly done a terrific job..can't wait to read the next part..do contiinue soon and keep up the great work.

Alishba

Originally posted by: hmala

oh god kashish, millions of thanks for this beautiful part,
I am in memories of RC days, kashish, my nerves giving me strange feeling, as after long time, I am getting dk's love back. and DK they both are such magicians, that we just loose ourselves and just want to watch loving eachother, caring for eachother, missing eachother
OMG, DK the best couple
Kashish the best writer and jab theen miljaayeah
then we get LRR and kaajjal after ML

Thankyou so much for this wonderful part kashish
😊

i am sooo glad to know u enjoyed this part Mala. yes this is the DK we have always wanted to see. this is the love and chemistry we always wanted them to share. i wish things would have been different in the show but what to say, its already histroy.