DK - Kaajjal After ML-p11 pg19-Dec 26, 07 - Page 5

K!!!!!!!!!!

UFF, it was mindblowing!!!

The professional Kaajjal driving Dev insane w/ her berukhi and her "Mr. Singh"....her heart in havock of its own b/c she can't see the love in his expression that she longs to see though she can't figure out why...hai...

I LOVE THIS ONE!!!!! Please continue soon!! PLEASE!!!!

Your writing is beyond words...I have nothing left to say...

Wow Kashish .. excellent post .. You have very well potrayed the professional side of Dev & Kajjal very well .. Dev must be looking like a business tycoon when standing with the architects and explaining to them and Kajjal is so sweet when she is professional !

Great work Kashish .. I hope Kajjal will regain her memory when she interviews Dev and run to his arms for that tight hug ... and scream loud DEv Dev Dev !

Sweet heart as said always .. your posts make my day ! Although this post had no hug or anything like that it touched my heart a lot .. beacause of their professional style !

Great narration dear .. Do continue soon 😳 😳

😳 😳 😳

With millions of love , Roopa

OMG kashuuuuuu!! tooo tooo too good yaar.. trust me.. u are leaving my out of words to compliment u on your parts.. they are just amazing!!!!!!!!!!!

u know kashuuu... now that we are gonna get a tragedy on the show...
I AM GONNA LIVE WITH YOUR FF'S... im telling u this.. these FF's of yours are gonna keep me going on and on!!
MOST OF ALL.. i am gonna feel my shona DEVU.. each and every day.. through these ff's of yours..
since i imagine each and every scene happening...

goshhh the way their both's hearts were crying out for one another.. yet.. putting up a professional.. or angry front!! GOSHHH .. u are too good yaar.. the way u have portrayed this.. is just awesome!!!

keep it up.. i cant wait for your continuation!!

lots of love,
kaj

Originally posted by: kaj05

OMG kashuuuuuu!! tooo tooo too good yaar.. trust me.. u are leaving my out of words to compliment u on your parts.. they are just amazing!!!!!!!!!!!

u know kashuuu... now that we are gonna get a tragedy on the show...
I AM GONNA LIVE WITH YOUR FF'S... im telling u this.. these FF's of yours are gonna keep me going on and on!!
MOST OF ALL.. i am gonna feel my shona DEVU.. each and every day.. through these ff's of yours..
since i imagine each and every scene happening...

goshhh the way their both's hearts were crying out for one another.. yet.. putting up a professional.. or angry front!! GOSHHH .. u are too good yaar.. the way u have portrayed this.. is just awesome!!!

keep it up.. i cant wait for your continuation!!

lots of love,
kaj

awww kaju honey, you r soo right, we have to live DK through these FFs, thats our only hope now 😕

hmmm yeah they are attracted, but away. this attraction is pulling kaajjal and torturing dev. :)

Thanks Kaju, aap parho gi tu main likhoon gi 😊

Kashish I hv always maintained that u r a terrific writer 😳 😳 ....The last part was just fantabulous 👏 ...loved the entire interaction between DK 😳 😳 Kaajjal's fight with her heart and mind and dev's fight with his heart and ego was just brilliantly narrated by u 😳...Kaajjal is unable to understand the force which is just drawing her closer to dev 😳 and dev is unable to understand how can kaajjal can't recognizr his rajkumar 😳 ...both just wants to hug each other ,feel each other and get immersed in each other's arms but r unable to do so 😳 ...Kashish what a mindblowing thought 👏 too good 😳 😳

very good skript keep it up thanks thesaint 👏

Kashish very very very speechless right now.

Execellent work it was slepen did to the top

Well done the best writer and Kashish Congrats again for being MOTW for JJKN forum.

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Kashish I hv always maintained that u r a terrific writer 😳 😳 ....The last part was just fantabulous 👏 ...loved the entire interaction between DK 😳 😳 Kaajjal's fight with her heart and mind and dev's fight with his heart and ego was just brilliantly narrated by u 😳...Kaajjal is unable to understand the force which is just drawing her closer to dev 😳 and dev is unable to understand how can kaajjal can't recognizr his rajkumar 😳 ...both just wants to hug each other ,feel each other and get immersed in each other's arms but r unable to do so 😳 ...Kashish what a mindblowing thought 👏 too good 😳 😳

i am glad u liked it Jyoti. Kaajjal is lost in her world and is confused because of this strong pull towards dev, and dev is confused why she is ignoring him like this. thats the tadap i want to show and i am glad u felt it.

Very beautiful Kashish, i am crying for this penance of Dev..... This pain....Awww please at least let him know of her ML... 😭

But beautiful plot and hai... he will be in her radio-station.... 👏

Please continue soon...... 😊 😊 😊

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......kashu...took me ages to figure out this new FF shiftin its premisess biz...but finally got my head around it... 😳 ..

and finally...the scne....awwwwwwww.. 😳 ..poor devu....his heart screamin....love me dammit 😆 😆 😆 ....and mr. singh...even in the show...it was...s...s...sir....hilarious....as well as gut wrenching. 😭 😭 ...please yaar take him out of his misery 😭 ....btw....i felt he will kiss her now...., he seemed close to losing it.... 😳 😆
please continue eagerly waiting for the interview of the millenium....sparks will fly for sure 😃
sammy 😛