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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
Please don't stop writing, this story is wonderful and great..can't wait to read what is going to happen next
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Anupam accepts Bipasha's offer and in some days they both become very closed to each other. One day Bipasha and Anupam were sitting in a cafeteria.

Bipasha: Anupam, why are u like that?

Anupam(in a shocking tone): What do u mean?

Bipasha: Don't mind. But i mean u look so hot and handsome . Bt with this hairstyle and spects u look like a 40 year oldie. Your wife never objected on this look.

Anupam: My wife don't have time to pay attention to me.

Bipasha(A little bit shocked): Excuse me.

Anupam: i mean she is always busy in other kinda stuff. So there is hardly any time to her for me.

Bipasha(putting hand on his hand. He just gave a formal smile ):And ur daughter.

Anupam: Aww...... she's my life. The reason me and Kanan are still together is only Bhoomi. My angel. I can do anything for her.

Bipasha: And Kanan?

Anupam: Well i must say. Kanan is the one of the most successful and resposible mothers . She loves her more than me. I can complain Kanan as a wife , but as a mother , no one can beat her.

Bipasha: Lekin tumhe dekhkar lagta nahi ki tumhari maritial life aisi hogi.

Anupam: I think we have lost interest in each other. I am not complaining about her. We both are at fault. (Looking at the time) I think i must leave now. It's too late.

Bipasha: Ok Anupam. But mere words par amal karna. You will look much better.

Anupam just gave a formal smile once again and leaves from there.

In the whole way, he was thinking about Bipasha. What a lovely girl she was. Smart, beautiful, confident and so caring. Anupam finds it difficult to care about time whenever he is with her. He feels so relaxed and calm with her. He does not like whenever she talks to some other person. What is happening with him? Is this only an infactuation or he seriouly falling in love with her? He thinks he is in love? But if is that so, what about Kanan? Is he seriously fed up of her and if yes how he will be able to tell her all about this? While thinking all this, he never realzed that when he is at home.

Kanan: Where were u? I was trying on your mobile?

Anupam: Aaaaa. I was busy in a meeting. What happen?

Kanan: Neel ka phone aaya tha. He has invited both of us tomorrow at his birthday.

Anupam: Oh shit i forgot.

Saying this, he again starts looking at Kanan.

Kanan: Kya hua? Why are u looking at me like this?

Anupam: Nothing. i am suffering from a minor headache.

Kanan: Should i give some medicines?

Anupam: No i think i need a sleep. Please don't disturb me for dinner.

Saying this, he goes into their bedroom while Kanan kept on looking at him.

After sometime, Kanan enters into their bedroom and closes the door. She looks at Anupam who was sleeping like a small child. She looks at him carefully . He looks so tired. It was evident from his face how much he was working hard for her and Bhoomi and for their secure future. Kanan puts her hand on his cheek thinking that no matter how much she fights with him, she will always love him and will not be able to live without him and she knows very well that no matter how much he misunderstand her, he loves her from the depth of his heart and will not be able to spearate her from him. Kanan realized that it has been a long time that she has come so close to him. She puts a gentle kiss on his forehead, then kissed his eyes which looked so tiring and then his right cheek. Anupam feels something and opens his eyes and was a little bit shocked finding Kanan so close to him. He got up with a shock .

Kanan: kya hua?

Anupam: AAAA.... kuch nahi. Kanan , raat bahut ho gayi hai aur mujhe thakaan bhi bahut hai. Isliye main sona chahta hoon. I hope u don't mind.

Kanan(a little bit sad): No, it's allright. I think u should sleep.

Anupam: Thanks.

Saying this, he goes to sleep whereas Kanan rubs off her tears and turns the lights off.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#33

Next evening, Anupam was in front of the mirror thinking about Bipasha's words. He took out his spects and looks carefully at himself. He feels like he has forgotten to take care of himself in these seven years . Man he is just 32 years old but with this hairstyle and spects, he really look like 40's.

Kanan was knocking at the door constantly.It has been an hour since she got ready & Anupam locking himself in the bedroom . Kanan was wearing a black top and Black jeans and was looking as stunning as ever

Kanan: Anupam, what are u doing? It has been an hour. Neel ka do baar phone aa chuka hai.

At the same time Anupam opened the door and Kanan eyes spread with surprise when she looks at the man coming out of their bedroom.

He was the she saw 8 years ago. He is back. She was unable to speak a word.

Anupam: Kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahi ho?

Kanan: I am unable to beleive . You r looking so hot.

Anupam( truly complementing her): Thanks. I am glad ki main kuch to tumhare saath jaane laayak hua.

Kanan too feels that Anupam has praised her after a long time.

Kanan: Thanks for the complement. But i think u r looking super hot today.

Anupam(smiling):Now shall we move ?

Kanan: Yes why not?

Saying this, they both leaves from there.

After sometime, they reached at the venue. Neel looked at both of them and was simply stunned by Anupam's new look.

Neel: I could not beleive my eyes. Kanan . Tum apne saath kisko laayi ho? Anupam ne tumhe iske saath dekh liya to.

Kanan: Don't worry Neel. Anupam ne khud isko mere saath bheja hai.

Anupam: Haa haa haa very funny.

Neel: Not a joke my friend. I am glad u r back.

Anupam: Tumne Kanan ki tareef nahi ki.

Neel: Awww. Kanan ki kya tarif karun? She looks stunning always.

Anupam: Ya that's true.

Kanan: Anyways, happy birthday Neel.

Neel: Thanks. Thanks a lot. Now come let's enjoy the party.

Anupam moves inside with Kanan and was stunned to find Bipasha there who was looking at him with greedy eyes and it gives him an impression that she is jealous of Kanan. Now he got the answer he was thinking since last night that she too likes him.

Neel introduces Biapasha to Kanan and Anupam.

Neel: I have called her as she si going to publish our new novel.

Kanan: That's great. Glad to meet u Bipasha.

BIpasha: Me too.

Saying this, she looked at Anupamm and found that he was well aware off his feelings.

After cutting the cake, all the couples were invited for a dance. Neel sends Anupam and Kanan to the dance floor and they starts dancing in each other arms. Kanan was totally lost into Anupam unaware of the fact that Anupam eyes were looking somewhere else. Anupam was looking at Bipasha who was literally on the verge of crying and he was enjoying his state.

At the same time, a good looking guy accompanies bipasha on the dance floor and now it was Bipasha's turn to enjoy Anupam's condition whereas Anupam was fuming with anger.

At last the night passes and next day arrives.

7 Am.

Someone was knocking terribly at Bipasha's door. Bipasha opened the door and found Anupam who entered inside like a storm.

Anupam: Who was that guy?

Bipasha understands everything in a moment and comes near Anupam.

Bipasha: U look so cute in anger.

Anupam: That was not the answer of my question?

Bipasha: To listen? He was no one. I was just testing u and found.......

Anupam: Found what?

Bipasha: That u too love me the same way i love u?

Anupam's expressions changes in a moment. He pulls Bipasha n hugs her tightly in his arms.

Anupam: Never do this again. Ohterwise i will kill u.

Bipasha(hugging him tightly): I love u Anu.

Anupam: i love u too.

They both keeps on standing in the same state for a long time.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
Poor Kanan....hope anupam comes to his senses soon..or at least Kanan & Anupam have a heart to heart talk as to what went wrong in their relation....please don't get Kanan hurt...she loves him a lot...Hate that Bipasha she is coming btw married couple
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
😡 I'LL KILL THT BIPASHA!!!!!!!!!!!!! POOR KANAN💔😭


USHA.
Edited by gauriandme - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
thanks for such replies. But don't worry. Anu will be normal soon but after that his life is ooing to be a hell 😭Plus bipasha is not negative. 😕
Edited by *Pratham Mittal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
just caught up wid ur story and i must say u r a gr88 writter....gr8888888 storyyy yaaaar 👏 itz really veryy gudd..but i dont like that bipasha 😛 ...plzz do continuee sooon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38

WHT?????😭

USHA

Originally posted by: *Pratham Mittal

thanks for such replies. But don't worry. Anu will be normal soon but after that his life is ooing to be a hell 😭Plus bipasha is not negative. 😕

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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
I really hate that Bipasha...
Plzzzzz unite Anuapam & Kanan soon......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Post the next part soon.



Usha.

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