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Part 1:

Love House: Home of the famous writer Anupam Bhattacharya. Anupam and his wife Kanan has named it.

7 Am.

Anupam was busy in his shaving. Suddenly a hand came out of the bathroom.

Kanan: Anupam please give me the towel.

Anupam(handing her the towel, in an irritating tone): Mujhe samajh mein nahi aata Kanan ki tum har subah bathroom mein towel le jaana kaise bhool jaati ho.

Kanan(replying back): Jab insaan ke paas au bhi jaroori kaam ho to use aise chote mote kaam yaad nahi rehte.

Anupam(staring at her in anger): Smart answer. In baaton ka to tumhare paas hamesha jawaab rehta hai.

Kanan too stares angrily at him and shuts the door. Anupam was pissed off.

7: 30 AM

Anupam opens the door and enters into the comfort zone, tht is Bhoomi's room.Bhoomi was sleeping cutely on bed.

Anupam(hugging him tightly): Good morning sweetheart.

Bhoomi(with bleary eyes): Good morning.

Anupam: Mummy ne kaha hai ki aaj Bhoomi ko uthane ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Aaj sunday hai na.

Bhoomi: Kya papa . Aapko to kuch bhi nahi pata. Aaj sunday nai wednesday hai.

Anupam:I know sweetheart. Isliye now get up fast.

Saying this, he sends her to the bathroom.

8AM

Anupam and Bhoomi were on the breakfast table . Kanan was getting Bhoomi ready for the school wheras Anupam was applying jam on Bhoomi's bread.

Anupam: Ok now spelling of train.

Bhoomi: T r a i n.

Anupam: Mango.

Bhoomi: M a n g o.

Anupam: Butter.

Hearing that, Bhoomi starts passing the butter to him.

Anupam(hitting her hand playfully): Spelling.

Bhoomi: Oh i am sorry papa. It's b u t t e r.

Anupam: Good. Now umbrella.

At the same time, the phone rangs and Anupam pics it up.

Anupam :Hello.

Bhoomi: U m b r e l a.

Kanan: It's wrong.

Anupam( a little bit confused): What?

Kanan: Bhoomi is pronouncing the wrong spelling.

Anupam: Hello.

Neel: Hi Anu. Neel here. Coming or not.

Anupam:Ya neel. Sharp 8:30 AM.

Neel: Ok .

Saying this, he disconnects.

Kanan(to Bhoomi):You have to work hard.

Anupam(To Bhoomi): It's ok dear. Onewrong spelling doesn't matter.

Bhoomi: No papa. Mummy is right.

Anupam became a little bit upset after hearing that.

Kanan: Don'tsay this in front of your papa, otherwise he will be angry.

Saying this, she moves away from there.

Anupam(whispring to Bhoomi): have i said anything.

Bhoomi starts giggling after hearing that .

Kanan: Anupam, i have taken 2000 rs from your pocket. I hope u don't mind.

Anupam: It's ok.

Kanan: Finish your breakfast fast. I am waitng for u in the car.

Saying this, she goes away from there.

Bhoomi: Papa, ab aap mummy ko goodbye kiss nahi dete.

Anupam: Kya karu beta. Aapki mummy ab mujhe kiss karne hi nahi deti.

Saying this, he kisses Bhoomi's cheek and she leaves from there.Anupam puts on his spects, combed his hair , put on his coat , picks up the car keys and leaves from there.

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Anuapm was in between when his car suddenly stopped.

Anupam: Oh god? Now what? Kya aaj kuch bhi theek hoga?

Saying this, he looks here and there and finds a garage.

Anupam: Thank god.

He calls the mechanic and the mechanic examines the car.

M: Car to theek ho jayegi saab, par ek ghanta lagega aur 1000 rs.

Anupam: Ok but can't you do it fast?

M: Bada fault hai saab. Itna time to lagega hi.

Anupam: Ok ok carry on .

Saying this, he searched his coat pockets but didn't find any money.Suddenly he remebered that Kanan has took out the money from his pocket.

Anupam: Oh shit. Now what shud i do?

Saying this, he calls up Neel.

Neel:Hello Anu? Where are u man?

Anupam:Yaar i am half a way round. My car has stopped. Could u pleasepick me up.

Neel: Actually Anu. I have alread reached here. And u know , your location is too far. Try to get lift man. After all u r Anupam Bhattacharya. Anybody will give u a lift.

Anupam: Actually Neel. I have one more problem. I have left my wallet at house.

Neel: Oh shit. Now grasp it yourmind man. U r nothing without Kanan.

Anupam(a little bit irritated): Oh shut up. Just stop your boring lecture. Are u coming or not?

Neel: Ok ok don't get angry. I am coming. Just wait for me.

Saying this, he disconncts the line.

Anupam was waiting for Neel . Suddenly a female voice from behind attracted his attention.

May i help u?

Anupam turned back and find a girl aging beween 26 to 28 years. He got attracted as the girl was fair with a beautiful face and a slim figure.

G: Oh god. Anupam Bhattacharya? I can't beleive this.

Anupam(in a confused tone): Do we know each other?

G:Not exactly. Well u r famous that i don't think that there is hardly anyody who don't know u?

Anupam: Thanks for the compliment. By the way, may i know about you?

G: Aftewards. First let me help u?

Anupam: Thanks , but i don't take help from strangers.

G: Ok if that's the case (extending the hand) Hi i am Bipasha Sethi.And i am one of your biggest fans. Now we are familier.

Anupam: U r so fast .

Bipasha smiles and pays the money and instructed the mechanic to drop the car at Anupam's address.

Bipasha: Now where are u going?

Anupam: Green park? And u?

Bipasha: Same. What a luck? Get in. I will drop u.

Anupam gets into the car and they both leaves from there.Meanwhile, Anupam told Neel on phone that there is no need for him.

Anupam: Take a leftMiss Bipasha.

B: Why?

Anupam: I will tell u.

Bipasha takes a left and the car stops in front of the ATM.

Bipasha:Listen Anupam. I am in no hurry.

Anupam: But i am. Just a minute.

Saying this, he leaves from there, tool out the money and gave it to her.

Bipasha: Thanks.

Anupam: Let me say this. Thanks a ton.

They both smiled and Bipasha drops him at his place.

Anupam(stepping out): Thanks a lot Miss Bipasha.

Bipasha: Hey no need to thank me. It was a pleasure. And please no miss only Bipasha.

Anupam: Ok Bipasha.Oh i am sorry. By the wy whatdo u do?

Bipasha: Here is my card.

Saying this, she leaves from there and Anupam keeps the cad in his pocket.

As he turned, he feel Neel just behin him grining.

Neel:kya baat hai. Ladkiyan aaj bhi tujh par marti hai.

Anupam: Just shut up and let's go. We are already late.

Saying this, they boh gets inside.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwww plz post next part fast i can't wait 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Woow ur stoires r always fabulous. Plzz post the next parts soon.



Usha.
Edited by gauriandme - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Its simply awesome !!!!!!!!! 👏
Please continue soon...........
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guys. I am feeling glad that i have talked to Gaurav aka Yug-Deepika and he has allowed me towrite this story. So from now i amgoing to continue this. I was about to write my own ff but i will write that ;later on. I will post the next part as soon as possible 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Can't wait to read it ...please post it soon
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well i am a bitconfused. Fist to start Kank or Kasam se. Please tell me and mindu i can write only one story at a time
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First start Kasam se. Plzzzzzzzzzz.




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Anupam enters angrily in his home. Kanan was preparing the dinner.

Anupam: Bluddy shit man. Bustards all of them. What do they think of themselves?

Kanan: Kya hua? U looked so disturbed?

Anupam: Can u beleive that? They are telling me that they are unable to publish my new novel.

Kanan: What , but why?

Anupam: They say that all of my previous novels were love stories which have a lot of market . This time i am writing a thriller so they are suspicious of it's success. Does it make sense. I mean the publishers , who are playing in money todays only because of me and my novels are suspicious of my talent.

Kanan: I don't think they are wrong anywhere.

Anupam was shocked after hearing that.

Anupam: What are u trying to say?

Kanan:Don't get me wrong Anupam. But i think they are right on their won own views. They are businessman and they can't afford to take this risk. They want to play safe. It's not a question of your talent. It's a question of their business.

Anupam: Thanks a lot for making me understand. When my own wife is not supporting me , then what should i expect from outsiders.

Kanan: u r taking me wrong Anupam.

Anupam: Ya. I am the one who is wrong always. U r always right.

Kanan: It'snot the right time to talk to u.

Anupam: Then why r u wasting your time with me? Go and do your work.

Kanan simply nodes her head and leaves from there whereas a fuming Anupam goes into his room.

After sometime, Kanan comes into their bedroom to call Anupam for dinner and found him sleeping with his spects on. She puts his spects on the table and switch off the lights.

Around midnight , Anupam got up as he was feeling hungry and was uable to sleep. He looks here and there and found Kanan sleeping silently . He comes out of his bedroom and makes way for the kitchen. He opens the fridge and starts searching forsomething to eat but couldn't find anything. At the same time, someone puts on the lights and Anupam feels too much embarassed to find Kanan there .

Kanan: Dinner maine table par laga diya hai.

Saying this, she goes outside leaving a more pissed off Anupam behind.

Next day , Anupam was leaving when Kanan comes there with his wallet.

Anupam:Dinner accha tha.

Kanan did not replied to him.

Anupam: Lagta hai tum kal ki baat par ab tak naaraz ho. Chalo main hi keh deta hoon, i am sorry.

Kanan: There is no need to be sorry. I don't think we need to be formal. U said what u felt right and i said what i felt.

Anupam: Ya, but don't u think ki tumhe mujhe support karna chahiye.

Kanan: I am with u Anupam. I was just telling that the publishers are also rightfrom their point of view. And as far asmy support is concerned i am always with u. As i said we don't need any formalities in our relationship.

Anupam(in a serious tone): Is relationship ko formal bhi to tumne hi banaya hai Kanan. Tumhe nahi lagta Kanan ki shaadi ke itne saal baad humne kuch kho diya hai. Woh pyaar, woh understanding jo hamare beech shuru mein the woh ab kahin kho gaye hain aur unki jagah formalities ne le li hain.Woh Kanan jisse maine pyaar kiya tha woh kahin kho gayi hai

Kanan too turned a little bit emotional.

Kanan: Nahi Anupam. Mujhe aisa nahi lagta. Mujhe tumhare bare mei n nahi pata lekin maine is relationship se sirf paaya hai. Tumne mujhe pyaar diya, ye ghar diya , Bhoomi di. What could a girl expect more than a loving husband , a beutiful home and a lovely daughter.Tumhare baare mein mujhe nahi pata Anu, par main aaj bhi tumse utna hi pyaar karti hoon, jitna pehle karti thi. istill care for u a lot.

Saying this, tiny droplets of water occurs in her eyes and she leavs from there. Anupam wants to stop her , but there was something that stopped him from doing so. He wore his spects, keeps his wallet in his pocket and leaves from there.

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