HAMARI ADHURI KAHAANI-sk fanfic { updated - Page 34

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Posted: 17 years ago
hmm very very cute part yaar sach mein sujal kashish bohat hi cuuuuuuuuute n shy se hain 😳 aur the way sujal ne kashish ki baat foran se suni aur sab bacho ko khana khilaya was jsut 2 gud na 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
so sweet....amazin part tha yaar....
sujal is such a sweetheart.....
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next part jaldi....
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Posted: 17 years ago
k- aao naa kitni thandi thandi hawa chal rahi hai,kitna thanda thanda paani hai

s goes n walks with her on beach....... phir dheere se walking walkin unke hath thakrate hai

k looks at him,frm corner of eyes

dheere se s holds her hand aur uske hath mein ek dirty sa kapda thama deta hai

k- ye kya hai?????????

kapda gira deti hai

s- arre yeh kya kiya...

he picks it up n removes a small bag frm it.. jismein se he removes a diomond ring...

k smiles

lookin at him astonished

k- ye..?

s- ye.. ye... {without saying anything.. takes her hand aur ushe pehna deta hai.. lookin in her eyes}

k is lookin at him stunned with happiness

cant react

he kisses her fore-head tight holding her

k is so happy cant react

ankhon se asoo aa rahe hain

phir holds her hand n walks with her

s- arre, yeh kya??

takes her tears n tells her-

s-yeh ishe zyaadha kimti hai mere liye...

k strts cryin

s- arre aare, kashish {hugs her} yeh asoo.. hi tho meri daulat hai... ro math varna main tho kangal ho jauga

k- nahi wo nahi..[ asoo ponch rahi hai]

s- tho?

but tears r not stpin

k- maine kabhi socha nahi tha... wo islie..

s- maine bhi tho soocha nahi tha.... lekin main ro tho raha hoon?

k- tumhari baat alag hai[tears flowin] main..main..wo..main..

s- shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! {drinks her tears dheere se}

keeps her head on his chest

he hugs her n dheere se touches her lips aur uske ashoo pi jaata hai {khane ke baad pani nahi piya hoga so kashish ke asoo kise behte hue tap se kam nahi hai haina ..lol..}
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Posted: 17 years ago
k- mere lie..ye saab.. kisne socha tha...

s- jo mein tumare liye sochta ho.. ushe yeh bahut kam hai

k- matlab?

s- kuch nahi... tum nahi samjogii.. chalo long drive pe chalein?

k- hmm

cute_anushika: he takes her.. drive pe.. ek jagha rukhe..

buys ice-cream for her

k- thanxs..main isi baare mein soch rahi thi

... tht ice-cream wala ushe cheat bhi karta hai... 2 ice-cream ke 200 le leta hai

k- paise zyada le lie hai 20 rapae lagenge

s strts driving- nahi 200 liye.. {smile bewakoof kahin ka}

k- 20 lene the

s- hmm??

s- 200 liye

k- haan to zyada kyun die, khair chodo

she is in no mood 2 argue

s- arre.. mujhe kya patha tha.. pahele kabhi maine yeh sab.. aacha rehne dho abhi.. tip samaj lo

k doesnt reply

lookin at the ring

jitna dekhti utna roti

s- kashish, {holds her hand} kashish kya hua.. mujse koi galti hua kya? 8-|:|

k- nahi,tum se galti kaise[aise jaise kisi farishte ko dekh rahi hai]

s- tho mujhe saaza kyun de rahe ho

k- nahi,main bass..aise hi..[ asoo rokne ki koshish kar rahi hai]

s- aise hi??? koi baat tho hai

k- nahi bass..sach kahun.. emm..kaha socha tha ki..meri zindagi mein bhi aisa din aega.. mujhe bhi...

s- maine bhi nahi soocha tha.. ke meri zindigii mein tum jaise ladki... aayegi.. jo meri zindigii aur mujhe badal degi
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh how touchy n romantic i just luved it yara 😭 meri to ankhon mein anso se agaye 😭 inka pyaar dekh k so sweet yeh kashish kitna roti hai aur dusron ko bhi emotional kerdeti hai yaaar 😭 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
HEy
gr8 parts...how omantic..and sweet..cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow!!sujal gave that diamond ring...ultimately they hv got engaged!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwww sujal is so nice...plx conitnue soonnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was a fantastic part neelu 👏 . waise i loved when sujal got all those kids with them for dinner 😉 . kashish ki baat kitne jaldi maan li usne 😳 . that was sooo nice of him ki he understand kashish and also he feels right ki itna khana waste karna acha nahi hai 😳 .hmmmm.... so after having food he gets her icecream while going for long drive . lekin 20 ke bajaye 200 deta hai he tells kashish and she feels bad 😭 .awwww.... she feels ki uske sapno se zyada usse hakiqat mein pyaar mill raha hai from sujal 😭 . yeh kashish na why does she think like this .waise wwowwwww sujal gives her platinum diamond ring 😳 . that's awesome and emotional too ⭐️ . can understand kashish's feelings,ki itne dino baad she got so much love and care from sujal 😭 . i wish she never looses him and they always be the same forever 😳 .the part was superb neelu 👍🏼 .continue soon yaar plzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey i have just read the whole fic now........its aweosome....keep it up! 😃

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