HAMARI ADHURI KAHAANI-sk fanfic { updated - Page 33

wow neely dear awesome parts loved them tooo toooo goooood m so sorrry couldnt comment first of all was out of town aur ohir comp screwed upar seh got sick few days ago isiliye m sorrrry...agar comment detail mein na ho....uffffhhh shukar hai sujal ki galat fehmi uskeh hi dost neh duuur kardi warna shayad sujal kashish kabi nahin mil patte hamesha ki tarah koi na koi beeech mein aaajata abbbh sujal has done the right decision thinkg of taking kashish away from that hell like place kyunke kashish aur sujlal dono janteh hein kashish ki jagaaa wahan nahin kisi acche pariwaaar keh beeech hai sujal ki maaa ko dekh kar any1 an say she is sweeet and very nice lekin rishi toh urrgggghh kya zaroorat thi uski dost ko beeech mein taaang marne ki i hope rishi baad mein kuch ulta seedha na kardeh awww kahsish aur sujal ka rishta kitne accchi buniyad pad hai abbhi fir bi dheeeli hai lewkin bohot jald strong honnewalli hai....i hope lekin without interference...kashish is so funnny heheheh pure shudh nari abbi kuch nahin =sab shadi keh baaad welll seems like a gud gal shayad yehi kashish ki adatein hein jo sujal ko pasand agai hoon...oeee hoeee itna chapppar chapppar yanni kahsish ki bak bak sunneh ke baaad sujal ka peth nahin bada abbh ussseh honeymooon le jana chahata hai oeeee mr pehle shdi toh hojae...yeh office jaa rahha hai jaise biwi ko goood bye keh rahah hai agar ek kiss milti toh kashish kah din ban jata...wow how romantic our cuty oie suju moooh toh jaise arogantz sah sara hua kela lekin humein kya patah kahsish keh ko milne keh baaaad beach music yeh sabh ussseh accha lagne lagga great yaaaar toooo toooo goooood neeelz continue soooon can't wait more... 👏 👏

Woww sujal bi sharmata hai nice part continue soon

Woww sujal bi sharmata hai nice part continue soon

wow tht was so cool yar sk ahd their 1st official date haan not bad 😳 😉 so happy 4 them hope agay bhi sab acah hi rahay n sujal was too cute when he confessed tht he can't dance 😃

i m completely in love wid ur fics dear!!

the way u describe is just too good!!

SK dancing...wow!!i m so glad they r bein romantic n so close....i hope nothing ruins their this love-shy-blush relationship!

cont soon!!

thar is so romantic.........ple continue soon....cant wait anymore....thanks

love

kashish

ohhhhhhh wowwwwww toh madam ko nayi earings mili 👏 . nice very nice 😉 .waise sujal abhi se hi kashish ke likings ko consider karne laga 😳 . that day she see those earings and today she has it in her hands 😆 . sujal is sooo caring 😳 . aur janab apne pyaar ko kitna khubsurta aur pyaara surprise dete hai.wowwww.... beach pe he arranges dinner and music for them aur uska haath pakadke he brings her there ❤️ . kya pyaar hai sujal ka 😳 .he did this all just for kashish ❤️ . and their dance 😉 . ohhhhh laaaa laaaaa..... it was very romanic 🤗 . kashish usse steps dikhati hai and they dance akhon mein akhee dall kar aur saab akhon se kehekar of how they feel for each others .the part was very well written and really good 👍🏼 .continue soon yaar plzzzzz......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

s smiles n he is also kind of shy so he also claps

s- aacha nachti ho... {holds her n takes her back to dinner table}

k- tum bhi [sharmake baal apne kaan ke peeche karte hue]

then he opens the champagne.... n spashes it

n pours his glass n k ke liye cold-drink aa jaata hai

k takes her cold drink

thinkin s kitna khayal karta hai uska

s drinks one glass n then another n then another......

k- ye kya kar rahe ho?... mujhe laga sip karke chod doge

s- emm sip karke chod doonga?? {looks at her like- kya baat karr rahi ho?}

k- to kya?

s- okk bass yeh last.. {he drinks tht in a jhatka n keeps the bottle aside n oders for khana .. so then khana comes- fish, chicken, mutton, salads, rice, vegetable aur all the best foods]

k-ye saab kya hai, itna kyun? itna kaise khatam hoga?

s- khana! tumhe jo pasand hai wo khalo!issi bahane mujhe tumhari pasand ka bhi pata chal jaega!

k-itna khana kyun mangwaya? mumma hoti naa bohot daant thi,wo kabhi khana waste nahi hone deti thi,kehti thi kitne log hain duniya mein jinhe do waqt ka khana nahi milta tum ho ki khana waste kar rahe ho

s looks down... bacho ke tarha.. then suddenly gets up aur beach pe jitne bhi choote choote bache hai unhe laata hai aur unhe waha bethake unge khane ko kehta hai

k- hmm..aab aai naa tumhe akal

s smiles at her n then looks at them n smiles at them... aur phir driver se kehke.. unke liye chocolate bhi magvaata hai.. n gives them... n then looks at them n then looks at k ... goes to her n says-

s-thx kashish

k- thnxs?kis lie

s- emm kuch nahi... [n then gives her a chocolate.. ]akhir tum bhi tho baachi hi ho

k- hum pehle khalein?

s- haan wohi.. chalo..

k serves s ... s feds k first n then she feed him

k-mujhe nahi pata tha tum aise ho, nahi wo rayiz sa,bigda hua sa sujal garewal jo uss din mujse mila tha, wo to aisa nahi tha! wo chup chup rehne wala,apne mein khoya hua,kisi se kuch ne kehne wala,arrogant ,gusse wala wo insaan

s- vaise hi tha... lekin kise ke pyaar ne{looks at her}

k smiles

apni sharam chupane ke lie looks away frm s,twrds the beach

Ahem ahem ahem! Itney sharmily kyu hai duno!Sujal is T000000000000 G0000000000D very nice part plz juldi sy sari ffs likhu muje padh ky jana hai.